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Love has no limits Part 11

GummiebearBy GummiebearJune 14, 201633 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hey friends….thanks for all your wonderful comments…. Hope I didn’t kill anyone with suspense… Lol….here z the next part and let me know your views….
As the bullet got fired…the gunshot echoed in their ears and making all their senses numb….a panic rised in Arjun’s nerves when instead of radhika who was supposed to get shot diya crashed on the ground….
Naksh dropped the gun and was stunned to see diya’s deteriorating condition…
He shot a glance at radhika who stood frozen at one place… She was not even moving a bit….she was stuck at one place as if she was glued to one place…
Arjun hurriedly walked towards diya and lifted her in his arms and took long strides to his car to rush her to hospital…
Naksh crashed on the ground in front of radhika and held her feet….he started wailing and begging for forgiveness but there was no movement in her body….her eyes which talked alot were expressionless today….she was stiffened as if she was some dead body…
He spoke in a choked voice, “radhika I am sorry please forgive me….I know what I did cannot be justified I was blinded by my ego….I couldn’t see your suffering…. For a moment I forgot that even you are a human and you have every right to take decision of your life….
He kept on blabbering but neither she responded to his touch nor she payed heed to his confession…
Arjun who had returned after admitting diya to hospital was mad with anger after glancing at naksh…
He pulled him away from radhika and punched him hard and thrashed naksh…blood was oozing out but arjun had no mercy today….he kept strangling him…..naksh was half dead just when arjun was about to bang his head on the wall,cops entered and stopped him from doing so….they took naksh in their custody…
Arjun spat venomously,” inspector make sure his whole life z spend behind bars….put as many charges as you can….but I want him to cry every second and regret remembering today’s day…
Inspector nodded and spoke, “Mr mehra you don’t worry we will take good care of him.”
Arjun walked to naksh and whispered in his ears….I will make sure you cry every second…. remember two things…. Never mess with arjun and second never eye what z mine…..hope you never forget this two things…
Naksh pleaded, “Please don’t do this my career will be screwed up please let me go.”
Arjun shrieked, “let you go after what you did to diya and radhika…. Today only because of you diya z fighting death….just look at that girl standing at a distance of few feet whom you claim to love…look at her expressionless and lifeless eyes….the girl for whom it was impossible to remain quiet z so quiet that her silence z killing me every second…. Look at her once you will understand how much and till what extent wrong you did today.”
Naksh glanced at radhika who was not even moving a bit….she was traumatized and still in a big shock….
Arjun spoke,”inspector take him away before I rip him with bare hands.”
Naksh kept on ratting radhika’s name till he was out of that place…
Arjun glanced at radhika…..her messed up hair….her expressionless eyes….her bleeding wrist everything was fueling his anger for naksh….
He walked to her and cupped her face….
Arjun whispered, “Radhika please talk something I can’t see you like these.please call me names….irritate me….do something at least.”
But her eyes didn’t even met his gaze…
He atlast gave up and lifted her in his arms and walked to his car….he placed her on the passenger seat and took the driver seat beside her…..he drove off his eyes all while gazing at her trembling form….she had not even utter a word and her silence was torturing him to a extent he didn’t knew..
Finally he stopped his car in front of his house…
Arjun spoke,”We reached home.”
But she didn’t replied him…
He chuckled,”So you want me to carry you in my arms…do you know you have put on weight and my hands pain carrying you….but still your wish z my command. ”
He was intentionally teasing her to force her to speak but all in vain….
He lifted her in his arms and clutched her closer to his heart….
He unlocked the door and marched to his bedroom all while his eyes staring her helplessly…
Arjun placed her on the bed and sat beside her….he carassed her hair but still she was not responding to his affection…. Her eyes worn out….he brought her closer and kept patting her head…
Arjun spoke,”radhika please don’t do this to me….please say something before I lose myself in your silence…. cry atleast so that all your pain…anguish comes out through your tears….
He made her lie down on the bed and got up…
Arjun removed his phone out and called someone…
Arjun,”doc how z diya now?”
Doctor, “I am sorry we couldn’t save her….she struggled alot but gave up.”
Arjun lost his senses hearing that….he glanced at radhika who was in a trauma still….
He dragged his feet to reach her and hugged her tight but she didn’t hug him back….
Arjun kissed her forehead and spoke….diya z no more I am sorry she couldn’t make it….she was a great friend and more than that a great human being who didn’t hesitate to bear the grave danger for her friend. ”
He was expecting her to speak something… cry,wail,curse but he was hopelessly disappointed….
There was no life in her body today….her all senses were numb….no movement except her shallow breathing…. She was not even blinking her eyelids to assure him that she heard what he said….everything had changed in just one day….
Radhika who was a chatterbox was as quiet as a dead body…..time had stopped for her nothing could move her or make her speak today….but they say if God gives wounds he even provide us with medicine….
So guyzz this z it…do let me know your reviews..

