Love on Road.. The unique ff.. EPI-02(Vo thi Dhaani… R…)

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Hi.. Guyss.. So ready for my second epi.. Thankss to all readers.. Because it’s because of u today I could fulfil my dream of writing this ff… Ur cmnts means a lot to me?

Okay so.. Gng back to stry.. Here is the link fr u guyss of my first epi..

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Viplav takes her license card and gets shocked and his jaws are dropped down..
Viplav:: U r the daughter ? of MR.Rao..
Dhaani:: Yeah.. But She snatches the license from him.. U don’t know which Rao!!
Viplav:: Kya???
Dhaani’s ordered food ? is served.. She ? indulge herself in food..
Viplav stares? at her.. Shalu look at him and smiles ?

? Pehli nazar mein
Kaise jaado kar diya
Tera ban baita hai
Mera jiya
Jaane kya hoga
Kya hoga kya pata
Is pal ko milke
Aa jee le zara?

Dhaani have her food ? like she hadn’t had food ? for the past few days.. Viplav looks at her lovingly ??

?Mein hoon yahan
Tu hai yahan?

Dhaani’s hair moves fleetingly.. Viplav moves front ? And keep the hairs behind her ears ?

? Meri bahon mein aa
Aa bhi ja
O jaan-e-jaan
Dono jahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Bhool Ja aa?

Dhaani was eating pani Puri ? she looks at him.. She closes her eyes ? and feels His love ?.. “Sir,this is ur bill?? Aur madam ka bill separate rakha hai!! &smiles the waiter.. Viplav comes out the dream ? Dhaani pays her bill.. Another waiter comes and takes the bill and apologises for the bill.. And says to the first that he is the son of the owner.. Viplav laughs ?? and says no probs..
Dhaani:: I’ve kept my payment.. I’m not his acquaintance..and smiles ?
The waiters look at Viplav.. Viplav looks at Dhaani..
Dhaani:: No I’ll make my all payments..don’t worry ? and engages herself in eating pani Puri..

Viplav:: Toh teek hai!! U take that payment..

Shalu:: Bhaia,I too want Pani puri..

Viplav orders that and thy all have there food ? and leaves towards the car ?Dhaani goes and take her luggage’s ??? from reception area.. Which she had thrown there when goons were following her..

Viplav:: So u too coming with us??
Dhaani nods.. Viplav looks at Shalu.. Shalu too give a assertive nod.. Viplav opens the door ? of car and sits in driver seat ? Shalu in front seat ? and Dhaani in back..

Viplav pulls down the hand break ⤴ keep the feet on clutch and changes the gear.. And rides up.. Music system starts to play ? songs..?
? yu hi chala chala re
Yu hu chala chala re
Kith ni hasan.?

Shalu pulls her seat ? back..
Shalu:: Di,If I pulled my seat ? u have any problem to sit??

Dhaani:: No.. U pull no problem!!

Viplav:: Dhaani who were those goons?? Why thy were following you?? And y u r cmng wth us!! Y can’t u call ? ur dad… If I’m not wrong ? after one hour ur dad’s hotel ? is thr!!

Dhaani:: Yeah,after 1 hr my hotel is thr but if I stayed in that hotel ? the next minute I’ll die..

Viplav:: Kya?? And looks at her and slows the car ?

Dhaani:: Slow math kar!! I’ll tell u my whole story..

✂ Fb starts ✂
when I born ? I had my papa and mama.. And when I was 2 ? years I got a little brother ? Dhyaan.. I had a great time wth him.. We loved ? each other than anything in universe.. We always share watever we get!! We always used to spend time together.. Mama always pampered me.. And Dhyaan too..
✂ Fb ends ✂
Dhaani smiles and her eyes are filled with tears ? Shalu goes to sleep ? slowly.. Viplav changes the front mirror and keep the front mirror in such a way that he can see Dhaani.. Viplav sees her eyes ? filled with tears which are ready to flow..
Viplav:: If ur past is black I don’t want to know.. I believe you.. It’s ok ? I don’t want to know who were those goons!!!
Dhaani:: No no.. It’s ok ? (continues)

✂fb starts✂

Later On my 15th b’day papa came and asked me to sign some documents ? and I did that.. Later the next year to followed the same on 16th b’day.. Later after a few days mom’s character began to change.. Shuru toh Dhyaan used to support me.. Later he too had a change in his behaviour.. On 18th b’day when papa? asked me to sign the documents ? mama scolded him.. And the truth was out.. I was not thr daughter?.. Whom I called mama ? and papa ? were not My mama? and papa?

