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Home»Fan Fiction»In Love #Raglak Ff (Chapter 1)
Fan Fiction Swaragini

In Love #Raglak Ff (Chapter 1)

Jiya_AniBy Jiya_AniDecember 4, 201666 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hellooooo !…hello everyone.. I am completely new here (though I silently read some ffs )…I am a crazy crazy crazy Raglak fan!…I have a friend amongst you…Anjali..
Hope I’ll be able to make more!

Well let me introduce myself…

I am Ani…Shreyani..a 9th class student..I have been writing 3 ffs for Twinj (tashan e ishq) and 1 ff for devakshi…and now I am here to be a member of this beautiful swaragini family.. Do I have a permission?

So let me tell you guys about this story..

This is basically a – Horror and Romantic story!

I don’t know if anyone had tried this genre here before or not..but I hope you like this…

What happens when an in-love just married couple from London..comes for their honeymoon in Ernakulam… But the bungalow has secrets to be revealed!

So let’s start
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Wait wait…
Lights
Camera..

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Smile ?
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A big white-grey bungalow is shown… A lavish one in Ernakulam..in Kerala..the camera moves inside the entrance and shows a big and beautiful hall ………the camera moves further on the stairs… And reaches a beautiful room…where a couple is shown hugging each other tightly… So tight that no one can seperate them….all the powers on this Earth is weak in front of this feel…the feeling of LOVE…. It wasn’t a happy hug….it was a hug to console… an inseparable hug…a hug of intense love……

After sometime they break the hug…the face of the girl is shown… A gorgeous girl in a pink-blue anarkali suit…her beautiful’deeper than the ocean ‘…,teary eyes are shown.. tears roll down on her pink-rosy cheeks… the guy clears them with his thumb…
G:..shhh..hey Ragini.. Plz don’t cry..u know naa I don’t like tears in my wife’s eyes…

So the girl is RaginiLaksh Maheshwari…wife of Laksh Maheshwari..

He caresses her forehead she closes her eyes…
R:..but Laksh…
L:..shh..
he keeps fingers on her soft lip and smoothly rub his fingers on her lips… then her face…and slowly on her neck…she keeps her hands on his chest… he takes her right hand and they interlocked their fingers… Soon ..their lips met they had an intense , smooth and long liplock…..after some time their lips parted…Ragini rested her head on his chest…

R:..why r u leaving me here..Laksh… I want to b with u only…
L:..Even I want to b with u only.. But the work for which I am going is not safe….if u will b there then u will b the most unsafe…ur safety is my priority… I just want to keep u away from that house….
R:..but why..
L:..leave it..
R:..I love u …Laksh..
L:..I love u tooo …Ragini.. I love u….OK…I have to go now…she stands straight…. B here with Swara and Sanskar… And plz take care…
R:..hmm..
L:..now may I see my lovely wife’s beautiful smile..
R:..ya..u r going and asking me to smile… u r the reason for my smile …Laksh…and gets a curve on her lips…
L:..okay..bye..
R:..Laksh plz..don’t say bye..just say..see u soon…
L:..okay…c u soon..cups her face and turns to leave but Ragini catches his elbow….YYwhy r u not telling me the whole truth…
L:..which truth Ragini..?
R:..Laksh …I know u r hiding something from me..tell me naa..plz..
Laksh turns and cups her face..
L:..I love u..only u..

He turns and leaves…

Ragini follows him…
Laksh’s POV-

I am sorry Ragini.. But to keep u safe is my priority… Even if I die…I will not let anything happen to u…in this war..either we will b together for always.. Or I will never meet u again….but I can’t lie to u …u should know about this…

R:..Laksh.
.she sobs..but feels warm hands on her shoulder …she recognized the touch and hugs the person tightly…
R:..Laksh…(yes ..Laksh returned..)
L:..Ragini.. I can’t lie to u ..listen..
He makes her sit on the house swing… surrounded by greenery…(after all they are in the God owned city…Kerala)

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This chapter ends here… I hope it was not boring.. and sorry for wasting ur time but trust me ..its a very beautiful story.. Do read..and comment..
I know ..many of u must b a bit confused… but soon all the confusions will b cleared… And yes its not a common luvstory…

All kinds are accepted here..roses..thorns …rotten tomatoes.. And yes kisi ka man kare toh Lillie’s bhi throw kar Dena…coz I love them a lot…

And yes there is another writer named Lovely… Who was active…is still I donno…but I am not her…don’t get confused

With Love ❤

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    66 Comments

    1. Asw on December 4, 2016 5:05 pm

      U R welcome in swaragini family ur idea is quite interesting keep going

      • Lovely on December 4, 2016 5:12 pm

        Thanks a lottt!…I am happy that you liked ?

