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Home»Fan Fiction»Love or hate ?? #Riansh OS…by Aayu
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Love or hate ?? #Riansh OS…by Aayu

1234AayuBy 1234AayuMay 4, 2021223 Comments13 Mins Read
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Hello everyone..
Surprise!!!🎊🎉🎊🎉 I know I said I will not be uploading but I was just fed-up while doing the practicals so thought to take a break….

The last part of my OS..”Don’t leave me!!”..crosses 220 comments(breaking news..😂)..Thanks to all..Especially #Gaayu+Parita..and ORIGINAL COMMENTS WERE 30+ …Thank you…
This OS is requested by one of my reader Pranjal…I hope I could meet your expectations..
and one more thing my FF is on hold as my practicals 🙄 and also thoughts are not coming again, will post soon..as soon as thoughts will come…
This OS is in a new way…
Let’s Start..
Hello…
You were wondering who I am..
Me sister of Mr.Vansh Rai Singhania..Siya Rai Singhania..
I am a writer by profession..so writing this dairy for my bhaiya and Bhabhi..
You know I can die anytime it can be 1 minute,1hour,1 day,1 week,1 month, or 1 year…
But my last wish is to complete this diary..
Lots of talks about myself..now let’s focus on the main people..whom this diary is about…
My bhai. Mr.Vansh Rai Singhania…was a ruthless, arrogant, heartless, short-tempered person, mind it he WAS..
An Angel comes into his life and his life takes a 360-degree angle change..
you would have listened or seen it in movies but it really happened with my brother…
He was changed at the very next moment he saw her..When I remembered that moment a small smile crept in my face..
she was the only one and the first one who dared to answer back him…
She came here with a motive..but you know god has it owns plans for us..actually she came as a spy but for me, she is god, an angel, which returns my life back to me..she did the thing which most of the doctors can’t she make me walk on my legs which were impossible.. She came as a spy..but she did a work of thief..she stole our hearts..
Don’t know about others but for me, she is really an Angel..I know she did wrong..but she herself didn’t know that she was doing wrong she was manipulated..
she is an orphan..no family..no love..but when she loved someone he betrayed her feelings..he asks her to prove her love. he was non-other than Kabir son of anupriya..
This mother-son duo has created a lot of problems in our lives..(I will not go into the detail you know what this duo has done so..)
So I will start from starting..there first meet was not a normal one..they met and end up with an argument..
Then Vansh bhai bring her in VR mansion for my treatment..but arguments were the main thing they end up with…
One day she came up with resigning letter…but Vansh bhai was Vansh bhai..he asked her, sorry not asked her but order her to marry him..
And thus marriage was done..they have lots of misunderstanding between them but soon they ended with that..many incidents took place in their lives..but they always win…they are really meant for each other..
I am proud of telling this That bhabhi took two bullets for his love for Vansh bhai..once when she hate bhai and once when she love him…
There is a lot of differences between these two words..but they can easily get exchanged..hate into love and love into hate.. isn’t it??
Time was passing..life was also going.. smoothly?
No life is not bed of roses..there were ofcourse thorns but we all were attending them as well…
But misunderstanding was the thing which turned aur lives upside down..
Bhai died not really but plan his fake death..bhabhi was shattered..broken..she loves him a lot but when you will know the one whom you love most will die and the reason is yourself..bhai end his life while uttering his last words that were..”tere ishq mein marjawa”… bhabhi was more broken because of that..
And again that mother son duo came to destroy our lives..they blackmailed bhabhi to marry Kabir..and bhabhi have to do that to safe us..she was really a great human being..she sacrifice her self respect, her desires to safe us..our family who..are really a fool..mean..
Yes bhai came back to take revenge from bhabhi…he confront her..and broke her..he took her away from city and left her there all alone..(now from here I will write in detail..)
When she came back she saw that was not expected..
Bhai was introducing his wife in front of media but she was not bhabhi..but Ahana a puppet? No a gold digger…where was I..I was in coma or else I will not let this happen..bahi misunderstood bhabhi he thought that condition of me is due to Bhabhi..but the reality was this was due to Anupriya and Kabir..bhai was not fully wrong..he accept what he was shown..he was shown fake proofs that was telling that Bhabhi was guilty…but bhai did wrong not listening his wife once..