When I was in my mother’s womb Dad ? died.. And during my delivery my mom too.. And those whom I called as papa? mama were actually chachi and chachu.. And the documents? ? I was signing was the agreement fulfilment
✂fb ends ✂
Viplav:: Kya??? Agreement fulfilment??

Dhaani:: Ah, Rao group’s ? is the result of my dad’s ? sweat.. And it was his greatest desire of life that he want the company? to expand… Chacha hates business and therefore when my mom gt pregnant he wrote an agreement ? ? that when I attain 18 all these assets will be mine and till that time mom will look after these assets… Since,mom ? passed away aftr my birth and cries???

Viplav parks the car ? near to a tree ?

Dhaani:: Looks at Viplav and says no I’m okay ?

Viplav:: Ah.. And smiles ? looking at Dhaani…

Dhaani gives a confused ? look..

Viplav:: Mein abhi aaya!! Nature calling…

Dhaani gives a shy smile ?

Shalu::( In ? sleep) bhaia,Stop kyun kiya??

Viplav:: Su su Time? and smiles and goes behind tree ?

Shalu:: Didi,Pani hai kya??

Dhaani:: Looks for a water bottle and passes bottle to Shalu…

Viplav comes from thr and stretches his body… Shalu signs Viplav to come near… Viplav moves towards Shalu

Viplav:: Wind is bowing flastly…

Shalu:: Bhaia, 2 water bottle kahi se kharidh kar de!!

Viplav::(looks throughout and sees a small shop near by and moves to that shop) chal , Mein vahan se kharidhar aaya!!and Looks at Dhaani..
Dhaani:: Can we two ✌ come.. Feeling ? bored sitting here..
Shalu looks at Dhaani…
Shalu:: Di,tears in ur eyes ?!! (Amazed ?)
Kya hua?
Dhaani:: Nothng.. Dust entered into eyes ?
Viplav (?smile):: Come!!
Dhaani comes out of the car ? and stretches her Hands..✋✋ she looks at shalu.. Not cmng!!

Shalu::( Gets out the car and stretches herself) no, u guys go and have I’m not cmng..

Dhaani and shalu look all the side.. Thy see the road are given a coolness by luxurious greenery all around.. Then the sounds of the regional birds and that distinct smell of the greenery enhances the beauty..

Viplav:: Aftr 2 km we have our Nh 17..

Dhaani:: Tats renamed as NH 66 na..

Viplav::yeah.. So u r cmng na to that stall.. Shalu Sit in car itself.. lock the car ? if u come out… We will cme in 3 min.. Don’t cross the road… This is nh.. Cars will be cmng in 100km\hr..

Shalu nods…viplav holds Dhaani’s hands.. Hr long hair touches his hands.. Both look at each other.. And crosses the roads… Viplav goes inside the shop.. And buys 3 water bottles and pays the cash..

Viplav:: Coffee ????
Dhaani nods no…
Viplav orders a cup of coffee ?
Dhaani:: Me too..
Viplav make a pout look.. Dhaani smiles.. With a shy look.. Viplav orders an another coffee ?dhaani looks at the road..
Viplav::look at wat speed the car ? is cmng??
Dhaani smiles ?
Viplav:: Toh tumhari story complete kar!!

Dhaani looks at Viplav::(smiles ?) Toh whr I stopped..

Viplav:: Agreement something something ? ah.. Fulfilment if I’m not wrong ?