Precap… Guilt makes her life difficult… Arjun tries heal her with his love but….

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    33 Comments

    1. Jessie on June 14, 2016 9:30 am

      Oh no… diya died..dint expect it… will rads regain consciousness… very sad.. wanna know wat happens next… supriya.. u keep us glued to d story with d twists.. superb ya..

      • Supriya on June 14, 2016 6:24 pm

        Thanks Jessie darling?yup arjun will heal rads with his love….. you boost my confidence on my writing skills…thanks dear…..love you…tc?

    2. deeva on June 14, 2016 10:19 am

      Hey u know I can’t see rads in this state…….. feeling bad for diya……. it hurts when a frnd leaves for a short time also but she left her forever…… the pain is much more bigger than anybody could say or understand ……. hope she will be fine soon……. love u tc……

      • Supriya on June 14, 2016 6:28 pm

        Thanks deeva dear?yup I know the pain of losing a frd….what I wrote I have actually experienced sometime back…..she will be fn after sometime….. Love you…tc?

    3. Brin on June 14, 2016 10:29 am

      Awesome episode, how will Radhika recover what tactive will Arjun use to make Radhika cry. Supriya you nail it, well done, waiting for the next update. πŸ™‚

      • Supriya on June 14, 2016 6:30 pm

        Thanks brin dear?you are a grt encouragement….. will update soon….loads of love….stay blessed?

    4. Shree on June 14, 2016 10:37 am

      You sure know how to keep audience/ readers glued and to make us drill our peanut brains…

      Loved it to the core… But I never expected Diya to die… She was a good friend,more than that a good human being… Naksh deserves the worst of punishment… Font put Radhika in such a state… Fint want Arjun hurt… Let her recover soon..

      Post soon baby… Love you ??

      • Supriya on June 14, 2016 7:26 pm

        Thanks alot teddy bear?you always make feel on the top of the world….. yup I love exploring new twist and turns….. Will update soon…..love you….muaaah… Tc?

    5. suga on June 14, 2016 11:27 am

      Naksh idiot coz of him all went wrong…… πŸ™ oh god πŸ™ pls do something n get back our rads πŸ™ its all emotional n fabulous dear πŸ™‚ loved it πŸ™‚ love u πŸ™‚ Missed u darling πŸ™‚

      • Supriya on June 14, 2016 10:47 pm

        Thanks darling?loads of love?stay blessed?

      • Supriya on June 15, 2016 1:26 am

        Thanks alot my sweet suga?loads of love?stay blessed?

    6. Sana on June 14, 2016 12:27 pm

      Wow nice… But so sad diya died… When nd how will radhika get concious waiting for next one

      • Supriya on June 14, 2016 10:51 pm

        Thanks sana dear?you will know how rads will cope up with situation…. will update soon…stay blessed?

    7. subha on June 14, 2016 1:16 pm

      mind blowing episode………..

      • Supriya on June 14, 2016 10:52 pm

        Thanks subha darling?loads of love?

    8. Rosie on June 14, 2016 1:55 pm

      Yeh kya Ho raha hai….me bilkul pagal ho gayi hun…supu dear make rads fine…till then m going to be crazy….omg…koi nakh ko phad dalo….until next…c ya

      • Supriya on June 14, 2016 10:55 pm

        Ohh my darling di I showed the good enjoyable phase of life so now time for bad phase….after all both r imp in life….don’t worry I won’t let you go nuts….will heal rads soon….loads of love?

