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Home»Fan Fiction»It is love or just concern – Part 21
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It is love or just concern – Part 21

user88295853By user88295853February 1, 2018Updated:February 3, 20185 Comments5 Mins Read
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(Gauri was crying in room bhavya came there suddenly gauri wiped her tears )

B: shrenu

G: hmm

B: why you are crying

G: who is crying

B: I know you more then you

G: no ya I am not crying

B: don’t say lie

G: I am not telling lie

B: ok leave it now tell me what do you think of ridhimma

G: she is omkarajis girlfriend that’s it

B: you are not good after ridhima came here

G: nothing like that

B: omkara bhayya is your husband

G: he is my husband but I am not his wife

B: so

G: nothing

B: ok then come lets go down

G: ok

(Both went down)

O:ridhima go and get freshup

Rid: but you did not said that you forgiven me

O: ok I forgiven you

(Ridhima hugged om)

Rid: thank you om I know it you also love me

D: stop it ridhima

Rid : what dadi

.

D: om is married

Rid: what .

D: ya om is married gauri is his wife now

Rid: om it is true

O: ridhima actually (cutted by gauri)

G: ridhima omkaraji married me to save my life and we are getting divorced in one month .

R: why

G: because he is not accepting marriage

D: gauri it is not like that and you are omkaras wife remember it

Rid: om please can you give me one more chance ( om turned face to see gauri )

Sathiya plays

( they both remembered about there marriage )

O: ridhima I want some time

Rid: can I stay here

O: you can .

Rid: thank you om

(Three brothers are sitting pool side)

R: o you want to give another chance for ridhima

S: what you think om

O: don’t know shivaya I was in confusion

R: what confusion

O: I don’t know what to do

S: what about gauri

O: we are divorcing shivaya and she is not part of my life

S: ok then follow your heart

O: ok shivaya

Rikaras room

(Gauri is trying to type something on laptop because of her hand she can’t type this was noticing by om)

G: shit I should submit it in 1 hour what should I do

O: can I

No response

O: excuse me I am talking with you

No response

O: I am talking with you gauri

G:why want to talk with me I am nothing to you and I don’t need your help please stay away from me

(He angrily hold her shoulders)

O: why you are avoiding me gauri yes I did wrong you can’t avoid me like this ok

G: you are hurting me and why you want to talk with me only one month is there then you can’t even you know where I am going

O: it is one month later not now yes you are nothing to me but because of me you are suffering just I wanted to help you

G: ok you want to help me then type it

(Om started typing but he did not understood what is that)

(Ridhima comes there)

Rid: om

O: what ridhima

Rid : actually boring why we can’t go outside

O: actually ridhima I am busy

Rid: you can do work after wards also

O: sorry ridhima it is important work gauri should submit it in one hour

Rid: ok I will sit here only we can talk also

(Ridhima sat there )

Rid: gauri you know why om don’t like you

G: sorry ridhima I am not interested in that

Rid: but I will tell you 1st your dress sense is not good om always like modern girls like me 2nd you are village girl you don’t know how to mingle with friends

O: just stop it ridhima it is not reason why I dont like gauri and I did not have problem with her dressing sense or she is from village and you cant talk about her you dont know anything about her remember it ..

Rid: I am sorry om.

O: why you are asking me sorry ask sorry from gauri you insulted her but also she is quite that makes her unique remember it

Rid: I am sorry gauri

G: its ok

O: ridhima please You are disturbing me I wanted to type this but because of you I can’t type can you go out of the room

(Ridhima went from there)

G: why you fighted with her

O: because she is insulting you

G: she is just telling her opinion

O: she did not have a right to talk about your dress sense and all it your choice gauri work is over

G: thank you

O: its ok

(Om went from there)

G: what is this because of me he is fighting with his girlfriend

Hi friends I hope you like it

?Love you all ?

?By kavita?

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    5 Comments

    1. Sagithya on February 1, 2018 2:45 pm

      Awesome… Loved om part… Excited for the next part.. update it soon

    2. Nikita_jai29 on February 1, 2018 2:46 pm

      It is nice one dear

    3. Niriha on February 1, 2018 3:16 pm

      Awesome….loved it

    4. Palak on February 1, 2018 3:44 pm

      Superb episode. Keep writing more

    5. Charitha on February 1, 2018 5:17 pm

      Awesome

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