Dhaani (thinking ?):: Ah.. Agreement fulfilment.. Toh..
✂ Fb starts ✂
and after The revealing truth and after all assets of Rao groups ?? became mine.. Chachi’s character started to change…. She started to torture me al days.. And asked me to sign the documents which states that I happily ? give all my assets to chachu.. And I nvr Signed the ? ? documents… When chachi’s Torture became un bearable I said to chachu.. And He bought a new ?house and he chachi and Dhyaan moved to the nw ? house.. Bt evn thn she came and tortured me.. And once..
✂Fb ends ✂

Dhaani was abt to sips some coffee ? bt viplav says.. NO NO… Coffee ? ase nahi peti.. Ase peti hai.. And holds her hand ✋ and do cheers ?
Dhaani:: Coffee ? mein bhi cheers ?
Viplav:: Ahh.. We won’t drink alcohol ?toh iss coffee ? pein kam chala na hai…
Viplav:: Say ur stry…

Shalu::( Looks through Window and sees Vidha drinking and talking something)
Lagtha hai bhaia didi ko bhabhi bana raha hai.. And laughs ? and increases the volume ? of song..

Dhaani::(continues)✂Fb starts✂

And later a few days back she and dhyaan came with some goons & tortured me.. After thy wnt I cried ??? for a long time and thought of Dhyaan… Evn he changed.. He forget how we loved ? each othr hw we spnd tme..
✂Fb ends✂
The wealth destroys all emotions of human.. And tears ? fall from her eyes ?
Viplav offrs hr a handkerchief.. Dhaani thankss him…

Viplav:: Thn y don’t u sign those documents.. With an agreement that 70% share will be u urs and rest thr’s

Dhaani:: It was my dad’s grt desire that this ones should be mine.. Else y couldn’t he give this assets to chachu..( She pauses and continues) Hw he was sure that I will be born… I’ll survive till 18 yrs.. With no disabilities…

Viplav:: Em.. Vo toh such hai!! Toh uss goons ko meine maratha tha…

Dhaani::( Nods) Last night ? thy came to my house ? and destroyed everything… Though securities and my guards tried thr bst to save me.. Everything went in vain.. And my chef asked me to run ? and I was gng to Kerala next day,ie, today, so I had my dress packed in my room.. I took it and my passport cash atm ? card cheque and al othr financial things.. and ran.. ?I went to railway ? station and ended up thr.. Thr i so my goons and ran to the near by ? restaurant.. And now u knw na.. And sipss last bit of coffee ?

Viplav makes the payment of 2 coffee and takes 3 water bottles and leaves.. He hold hr hand ✋ and crosses the road.. & enters the car ?

Shalu:: Kahan gaye the??? Ussi dukan mein ya bagal wale park restaurant vakera vakera mein sab!!

Vidha looks each other.. Thy have an eye lock… Hot Wind blowing fastly.. Car moving super fast.. It’s NH na!! AnD vidha cutely romancing…
Viplav::( pat on Dhaani’s back) I was nt aware u struggled this much.. Now u can stay with us till the time u want.. Payment math bhulna..
Dhaani smiles ? and thankss him.. Viplav pats her shoulder again..

Shalu pov
Wat is happening in b\w these two.. Do thy knw each other??? Or love at first sight…

Viplav:: Shalu here is ur water drink it!! So lts go and looks at Dhaani!!

Dhaani smilingly ? nods.. Viplav changes the gear and car ? flees away…

Hpe u guyss loved this epi..
Srry? If any mistakes are thr..
Guyss if u don’t mind can u pls rate my ff out 10.. And could pls suggest if u need any improvement or anything else to be added on my ff..
Thankss fr reading my ff .. C u in cmnt box ?

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  1. Maha_Aijaz

    Amazing Swetha!! Literally it was so cool and light? I enjoyed it a lot and those emojis Ahh! They’re so good actually they enhance the beauty of your story? btw that tears wala emoji is this- ? but you used this one ? *I guess??* then that nature calling was hilarious? and shalini’s assumption for viplav of making dhaani as her bhabi was too nice? you are really very nice in writing, I must say. Dhaani’s past was very sad her chacha and chachi were so mean but koi nahe they’ll pay for all this one day but happy to know that she is in safe and protective arms (with viplav) Good going girl, keep it up??
    About ranking well I’ll give you 9 out of 10 theek hai naa wesey tou I’m no one to rate you but it’s just I felt so and about improvement I seriously don’t know as I’m really bad in suggestions, you are doing great yaar so just chill and be the way you are.. I can tell you the best thing in your writing and that is your simplicity and cuteness bus never ever change it!
    Post the next one soon?
    Take care❤

  2. Shanitics

    Thankss maha di?

