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Home»Fan Fiction»Love me in the end – Twinj OS
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Love me in the end – Twinj OS

TwinjBy TwinjNovember 6, 201634 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hi guys (I can say u guys right as we r friends.). Thank u so much for the lovely comments. U all made my day n u all have motivated me write to this OS. Here it goes…

The room was beautifully decorated. There were flowers everywhere-pink, white and red rose petals strewn on the bed. There were heart shaped balloons all over the floor n wall. (Sorry I suck at describing these things.)I just glanced at the clock. It was nearly midnight but still he was not asleep. He was waiting for his so called love. “Today also she didn’t come.” I said n entered the room. “It’s the fifth time she did like this. Every time u trust her she lets u down n at morning u get a sorry message from her. Till when u will wait for her, Kunj.” “It’s nothing like that Twinkle. She may be busy.” He said in a sad tone.

“Just forget her Kunj. I am ur wife n it has been almost a year since we were married .Forget her n move on in ur life. I love u Kunj.” I was willing to say this but I couldn’t. All I could do was console him. His so called GF Alisha betrayed him. She wanted his money not his love. She tried to marry him by hook but all her efforts went in vain. Now she is in relationship with someone else. I tried many times to tell Kunj about Alisha’s truth but he never understands. “Kunj now go to sleep.”

I said n cleared the rose petals that were strewn on the bed. He laid down n closed his eyes. I thought that he fell asleep so I got up from the bed n moved towards the couch. When I was moving towards the couch Kunj caught hold of my wrist. “Kunj u haven’t slept yet.” I said. “Twinkle u are my wife n u fulfill all the duties being my wife but I am not able to fulfill my duties. I am the worst husband ever.” He said n pulled me towards him. “It’s nothing like that.” I said. I don’t know what had happen to Kunj, he was talking so weirdly. He pulled me closer n I fell on top of him. I felt butterflies in my stomach. We had a cute eye lock which was broken by me. I tried to get up but I failed. Then Kunj said, “Twinkle I don’t know what has happen to me. Whenever I close my eyes I see her…Whenever I feel the cold breeze I see her…Everywhere I see her…Even in my dreams I only see her…She has controlled my heart n brain…I am in love with her.” After listening that I was so jealous. He was talking about that witch Alisha. I again tried to get up n this time I succeeded.

My eyes were full of tears but I didn’t want to show my tears so I turned around. Kunj back hugged me n said, “Don’t u want to know who she is?” “No, I don’t.” I said in a hurry n broke his back hug. I was about to leave the room but he caught my wrist n said, “That girl is non other than u. I love u Twinkle. U made me understand the real meaning of love. Love is not about gaining but it’s about giving. U have sacrificed lots of things for my happiness. Today these decorations are for u not for Alisha. I love u.” I felt as if it was a dream my ears wanted to hear those three little words since very long. “I love u too Kunj.” I said. He pulled me towards him. “Say it once again.” He said. “I love u Kunj” I said n I kissed him hard, pressing him to the wall. I pulled away from him when I became breathless. He snuck a peck onto my forehead. He carried me in a bridal style n put me gently on the bed. He leaned towards me n started kissing my neck, shoulders. He took out my top off. He started feeling my br*ast. I started unbuttoning his shirt. I caressed his hair. He was on top of me. We rolled to the left side of the bed. Now I was on top of him. My ears pressed to his chest. We again rolled to the left n he was on top of me. “U look beautiful”, He whispered as he leaned more n more, making me lie down on my back. His palm cupped my face, kissing my forehead lightly. He rolled on his back n I was on top of him. I was enjoying that moment. “I love u Kunj.”

Two Years later
“It’s a girl!” he said n started jumping.
“Kunj, everybody’s watching…stop jumping.” I said.
“Let them see. I am so happy…I want to jump!”Kunj said.
“So what shall we name her?”I said.
“Mahi” he said.
The End
Sorry if it bored u. N pls do drop ur comment below.

Lots of love,
Twinj/Aakriti

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    34 Comments

    1. paavu on November 6, 2016 8:03 pm

      Hey aakriti it was very very awesome os means feeling of love was awesome lovely who said it bored us dont ever say like dis ok live u dear

      • Twinj on November 18, 2016 1:11 pm

        Hey paavu,
        Thanks for the cmting.N glad to know that u were not bored.
        Keep supporting me.

        Lots of luv,
        Twinj

    2. Meeta on November 6, 2016 8:30 pm

      Wow, that was so good.
      Keep writing more.

      • Twinj on November 18, 2016 1:17 pm

        Hey Meeta,
        Thanks yaar. Keep supporting me.