Indeed he was punished…
Let me narrate that…well I have not seen with my own eyes but listened it..
Bhabhi enter VR mansion and was insulted by Ahana and ishani and ofcourse Vansh bhai by not recognised by her husband… When Ishani  throw her out she fainted…due to weakness, and shock that she just got.. and this was  not the only reason..angre pleaded Vansh bhai to call the doctor..and Vansh bhai allowed after all he loved her once..
Soon doctor arrived..but the news he told was of celebrating but it was not..she was insulted badly by everyone..her character was pointed…
She was pregnant..and bhai somewhere was melted but his EGO is not an ice cream that will melt so easily..It was like rock..
And his EGO over power his love..he also insulted bhabhi..and bhabhi didn’t utter a word she was hurt..she didn’t knew that she should be happy or sad..
She was just crying..
Next morning..It seems that it will be a normal one..
But the morning started with insulting bhabhi again…
When she came out of her room..she saw that Ahana and Ishani was burning all her meomories..her photos with bhai, her lehenga..and more over bhai was standing there like a statue..he was not affected..at all
Bhabhi ran and tried to save her stuffs but all in vain it was burnt..she somehow managed to take out a photo..but she doing so she  burnt her hand..and somewhere bhai was feeling her pain but didn’t say a word..
Flashback starts..
She came towards Vansh
Riddhima:- Wow mr.Rai Singhania..she threw that photo in Vansh’s face and said…
Riddhima:- like this photo our relation is also burnt..and now I also don’t want to mend it..but remember one thing.. don’t say anyone that you love someone and you did this.. people will lost there believe in love..
Forgot that Riddhima was someone in your life..
For you I died today…
And both of them to their respective paths..
Flashback ends..
That day..Bhabhi left..bhai was broken..to her harsh words but EGO..
Flashback starts..
Vansh in his room was throwing all the things…
Vansh’s pov..
Dard Ki Mehfil Saja Ke Phir Se Tanha Ho Gaya
Rat Din Bas Ro Raha Hai Nam Leke Tera
(Even after the gathering of pains, it feels alone again.
It (my heart) has been crying all day and all night, chanting your name.)
Jisko Khuda Tha Banaya, Sar Jiske Age Jhukaya
Uss Ne Hi Toda Mera Dil, Aur Deke Mujhko Gaya
(One whom I saw as my God, whom I bowed down to,
has broken my heart. And just gave me;)
Yeh Judaiyan Ve, Yeh Judaiyan Ve
Yeh Judaiyan Ve, Yeh Judaiyan Ve, Judaiyan Ve
(These distances. These distances!)
Kar Loon Main Kaise Yakeen
Tu Mere Pas Hai Hi Nahi
Abhi Toh Kal Hi Aya Tha Tu Khwabon Mein
(How could I make myself believe you’re no longer close to me?
You just came into my dreams yesterday.)
Yad Ati Hai Jab Teri, Sans Ruk Jati Hai Meri
Roz Marti Hoon Aise Main, Khud Mein Hi
(I stop breathing when I miss you.
Like this, I die within every day.)
Bas Itni Si Hi Dua Hai, Mujhe Ishq Mein Jo Mila Hai
Dushman Ko Bhi Na Mile Aisi Saza
Yeh Judaiyan Ve, Yeh Judaiyan Ve
(My only prayer is that may no get what I’ve got in love.
These distances, in particular. These distances.)
Scene shifts to Riddhima.. entering her hostle room..she went in
And sat at the corner..
Riddhima:-
Saans Leti Hoon Toh Tera Hi Ehsas Hota Hai, Ehsas Hota Hai,
(I feel you as I breathe in. I feel it!)
Door Hoke Bhi Har Lamha, Tu Mere Paas Hota Hai, Mere Pas Hota Hai,
(You ‘re even away, but always, you ‘re with me. You are with me.)
Tere Bin Ik Din Na Guzre, Kaise Beetenge Na Jane Ye Saal,
(It’s hard to spend a day without you, how can I spend years without you?)
Hai Dil Ka Yeh Hal,
(It is the situation of my heart.)
Tere Nal Jeena Mainu Tere Nal, Marna Mainu Tere Nal Tere Nal,
(Only with you! I want to live with you. I want to be with you till the end of my life.)
Tere Nal Jeena Mainu Tere Nal, Marna Mainu Tere Nal Tere Nal,
(With you! I just want to live with you. I want to be with you until my very last breath.)
Ayi Hoon Jiske Liye Main, Duniya Sari Chhod’ke Ik Pyar Hi Toh Hai,
(It’s love for what I have forsaken the world.)
Baadlon Ko Aasmaan Se Jodti Jo Dor Hai, Ik Pyar Hi Toh Hai,
(The energy that binds the clouds to the skies is love.)
Dhoop Chhaon Barishon Mein,
Rab Se Ki Jo Sifarishon Mein Khayal, Hai Tera Hi Khayal,
(In all the climates, in my prayers to God, you are the ones I’ve been thinking about.)
Tere Nal Jeena Mainu Tere Nal, Marna Mainu Tere Nal Tere Nal,
(With you! I want to live with you until the very last of my breath.)
Tere Nal Jeena Mainu Tere Nal, Marna Mainu Tere Nal Tere Nal,
