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Home»Fan Fiction»Love in Rain – Shot Two (Someone is back) Twinj FS
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Love in Rain – Shot Two (Someone is back) Twinj FS

TwinjBy TwinjApril 17, 201715 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hi guys,
Are u liking the track if not do say? I will try my level best to improve. Thank u everyone who cmted on my previous shot. Sorry I couldn’t reply to the cmts n sorry to keep u guys waiting.

Shot 1

Hope the link to the previous shot works. Enjoy reading
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The silence filled the environment. We were walking slowly on the slick road. Both mine n miss attitude kaam siyaapa queen’s dress were wet as well as dirty. Her arms were wrapped around my shoulder n my arms were wrapped around her waist. Drops of rain were flowing down from her cheeks. She was looking cute. At one point we both slipped n fell down. Ouch my back hurt. “Ahh…” Miss attitude aka Twinkle screamed in pain touching her foot. She hurt her sprained leg. I tried getting up but failed. I again tried n again failed. With much more difficulty I succeeded in getting up.

I forwarded my hand towards her. She slowly put her hand on my hand n tried to get up but instead of getting up I also fell down in her direction due to which she kissed me. I mean to say accidently kissed my cheek. I was hell confused how to react. I guess she was also confused so she just kept staring at the ground. So I also preferred to be quiet. But I really felt very good. My heart was pondering with happiness. What kind of a feeling is it? I felt as if I wanted to live that moment once again. ‘Kunj yeh kya soch raha hae.’ I scolded myself.

I got up slowly but this time instead of forwarding my hand; I lifted her in my arms in bridal style just like in the movies. “Hey put me down.” Miss attitude shouted at the top of her voice moving a bit. I just looked at her eyes. I don’t know why but I wanted to be lost in those innocent eyes. Literally we had an eye lock. After few seconds I came back to my senses n continued walking. “Put me down.” She shouted n started hitting my chest but I continued walking slowly. After almost two or three minutes she became calm n silent. But I really wanted her to argue with me. At one point I stumbled a bit so she hesitantly wrapped her arms around my neck.

People walking on the roads were staring us as if we were aliens. Some were gossiping. I heard one of the girl say, “If my boyfriend was also romantic like him.” Me n siyaapa queen’s boyfriend…kabhi nai. Meanwhile siyaapa queen was busy staring me. Finally after few moments we were outside Taneja mansion. I was about to put her down but just then I heard a sound from behind. It sounded as if someone had dropped something. I turned around to see. There was a lady with shocked expression and she had dropped her pooja thali. “Maa.” Twinkle said. Oh god yeh toh twinkle ki maa hae. Now the scene was just like in the movies….boyfriend aur girlfriend ka romantic scene chal raha hota hae aur tabhe maa tapak parti hae. But I am not Twinkle’s boyfriend. I slowly put Twinkle down but she stumbled so I wrapped my arms around her waist preventing her from falling down. (Sajana ve plays in background.)

“Oh god yeh din dekhne se phele may mar que nai gayi.” Twinkle’s mom said proceeding towards us. “Leela maa it’s nothing like that. Yeh Khaadoos…I mean to say Kunj toh meri help kar raha tha.” Twinkle tried to justify. “Yes aunty it’s nothing like that.” I said trying to convince aunty.
“If it’s nothing like that then what is this.” she said pointing my cheek. Twinkle closed her mouth with both her hand with a shocked expression. What was there in my cheek? “Yeh lipstick mark kis ke haen why was Kunj carrying u like that n moreover yeh kya hae.” She said indicating our current position.. Oh no hogaya siyaapa. “Siyaapa queen.” I said in a low voice but siyaapa queen heard it. “Sadu kahi ke.” She said giving me a death glare. “Hogaya siyaapa. Aab khush.” I said giving her a death glare.
“Yeh kya kusur pusur kar rahe ho.” Aunty scolded. We both bowed our head.

PRECAP: Jhor ka jhatka…

Sorry if it bored u. I tried my level best to show twinj scenes. Hope u guys liked it. Please do drop ur cmts below. Next shot I will try posting soon.