    2. Jessica on December 4, 2016 5:10 pm

      Osm di…hope 2 c u soon

      • Lovely on December 4, 2016 5:14 pm

        Thanks Jessica… I’ll post tom ?

      • Jessica on December 4, 2016 5:23 pm

        i m from orissa n study in class 8…if u don’t mind where r u from n can we b frnds…

    3. Pinky on December 4, 2016 5:10 pm

      Lovely I want give u rose with big kiss also …the epi was sooooo good.who said its boring ..it was superb. R u from Kerala ? Okay I want be ur friend ? Will u accept me as ur friend? Update soon.I am waiting

      • Lovely on December 4, 2016 5:13 pm

        Awww..thanks you soooo much dear…I amn’t from Kerela ?
        …and Of course…Friends ?

    4. jazzy on December 4, 2016 5:12 pm

      amazing and i will throw liles on u okk update next part soon

      • Lovely on December 4, 2016 5:15 pm

        Thanks a ton Jazzy!…I’ll post Tom ?

    5. lisa on December 4, 2016 5:23 pm

      nice

      • Lovely on December 5, 2016 3:48 pm

        Thanks ?

    6. Darshini on December 4, 2016 5:27 pm

      Am new here bt silent reader…Awesome yaar…waiting for d nxt update…plz update soon

      • Lovely on December 4, 2016 9:33 pm

        Thanks a lotttt dear..I’ll post next tomorrow ?

    7. nikky on December 4, 2016 5:35 pm

      no it’s awesome plzz continue writing next part soon

      • Lovely on December 5, 2016 3:20 pm

        Thanks a lotttt! ☺

    8. megha123 on December 4, 2016 5:40 pm

      awsm loved it hope u post nxt part asap

      • Lovely on December 4, 2016 9:19 pm

        Thanks a lotttt!☺

    9. Raglakholic on December 4, 2016 5:53 pm

      Wow dear
      I just say one word
      Nd that is u left me spellbounded
      It’s in deed interesting and outstanding
      In single episode
      U showed all emotions suspence,romantic emotional nd all
      Please do continue soon
      Eagerly awaiting for the next episode
      Love u dear

      • Lovely on December 4, 2016 9:23 pm

        Thanks a lot dear!..and you have a name like me!..even I am a Raglakholic !

        I am really happy that you liked my post…I’ll post next tommorow
        ?

    10. Samira on December 4, 2016 6:04 pm

      Hi lovely.U know telugu??
      It’s some what like a telugu movie which I saw. I don’t wanna reveal which movie to hold on ur suspense. Ur great keep going girl.

      • Lovely on December 4, 2016 9:27 pm

        No yar.. I amn’t Telugu..nor this is a story inspired by any movie!…its completely mine..thanks a lott!
        ?

    11. Bela on December 4, 2016 6:10 pm

      Ah, this is really interesting. Now, I am eager to know what Laksh has to say to her. Please do continue soon. Good job?

      • Lovely on December 5, 2016 4:09 pm

        Thanks…

    12. Ammu on December 4, 2016 6:33 pm

      Interesting start dear and eagerly waiting for next episode. Thanks a lot for Raglak

    13. Sindhura on December 4, 2016 6:39 pm

      Awesome yar

      • Lovely on December 4, 2016 9:28 pm

        Thanks ?

    14. lovely on December 4, 2016 6:51 pm

      Interesting, thank you so much for raglak story

    15. Astra on December 4, 2016 6:52 pm

      Oh my lovely dear…. it’s an awesome and as you said it’s really very very beautiful…loved it a lot my dear…. plz continue…..

      • Lovely on December 4, 2016 9:30 pm

        Thanks a ton!!!!!!….Keep supporting ?

    16. taiana on December 4, 2016 7:13 pm

      Awesome… it’s a unique concept… keep it up…

      • Lovely on December 5, 2016 4:08 pm

        Thank you soooo much ❤ keep supporting

    17. Arjuna on December 4, 2016 7:54 pm

      Superb

      • Lovely on December 5, 2016 4:08 pm

        Thanks..

    18. kanchi on December 4, 2016 8:25 pm

      Lovely see I m following u everywhere
      Just kidding n i have read this story but will not reveal the whole story as it may harm ur ff
      Loads of love
      Kanchi

      • Lovely on December 5, 2016 4:07 pm

        Hayeee!…thank you Jaanu..
        ???