(It’s with you! I want to live with you until the very last moment of my life.)..
Flashback ends…
Bahi and bhabhi were broken at the core..their heart and souls wanted to be together but their mind..
It was one week after bhabhi left..
And I started gaining concious..bhai rushed to me.. but I was only chanting bhabhi’s name..
When Ishani told me everything..and I gave a tight slap to bhai..it was first time and last time..
I respected him a lot but he insulted my respect..
How can he do this..not even once his heart asked him to listen bhabhi’s side story…
I told him every thing..and everyone was guilty..Ishani who started her day and end her day with insulting Bhabhi was crying..dadi who always love bhabhi has done a sin after not recognising her…and bhai who love her but in front of his EGO he …he was broken..he want forgiveness…
He started finding Bhabhi..
But all in vain..
She vanished..
After 1 week
Somehow bhai get the hospital reports..
And from there he get bhabhi’s address
He reached there..and pleaded Bhabhi but bhabi refused…
Flashback starts
Riddhima’s and Vansh’s pov
Bin Bole Yun Tera Jana Shayad Na Seh Paye Hum
(I don’t think I can take it if you leave without informing me.)
Itni Sare Sansein Hai Par Ik Bhi Na Le Paye Hum
(There’s a long life ahead of me, but I wouldn’t be able to live for a moment if you went away.)
Aa Bhi Ja Na Aye Toh Sach Much Hi Na Mar Jaye Hum
(Please come here. If you weren’t here, I might actually lose my life.)
Pehle Pyar Ka Pehla Gham, Pehli Bar Hai Ankhe Nam
(This is the very first sorrow of the very first love. And my eyes are wet for the first time.)
Pehle Pyar Ka Pehla Gham, Pehli Bar Hai Ankhe Nam
(It’s the very first grief from the very first love, and because of it, my eyes are wet for the first time.)
Pehla Hai Tanhai Ka Ye Mausam
(For me, this is a whole new experience of the season of solitude.)
Arey Aa Bhi Jao Varna Ro Denge Hum
(Please come here or I’m going to cry.)
Mera Tan Man Sara Tere Rang Mein Rangaya
(I have dedicated my body and my soul to you.)
Meri Rooh Mein Tera Ishq Base
(Your love lives in my soul.)
Maine Sudh Budh Khoyi Sara Chain Gavaya
(I’ve lost my consciousness and my comfort.)
Tu Jo Sath Nahi Dhadkan Na Chale
(If you’re not with me, it’s hard for my heart to beat.)
Aa Bhi Jao Varna Ro Denge Hum
(Come here please, or I’m going to cry.)
Pehle Pyar Ka Pehla Gham
(This is the very first sadness of the first love of all time.)
Saj Dhaj Ke Teri Main Rah Takoon
(I’m waiting for you, all groomed-up for you.)
Saj Dhaj Ke Teri Main Rah Takoon, Tarikh Bata Kab Aoge
(All groomed-up for you, I’m waiting for you, so tell me the date when you’re coming.)
Bat Dinon Ki Ya Barson Ki Kitna Waqt Lagaoge
(Is it just days or longer than that? How long will you take to come here?)
Aa Bhi Jao Varna Ro Denge Hum
(Come here, please, or I’m going to cry.)
Mana Ke Doori Si Hai, Thodi Majboori Bhi Hai
(I agree that there are distances between us, but it is also true that I am bound to helplessness.)
Lekin Ek Din Badlenge Ye Mausam
(But the time is going to change one day.)
Han Tumko Zyada Rone Na Denge Hum
(And I’m not going to let you shed tears for a long time.)
Meri Neend Mein Khwab Mein Sab Mein Tu
(You’re in my sleep, in my dreams.)
Main Teri Hoon Aur Mujh Mein Tu
(I am all yours, and you are within me.)
Hai Yaqeen Khud Se Jyada Tujhpe
(I trust you more than I trust myself,)
Bas Itni Araz Se Tod Na Tu
(and this is my only request, please, never break me now.)
Aa Bhi Jao Varna Ro Denge Hum
(Come here, please, or I’m going to cry.)
Pehle Pyar Ka Pehla Gham
(This is the very first sorrow of the first love.)
Flashback ends..
But somehow I managed to ask bhabhi to forgive him..and she indeed was an Angel she forgive all family members but not bhai..
They loved each other immensely..
Bhai take care of her and baby secretly without giving her a clue that he is doing..
But one day…
I somehow managed them to lock in a room..
They confront each other..and my plan succeeded bhabhi forgive bhai..
This was their love story…full of ups and downs..
And their sign of love.. Rianshi …our Rihu is now 4 years old..
They both pampered her a lot..
She loves me a lot..
I am thinking if I will die how she will bear that..
I am a heart patient doctor says I can die anytime..
But I fulfilled my last wish..I completed this book…
Now I can die peacefully…
                  -Siya…
THE END…
I don’t know what I wrote…I just write this in Half hours…hope you will like..
Do comments….
Do tell me if there are some mistakes..I didn’t even read it what I write…
If this is boring bear it..I will soon come back with my FF episodes…
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    223 Comments

