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Home»Fan Fiction»LOVE +LIFE = MY LIFE PARTNER (Part 17)
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LOVE +LIFE = MY LIFE PARTNER (Part 17)

seyalBy seyalAugust 16, 20178 Comments4 Mins Read
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Guys l am back again with another part of my ff.. Before we start l would like to introduce myself.. My name is Sreelakshmi. T. S… A 17year old keralite.. A very sensitive and emotional girl.. Loves my family,cousins and friends a lot… thank u guys for being my friends and for supporting me..

Moving onto the chapter-
naina had a chit in her hand.
Naina: oh god…to whom should l ask about this place.mumma and meghu do will be waiting for me. They had to suffer a lot by shifting to Delhi only coz of my internship,and now another suffering of waiting for me about 2days.what shall l do if nitya was this much stubborn! She made me stay with her for 2days..otherwise l should also had shifted with them to delhi..and now l am lost in this road.
Suddenly she saw someone sitting with an opened umbrella on a bench.she went near and found that it’s a man and patted on his shoulder. As she touched him he got shocked and stood up. He is none other than karan.
Karan: what the hell are you doing Miss?
Naina’s eyes went out.
Naina :what have l done Mr.?! l just only patted on ur shoulder not trying to kidnap ur shoulder!!
Karan:but why miss?
Naina :oh Mr.. I am new to this place and don’t know how the way to my current address.. Then l saw you and thought to ask u”do you know this place (showing the chit)if u know then kindly answer”
Karan (wondering ):kitna bolthi hu tum. Seede nahi bata sakthi ki tum raasthe dood rahi hei.. Iss bashan ki kya zaroorath dhi?

Naina giggles while laran gives a gave up look and starts to move
Naina :where are u gioing Mr.?
Karan :its none of ur business miss.
Naina :pehle yeh jagaah toh bataake jaa
Karan :l don’t know
Naina :you haven’t even looked at the chit.
Karan (looks at it):ya. I don’t know the place(with a avoiding lookand goes..)
Naina :ajeeb aadmi hei..”Mr. Chatte waala akdu”(remember the first epi in which she called him the same name)
Karan hears it while walking
To himself :mei akdu ho toh tum “Miss. Badthameez “hu
Naina walks… After a few minutes she sees a tea shop and goes there
Naina :kaka.. Do you know the way to this place?
kaka :yes beti… Go this way(pointing to a road)and ask someone.
Naina :thank you kaka…

Just then the shopkeeper sees karan.
Kaka:beti… Look at that guy.. He is going that way..
She turns and saw karan
Naina :oh.. This man! l will go with him kaka..
And she ran to him.
Naina :hey u… Mr. Chatte waala akdu..
Karan looks at her
Karan :Miss. Badthameez again!
Naina :so u are going this way.. U lied to me that u don’t know this place,right?
Karan understands that he is caught b It shows attitude..
“so what will u do?”
“don’t be this much akdu.. I don’t know this place… Yaar now it’s getting dark and…l don’t think that u are this much bad to leave a girl like this here.. Pls… Forgive me if l annoyed u much..
Karan (realizing his mistake ):ok.. Come with me.. Naina :yeah…
she smiled and he gives a death glare. Her smile fades.

To herself :such mein bahut akdu hei..
They were walking through the way. Naina was talking and talking and talking… Karan shut hos ears giving up patience
Kar:can u pls stop this bak bak… Miss Badthameez.. Otherwise l will leave u here..
Naina puts her finger on her lips like a child. They again starts walking..
“can l ask u one thing… Only One last thing..”
“what”
“what’s ur name?”
“my name is Ka…(thinking to himself)why should l say her my name..batayega toh naam lekar band bajayega madam..(says)my name is dev… What’s ur name?
Naina :(to herself)mujhse jhoot bol diya.. Then lets have fun(says)gowri… My name is “GOWRI “..
“Oh…”
He leaves her in front of a home and starts to move..
She was about to enter while she stops.
Naina :DEV…. DEV…(in low voice)hm.. Lagtha hei isse iska asli naam se bulana padega..(loudly)”Mr. CHATTE WAALA AKDU…..”
Karan turns…
Naina :THANK YOU…
He again turns and started to move with.. A…. Broad… Smile… On his face.. She stood there until his vision fades…..

to be continued….

