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Next day)
(Breakfast time)
R: bhabhi breakfast is superb
A: yes gauri it is very tasty
(Swethalana came and sat on table )
Swe: where is breakfast for me servants where is breakfast for me
M: Mam today everything gauri mam did
Swe: gauri where is my breakfast
G: its over
Swe: what .
G: yes it’s over
Swe: what do you mean it’s over you don’t know how many members are their in house
G: sultana I did breakfast for my family members and some beggers also there but what to do I did not get time to cook for them also so I thought that beggars will eat yesterdays night food
R: waw bhabhi what a dialouge
Swe: just shut up what do you think of your self gauri . according to you I am begger
G: I think so
Swe: gauri (shouted)
G: even I know how to shout
Khanna: excuse me mam
G: yes
Khanna: thank you mam today you cooked breakfast for all servants and it is very tasty behalf of our servants thank you so much mam
G: its ok you are not a servants here you are working in this house then you are also the family members of this house
Khanna: thank you mam and continue your class mam
Swe: you cooked for them you didnot have time to cook for me
G: If you want to eat then made by your self
(Gauri went room)
O: thank you ..
G: for what
O: for everything
G: everything means
O: because of you today all are happy.
G: no need say thanks .
O: why you are taking risk it is my family matter I will take care of it
G: dont worry I took so many risks in my life it is not new one
O: I dont want others to take risk because of my family
G: just stop it. I dont want your advice
and I know what to do.
O:( angry )I said I dont want your help please get out of this house .. ( He pushed her, she fell down on the floor her hand broken )
G: maa ( shouted. and started crying )
O: gauri I am sorry. actually I didnot mean hurt you
G: my hand is paining omkaraji
( Om called doctor)
O: gauri sit on bed doctor is coming dont worry please stop crying I cant see tears in your eyes please stop crying ( he wiped her tears then they had eyelock )
( Doctor came there and all family members also came there )
S: gauri what happened
O: actually shivaya
G: I slipped bhayya
(Doctor started bandaging )
G: aah
O: doctor slowly she is so sensitive
Doc: ok Mr Oberoi and Mrs Oberoi you are so lucky to get husband like this .
(Gauri looked at om they had eyelock )
Doc: Mr Oberoi please give this medicine to her Mrs Oberoi you should not do any work from that hand
O: ok doctor I will take care of her
(Doctor and went from there)
B: omg shrenu two digit filled
(Gauri started to laugh)
B: (eyes filled with water) shut up are you mad shrenu I cant see you in pain this is 10th times that you got hurted accident fellow down everything you know I pappa and Neil cant live with out you please because of us be careful ya
G: (eyes filled with water) you know 10 times or 100 times If I met with accident or whatever I will not die
O: stop it gauri one more word about dying then I will kill you. to save you I married you dammid
Sathiya plays
G: sorry I will not talk about it
D: we are also your family gauri we also cant see you in pain
G: I know it dadi
A: gauri take rest
( all went from there)
O: sorry
G: its ok
O:ok sleep now
G: here I will sleep on floor
O: you sleep here gauri
G: no
O: just listen to me I will sleep on recliner you sleep here only
G: ok
( She slept after some om waken up gauri was not there)
O: where she went
(He went to search her she was In terroise )
O: gauri what are you doing here
G: no simply came here
O: you know what is time now night 1clock
G: so what
O: go and sleep
G: no I want to sit here for some time
O: ok what are you thinking
G: see that bright stars one is my pappa and one is my mama whenever I will get time I am talking with them I. Share everything with them
O: so you love your parents so much
G: more you know when I was small I lost my family everything
then pappa mama adopted me they given all love to me but now I lost pappa and mama (she started crying )
O: gauri please be calm down( he wiped her tears)
G: leave it ok tell me when you are sad what you will do ..
O: actually when I was sad I am painting but now I lost my Inspiration. so I am listening music
G: waw great you like romantic or emotional songs
O: both
G: but I like dj songs
O: different who is your favourite singer ya
G: I did not have any favourite singers
Who is yours
O: I love shrenu
G: what
( Who is shrenu now )
Hi friends I am late because I am busy with my studies I hope you will like it
I am waiting for your response
?Love you all ?
?by kavita ?
16 Comments
Ur FF is fabulous
Please continue
Thank you charitha .
It is lovely dear please continue
Thank you charitha
Thank you nikta
Hay kavitha di pls..don’t end this ff this is a favorite ff to me dear.post the next one soon
Thankyou so much vishnushri
dude continue writing who cares wat others think continue spreading your passion for writing and ps your stuff is really gooooooooooooooooood i mean the whole gauri omkara angle nice
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Perfect Ya,
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Yes please continue I love rikara shrenal stories