    1. Attractiveuser on May 4, 2021 2:00 pm

      1st…now going to read.

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 2:05 pm

        🥳🥳🎉🎉😂😂😂😂

      • AarushiSoni on May 4, 2021 4:14 pm

        Parita ki student ki jai ho🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻

      • RiansHLoveR on May 4, 2021 4:46 pm

        😂😂

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 4:14 pm

        😂

      • Attractiveuser on May 4, 2021 4:48 pm

        🤣🤣🤣😂

    2. Mahira on May 4, 2021 2:07 pm

      1 am 2 I want 5 crore

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 2:10 pm

        First tell me how is the episode then I will give you 😂😂

      • RiansHLoveR on May 4, 2021 3:30 pm

        Say say🤣🤣🤣🤣

    3. Attractiveuser on May 4, 2021 2:08 pm

      Amazing episode aayu🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺❤️❤️❤️❤️😍😍. Itne pyaare pyaare ideas or os kaise likh leti ho❤️❤️❤️. I just have no words to describe this❤️❤️❤️. This was something I never thought 🥺😍❤️❤️😍😍🥺🥺. Love ur writing skills❤️❤️❤️.

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 2:11 pm

        Thank you..I thought what I wrote??🙄🙄..Glad you like it..you never thought that’s why I wrote..😂😂..I also don’t know how I write thes..I want to know..

      • Attractiveuser on May 4, 2021 2:13 pm

        😂😂😂🤣🤣🤣😂!

      • AarushiSoni on May 4, 2021 4:15 pm

        Bcoz u have a nice brain.. u only told me na forgot? 😂😂😂😂

      • RiansHLoveR on May 4, 2021 2:20 pm

        Aayu mata don’t know what is written😶😶😶🤔🤔🤔

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 2:21 pm

        Yup..I wrote this when I was not at my presence of mind😂

      • RiansHLoveR on May 4, 2021 2:56 pm

        Lol😂😂😂🤣🤣🤣🤣

    4. RiansHLoveR on May 4, 2021 2:18 pm

      3rd

      • RiansHLoveR on May 4, 2021 2:19 pm

        Now let me read it🤪🤪🤪. Insipred from aayu mata or aayu devi only😂😂😂

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 2:22 pm

        Jaldi read karo..I am waiting for some words of appreciation…😂

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 2:40 pm

        How much time you will take to read⌚⌚⌚⏳

      • AarushiSoni on May 4, 2021 4:15 pm

        Wow.. now u r counting.. let her read yaar!!!

      • RiansHLoveR on May 4, 2021 4:47 pm

        Vohi toh🤪🤪

      • RiansHLoveR on May 4, 2021 2:55 pm

        So amazing aayu❤❤❤❤mind blowing. Hardly any words left to say yr. Just awesome❤❤❤😢😢😇😇😇

      • RiansHLoveR on May 4, 2021 2:56 pm

        Sorry. Mid time me mummy called for lunch😂😂😂🤪🤪

      • AarushiSoni on May 4, 2021 4:15 pm

        😂

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 2:57 pm

        Thank you.. 😊koi baat nahi mere sath bhi hota h

      • RiansHLoveR on May 4, 2021 3:31 pm

        Ha ha pata h 🤣🤣🤣tum ne boli thi

    5. Siddhi_ on May 4, 2021 2:20 pm

      Kya yaar mai first hi nahi aa pati 🙂🙂😂 btw awesome 😂❤️

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 2:21 pm

        Koi baat nahi…you will..one day…Thank you 😊

      • AarushiSoni on May 4, 2021 4:16 pm

        Man me hai vishwas, pura h vishwas hm honge kamyab ek din😂😂😂😂😂😂

      • RiansHLoveR on May 4, 2021 4:47 pm

        Haa😂😂😂

    6. Siddhi_ on May 4, 2021 2:26 pm

      Aayu maata after reading ye bahut hi zyaaadaa accha tha 🥺🥺

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 2:28 pm

        Matlab padne se phele awesome tha and padhne ke baad…😂😂😂BTW Thankyou 😊

      • Siddhi_ on May 4, 2021 2:59 pm

        Heheh! 😂

      • AarushiSoni on May 4, 2021 4:16 pm

        😂😂😂😂😂😂

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 2:59 pm

        😂😂

      • RiansHLoveR on May 4, 2021 3:32 pm

        Lol🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

      • Attractiveuser on May 4, 2021 4:49 pm

        😂😂🤣🤣🤣🤣😂

    7. Ravneet on May 4, 2021 2:26 pm

      Ur writing skills are amazing. This OS is superb. Keep posting like this updates

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 2:29 pm

        Thank you so much..it means a lot 😊will post more after ending with my practicals

    8. Mennahussein55 on May 4, 2021 2:33 pm

      Nice episode.
      Keep rocking dear.

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 2:36 pm

        Thank you ☺️….menna di💖

    9. Annoyinguser on May 4, 2021 2:38 pm

      Yeh toh galat h mujhe half hour baad show kiya. 🤧🤧late op in the comments

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 2:40 pm

        You are not that late..abhi toh 200+ hona baki h aur abhi 20+ hi hue h😂😂 ..you didn’t tell me how was the episode..

    10. Annoyinguser on May 4, 2021 2:50 pm

      Kya os tha wah. Nice amazing suberb fab awesome kam hai koi sur achha word hai?

