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Home»Fan Fiction»Love at first sight??”NAAH”” ~lOVe At LaSt SiGht~ ISHQBAAZ,,SHIVIKA FF (EPISODE-20)
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Love at first sight??”NAAH”” ~lOVe At LaSt SiGht~ ISHQBAAZ,,SHIVIKA FF (EPISODE-20)

kanfiBy kanfiJune 9, 201723 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hii guys…i m here with next part…..

AFTER 5 YEARS

Riks have u arranged everything..??”asked a 5 yr old boy im mature voice..

Yaa ansh,,i’ve done everything,,,i hope it remains surprise…!!”replied riks in doubtful voice….(frst boy is ansh)

I m hoping same…that three little ones n,,,,they cant hide any single thing…”said ansh…(riks for rikara)

I heald everting,,u both al tmplaining about me…..”said a little girl from behind in full tadi

(I’ll give intro of children below,,,,i m trying to write as children speak,,,hope u all get it )

No shivu,,its not you…we are talking about rumo…..”said riks controlling the situation….(that girl is shivika)

Okk then….”said shivu with satisfaction..

U all are to(so) bad,,,u al back biting about ur printess…..”’yelled rumo from behind….(rumo for rumya)

Riks we shouldnt talk about them openly…these three will eat us raw….”said ansh with worried expression

Now u both waitt,,what will we do….lets do(go) shivu n rumo…..we’ll tmplaim(complain) about them to oody chachu(rudy)….shouted the angry little one named Riom

Shivu,,rumo and riom started going towards rudra room

Ansh–O afaton ki paltan….wait……we are sorry…see we are holding our ears….(ansh n riks are holding their ear)

Riks–yaa forgive us…u three are great…we cant do anything without you

Shivu–(in full tadi) we know we al dreat(great)…u dont need to tell us……

Riom–what say dais(guys),,fodive (forgive) them….

Rumo–no wait Ri…..let me dhink(think)

Shivu,,riom,n rumo have a heated conversation….then they replied

Rumo–otay(ok)…we wont tpoil(spoil) plan…bt there is a tndition(condition)

Ansh–what???

Shivu–u’ve to dive(give) 60% tredit (credit) of all this arrandemnt(arrangemnt) to us..-.

Riks–okk meri ma…..now should we continue….?

Riom–otay(ok)….u both will lemmber(rmmbr) how easily we forget you,….

Ansh–easily…..!!!!!giving an anger glare to them

Shivu–bhaiya dont tow(show) me tali(tadi)….i’ve mole(more) than you…..

Riks–everyone come here….lets complete our planning….

All kids indulge in their planning….bt what are they planning?????move on
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INTRODUCTION OF KIDS

ANSH–5 yrs old boy..child of shivaay n anika…tadibaaz bt not more than his sister…mama’s boy bt maturity level is of shivaay

SHIVIKA–3 yrs old girl..child of shivaay n anika…the most tadibaaz cum dramebaaz of oberoi family..just like her mama in deamebaazi n use wierd languages..papa’s carbon copy…papa’s princess…..everyone calls her shivu

RIKARA–5 yrs old girl…child of omkara n gauri….mature girl like her father…most mature oberoi…close to her mum than father..everyones calls her riks

RIOM–3 yr old boy….child of omkara n gauri…nautankibaaaz just like his mum

RUMYA–3 yr old girl..child of rudra n soumya….chubby,,cutest of all….antic piece like her father…..

Ansh n riks are in one team due to their same age
Riom ,shivu n rumo are in another…
Bt all of them share a great bond
_________________________
Resuming the scene of children planning session

Shivu–uffo i m to(so) tired….i have done most of the work…..

Everyone glares at her….she is just sitting at couch n giving instruction

Riom–kitta jhoot bolti hai shivu..

Ansh–shivu will you do somework???i’ll not give u any credit then….

Shivu–u r threatening me the jrSSO…..!!