    9. Rg2015 on June 14, 2016 1:58 pm

      Supriya a very emotional one . I enjoyed ardhikas banter so far. Till now it was silly funny and cheerfully lovely. But you gave it a full stop and made it a serious and intensely painful With this one,The contrast u brought abt is awesome even though a bit sad and shocking. Seriously I never thought d cute Diya would die. I feel sad for d cheerful sweet cute sippaya queen. You made her a sad queen. I am sad tooo. Pl cheer rads up soon. Even d pre cap is a bit nerve wrecking and emotional. Please let arjun and rads b happy.
      This was sensational and fantastic. I loved it amidst its sadness.
      Bye d way whr is janemaan? And d devil story. Especially janemaan isn’t on d radar. Pls supriya pretty pls don’t make me wait for janemaan for sooooooooooooo Long.
      Take care stay happy. Pls pls pls update janemaan.?????????

      • Supriya on June 14, 2016 11:00 pm

        Thanks…Thanks…thanks million times dear Rg?i srsly don’t have words to express my gratitude for this wonderful words….you always appreciate me nd that helps me to improve a lot…..I showed the good phase so now want to explore bad phase of their life…..abt Jaanemaan give me sometime I will update that one too…..promise….. will update soon…loads of love…. Stay blessed

    10. Gianna on June 14, 2016 2:03 pm

      Amazing update, poor Rads, this Naksh want to kill him with my bare hands argh! Hope Arjun will cure rads. Stay blessed

      • Supriya on June 14, 2016 11:15 pm

        Thanks Gianna darling?loads of love?

    11. Gauri on June 14, 2016 2:22 pm

      Supriya this was am emotional one …I had tears reading about DIya and Radhika’s state …no waiting to see what Arjun does for his love…and kill that Naksh πŸ˜› … this was amazing and awesome… waiting for Devil πŸ˜› loads of love stay blessed πŸ™‚

      • Supriya on June 14, 2016 11:18 pm

        Thanks alot di?no please don’t cry its just a bad phase which will pass away….ppl like naksh deserve a life in which everyday they will pray for death….. yup will update devil soon….loads of love?stay blessed?

    12. Aastha on June 14, 2016 4:45 pm

      Poor Diya but brave girl………………..want to kill that Naksh……………….won’t Rads come out of that trauma ??????? update sooooooooooooon……………………..

      • Supriya on June 14, 2016 11:19 pm

        Thanks assthu sweety?yup rads will cope up but she needs time….loads of love?

    13. Ritu on June 14, 2016 8:57 pm

      a heart touching epi dr..feeling really sad for rads…eagerly waiting to kniw what Arjun will do to bring his chatter box back..post soon ..love u..

      • Supriya on June 14, 2016 11:21 pm

        Thanks a ton ritu darling?loads of love?

    14. Sammy on June 14, 2016 9:04 pm

      Sorry suppu. Now you are gone ..yaar u killed diya ..oh god ..me crying . ..suppu for me diya is alive pls make her alive ….kill that naksh creep ..lol me crying a lot ..for radhika too …and behna pls update LOVE U FOREVER …and DEVIL’S CHILD …waiting for both them …

      • Supriya on June 15, 2016 1:30 am

        Ohh my Sammy m scared of you….plz spare me…..I beg of you?on a serious note it z a bad phase of life will pass away soon…..will update love you forever nd devil soon…loads of love?stay blessed?

    15. Roma on June 14, 2016 9:11 pm

      Ohhhh..diyaaaa…noooo…she died…supriyaaaaa it was really very heart wrenching. ….rads so silent in shock…like dead body. …poor arjun…his love only can bring her back now….very brilliantly narrated. ..supriyaaaaa my sweeeeeetheart u made me cry….plzzz cure rads soon…I’m missing our chatterbox. Precap is interesting but still sad……keep it up honeyyy..
      Eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. . . Muaaaaahhhhhh πŸ™‚ β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β˜†β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β˜†β™‘

      • Supriya on June 15, 2016 1:34 am

        Thanks Roma di?no don’t cry bad time passes away soon to make way for new dawn….will show Arjun’s undying love for her in this situation….. will update soon….love you darling….. muaaah….tc?

    16. dipika on June 14, 2016 11:04 pm

      Omg diya died really…..supriya darling wht a tirn storu will take now..m hell curious for nxt..u r awsome darlie..loads of love l..hugs n kisses.. tc

    17. priya on June 19, 2016 1:46 pm

      emotional and a very well narrated episode ………… feeling bad for diya and radhika ……………..love you loads update soon

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