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 2:56 pm

        Don’t know.. Thank you so much…, 😊

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 2:59 pm

        Mind blowing, masterpiece marvelous and many more..😂😂

      • AarushiSoni on May 4, 2021 4:17 pm

        Aur bhi hai. Line hai khoob bdi

      • RiansHLoveR on May 4, 2021 3:33 pm

        Author khud hi bol rhi h😂😂😂

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 3:34 pm

        Self obsessed 😂😂😅😅

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 4:18 pm

        @Aarushi😂😂

      • Annoyinguser on May 4, 2021 4:43 pm

        astounding.
        bewildering.
        breathtaking.
        extraordinary.
        impressive.
        marvelous.
        miraculous.
        Yeh bhi thik hai?
        Maine chun chun ke nikale words. Hope achhe hai. (ab yeh maat bolna ki 200 rupees de aur 50 kaat overacting ka😂😂nhi baba overacting nhi hai)

      • RiansHLoveR on May 4, 2021 4:48 pm

        Research karli🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 4:49 pm

        These words are really amazing..but for me.. isn’t it too much..but Thank you so much…and I will not say this was overacting 😂😂

      • RiansHLoveR on May 4, 2021 6:56 pm

        🤣🤣🤣🤣😂😂😂

      • Attractiveuser on May 4, 2021 4:49 pm

        Dayumnn reh gaya chlo mai likh deti hu🙂😂😂🤣🤣🤣

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 4:56 pm

        Gauri I didn’t get that

      • Attractiveuser on May 4, 2021 5:14 pm

        Aayu…dayumn is also a compliment 😂😂😂😂🙂

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 5:16 pm

        Oh, i thought you wrote something different and weird …I didn’t read it carefully…😂😂

      • RiansHLoveR on May 4, 2021 6:58 pm

        🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

      • Attractiveuser on May 4, 2021 7:09 pm

        Oh god😂😂😂😂😂🤣🤣

      • Annoyinguser on May 4, 2021 11:54 pm

        Talent hai 😎 research ki maine.

    11. Maanvika on May 4, 2021 3:00 pm

      Amazing….❤❤

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 3:00 pm

        Thank you 😊

    12. Subu23 on May 4, 2021 3:31 pm

      Aayu devi ki jai itna accha aayu devi kese bhn kese but awesome ❤

      • RiansHLoveR on May 4, 2021 3:33 pm

        😂😂😂

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 3:35 pm

        Thank you so much 🥰…I also don’t know…Wanna know how I did this..😂😅🥳

      • AarushiSoni on May 4, 2021 4:18 pm

        I told u already.. go and check in previous page

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 4:18 pm

        I have seen it…😂

    13. Pranjal on May 4, 2021 3:31 pm

      Amazing you did beyind my expectation loved it

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 3:35 pm

        Thank you..glad you like it 😊

    14. Pomu on May 4, 2021 3:45 pm

      Aayu, you rocked it yaar. Even i take 3-4 hours to write an episode but you wrote such a beautiful OS in half an hour 👏👏👏

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 3:52 pm

        Thank you so much 🥰 di..it means a lot…and your Episodes are amazing as you take 3-4 hours it’s worth..

    15. Shivangi on May 4, 2021 3:52 pm

      Awesome🥰..

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 3:53 pm

        Thank you ☺️

    16. Priyanka Thakur on May 4, 2021 4:03 pm

      Amazing OS dear

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 4:04 pm

        Thank you 😊

    17. AarushiSoni on May 4, 2021 4:13 pm

      wOnderful os.. aaj to Darshan Raval chha gya😉😉😉😉… So cute.. meri siya ko maar diya.. vaise mr gyi to theek hai! Bcoz she is siya 2.0!😂😂😂😂😂😂post more. All the best for ur practicals!!

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 4:16 pm

        Thank you…was waiting for your comment nahi Siya mark nahi…one great news practicals get cancelled

      • AarushiSoni on May 4, 2021 4:18 pm

        What how. Due to covid?? Congo… Ab mujhe updates milenge 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

      • AarushiSoni on May 4, 2021 4:19 pm

        Mark?

      • AarushiSoni on May 4, 2021 4:19 pm

        Mere comment ka wait? Kahe ? 🤔🤔🤔🤔

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 4:19 pm

        😂😂😂yup..they are postponed 🥳🥳

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 4:20 pm

        Don’t know… for now they are cancelled

      • RiansHLoveR on May 4, 2021 4:49 pm

        🤣🤣😂😂

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 4:20 pm

        Aise hi..your comments are unique.😂😂

      • Attractiveuser on May 4, 2021 4:51 pm

        Yaar cancelled aisi khushiyan mujhe kyu nahi milti🙂😂😂😂🤣🤣!

      • RiansHLoveR on May 4, 2021 6:59 pm

        We r not so lucky as aayu devi😂😂

      • Parita on May 4, 2021 4:51 pm

        Oh wow! @1234Aayu, lucky now toh we will get updates right?

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 4:52 pm

        Guari it’s my good luck.. don’t get jealous 😂
        Hmm first I have to write..😂

      • Attractiveuser on May 4, 2021 5:17 pm

        But i am jealous 😂😂. Well again you wrote it wrong🙂🙂! Gauri🙂😂😂!