Riks–guys stop arguing….see everything is done…now we’ve to call everyone …n u three have to do this

Riom–yaa di….i tan(can) easily do this

Ansh–no one should know about this…,otherwise u three will be punished by me….n u know my punishmnt????smirking

Shivu instantly gets up from couch

Shivu–bhaiya dont worry…..we wont give u that chance….making innocent face…

Riks–good….now u three go….only half n hour is left

Trio–otay(ok)
________________________
Shivu goes to OmRi’s room….
Rumo goes to shivika’s room….
Riom goes to RuMya’s room…

RuMya room

Rudra is laying on his bed n is busy on his phone n soumya is taking bath

Riom–hii oody..!!

Ru–who’ll tell chachu??? (Raising his eyebrows)

Riom–(in a serious tone) I m vely(very) distulb(disturb) right now….!!! To(so) be selious(serious)…..

Ru–itna gussa….!!!now will you tell what happened???

soumya comes out of washroom

Somu–hey riom…u haven’t slept yet??

Riom–no taachi(chaachi)….. N dont distulb(disturb) us..we are having man to man talk…..

Rudra laugh on this loudly..
Ru–hi5

Riom glares him angrily

Ru–ok no hi5…

Riom–come with me without asking any ques….taachi u also come!!!!!

Somu–me???why….

Riom–i told n without asking ques….

Ru–somu…u should go for ear checkup n again starts laughing bt aftr seeing riom’s angry face….see i m not laughing….lets go sumo…

Sumo,,rudra n riom move towards that room where ansh n riks are….

OmRi room

Om is setting his hair(om keeps his hair open) n gauri is watching TV

Shivu–O…lets go..fast

Om–where shivu…??u haven’t slept yet???

Shivu–yes i m shleeping in my room…this is my toul(soul) wandling(wandering) here n there……with an angry tone….

Om–itta gusssa????

Shivu–why al u talking like oody chachu….come fast…..u can tomb(comb) ur zulf( hair) later…

Listening zulf word…..gauri starts laughing….

Gauri–zulf….ha ..ha….shivu from where u learn this word….

Shivu–chaachi….i’ll tell u latel(later) ..i m selious(serious) now…..tome(come) fast u both…..

Om ,gauri n shivu also headed towards that room…

ShivIka room

Anika is sitting on bed doing some work…..shivaay comes there n sits beside her….

Shiv–kitna kaam krti ho…??u”ve time for everyone bt not for me….!!!

Ani–awwwweee….nothing like that…its ansh school’s project so i m just checking it that evrrything is correct….

Shivaay takes book from her hand n keep aside….he hold her hand n interwind her fingers to his n kisses her hand…(same as in serial when mahi was there in OM)

Just then rumo enters

Rumo–hawwwwwwww……billuji…atleast tlose(close) the dool(door)

Shivaay left her hand n stands their awkwardly..,

Shiv–rumo u here???n dont call me billuji….

Rumo–i’ll say billuji,,billuji,,,billuji

Ani–correct rumo…ab billuji ko billuji hi kahenge n….ab billuji ko apna naam billuji nahi pasand h to wo billuji ki problem h….hm to billuji hi khnge…..(completed in one breath)

Shivaay was standing there with annoyed face..,
Shiv–u know how many times u call me bil….that word in 30 secs

Ani–no…..starts counting

Shiv–stop it anika

Rumo–stop it paanita(paanika)

Ani–hawwww rumo u r taking his side??

Rumo–i m not taking anyone’s tide(side)…now come fast u both….

Ani–dkha shivaay apki wajah se ab bache b mujhe panika bulane lage…..
(See its all becoz of u that now kids are also calling me panika)

Shiv–jaisa kaam karogi waisa hi naam hoga n…*winking*

Ani–u bhagad billa……..

Splaaaashhhh splaaasshhhhh…..
Both anika n shivaay are wet…..a glass of water is just thrown on their face by our RUMO

Rumo–stop fighting n come fast with me….

Shivaay,,anika rumo also headed towards that room….
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PRECAP–surprise

This is it for today …i hope u like it….i hope its funny enough too….i m getting very less commnt:-( 🙁 🙁 ….shoot ur commnt below….n thnx for commnting on previous part……

I’ve made a VM on jankee n nakuul…have uploaded on youtube n insta too bt insta version is trimmed….