    Thankss fr correcting my mistake..?
    ? ye emotion ji bhi na!!

    Actually it’s ur cmnts tat made me write these ff’s.. So credits goes to u too?

    Chacha is gud.. It’s chachi?

    I asked u to rate because it’s actually a new plot.. And nw unique stry na.. So I askd ?

    Yeah.. I’ll try my bst to keep my ff. Simple and cute…?

    Wl soon pst the nxt one?

    Love ? u too

  3. Sujie

    Hayee….mein kya karoon….. Viplav Dhaani ki dosti kardali…
    nature calling…susu time was hilarious…..
    good good…..keep going dear….lots of love…..
    Ek baat…. Though I am not a critic to judge your work..tumne kaha issliye I am rating it…and honestly…giving you 10 out of 10…. Just be the way you are and keep us entertaining by your awesome writing……. dher sara pyaar for you…keep rocking shaani…. 🙂 🙂 🙂

  4. Shanitics

    Thankss Sujie di…?

    Haan.. Dosti shuru? Vidha ka…

    Omg 10.. Thankss.. Actually I asked u to rate as this is a new concept and therefore I would I like u knw whthr this is gud.. And also my presentation ? Yeah.. Sure will not change the cuteness of my ff…

    Love u too didi?

  5. Shruthy

    Oh poor girl! She suffered a lot. First of all, not knowing they were their parents. And even not being her parents, they just used her for her properties, and showered fake love. Especially her cousin. Gosh how money can hide people’s truth!!
    Luckily, she met Viplav and Shalini at the right time in the restaurant. And now, thanks to trust and friendship, she is under safe arms. And Viplav is literally in love, like Shalini noticed.
    Waiting to know more about this dosti/pyaar wala journey. Post the next part soon dear.
    Loads of love xoxo

    1. Shanitics

      Intrship period means?? ?

      1. Shruthy

        I am in internship. Working in a place for my studies

  6. Shanitics

    Thankss Shruthy di ?

    Yep.. Her cousins were nt much gud excluding the chacha… ?

    Wl post the nxt prt soon…?
    Tons and tons of love ?

    1. Shruthy

      Mention not’u ji!

      Oh so chachaji was good with Dhaani. Chee I literally get lost sometimes xD
      YES I am waiting B)

      1. Shanitics

        Yeah.. Chacha is gud?
        Hws ur lfe mvng in btwn?? And wat abt ur studies??

    2. Shruthy

      Acha ji.
      As alwyas, good good. I am now in internship period so busier days, starting early and ending at around 5/5.30pm. What about yours?

  7. AanyaSingh

    Hello Swetha dear?. Sorry for being late again. Not wasting much time & coming to the epi. It was really very good???. I enjoyed it so much. So, Vips’ & Dhaani ‘s dosti soon to b turned into pyaar has already started. The way their relation is developing is???, i loved the way u have described it??. Hw Vips tucked dhaani’ s hair, it was so sweet?. Poor Dhaani, hw much she suffered at the hands of her chachi?. But thank God, now she is with her saviour & her future life partner too. And another of my silent guess was also right? but now i’ll make no guesses & leave everything to u to tell. Ok ?. And yes, the symbols & emojis u use in the whole story really give a beautiful look to it & the joy of reading gets doubled?. Post the nxt soon. Love to u???.

    1. Shanitics

      Thankss Aanya di..

      It’s ok fr being late?

      Yep… A gud Relationship has developed b\w bth.. Of thm?

      Thankss.. It’s a first tme someone appreciating me fr such a thing.. Ie fr explaining the developing relation?

      Congratss ? fr ur crrct guss.. Hey,Guss martho tabhi toh maza hai..?

      Yep.. Now she is in safer hands?

      Emotion ji nahi hai toh vo mera ff nahi hai.. ? so thankss to my mobile’s emotion ji.. Who hlpd me in doubling my readers anxiety ?

      Love u too.. Wl pst the nxt prt soon…?

  8. Shanitics

    SHRUTHY DI.. My life is mvng suprb.. My studies too.. As u said 11 & 12 std r really suprb.. Yes it is, this yr it’s true.. These days r enjoyable.. Hpe it continues …

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