      • RiansHLoveR on May 4, 2021 7:00 pm

        New name guari🤣🤣🤣🤣

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 5:21 pm

        What to do…autocorrection😂😂

      • RiansHLoveR on May 4, 2021 7:00 pm

        Uneducated autocorrection😆😆

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 7:02 pm

        True 😂

    18. Stuti Abigail Tyagi on May 4, 2021 4:33 pm

      Beautiful ❤️

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 4:50 pm

        Thank you so much 😊

    19. Parita on May 4, 2021 4:49 pm

      Hello, teacher’s here to take attendance!!😂😂😂 Anyway this OS was amazing!! I love the song you used, pehle pyar ka pehla gham❤❤ All the best for your practical and we’ll be waiting for your updates!!❤❤
      Aaj teacher late hogayi thi, aap sabki parents ke saath meeting thi na isliye😜

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 4:51 pm

        Now teacher will get punishment..and a great news practicals are postponed..🥳🥳🥳Thank you so much..and parita ma’am be ready for the punishment

      • Attractiveuser on May 4, 2021 4:51 pm

        Present mam!! Mai attentandace mark karwa rahi thi🙂😂😂😂🤣🤣!acha parents se complaint to nahi ki?🥺🥺🥺🤣🤣🤣😂😂

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 4:53 pm

        Me also present..well I am the author..but also and yes you complain about us??🥺🥺

      • Attractiveuser on May 4, 2021 5:17 pm

        Parita ran away now punishment ka Naam sunte hi😂😂😂🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😂!

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 5:20 pm

        now she will get double punishment as she ran away..😂😂🤣🤣

      • Parita on May 4, 2021 5:44 pm

        @1234Aayu, teacher was busy with your parents, isliye punishment for you n not me. (bohot saari complain ki hai mene)😂😂😂
        @Attractiveuser, good girl always be present. Kin naa, bohot complain ki isliye toh itni late aayi hu😂😂

      • Parita on May 4, 2021 5:45 pm

        @Attractiveuser, nahi, main bhaagi nahi hoon, me toh tumhare parents ko complain karne gayi thi ke tum apne teacher ko punish karna chahti ho😂😂😂😜

      • RiansHLoveR on May 4, 2021 7:01 pm

        I will also get punishment 😂

      • Parita on May 4, 2021 5:47 pm

        @1234Aayu,😂😂double??

      • Parita on May 4, 2021 5:51 pm

        Ab toh koi bhi present nahi hai, ab kya tum log bhag gaye?😂😂😂

      • Attractiveuser on May 4, 2021 5:51 pm

        Hawww…bad manners 🥺🤣🤣🤣😂😂😂🤣!

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 5:52 pm

        😭😭now I will get scolding…katti parita maam🙄

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 5:52 pm

        Ia m present maam..I have gone to make tea wanna have??

      • Attractiveuser on May 4, 2021 5:56 pm

        Wow aayu…you know how to make tea…I don’t even know that🥺😂😂🤣🤣🤣🤣

      • RiansHLoveR on May 4, 2021 7:01 pm

        Don’t worry i am with u😂😂😂

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 5:59 pm

        I am a good student..not like you..I even know how to make pasta,Maggie,pizza and many more things.. 😂😂

      • RiansHLoveR on May 4, 2021 7:02 pm

        Soo nice😆😉😉😉

      • Parita on May 4, 2021 6:02 pm

        @Attractiveuser,😂😂😂😂 bad manners kiske? Teacher ke?
        @1234Aayu, teacher se katti karoge toh parents ko batana parega😂😂😜

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 6:04 pm

        🤣🤣vh..oo sorry teacher😂

      • Parita on May 4, 2021 6:05 pm

        @1234Aayu, haanji bhijwa dena mujhebhi! 😂😂 Good girl, that you know, i don’t, meaning i do but i never make😂 A very good student, i know how to make maggi for sure, baaki ka to tum mokal hi dongi, so i don’t have to learn 😜😂😂😂
        @Attractiveuser, 😂😂tumhaari teacher ko bhi nahi pata, toh tum sfae ho koi baat nahi. (even i don’t know)

      • Parita on May 4, 2021 6:06 pm

        @1234Aayu, apology not accepted, mujhko chai bhijwani padegi tab me manungi😂😂😂

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 6:08 pm

        Sure parita maam here you go☕☕+🥛🥛

      • Parita on May 4, 2021 6:11 pm

        @1234Aayu, haan good chai, ab tumhe bhi marks milenge.
        160/100!!👏👏🥳🥳😂😂 Congrats, tumne top kiya

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 6:13 pm

        Thank you so much parita ma’am…wow…I am the topper🥳🥳party time…

      • Parita on May 4, 2021 6:20 pm

        @1234Aayu, pawri bhi tumko hi deni hai😂😂

      • Attractiveuser on May 4, 2021 6:21 pm

        😂😂😂🤣🤣🤣. I only know how to make a sandwich and I am proud of myself 😌🤣🤣🤣🤣😂😂

      • RiansHLoveR on May 4, 2021 7:02 pm

        That’s the spirit🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 6:22 pm

        😂😂😂gauri

    20. Aishwarya Wanjari on May 4, 2021 4:52 pm

      Amazing di

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 4:54 pm

        Thank you 😊 dear…btw how old are you.. calling me didi😅

      • Attractiveuser on May 4, 2021 5:18 pm

        She is 14🙂😂

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 5:20 pm

        how do you know are you a DOB register??😂😂

      • RiansHLoveR on May 4, 2021 7:03 pm

        🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

      • Attractiveuser on May 4, 2021 5:28 pm

        She told me once🙂😂😂😂🤣🤣🤣🤣!

