Hi Guys…this is Sonai. Hope u all remember me. I’m writing an ff for the first time. So let’s start.
Suman Tiwari and Shravan Malhotra are beast friends from childhood. Shravan called Suman as Sumo due to her aggressive and naughty behavior. They always played together, studied together and loved each others company. They promised to be together always. But due some family circumstances, the promise didn’t fulfill and Shravan had to go to London for higher studies. Sumo was very upset and so was Shravan. The distance of hearts and place made them realize that they r not just friends but had fallen for each other. Shravan decided to confess his love for Sumo the day he’ll return to India.
It is the day Shravan returned India from London. His father, Ramnath was so happy seeing him. Everyone in his house is very happy. Shravan was also happy after meeting his family after 10 years…but the one he wanted to meet the most didn’t came to meet him. Sumo didn’t come. He was so sure that Sumo would come to welcome him…but she didn’t.
The day passed and it was night. Shravan was sitting in the balcony, looking at the moon. Pushkar, his cousin came inside the balcony and sat beside him.
“Whom r u looking at, Bhaiya?”
“The moon”
“What’s there in moon?”
“The incredible beauty which makes me remind of her”
“Her, who’s the ‘her’,”
“Sumo”
“What ???”
“No I mean…aa…that…Su..Sumo didn’t come to meet me today ?”
“No she’s angry on u”
“Why”
“What do u mean by why ?? You r coming after 10 years. That’s why. She told she will not meet u. U have to meet her and apologize.”
“Oh I see. Ok I’ll go and meet her.”
“Now ??”
“No Chote…tomorrow. Good Night .“
Precap: Shravan goes to Tiwari Killa to meet Sumo. Sumo ignores him and acts like she does not know him.
So guys this is my first trial of writing an FF. I don’t know when I’ll post the next part as my exams r starting from Monday …so let’s see. But I’ll try my best to post soon.
Plz feedback my mistakes and anything bad or good u feel for this ff !!
Moreover today is our Nikita Dutta’s birthday….so Happy Birthday Nikita Dutta
Lots of love to all !!
22 Comments
Wow………mind-blowing. Carry on and post asap?
I knew that u’ll be the first one to comment !!☺ Thanks !! I’ll try to post soon !! Let’s see !
too good
Thank u dear !! ☺
I feel so good..that u have come up wid n ff of our own.
Loved it
Post soon..
Love ya
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Aww thank u sooo much !!! Will try to post soon !
welcome to edkv family.
nice one yaar.
post soon.
Thank u !!
Superb, awesome, mind blowing, too good
Pls post next part ASAP.
So sweet of u !!! Thanks. Will try to post soon !
Nyc start dear would love to read further!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks for such lovely comment. I’ll try to post soon !!
Hey I m really happy with the fact that u r gonna write ff ? And it’s really an excellent start keep it up ????
Aww Jo I’m so happy that u have commented. Thank u so much !!
Diya !!
This was amazing!
I seriously loved it.. You’re an amazing writer.. Her, Moon reminds him of ‘her’.. That was soo sweeett <333
This was incredibly beautiful, and Sumo at her ignorance point again,making Shravan sad.. It will be so interesting to see Shravan after her trying to apologize, where-as, Sumo would be running away! Waiting for the next episode..
Loads of love,
Nikita..
Aww…tahnk u dear !! So sweet of u !!
Sonuu my dearie it was superb just loved it soooo gooodd u r a fab one girly.
Loved it.
Post sooonnnn
Thank u di !!!!!! Will try to post soon !!
Superb!!! i m speechless ……………..past nxt part asap
Thanks !! Will post soon !!!
Sorry Sonai I’m late..
Wow u wrote wonderful…now I can count many qualities of u…
?singer( pls don’t mind dear)
✌ excellent editor
? painter
✊ poet ( four ka koi emoji sang ka nhi tha isliye ?)
✋ Awesome writer..
U r great..
Sorry if I said something which u don’t want to tell everyone..
Love u..
Alina
O thank u so much Alina di !! So sweet of u !! And there’s nothing about me that I wanna conceal u know !! NP !! <3333