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Love story begins!! ( part 23 )

administratorBy administratorDecember 12, 201519 Comments7 Mins Read
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I am really sorry for the late update….

Story continues…
Adi takes food and close the fridge that time she saw aparna infront of her..
Adi is shocked….
Aparna :- who are you!! I can’t see you properly…
Adi :- I am adi….. Srry I am going now I am little busy you know naa… Tommarow festival…
Aparna :- ohhh.. OK good night..
Adi :- Good night…
Adi walks fastly towards room she enters and saw siddhu sleeping…
She walks towards siddhu…
She sit near the chair beside the bed..
Adi :- are you sleeping….ohh!! What a peaceful sleep..you know what I am thinking now…
To kick you… Idiot….
She then makes faces and goes to switch off the light…that time siddhu Slowly open his eyes and smiles…
He then goes to sleep.. Adi also slept..

Morning all are busy…
Alla are wearing new cloths…
Adi wears lahenga ( blue,golden,rose colour )..
Siddhu sees her and mesmerized in her beauty…
(Song plays 1( select your favorite song for BG for this scene and comment below which song you choosed ??)
Maa :- adi …you look gorgeous…
Adi :- thanks maa..you also look so young today ..
Maa :- I am always young…
Mama :- ya 40 years back…
All laughs…
Siddhu is still looking adi…
Arnav sees it and goes to siddhu..
Arnav :- bhaiyaa.. Don’t look her like that she will melt…hehe.
Siddhu looks him…
Mami :- where is aparna…ragy??
Ragy :- she might be in room maa..
Mami :- call her…
Ragy :- okay ma..
She goes ..
Siddhu looks adi and adi also looks him..
Adi goes near siddhu..
Adi :- what to do now??? If she comes..
Siddhu :- I will handle it … Be quiet and don’t show fear face to everyone… They will doubt us…smile always..
Adi :- I know that ….
Siddhu :- no use to talk to you ( low voice )
Adi :- did you say anything!!
Siddhu looks her…
Adi :- okay I know what you meant….
She turns her head..
Siddhu smiles
Siddhu :- maa we will go first ….
Maa :- you both?? Do you know anything about it…. You have to go ..
Siddhu :- we know maa… I know it I had come once in festive naa..
C mami :- when ?? U r 16 year old…
It’s have changed a lot…

Siddhu :- ya I know that … I have to show many places to adi also…plz maa
Mama :- Rani….let they be little romantic…
All laughs..
Maa :- okay go..come fast okay…
Siddhu :- okay maa…bye.
Adi :- we will see soon maa.
When siddhu hears what adi said he remembered that sahra telling him same thing when she goes to the tour…
She turns and look adi… He goes.
Maa :- ya adi…
Adi sit in car…
Siddhu is driving…

In hall
Aparna came wearing saree…( mordern saree )
Arnav :- wow!! Your gorgeous..!!!
Swagy :- he started his flirting job!!
Aarav :- you..are..( his mouth is stuffed with laddus )
Swagy :- ate it first then speak….laddu..
Arnav :- aparna whom your scerching…??
Aparna :- ya…I didn’t see adi and siddhu…
Where are they..??
Aarav :- ohh you missed ..they went outside now??
Aparna :- ohh…!? No problem I’ll see when they come…
Ragy :- where is dadi maa…
Mami :- dadi went to festival place to do pooja …come fast we also have to go there…
They all went ..

In car ..
Adi is talking continusly …siddhu is not speaking a word..
Adi :- excuse me … Can I ask you one thing??
Siddhu :- what ??
Adi :- ohh thank god… Now you can hear and speak also…then I am speaking and your not uttering a word…whats going on…
Siddhu :- I won’t answer stupid question !!!.
Adi :- you!!
Car suddenly stops adi’s head hits on one side…
Siddhu’s head also hits..
Siddhu :- adi !! Are you okay??
He worries for me..
Adi :- ya i am !!! What about you… Are you okay…
Siddhu :- ya I am…
Adi :- what happens to car…
Siddhu :- I’ll check..
Siddhu goes and open the car bonut and checks its full of steam..
Adi gets out and ask..
Adi :- what happened??
Siddhu :- I think it’s wont work….now..
It’s engine is fully damaged…
Adi :- what damaged???

Siddhu :- yeah!!
Adi :- what will we do..now ?? How will we go to festival place..??
Siddhu :- we have to move 664 m…if we want to reach place..
Adi :- where are we now ….
Siddhu :- ratnagiri..??
Adi :- oh god !!!
Siddhu :- we will get some vehicles which going to palampur….
Adi :- ya…but look there is no a living being here… It’s isolated place…
Siddhu :- come we can walk towards that place we may get!!
Adi and siddhu walks…
Adi :- anyway car break down is good….
Siddhu :- what ??
Adi :- yeah … Otherwise we not may able to see this beautiful place….
Nice wind…
Siddhu :- yeah…..he then remembers the moments with sahra that they spent in Forest
adi :- we can sit anywhere I am feeling so tired…
Siddhu :- no we have to reach main road…its important…
Adi :- no I can’t walk … She sits down …
Siddhu :- adi don’t play… Plz gets up we go…
Adi :- no……I can’t…….
Siddhu lift her up and started to walk…
Adi :- ye..what are you doing…drop me down….
Siddhu :- I have reach main road fast otherwise we won’t get any vehicle….
Adi :- I will…

