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love that last for eternity (chapter 8)

administratorBy administratorMay 16, 201616 Comments4 Mins Read
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hii buddies how r u all thanks for ur supports i really wish ki i always improve my writing so that u like it ………………..so here is the next chap plz tell me ur views about my ff and seggestions are always welcomed

CHAPTER 7
rads was busy in having bf she didnot lift her eyes due to shy but arjun cant wait more he is continously stairing her …rads could feel his stair on her …….due to which her cheek became red …..our hero is enjoying by seeing his blushing lady love……all this is noticed by kaka …he slowly came near to arjun’s ear in pretext of putting bf on table and start coughing … arjun after seing kaka start smiling kaka also smile and said in his hear that ur dream girl is really beautiful ……arjun gave surprise look to kaka and kaka said i like her keep her here for parmanent as ur wife arjun smile and nod yes throught his eyes …….just neil and sam came for bf and neil said : hey goodmorning bro ……..and he ran and hug arjun …….arjun also reciprocate his hug with brotherly affection …..arjun: hey bro how r u i was dying to see u ……..and now u will stay with me only thats final what
n: how is this possible bro ….i mean dad is alone in india and chasnii will also be alone there if i sifted here …..
a: uncle dad has joined there companies
n: what ……sam u both never told me about this
r: sorry in excitment i forget to tell u
a: so problem is solved uncle is moving here …so u will also stay here
n: bro i told u na i can’t leave chasnii ……by saying this he move towadrs rds and while giving a side hug to rads he said
n: i cant live without her
arjun after watching this felt jelouse and confused about the relationship they share ….he thought for amoment and said
a: so let her be here who knows she can also get someone handsome here….by saying this he satrt puuling his coller as if indicating to himself ……

rads understand his sentance her mouth hung then she start blushing ..sam after seeing her blushing came towards rads and said …it seems someone has got her prince …..and see to arjun it seems …..that he very desperate …..dond taraf aag brabar lagi hai ……by saying htis she start laughing …..and rads was badly blushing and said
r: stop it sam u r too much …….
here neil started he said to arjun in warrning tone n: bro chashni ko lekar koi joke nhi ……..
a: but i m serious
n: no bro no …..not about chasnii..plz
sam after sensing tension in air spoke s: let it be arjun, neil came have bf i m feeling hungry …….
its afternoon sam was going to accompany rads for photo clicking and she went to washroom to take a bath …..just then neil entered her room for searching sam but she is not here and he was about to leave when he heard sams voice saying: rads r u there plz give me my bodycreame i forget to bring it plz i am getting late ……..
neil thought for sometime and then decide to help her …when neil was giving her body creame just then sam’s leg slip and she fall over neil ..and after seeing sam in towel neil was stuuned the lady he secretly love more than his life is here in his arms he can’t control and sam was also blushing badly ……neil cubbed here face btw his hands abd sam’s hand was on his chest clutching his shirt tightly digging her nail into his skin making mark in his chest ……neil came closer to her face and covered her lips with his …………..

after sometime sam also responded to his kiss …after seeing sam’s reaction neil deepened his kiss….it became passionte one neil was continously sucking her lips with his takin all he want..bitting ,sucking and taking all what he want ….aftersome time both releese each other for taking breath……blush was not leaving sam’s face…….she can’t yake his intense gaze on her any more she get up and ran to washroom……..neil start laughing after seeing her cutr expressions and while laughing he said wait sammy listen to ……but sam was inside washroom alread

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16 Comments

  1. Gianna on May 17, 2016 12:47 am

    Awwww so romantic ?

  2. Brin on May 17, 2016 6:40 am

    Awesome episode. Waiting for the next update. 🙂

  3. deeva on May 17, 2016 7:48 am

    Thank u both of u

  4. Rosie on May 17, 2016 9:19 am

    U write very well dear…so romantic…when will both know that they were dreaming about each other from childhood

    • deeva on May 17, 2016 3:08 pm

      Soon they will know this….. till than tc love u

  5. Emz fasa on May 17, 2016 9:22 am

    Awesome 🙂 but pls make it long it is too short

    • deeva on May 17, 2016 3:07 pm

      Thanks dear….. i will try… tc

  6. aastha on May 17, 2016 9:52 am

    its really cute………Arjun’s dialogues……Deeva I have a request: plzzz write in eng only……….

    • deeva on May 17, 2016 3:05 pm

      Ok dear… i will thanks love u tc

  7. suga on May 17, 2016 10:09 am

    superbbbbbbbbb? kaka ha ha ha he s really good✌?? totally superbbbbbb darling ??? love u ?? loved it ??

    • deeva on May 17, 2016 3:06 pm

      Thanks suga…… love u too tc

  8. Gauri on May 17, 2016 2:54 pm

    Awesome dear 🙂

    • deeva on May 17, 2016 3:07 pm

      Thanks gauri tc

  9. susi on May 17, 2016 9:58 pm

    Very nice deeva dear…pls update soon next one…love u…tc..

  10. subha on May 18, 2016 10:49 am

    awesome……..

  11. Roma on May 20, 2016 10:28 am

    Awesome, marvellous episode, deeva you’re writing very lovelyyyyyy. …ardhika so lovelyyyyyy , neil n arjun buddies….nesam romantic moments really superbbbb. …keep it up. eagerly waiting for the next episode…love you loads. . muaaaaahhhhhh

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