How was it… Hope u all liked it.. Pls share ur thoughts.. Sry for the silly mistakes and for being so late…
Loads of love-Sreelakshmi. T. S?????

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    8 Comments

    1. Jiya09 on August 16, 2017 2:50 pm

      The episode was beautiful !! So now I get yo know how she became gowri!! At last the suspense ended. But still waiting to know their love story.?? Waiting for it. Update soon!! ?

      • seyal on August 18, 2017 6:24 pm

        Hi jiya…. Thanks for commenting… Hope that u like the story line… What to say jiya,again my exams came… And l had to postpond the next update… Don’t worry after that l will be free for 10days… And will update regular…. Keep reading and keep showering ur love…
        Love u a lot-seyal????

    2. #nairanlover:-) on August 16, 2017 9:15 pm

      Hi seyal.Good to see you back.This name is more sweeter than your actual name and I have many frnds named Sreelakshmi.I forgot about the last episode and at the I remembered all your episodes.The truth about NAIna is really nice.When you said a smile came on karans face it was a goose bumps waala moment for me.Loved the episode.Post asap.Loads of love

      • seyal on August 18, 2017 6:39 pm

        Hello amelia… Thank you… Even l also have a lot of friends with my name..Sorry… Sorry…. Sorry.. That l wasn’t able to give the links of the previous episodes…. So so so happy to know that it was a goose bumps waala moment for u…
        Thank u and love u-seyal?????

    3. Resh on August 16, 2017 10:22 pm

      Sreelakshmi chechi! ???I loved the episode!
      I had to go back and go through the last episode because I had lost my memory like Naina! ??✌?️
      This episode was wonderful! Just loved it like anything! ❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️
      I don’t type in Malayalam because you won’t understand what I type! I’m too bad at that! But yaar I liked your pen name! Seyal!!! So nice! ?❤️️ That doesn’t mean your original name is bad! I like that one too!!??❤️️
      Please update the next one very soon! ☺️? Wanna know more..
      Just loved their scene.. but does he have that skin allergy?
      Update sooon!!!!!
      Love u a lloooooottt!!!! ❤️?

      • seyal on August 17, 2017 7:21 pm

        Hey thaank you so mucch resh… Thaankss for supporting Me… I am sry that l wasn’t able to give the links of previous chapters… But so happy to know that u liked the chapter.. Hey don’t mind if u are bad in typing Malayalam… Even l was like that in the starting… But my friends were soo fast in the process of making me an expert in that… (Hope that u understood….??)l also like my pen name… But l like to be called more as T. S… It the way my friends call me…. And it’s been ages l heard them calling me Sreelakshmi… All are like one… Any ways.. I will try my best to post soon… Bit what to say… Onam exams are on the way.. Only a week left… Once again thank you….
        Lovingly -seyal ??

      • seyal on August 17, 2017 7:27 pm

        Hey thank you so much resh… Thanks for supporting Me… I am sry that l wasn’t able to give the links of previous chapters… But so happy to know that u liked the chapter.. Hey don’t mind if u are bad in typing Malayalam… Even l was like that in the starting… But my friends were soo fast in the process of making me an expert in that… (Hope that u understood….??)l also like my pen name… But l like to be called more as T. S… It the way my friends call me…. And it’s been ages l heard them calling me Sreelakshmi… All are like one… Any ways.. I will try my best to post soon… Bit what to say… Onam exams are on the way.. Only a week left… Once again thank you….
        Love u too -seyal ?????

    4. Minerva on August 20, 2017 7:53 am

      Awesome episode. The story has indeed become a masterpiece in the present episodes. Wonderful editorial work and screenplay. Dev and gowri and their banter was cute in truth. A good one

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