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Love in Rain – Shot Six (By Twinj) Twinj fs

TwinjBy TwinjMay 25, 201711 Comments5 Mins Read
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Everyone appalauded as I sang the last line of the song but I was still confused why I did dedicate the song rabaata for Twinkle. I mean I could have dedicated any other song but anyway I was happy with the thought that I brought a smile on Twinkle’s face n moreover she was no more miffed with me. As soon as I finished the song Twinkle came dawdling towards me n gave me a tight hug infront of everyone. It felt so different to be in her arms. Never did I feel something like this. It’s the second time Twinkle hugged me…..last time in fear n today in happiness. The hug felt so warm n sweet. It felt so good but I was unknown about the feeling going inside me. Everyone clapped even more harder that is when we realized that there were people around us. We slowly broke the hug. She looked at me n gave me a smile n I too smiled back.

The party was in full swing. The whole time I was with Twinkle. Just for a while I went outside to attend a call but when I came back she was not there. I looked around but didn’t find her. I guess she was gone. The party was almost over. I glanced at the clock it was 11:30. Where are u Twinkle? She was the first one to wish me n I hope she would also be the last one to wish me. Oh god why am I thinking like this. Kunj just stop thinking. I tried hard to divert my mind but it was stuck in one person Twinkle but she didn’t even care then why should I? But my mind continuoisly fuzzed me at this questions…
‘Where is Twinkle?’
‘Why did she go without informing me?’

@my room
It was almost 11:55 when I entered my room. I still had a hope that she would be the last person to wish me. I guess hope is really a thing with feather. I was about to took off my coat when I heard a sound from balcony. I guess she has come. I immedialtely rushed to the balcony. I opened the door of the balcony. It was raining but She was not there. Suddenly someone back hugged me. ‘Happy Birthday Sadu.’ she said. Her voice sounded a bit different. She made me turn around. Oh god she was drunk. She couldn’t even stand still. ‘Twinkle are u drunk.’ I said. ‘Iee aamm not dronk.’ she said wagling her head. She meant to say ‘I am not drunk’ but it sounded like that. She continued,’Ieee jost drankee a soft drink.’ We were getting wet in rain. ‘Iee aam not dronk.’ she said. ‘Ok u r not drunk. Let’s go in.’ I said catching her hand. She shook her in a childish way. She held my collar n pulled me towards her. I could see the drops of rains flowing down her cheeks. She was looking breathtaking. She was so close to me. I could feel her breathe. I was slowly n gradually losing control over me. Kunj control a voice inside me brought back my sense. I immediately took a step back. ‘Kunj u knou u aareee so so su su handsome.’ she said as she spread her hand to feel the rain drops. She closed her eyes n looked up at the sky. I smiled seeing her childish behaviour. She couldn’t stand still. She was stumbling yet she was enjoying. I slowly moved towards her. ‘Twinkle let’s go in. U will fall sick.’ I said. ‘I lope these coring natore of ya.’ she said as she wrapped her hands around my neck. She actually meant to say she loved my caring nature. At that moment I wanted to catch her by her waist n kiss her wet lips but I controlled myself. She continued,’I lopee ur smile n I lopee.’ Before she could complete I closed her mouth. ‘Shhhh u speak a lot.’ I said.

We were fully wet in rain. I put my hand down n ruffled my wet hair. ‘Let’s go in.’ I said. She shook her head in ‘no’. I had no other options left. I lifted her in bridal style. She didn’t resist instead she wrapped her arms around her neck n gave me a smile. I took her inside in my arms whereas she kept looking at me.

I slowly put her down on my bed. ‘Twinkle now sleep.’ I said. ‘Iee need a guddd night kissiee.’ she said making a cute face like a baby.’Twinkle sleep.’ I said arranging the blanket. She shook her head in ‘no.’ ‘Twinkle.’ I said glaring her. She dug her face in a pillow n said,’Ieee won’t talk to u.’ ‘Twinkle.’I said. She got up n said,’kissie.’ I made her lay down n pecked her forehead. I turned around to leave but she caught my wrist. I turned around. ‘One more kissiee.’ she said. I again pecked her forehead. ‘One more.’ she said. I again pecked her forehead. I felt very good. Oh god this girls too cute. ‘One mure but here nut here.’ she said pointing her lips.

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    11 Comments

    1. Ayesha51 on May 25, 2017 6:23 pm

      yah
      I like
      the shot
      very much
      loved twinj scenes
      they were so
      cute and when
      twinkle said
      that she wants
      good n8 kissiee
      it was too cute
      sweet and lovely
      loved it ♡♡♡♡♡♡
      the scene
      was superb
      awesome
      fabulous
      fantastic
      outstanding
      marvellous
      too good
      please post soon
      lots of love ♡♡♡

    2. SidMin23 on May 25, 2017 6:50 pm

      Nice and twinkle drunk behavior is cute and she is Ordering kunj to kiss her ?? do post soon.

    3. Sohi on May 25, 2017 7:05 pm

      Most cutest episode
      Liked twinj scenes
      Hehe I think drunk twinkle is very cute

      Aare yaar please apna ff jaldhi se post karna
      Waiting for the next update
      Do continue

    4. Presha on May 25, 2017 7:32 pm

      Hey akku….
      Its awesome….
      Just loved it…
      Its so cute….
      Love u…
      Post soon

    5. twinjfan.tamanna on May 25, 2017 10:01 pm

      Awww yaar that’s cute! Beautifully written! Amazing! Next one seems really interesting! I just can’t wait for next! Pls post next one soon! And can I ask u something my silent Buddy? I know u won’t deny! isiliye puch hi lethi hun? What’s ur name yaar? I want to know badly! only if u don’t mind!

      With Love,
      Urs Tamanna

    6. maha on May 25, 2017 10:48 pm

      awsm lovly epi

    7. Cp on May 25, 2017 11:25 pm

      Cuteee ?? Episode…,aur kiss PE hi kyu roka I mean end kiya???hum⁉⁉❓❓❓?but no worries kyunkii agle episode mein shayad mile..Hai naa?? post soon ?

    8. Purnima.agrawal30 on May 26, 2017 1:06 am

      Awesome fantastic funny

    9. Chiku on May 26, 2017 6:40 am

      Wohoo amazing❤️❤️❤️Post soon

    10. Ramya on May 26, 2017 10:28 am

      Awesome aaku just amazing
      Super lovely
      Loved it
      Love you keep smiling

    11. baby on May 27, 2017 1:13 am

      ohh god aaku u knw wat I really love ur writings n u too sista…..♥
      awww………..jst soooooooo cute………♥
      it was marvelleosuly cute……..♥ cutness overloaded…….♥
      kissiieee uff n yeh kyaaaa plsssss post nxtsoon plssss……..♥
      lods of love……..♥
      loved it speechless………♥
      post soon……..♥
      keep smiling…………♥

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