Siddhu :- shhhh keep quit…
Adi :- looks him….( (2) BG song your favorite comment below )
Adi lays her head in siddhu’s shoulder..
Siddhu :- what are you doing ???
Adi :- anyway your lifting me then why can’t I lay my head??
So shut your mouth and walk..
She lays and smiles….
Siddhu reached main road….
Siddhu :- we reached ( tired voice )..
Adi didnt response…
Siddhu :- hey adi…
He drop her down and realise that she slept…..
Siddhu wakes up adi ..
Adi :- ohh I am sorry I slept…
Siddhu :- its okay….
Adi :- look a truck is coming…
Adi and siddhu waves hand….

Inside the truck..
Truck driver ( TD ):- hey look a two of them are waving hands..
Conductor :- ya then stops.!!
They stops truck…
TD :- hey…where you have to go !!
Siddhu :- palampur
TD :- get it….
Conductor :- where we will place them…no seats naa.
TD :; they will sit back…
Siddhu :- thanks bhaiyaa….
Siddhu and adi sits back of the truck…
Adi :- oh thank god we got truck ….
Siddhu :- ohh my phone battery is finished … All must be scerching for us…
Adi :- I am feeling hungry…
Siddhu :- eat me!!
Adi :- no.. I won’t eat donkeys ..
Siddhu :- why your calling you as donkey…
Adi :- I meant you !!!/
Siddhu :- ohh..really..
Adi :- i want something to eat…
Siddhu ask TD ..

Siddhu :- bhaiyaa can you stop when you see dhabba…
TD :- are you feeling hungry ….?? Look back there is lots of box its full of apple.. Eat as much you want…
Siddhu :- thanks bhaiyaa..??
Adi take apple and eat it…..
Siddhu :- now happy …
Adi :- ya .. Eat …
Siddhu take apple and eat it..
There journy continues…
TD drops them in there home and went…
It’s now evening….
Everyone becomes worried when they didn’t see siddhu and adi..
Mama :- you came.. Where wer you…
Siddhu explains everything to all…….
Maa :- then you both go and take rest….go..
Adi :- okay . maa when she turns she is stunned …..
Siddhu is also stunned….
It’s aparna infront of them…
Three of them faces are shown….
Scene freezez……???

Precap :- siddhu reveals something and adi is stunned and falls down and crys…..

Guys plz comment….
Sometimes I will not able to update tommarow srry..some works…
Srry…..

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19 Comments

  1. Lakshmi on December 12, 2015 3:06 pm

    Nice adi ,it’s ok no problem update when u get free time.

    • Adi on December 12, 2015 3:46 pm

      Thanks lakshmi…

  2. Hayathi on December 12, 2015 3:44 pm

    Ha ha ha ha adi was so cute

    • Adi on December 12, 2015 3:46 pm

      Thanks hayathi

  3. manha on December 12, 2015 3:52 pm

    Sorry bcoz of my health issues i can’t comment in previous epi. Siddhu hav already fallen for her but can’t realize it. Adi she is so sweet. Super jodi. The part where adi hides her on roof it was just too gud.

    • Adi on December 12, 2015 5:37 pm

      It’s okay manha…
      How are you now…
      Take care.. Thanks for reading…

  4. Hayathi on December 12, 2015 3:52 pm

    But plzzz dr dont seperate adi siddu make them realize their feelings yaar

    • Adi on December 12, 2015 5:38 pm

      ☺☺?

  5. manha on December 12, 2015 3:53 pm

    Their cute nok jhok r always superb.

  6. miya on December 12, 2015 5:26 pm

    oh precap is horrible…l’m wondering what siddu told Adi??why she broke down??

  7. aditi on December 12, 2015 5:39 pm

    Awesome episode adi and abt the song I think manchalaof hasee toh phasee will be gud and plzzz cmnt abt or viral fever r u OK nw if or only k plzz update one more becuz I missed this off so much only if or OK alryt take care

    • Adi on December 12, 2015 6:45 pm

      Thanks aditi…. I will try… If my works are over I will…srry

  8. Lahari on December 12, 2015 6:52 pm

    Nice..their fight si cute

    • Adi on December 12, 2015 10:37 pm

      Thanks lahari

  9. Roma on December 13, 2015 7:34 pm

    Awesome episode, loved their sweeeeeet fights…keep it up buddyyy. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads

  10. Roma on December 13, 2015 9:02 pm

    Bg1 can be “Tuhi ye mujhko batangas de chaahoo main ya naa” from aashiqui2, and bg2 can be “zahenaseeb zahenaseeb, tumhe chaahoo betahaasha zahenaseeb”
    What say?

    • Roma on December 13, 2015 9:03 pm

      Bg1 can be “Tuhi ye mujhko bata de chaahoo main ya naa” from aashiqui2, and bg2 can be “zahenaseeb zahenaseeb, tumhe chaahoo betahaasha zahenaseeb”
      What say?

    • Adi on December 13, 2015 11:34 pm

      Loved it…

  11. manisha on December 15, 2015 8:46 pm

    update d next part

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