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Home»Fan Fiction»A love confesSion shraman & devkashi one shot ( kuch rang pyaar ke aise bhi )
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A love confesSion shraman & devkashi one shot ( kuch rang pyaar ke aise bhi )

administratorBy administratorJune 22, 201611 Comments4 Mins Read
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hyy guysss my name is maria m frm edkv page but i also love krpkab so much dat is why i decided to write a one shot story:
hope u guysss like it cause its my frst time dat i am writing a ff…..

so lets start:
(a beautiful vanue is shown n a couple’s engagment is happneing both seems sad)
it is sumo’s n dev’s engagment party :
(dev was about to make sumo wear ring but suddenly stoped)
dev in low ton: no…..no i..i cant do dis…. (ring fells frm his hand) dis…..dis is wrng (he looks at sumo who is silently crying) i am sorrry….. how can i be so selfishhh….
(all gusts r shocked include ishwari)
she says: dev……
dev: i am sorry mom… ( he starts crying ) i am sooo sorry…. mai acha beta banna chahta hoon….pr apne bhai ka pyaaar……( ishwari is double shocked) han…mom ye jaante hoi bhi dat sumo luvs shravan….. shr loves her…. i love someone else…( he luks at sona who is standing a little bit far frm him among the gusts) n she luvs me alot…..(sone runs frm their crying )
ish: o…my…god… ye ye…mai kya karne ja rai thi apne dono beto ke saath…..mai char char zindagiyaan…barbaad karne ja rai thi 😮
she hugs dev n sumo ~~~~
thnk u sooo much mere bacho dev tumne mujhe char zindagiya barbaad kare se bacha lia… thank u mere bacche
( ish breaks the hug n say to both)
ab yahan khare meri shakal dekhi gai….. ya jao gai apne pyaar ko paaane..!!! jao
(both say thankx to her happily n runs in opposite directions)
SHRAMAN PART:
(shr is crying on tarrace alone)
he was keep saying by looking at the sky..
sumo…. i am sorry mujhe tumhe pehle bta dena chahiay tha…… ke….
( again luks at d sky)
god plzzzz mujhe ek moka de do……plzzz only 1 chnce….
(sumo come from behind n says in says in low tone )
sumo: kis liay….??
sht:ye batane ke liay dat….dat
sumo: dat…..
shr: dat I LOVE HER!!! I LOVE HER MORE THAN ANYTHING ELSE…..
suddenly he luks behind n shck to see sumo
shr: sumo..????
(he luks at her left hand)
( she didnt wear any ring)
sumo: i love u toooo……
shr : was dam happy to hear dis n runs towards her n hugs her 🙂 🙂
shr: i luv u….i love u….
both share a tight hug…

DEVKASHI SCENE:
(sona is luking at the sky she was crying but in happiness)
dev coms frm behind»»»
dev: hmmm??? ahmm…ahm…
(sona luks behind n is very happy to see dev)
sona: dev tum….( she luks at his left hand n he also didnt wear any ring)
(sona gets happy n smiles)
dev: kyun mere aane se khush nai ho kya…. :p
(he says naughtily)
sona : nai aisi baat nai hai….( she shyyyly turns around)
dev: hey….. he comes closer to hr…..
(she tries to run away)
(bt he hold her hand n pulls hr closr)
dev: ab tum…… mujh se kabhi door nai ja skti….. mai tumhe kahin jane bhi nai doon ga… akhir engagment tor ke aaya hoon….. :p
(he comes more closer to her n is about to kiss her)
(but she hits him playfully n hugs him)
he also hugs hr~~~~
dev: i luv u soo much sona…..
sona: i luv u more dan any thing else
( dey both also share a tight hug)

——-HAPPY ENDING———

SO HOW WAS IT GUYSSS
sorry fr any grammatical mistakes
plzzzz do cmment……!

note: all chappals n tomatoes are allowed!! :p

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11 Comments

  1. Ishi on June 22, 2016 7:44 pm

    Aww so cute. Loved it?

    • Maria on June 22, 2016 11:16 pm

      Thanxxxx ishi 🙂

  2. sana on June 22, 2016 8:47 pm

    nice .. like it… soo sweet.

    • Maria on June 22, 2016 11:16 pm

      Thanxxxx sana 🙂

  3. Aarti on June 22, 2016 10:41 pm

    It was so happy n joyful..jst like my twinj ff- tei family..

    • Maria on June 22, 2016 11:18 pm

      Thankxxx aarti

  4. Aarti on June 22, 2016 10:41 pm

    Plzz read it, I hope u’ll like it

    • Maria on June 22, 2016 11:19 pm

      Will definitely read it 🙂

  5. Zarmin shah on June 23, 2016 5:11 am

    So nice..!!good job MARIA

  6. Snehal on June 23, 2016 8:00 pm

    wow very sweet and cute…nd off course romantic confession loved it

  7. Fizâ on June 24, 2016 8:00 pm

    Heyy…..it z good…..n i also lyk edkv bt nt more than krpab,…..n sory bt i lyk dev n sona act….u wrote the same thing that acts at that moment….its good…..i also luv to write bt i didn’t try…!!

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