    19. Malu on December 4, 2016 8:26 pm

      It’s Different story

      • Lovely on December 5, 2016 4:06 pm

        Thank you soooo much ❤

    20. SRSL on December 4, 2016 8:56 pm

      Awsm…are you a mallu…if yes hi-fi…at last got someone from kerla…and by the way whenever I go to India I stay in Cochin…so it my favorite place…I feel a bit of happiness from this deserted area to a greenery place…so freinds….sorry if you are not from Kerala….

      • Lovely on December 5, 2016 4:05 pm

        Thanks but Sorry..I amn’t Mallu nor Am Kerelite…but We can be friends haan…
        And dosto main no thanks and no sorrys…ohkay!?

    21. Ramya on December 4, 2016 9:05 pm

      Loads of love and Lillie’s lovely?

      • Lovely on December 5, 2016 4:03 pm

        Thank you soooo much ❤

    22. hemalattha on December 4, 2016 9:23 pm

      nice

      • Lovely on December 5, 2016 4:03 pm

        Thank you soooo much ❤

    23. Sherin on December 4, 2016 9:24 pm

      interesting

      • Lovely on December 5, 2016 4:02 pm

        Thank you soooo much ❤

    24. dharani on December 4, 2016 9:46 pm

      awesome

      • Lovely on December 5, 2016 4:02 pm

        Thank you soooo much ❤

    25. Sohi on December 4, 2016 9:47 pm

      Hi lovely I loved this story very much well I know this story but I wanted to read it in another way too so looking forward to it one question you are crazy fan of raglak then what about twinj do answer it keep writing bye

      • Lovely on December 4, 2016 10:04 pm

        Hi Sohi!..it would be same only.. And yes I am a crazy Raglak Fan but but but!…Twinj…Twinj toh meri jaan hai …I am the craziest fan of Twinj…actually that’s the reason behind the same story as..I can’t imagine a story if Twinj aren’t there!…whatever I imagine.. I imagine Twinj…write Twinj..though I replace the names afterwards… That’s it!..I’d suggest..rehne do..mat padho or else you’ll get bored!… You know everything ?

    26. Sriya on December 4, 2016 10:16 pm

      Hey shreya! It was flawless tremendous you are raglak fan! I like raglak but not actually fan of it! You must have know me I commented on your twinj ffs I am twinj ff and I read raglak ffs too I wrote ffs on them too! But mostly on SwaSan! As I am a crazy fan of them keep going girl I missed your twinj ff said can you give me links please and do read my raglak ffs if you have time one is I love you raglak few shots and raglak rockstar love story ( short story) they are incomplete I will complete them soon and start a new story anyways enough of my bak-bak bye take care and love you! ??❤️??

      • Lovely on December 5, 2016 3:56 pm

        Yes I understand what you mean di..see I rarely get attracted to any pair…But for aaye the sweetheart Couple Twinj…jinki ye pagli deewani hai!!…I am mad for Twinj…and secondly I feel that Namish – Tejasvini pairing is good too…I watch swaragini only when Raglak track is On..

        I am Raglak Fan but Am Twinj Cooler, A.C. , and…….To of an….(what can I do…Sidhant ka deewanapan hai ???)

        Well thanks di..And I’ll surely read ur post ?

    27. Aleena on December 4, 2016 10:18 pm

      Wowwww sooo interesting ….please continue and update soon

      • Lovely on December 5, 2016 3:51 pm

        Thanks Aleena ☺
        ..surely I’ll
        ❤

    28. abi on December 5, 2016 1:25 am

      Yipeeeee you r also a crazy raglak fan
      Yaaaeee I’m soo happy to get a new raglak ff
      Love u soo much
      Please continue

      • Lovely on December 5, 2016 3:50 pm

        Yeeeyyyy!…thanks ?

    29. A.xx on December 5, 2016 6:15 am

      Fab start and can’t wait for next part xx

      • Lovely on December 5, 2016 3:18 pm

        Thanks a ton!!

    30. Vk on December 5, 2016 7:50 am

      Interesting dr

      • Lovely on December 5, 2016 3:49 pm

        Thanks dear ❤

    31. saranya on December 5, 2016 3:28 pm

      Awesome

    32. asra on December 5, 2016 6:06 pm

      amazing dear….waiting for ur nxt update…tkcr dear…

    33. Sreevijayan on December 5, 2016 11:03 pm

      Interesting start my dear..loved it..r u a keralite

    34. Ragz_teju on December 7, 2016 12:58 am

      interesting

    35. criz on December 7, 2016 6:29 pm

      Hiii nice episode i’m died heart fan of swaragini. are you from kerala. i asked because i saw ernakulam thats why !!! 🙂

      • Lovely on December 7, 2016 8:41 pm

        Heey!..no I am not.. Chapter 2,3,4 posted..do read..
        Thanks

      • criz on December 7, 2016 10:20 pm

        i read it earler

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