Loads of love,
Twinj/aaku

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    15 Comments

    1. nishfd on April 17, 2017 5:06 pm

      God its soo awesome
      Kiss then kunj carrying twinkle and the entry if leela….
      Loved it
      Post asap

    2. Fatimaa. on April 17, 2017 5:25 pm

      Wowww..akku..
      What an epi…so amazing..
      The kiss nd the mark????..
      Well loved it..
      Post soon..love u

    3. Presha on April 17, 2017 5:45 pm

      Hey akku…
      Its so awesome cute…
      Loved it…
      Leela’s was worth listening…
      Twinj were aww o cute…
      Loved it..
      Love u..??

    4. Cp on April 17, 2017 6:47 pm

      Amaazinggg ?????shayad mujhe pata hai jhor ka jhatka kya hogaaaa??post next soon ???

    5. Purvi128 on April 17, 2017 7:29 pm

      Hahahhahaha…oyee hoye meri daayan… Tu ne to meri bolti band ker di.. ???? hahaha… I can’t stop laughing.. That was hilarious.. Haayee that kiss…. Sooo sweet.. Nd then kunj carrying her in his arms…. Ufff nd then leela’s entry .. That was epic. . or fir twinj ki kusur pusur … Uff seriously amazing.. Too good.??? that was a masterpiece… Too lovely… Haayee ms attitude.. ?? precap toh.. ?? don’t knw what will happen… Let’s see..
      Post soooooon..
      Love u loads meri daayan ????

    6. Meera on April 17, 2017 8:31 pm

      Superb yaar…….
      The kisss………rockinggg
      Aur correct time pe Leela maa ki ntry was really interesting…
      Twinj ka convo mujhe bohot pasand aaya.
      Voh bridal style lifting …I was imaginig tht……..so cute na….

      Really nice piece of work…..
      Deaperately waiting 4 nxt prt…..
      As u mentioned voh jhor ka jhadka keliye ……..
      Plzzzzz post asap…..

    7. Ramya on April 17, 2017 10:18 pm

      Hey aaku itts cute
      Amazing awesome
      I mean vo accidental kiss
      Kunj monologue n everything wassup amazing
      Love u keep smiling

    8. maha on April 18, 2017 12:14 am

      tooooo goood
      twinj syappa…
      waiting for next

    9. SidMin23 on April 18, 2017 12:25 am

      Nice do post soon.

    10. Purnima.agrawal30 on April 18, 2017 12:30 am

      Amazing funny fabulous fantastic

    11. SidMin on April 18, 2017 11:33 am

      Loved it … Just loved Kunj’s POV … it was too good 🙂
      Love you post soon 🙂

    12. mia12 on April 18, 2017 2:29 pm

      Wow meri chocochipss,,??
      What a episode,,????
      Amazing, Fabulous, Awesome,,???????????????????
      I Love kunj POV soooooo much it was so funny,,?????
      Or kunj twinkle ko bridal style mai utha was also cute, adorable,,??????
      And last moment par Leela ki entry was hilarious,,?????
      Yarr it was jhakkkaassss,,???
      Can’t wait 4 the next epi jaldhi post karna ok jaldhi,,???
      LOAD’S OF LOVE,,❤?❤?❤?❤

    13. Rashmi on April 18, 2017 7:08 pm

      Hie twinj,
      “Kinitni cenute renomanance henai ”
      Uss lekha ki aise ki tese …kardo…kinna wonderful romance chalriya thha..but meko lagta hai tum aur better likh sakti ho…so plz keep writing for all of us..

    14. Swasti_aaku on April 19, 2017 7:13 am

      Hey aaku
      That was amazing.Each n every part was just amazing.The twinj scenes, accidental kiss was mindblowing.Love it a loads.Post asap.

    15. baby on April 21, 2017 5:18 pm

      ohhhh god aakriti………☺
      itnnaa cute……..hhahahaaaa……..♥
      bechaare twinj………..hahhahaaa kissiiee awww……
      jor ka jhatka hai joro se laga hai laga……..♥
      ohh god I cant wait……..♥
      plsssssshhhhhhh post nxt asap dear……………….♥
      love u lods……………♥
      loved it…….♥

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