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 5:41 pm

        Oh!!

    21. TANYA K on May 4, 2021 5:16 pm

      EMOTIONAL and BEAUTIFUL Os🥺. Very very nice Os. I loved it♥️.

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 5:18 pm

        Thank you so much..it means a lot..

      • Attractiveuser on May 4, 2021 5:18 pm

        Are you crying??🧻🧻🧻🧻 take it☺️🤣🤣🤣🤣😂😂😂. Thank me later☺️🤣🤣🤣🤣😂😂😂🤣🤣.

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 5:19 pm

        😂😂🤣🤣now no one cry or else she will give u toilet tissues..

      • Attractiveuser on May 4, 2021 5:24 pm

        Fear of crying 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😂😂

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 5:35 pm

        😂🤣🤣

    22. Attractiveuser on May 4, 2021 5:19 pm

      100 🥳🥳🥳🤑🤑😍😍🤣🤣😂😂

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 5:23 pm

        🤣🎉🎉🎊🎊🎊🎊😎😎😎🍟🍟🍟🍟🌭🌭🌭🌭🥚🥚🥯🥯🍘🧆🧆🍪🍭🍭🎂🎂🥤🥤🧇🧇🥗🥗🍔🍔🍔🧁🧁🥛🍵🍵🧉🍾🍾🍷🍸🍪🍪🍪🍮🍮🍡🍡🍡🍭🍭🍫🍫☕☕🧃🧃🧃party…
        see I am soo good ….giving a party without anyone asked for it..😂😂

      • Attractiveuser on May 4, 2021 5:23 pm

        😂🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣thankyou🤣🤣😂😂. Now it’s 100+😂😂

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 5:33 pm

        All because of you..Aarushi is not here when she will come she will do 200+😂😂

      • Attractiveuser on May 4, 2021 5:40 pm

        😂😂😂😂

      • Parita on May 4, 2021 5:49 pm

        😂😂😂😂Pawri hori hai aur mujhe bulaya bhi nahi, teacher ne tumhe sab sikhaya aur usshi ko bhulgaye? 🥺🤔

      • Attractiveuser on May 4, 2021 5:50 pm

        You are late teacher!!!!🙂😂😂

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 5:53 pm

        Parita maam you are late.. 🤣

      • RiansHLoveR on May 4, 2021 7:04 pm

        I came back😉😉

      • Parita on May 4, 2021 6:01 pm

        Kisine bhulaya hi nahi toh mujhe pata kaise chalega ke yaha pawri horahi hai?? Ye sawal ka jawab dega aapko 2 crore kamane ki liye 😂😂😂

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 6:02 pm

        You should be alert..now give me 2 ceores

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 6:03 pm

        Crore*

      • Parita on May 4, 2021 6:12 pm

        Haaww!! @1234Aayu that’s not the right answer. Would you like to use a lifeline??
        Ask a friend, call a teacher, 50/50 yah chai se pucho😂😂😂

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 6:14 pm

        Sure Ma’am but right now I am not in a mood to play KBC😂

      • Attractiveuser on May 4, 2021 6:16 pm

        We called you but you were busy in your school!! Now give me 2 crores 🙂😂😂

      • Parita on May 4, 2021 6:20 pm

        @1234Aayu correct answer!!👏👏 💸💸💸💸💸
        @Attractiveuser, Ji haan that’s correct answer, schl finished only a few mins back😂💸💸💸💸💸

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 6:21 pm

        Hurray!!🥳🥳

      • Attractiveuser on May 4, 2021 6:23 pm

        Ye kaise 2 crore hai🙂😂😂💰

      • Parita on May 4, 2021 6:25 pm

        @Attractiveuser, 500,000 each 😂😂😂

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 6:25 pm

        These will fly as soon as you try to use them😂😂

      • Parita on May 4, 2021 6:25 pm

        in fact nahi 400,000 each 😂😂

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 6:27 pm

        😂😂😭

      • Parita on May 4, 2021 6:44 pm

        @1234Aayu 😂😂😂paper money

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 6:48 pm

        😂😅

    23. diya on May 4, 2021 5:42 pm

      soooo beautiful…..

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 5:43 pm

        Thanks 😊

    24. Jayashree on May 4, 2021 6:07 pm

      Wow amazing 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍. It’s really super OS 🤩

