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LOVE YOU – RAGLAK OS

administratorBy administratorJune 10, 201617 Comments5 Mins Read
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LOVE YOU OS by Kavya

Hi let’s go to the story.. Guys this is my first ever try so please support me..

NO PROOF READ!!

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Story

Ragini Bhatt – a tradional girl who is a topper in the college and BFF of Swara and loves her

Swara Khanna – BFF of ragini and is glamorous

Laksh Maheshwari – he is dude of college and has a best friend Rishab who he stays with

Sanskar Chopra – he is a Casanova and has a crush on swara since school hood

Laksh gang – kamya, Kavita,Rishab,Manik

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College

A girl is entering she is looking stunning in a long red skirt kind of tradional with black shirt and red jacket like Kurti with open hair (she is ragini)

ragini – hey swara what’s up

swara – ragini come on

swara is glamorous so she is wearing blue jeans and red top with French braid

swara – well we will get late

ragini – come on

They both leave when swara clashes with s boy and he catches her by waist

Boy – are u okay beauty

ragini – sanskar sir please leave her

Yes he is sanskar

Sanskar – I will but one condition

ragini – what

sanskar – call me sanky

ragini – sanky leave her sanskar leaves her and goes from there and swara comes to ragini

swara – boih he is hot

ragini – shut up and come on

swara and ragini moves towards class but swara went to bathroom and ragini moves ahead
ragini soon clashes with some not and her papers fly in air

ragini – sorry laksh sir

ragini lifts the paper her hair flows in air and laksh is mesmerized and ragini takes her paper and leaves

laksh monologue
OMG laksh such s beautiful girl you have never seen in your life for sure

Manik – bro bet time

Rishab – yeah I agree

Kamya – what will we give him?

Kavita – I know make ragini yours like make her fall for u but no crossing limits baby

lucky – ok kavi

Lucky takes Kavita as friend where as Kavita loves him

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Canteen

Raglak are there

Laksh – hi ragini

ragini – hello sir

laksh – don’t call me sir but call me lucky

ragini – ok lucky

laksh – cool.. Now meet me after college near tree want to Rom Kolkata on bike

ragini – ok

Soon college ends and ragini goes to meet laksh

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Near tree

ragini – sorry I am late

laksh – never mind come on sit

ragini – ok

ragini sits but doesn’t hold him tight lucky gets disturbed and puts s sudden break and she falls on him putting a hug and lucky feels unknown happiness and ragini hugs all the way and he drives to a private beach
After sometime they reach and ragini is sleeping and laksh admiring her

Laksh – ragini get up

Ragini wakes up and feels embarrassed – so…so…sorry

Laksh – come on I have a surprise

Raglak walk up to beach and ragini Gets surprised seeing the beach like a picnic spot and hugs him

Ragini – thanks lucky for this

laksh – welcome ma’ am now can I gave a pleasure

ragini – sure

They reach water and play there and ragini Splashes water and he chased her suddenly ragini legs slips and laksh falls on her

Ragini hair comes ahead and he tucks her hair back and leans towards her and she closes eyes. But suddenly lucy comes in sense

lucky – sorry ragini

ragini – it’s ok

RAGLAK enjoy and leaves for their home

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Some days pass and eventually laksh falls for ragini and then love is in air but there is prom night where raglak decide to go with each other and Kavita plans to break their love story

laksh wears black suit and ragini wear black gown

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PROM NIGHT

Raglak enter and host announces a couple dance

raglak dance on Sanam Re

Host – the winner is raglak pls come on stage

They recieve awards and laksh takes ragini to propose

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GARDEN

It is decorated beautifully

Laksh was about to say something when Kavita comes and hugs him

Kavita – I love laksh I know baby you had to do this but now u won the bet

ragini – bet??

Kavita – he doesn’t love you (she tells everything)

ragini – you betrayed me

laksh – stand there and listen and Kavita I know you.. You love my money not me

Kavita – listen pls

Laksh – shut up and get lost

Kavita leaves from there and raglak are left behind

Laksh – give me 5 mins plzz

ragini – ok

laksh – listen now

❤️❤️❤️PROPOSAL❤️❤️❤️

ragini

He takes a rose? and says this rose is no better than you.. You are a more better rose with pleasant smell

He takes a ring? and says ragini this diamond is way smaller than you

He then takes ? and says you smile is so cute and this chocolate make it cuter

ragini smiles and he kneels down and says

RAGINI I LOVE YOU WILL YOU MARRY ME??

Ragini is really happy and says yes and they hug

Laksh without wasting time asks permission for kissing and she gives a +sign and he puts his on hers and sucks her lips and the kiss becomes passionate and hungry and they join foreheads

THE END

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How was it guys????
Hope you all enjoyed it?

This was a normal story showing a message that love can happen anywhere anytime????

Comment for sure?

Regards,
KAVYA

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17 Comments

  1. ridhi on June 10, 2016 2:38 pm

    good one kavya.tat was short n cute.loved t.keep up d gud wrk

  2. PP on June 10, 2016 2:43 pm

    Awesome
    Loved it a lot
    Thanks for this OS……

  3. S priya on June 10, 2016 2:52 pm

    Nice try dr…looking forward fr ur nxt OS

  4. lovely on June 10, 2016 3:00 pm

    nice

  5. sherin on June 10, 2016 3:00 pm

    nice one

  6. sanchami on June 10, 2016 3:18 pm

    Superb os

  7. Halima (SuNusZuRahLima❤️??) A.M on June 10, 2016 3:33 pm

    Awesome OS Kavya…

  8. Priya on June 10, 2016 3:41 pm

    ?awesome my dear

  9. Dafsi on June 10, 2016 3:57 pm

    Nice OS

  10. Piya on June 10, 2016 6:26 pm

    Nice

  11. Rashida on June 10, 2016 7:33 pm

    You already done thhis o’s before

  12. Gowri on June 10, 2016 7:58 pm

    Nice

  13. Arohi :) on June 10, 2016 8:06 pm

    hey this is a capy of my OS which I had written in swasan version.. plzz its a request don’t copy others OS but write your own OS….. plzz don’t take me rude but you copied my OS and posted in your words pls if you’re doing this atleast give credits!!!

    • ab on June 10, 2016 8:51 pm

      yeah arohi is telling right i have also read this os of her its same only on place of swasan their is raglak so kavya please dont copy any one os and right if you are you should have to give the credit to original writer

  14. ammy on June 10, 2016 8:35 pm

    Nice

  15. Nita on June 11, 2016 7:48 am

    I think i have read this before…but anyways nice story…

  16. musu on June 11, 2016 9:51 am

    nice

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