I hope this time link is shown….

Lots of love
Kanfi

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    23 Comments

    1. Tanu on June 9, 2017 3:30 pm

      Very NYC episode dear plz post next one as soon as possible

    2. nikita_jai29 on June 9, 2017 3:40 pm

      It is so cute dear… Eagerly waiting for the next update

    3. Charitha on June 9, 2017 3:41 pm

      Awesome

    4. Riana on June 9, 2017 3:55 pm

      Kids r not kids but cartoons…???…Anywayzzz Leap was very coool…N Funnny !!…??…Waiting for Nxt episode !!…??

    5. Sagithya on June 9, 2017 4:04 pm

      It was awesome n funny too…loved it waiting for the next one.. post it soon

    6. salma on June 9, 2017 4:23 pm

      Soo cutee….???? pls try to update fast

    7. Ankita27 on June 9, 2017 4:33 pm

      Aww so cute and sweet update.. loved it.. Eagerly waiting for the next update.. plz post soon…

    8. Zaveesha on June 9, 2017 4:36 pm

      It was very nice…loved the children antiques… what r they upto…will come to know in the next..so waiting for next…

    9. Archisha on June 9, 2017 4:43 pm

      Awesome one

    10. Arthi on June 9, 2017 8:20 pm

      This was superb…….I just loved the kids part….and all the kids were adorable…..just super….post next part soon….

    11. Arfa on June 9, 2017 8:20 pm

      It’s nice.dono child ma&papa ki thara.thanks such a beautiful.

    12. Lauren on June 9, 2017 8:30 pm

      It was awesome especially that cute convo n I just loved tadibaaz shivu post next soooooooon…..

    13. alekhika20 on June 9, 2017 8:42 pm

      Beautiful update

    14. Katz on June 9, 2017 10:55 pm

      Assalamu alaikum… kanfi .. such a cute episode. I think this is the first ever full and full of all about kids oberois. Superb…. and Thank you for commenting on my episodes and encouraging me

    15. Banita on June 9, 2017 11:57 pm

      Awwwww!!!!!!! I hve no word 4 this….. Bacha party was just Awwwww!!!!!!! Luv it…… Luv it 2 d core….. Eagerly waiting 4 nxt….

    16. Shanaya on June 10, 2017 12:03 am

      It was cute

    17. Neha-17 on June 10, 2017 1:05 am

      Such a amazing episode!!loved the kids, they must be beautiful as their parents are.
      Waiting for the surprise kids are planning. Maybe, Om-Gauri and Shivaay-Anika did fmly planning at a time ????just kidding
      It’s nice to have cousins of same age and these cousins are so sweet…
      Great kiddish language of this kids!
      Amazing
      Awesome
      Love ya !
      Post next soon

    18. gayathri.visu on June 10, 2017 9:22 am

      Awwww!! Cute n tadibaaz Jr. Oberois! Loved it dear… Excited for next part dear. And yeah, u can call me gayu, don’t be formal dear.

    19. Jerry_36 on June 10, 2017 12:46 pm

      Hey Kanfi.
      This episode is a lovely one with lots of fun of the baccha party..
      A wonderful update indeed. The kids made me go mad by their shweet talks, loved it.
      Rik’s and Ansh are a little mature but I loved the junior baccha palty too?
      Do update soon. Love yaa and yeah waiting for the surprise❤

    20. Madhuani on June 11, 2017 2:37 am

      Nice…
      Loved the baby talk it’s awesome.

    21. Ahaana on June 11, 2017 3:12 am

      Awesome..?

    22. Rakveen on June 14, 2017 11:36 am

      Heyy kanfiii…!! Loved this epi…the bachha party??? it was to hilarious..!! Great yaar..such a beautiful story..!! Cant wait to read the next one?

    23. TU Friends Forever on June 16, 2017 8:20 pm

      Great child language its was really funny I loved the cousins bond it would be good if I had cousins like them k lets leave it finally I found the link of your ff n this awesomeeeee n all children R unique I can’t type as I am excited to read next one.this was amazinggggg

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