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 6:08 pm

        Thank you 😊

    25. Priyadharshini on May 4, 2021 6:07 pm

      So nice updates 😊❤️💗😊

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 6:10 pm

        Thank you ☺️

    26. JJ on May 4, 2021 6:08 pm

      It’s really good and awesome os😊😊❣️

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 6:11 pm

        Thank you 😊

    27. Vkjhp on May 4, 2021 6:08 pm

      Wow fabulous 😍😍😍😍😍

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 6:11 pm

        Thank you 😊

    28. Sree on May 4, 2021 6:09 pm

      Excellent episode 😍😍

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 6:11 pm

        Thank you ☺️

    29. Sweetie on May 4, 2021 6:11 pm

      Omg song selection was just amazing!!No words

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 6:12 pm

        Thank you so much it’s means a lot

    30. Attractiveuser on May 4, 2021 6:17 pm

      150+ 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳😍😍😍

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 6:18 pm

        🥳🥳😂😂

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 6:37 pm

        Wanna Confess one thing..😭🙌

      • Attractiveuser on May 4, 2021 7:02 pm

        Confess then🤔🤔

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 7:04 pm

        I forgot the story line of my FF😂😂😅😅

      • Attractiveuser on May 4, 2021 7:07 pm

        Go read it fast🤣🤣🤣😂😂😂!! You have to remember it!! I want your story ok!!🙂😂😂

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 7:07 pm

        Remembering that only…

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 7:09 pm

        Wanna see my Rrahul Sudhir sketch and also Helly Shah 😅

      • Attractiveuser on May 4, 2021 7:11 pm

        Sure❤️❤️kab dikhaogi?😂😂. Next episode mein?

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 7:17 pm

        Thinking but itni bhi acchi nahi ki sab ko dhikhaya😂

      • Attractiveuser on May 4, 2021 7:35 pm

        Oh god🙂😂😂😂😂

      • Parita on May 4, 2021 7:51 pm

        @1234Aayu, nice talent, forgetting your ff storyline😂😂

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 8:01 pm

        😂😂sorry, ma’am hope you will not punish me..

    31. 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 6:24 pm

      Only 26 comments 😭😭

      • Attractiveuser on May 4, 2021 7:05 pm

        Koi baat nahi.. os acha tha ab logon ne comment nahi kiya to koi baat tha.. maine to comments count karna hi band kardiya ab..I am happy ki 100+ comments to ho hi jaate chahe vo 3-4 log hi kare❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 7:07 pm

        😂😂😂I was kidding I am also very happy 200+ hone wale h bahut jald😂

      • Attractiveuser on May 4, 2021 7:07 pm

        That’s like a good girl!!😂😂😂

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 7:08 pm

        😂😅😅🙌🙌🙌🙌

    32. Priyanshi_13 on May 4, 2021 6:31 pm

      Amazing 😍

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 6:32 pm

        Thank you…😊

    33. Attractiveuser on May 4, 2021 7:10 pm

      8 comments left🥳🥳🥳🥳❤️❤️

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 7:17 pm

        5 left🥳🥳🥳🎉🎉🎉

    34. Aisha08 on May 4, 2021 7:33 pm

      Amazing

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 7:38 pm

        Thank you..

    35. Attractiveuser on May 4, 2021 7:36 pm

      2 left ❤️

      • Attractiveuser on May 4, 2021 7:36 pm

        1 left 🙂❤️😂😂🤣😍😍(trying to do 200)🤣🤣😂😂

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 7:40 pm

        😂🤣🤣🤣🤣🤩🤩🤩🥰🥰🥰

    36. Attractiveuser on May 4, 2021 7:37 pm

      200😍😍😍🤩🤩🤩🥳🥳🥳🥳

      • Attractiveuser on May 4, 2021 7:37 pm

        200+ 🥳🥳🥳🤩🤩🤩❤️❤️! Congratulations aayu❤️❤️❤️😂😂

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 7:39 pm

        Thanks for doing 200+🎊🎊🎉🎉🎉🥳🥳

      • Parita on May 4, 2021 7:51 pm

        200!!!🥳🥳🥳🥳
        Again i’m late🥺😢😂

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 8:01 pm

        Now you will be punished..be ready parita ma’am..now we students will not spare you..

      • Attractiveuser on May 4, 2021 8:03 pm

        🤣🤣🤣😂😂😂😂

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 8:05 pm

        😎😎now we will show our swag

      • Parita on May 4, 2021 8:07 pm

        Fine, i accept your punishment which is….??😂😂😂

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 8:10 pm

        ammmmm….I will think a nice one then I will tell you okay??

      • Parita on May 4, 2021 9:06 pm

        @1234Aayu, fine, will be waiting

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 9:26 pm

        The teacher will be waiting for her student to wait..😂😂

      • Parita on May 4, 2021 9:37 pm

        😂😂Yes first time in history @1234Aayu

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 9:42 pm

        😂😂parita

    37. TANYA K on May 4, 2021 8:46 pm

      CONGRATULATIONS for 200+ comments♥️.
      WORLD RECORD KAA BHI RECORD BANA diyaa apne..😂😂😂

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 9:04 pm

        Thanks, dear…par 286 record h..jo ki mere ek os ke second part ka h..😂usko abhi todna h

    38. Niyati12 on May 4, 2021 9:06 pm

      Superb……..it was mindblowing

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 9:06 pm

        Thank you so much…😊

    39. Akshiiii on May 4, 2021 9:30 pm

      amazing os. idk how to type emojis as i use lappy fr reading ffs. loads of hearts

      • 1234Aayu on May 4, 2021 9:41 pm

        Thank you so much… You can right click and then there will be a option of emojis.. Actually I also use laptop only 😀😄🥰🥰

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