        Lots of luv,
        Twinj

    3. Ramya on November 6, 2016 8:30 pm

      Awesome amazing fabulous lovely n cute os amazing yaar

      • Twinj on November 18, 2016 1:29 pm

        Hey Ramya,
        Thanks for the cmt. It means a lot. Keep supporting.

        Lots of luv,
        Twinj

    4. afeeza56 on November 6, 2016 9:08 pm

      Cute

      • Twinj on November 18, 2016 1:39 pm

        Hey Afeeza,
        Thanks. Keep motivating me.

        Lots of luv,
        Twinj

    5. Manvi on November 6, 2016 10:43 pm

      Awesome, cute, sweet….. nice os

      • Twinj on November 18, 2016 1:49 pm

        Hey Manvi’
        Thanks for the cmt. Means a lot for me.
        Keep supporting me.

        Lots of luv,
        Twinj

    6. Chiku on November 6, 2016 10:52 pm

      Wowww it’s amazing ????lovely

      • Twinj on November 18, 2016 1:58 pm

        Hey Chiku,
        Thanks for the cmt. It means a lot for me.
        Keep supporting.

        Lots of luv,
        Twinj

    7. SidMin on November 6, 2016 11:01 pm

      Loved it The os was very sweet and cute 🙂

      • Twinj on November 18, 2016 2:58 pm

        Hey sidmin,
        Thanks for the support yaar. It means a lot.
        Keep motivating me.

        Lots of luv,
        Twinj

    8. Purnima.agrawal30 on November 7, 2016 12:12 am

      awesome amazing fabulous cute

      • Twinj on November 18, 2016 3:00 pm

        Hey purnima,
        Thanks yaar. It really means a lot.
        Keep supporting me.

        Lots of luv,
        twinj

    9. SidVee on November 7, 2016 12:27 am

      Awesome and cute os.. loved it.. you didnt bore us.. keep writing more ❤

      • Twinj on November 18, 2016 3:03 pm

        Hey sidvee,
        Thanks for motivating me n glad to know that u were not bored.

        Lots of luv,
        Twinj

    10. swasti on November 7, 2016 3:33 am

      Aaku di,I was not at all bored.The OS was short but too sweet…cute OS…luv u n ur OS di

      • Twinj on November 18, 2016 3:05 pm

        Hey swasti,
        Thanks for the cmt. Luv u too. Glad to know that u were not bored.

        Lots of luv,
        twinj

    11. Adya on November 7, 2016 7:33 am

      Aaku di….soo sweet ….it was really really really really really good….loved it..
      Keep writing more….,
      Loads of love

      • Twinj on November 18, 2016 3:08 pm

        Hey adya,
        Thanks yaar. It means a lot for me.
        N do post ur ff should I confess very soon. Can’t wait.
        Keep motivating me.

        Lots of luv,
        Twinj

    12. twinjfan.tamanna on November 7, 2016 1:43 pm

      awww… so cute epi..yaar I loved it…

      • Twinj on November 18, 2016 3:10 pm

        Hey tammana,
        Thanks for the cmt. Keep supporting me.

        Lots of luv,
        twinj

    13. Zuha Fatima on November 7, 2016 4:24 pm

      Woah Akku!! U rocked it once again 🙂 It was nice to read and you did not bore us out I am sure no one was bored as it was nice 🙂 Keep your efforts up!

      Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

      • Twinj on November 18, 2016 3:12 pm

        Hey Zuha,
        Thanks for the cmt. It means a lot. Glad to know that u weren’t bored.
        Keep supporting me.

        Lots of luv,
        Twinj

    14. dreamer...arundhati on November 8, 2016 1:33 pm

      Lovely

      • Twinj on November 18, 2016 3:14 pm

        Hey arundati,
        Thanks for commenting. Keep supporting me.

        Lots of luv,
        Twinj

    15. aaku on November 8, 2016 9:36 pm

      hey twinj,
      luved it a lot.Cute OS. keep writing.

      • Twinj on November 18, 2016 3:17 pm

        Hey aaku,
        Our name are actually same…aaku is my nick name.
        Thanks for cmt. Keep motivating me.

        Lots of luv,
        Twinj

    16. Rupe123 on November 8, 2016 9:38 pm

      hi,
      Fab…luved it .Cute OS. keep writing.

      • Twinj on November 18, 2016 3:19 pm

        Hey Rupe,
        Thanks. Keep supporting me.

        Lots of luv,
        Twinj

    17. Shreya on November 17, 2016 5:00 pm

      Such a nice and amazing story….I couldn’t believe that you wrote this……I really love you.I was your fan but now I am your A.C……????????
      Yours..SYP
      To…chuchundri

      • Twinj on November 18, 2016 1:08 pm

        Hey SYP,
        Thanks for the cmt yaar. It means a lot to me.Love u too.
        N when r u registering. Pls let me know.

        Lots of luv,
        Twinj

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