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Home»Fan Fiction»It is love or just concern – Part 9
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It is love or just concern – Part 9

user88295853By user88295853January 7, 20184 Comments4 Mins Read
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      It is love or just concern part 9

R: sorry didi om is not suppose to say that

G: it is not new for me please don’t ask  me  sorry

R: ok didi good night

G: Rudy can give me your mobile because my mobile is not there with me

R: take it didi
(He given mobile to her )

G: thank you

R: its ok didi and good night

G: good night
(Rudra went out of the room)
On call
G:  hello  bhavya kaisi ho
B: ….
(Om is passing   gauri room)

G:  please  come fast I  don’t want any body taking my responsibility please come  (she started crying ).  You know na when someone hurted i want to hug you and cry because only you left to wipe my tears please come fast  and you. I wanted to see that cat
(Om went to his room)

G: ok  and i want my all needs ok
Call end

Opov: why i hurted her  so much she did just a joke but i made it big issue  and she is telling her friend that  she want to go from here  i did  accident so it is my duty to  take care  of her and also i should ask her sorry

Next day

(Gauri  coming down with her efforts she was about to fall om helped her they had eye lock  all family noticed this )

R: o don’t see didi like that

They  came back to senses

O: shut up and you  can’t walk now why you are making effort to walk you should take others help na  you are doing this purposely  because you wanted to stay here only if you fell down again then  i can’t take your responsibility thats clear to you

G: just shut up who said you take my responsibility i said you no if i am dying also i will not ask your help because i had already done it i was taking that as my punishment and my friend is coming within 5days i am going from here thats  clear to you

Om become silent

C boy: who is gauri kumari Sharma

G: ya i am gauri

C boy : mam you have courier

G: thank you

(Suddenly mobile started ringing )

G: hello you can’t wait for a minute bhavya

B,: …….

G: ok baba everything is fine and thank you so much bye

R: what is this di

G: this my things which

A: you did not see what is there inside how you said that everything is fine

G: she is my friend her work is perfect

R: i don’t think so

G: i will check now only

She removed  cover of the box  1st she find a greeting card

R: shall i read it di

G: ok

R: sorry my friend i know today  you need me  but i am not there with you  because of some work  but i will promise you i will finish my work fast and i will come and Neil bhayya and pappa  is asking how are you i did not said anything to him because you took promise from me if they comes to know  you met with an  accident then both will murder me  please call them  and say that you are fine i can say this in mobile also but your are my best friend so i written this letter  ake care

With lots of love
Bhavya

R: arre di who is this bhavya Neil

R: bhavya meri friend and  Neil is bhavyas brother he  is also a best and closet friend  for me

A: you are that much close

G: we are to give our life. For each other

S: where they are now
G:  bhavya is a cop and Neil is inspector both are  there in their mission now

R:   bhavya how is she  good or bad

O: shut up Rudra

R: ok didi next what is there in that box

G: laptop and my atm cards

A: you are a dancer why you need laptop gauri

G: actually i want. It because of some works

Meov  meov meov

Precap: oms   sorry

Hi friends how is todays update if you like it then give me your lovely likes  and  comments I am waiting

?Love you all ?

? by kavita ?

 

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    4 Comments

    1. Hkaur on January 7, 2018 7:59 am

      Nice episode. Om should not have hurt gauri this much. Waiting for the nxt part

    2. Niriha on January 7, 2018 10:50 am

      Superb ?

    3. nikita_jai29 on January 7, 2018 10:57 am

      It is nice one dear

    4. Sagithya on January 7, 2018 1:46 pm

      Awesome… Loved it… Excited for the next part… Update it soon

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