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Home»Fan Fiction»Love me; If you can ~Prologue
Fan Fiction Swaragini

Love me; If you can ~Prologue

AaratrikaBy AaratrikaMarch 17, 201746 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hiiiiii! Finally I am free for a bunch of days! This ff is centered on swasan and raglak, although other characters are important too. Keep reading ?
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Ivory Palace 2015
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Swara stood, glancing down from her room, situated at the 38th floor of the building. She let out a sigh. The wall was made of glass and hence transparent.

‘Finally’, She sighed sufferingly. The world was BENEATH her. Looking at those small houses, buildings and people gave her an unidentified joy!
‘ This HAS to be my ”New” Favorite Feeling. ‘
Swara felt a sudden urge to smash them all, including HIM.
*-*-*Flashback*-*-*
St. Dorem’ Lawn 2008
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Swara and HE were walking by the garden. Swara adored this ’emotion’ of pressing grass with her heels. Things were getting awkward, although she was quite open with HIM, something just couldn’t hit the sack that day. Swara NEEDED to start a conversation: Before it dies, DESPERATELY.
Swara- You are so smart and intelligent any girl would have fallen for you, so tell me: Whom. Do. You. Love.
HE was sure astonished by this sudden question but hided it in a hearty smile.
HIM- Of course! I love a girl.
Swara- What? Seriously???? And you didn’t found this important enough to tell me? Am I not you best friend? Okay! Now call her in front of me and CONFESS.
HE just smiled and dialed someone’s number. Suddenly her phone started ringing.
Swara *Picks the call* – Hello?
HE: I LOVE YOU…
*-*-*Flashback Ends*-*-*
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Anjuna Beach 2015
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‘I hate you!’, Laksh snorted.
‘You hate me? Glad, that you hate me: I wasn’t born to impress you, either.’, ragini replied.
*Suddenly a song started*

Dhinka Chika Dhinka Chika
Dhinka Chika Dhinka Chika
Re ai ai
Barah mahine me barah tareeke se
Tujh ko pyar jataaunga
Dhinka Chika Dhinka Chika
Dhinka Chika Dhinka Chika
Re ai ai
Barah minute bhi lagta ab naa
Tere bin reh reh paaunga re
Dhinka Chika Dhinka Chika
Dhinka Chika Dhinka Chika
Re ai ai…”

Ragini quickly switched of her phone seeing laksh’s violent glares.

Laksh- Why does your stupid phone always starts ringing in the middle of our date, ALWAYS? I am fed of this ” Tinka chika- Tinka chika ”
Ragini bursts into a laugh.
Ragini- No laksh it isn’t ‘Tinka chika’ it is ‘dhinka chika’!
Ragini keeps keeps a finger on her mouth like a baby, by seeing laksh’s glares grow even more violent.
Ragini- Cholly?
Laksh- Punishment
Ragini- No please!
But too late, laksh had already picked her up in his arms and threw her lightly on her sand castle; making her clothes dirty and spoiling her hardwork on making that castle.
Ragini started wailing loudly.
Rag- You ruined *Sob* my princess castle I really really *sob* hate you! Uhannnn ???
Laksh- So sorry ragini! Pls stop crying ! What was so special in that?
Ragini innocently replied *wiping her tears and nose* – I wanted to live in it!!!!!!!?????
Laksh hit his forehead at her childishness.
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Who is HE? I am sure you can guess. It is out of the world feeling when you see many comments on your fan-fiction. Those who haven’t written one shall write one to experience. I too will be really happy if you guys comment. Please share your suggestions and advises if any. Yeah, I know this one is pretty small but I didn’t wanted to expose much in the prologue.
See ya all of you!

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    46 Comments

    1. Follybraverl on March 17, 2017 7:51 am

      Too good awesome cute raglak

      • Dorina on March 17, 2017 9:33 am

        Thanks Follybraverl! Glad, you liked it.

    2. meetu on March 17, 2017 8:30 am

      he is sanky. I will call u di since im going to be 18 nxt year

      • Dorina on March 17, 2017 9:35 am

        Thanks for commenting meetu! Of course you can call me di. Nice guess!

    3. gayu on March 17, 2017 8:56 am

      Cute Raglak loved them

      • Dorina on March 17, 2017 9:36 am

        Me toooooooooo! They are sweethearts.

    4. Mintu on March 17, 2017 9:08 am

      Amazing… Raglak r cute

      • Dorina on March 17, 2017 9:38 am

        Thanks a lot!!!

    5. Sindhura on March 17, 2017 9:15 am

      Awesome

      • Dorina on March 17, 2017 9:38 am

        Thanks di!

    6. Mittu on March 17, 2017 9:27 am

      That was just awesome !!! ??
      I just hope that HE is actually Sanskaar only ! Really cute way of proposing ! And Raglak ??…. Especially Ragini ?Kiddo ! Waiting for your next update sissie ! ?

      • Dorina on March 17, 2017 9:37 am

        Thanks for such an awesome encouragement, Mittu! I am waiting for your ff too. Glad you liked it!

    7. shilpa-saraj on March 17, 2017 11:15 am

      Wonderfull… eagerly waiti g for the ne x t…

      • Dorina on March 17, 2017 2:08 pm

        Thanks

    8. dharani on March 17, 2017 11:20 am

      nice

      • Dorina on March 17, 2017 2:10 pm

        Thanks, glad you like It

    9. Akshata on March 17, 2017 11:23 am

      loved raglak part, awesome prologue, update soon

      • Dorina on March 17, 2017 2:11 pm

        Thank you so much, sweetheart.

    10. Ria on March 17, 2017 11:47 am

      Hahaha loved it its so cute for both the couples loved ragini’s I wanted to in it

      • Dorina on March 17, 2017 2:12 pm

        Thanks for mentioning the part you like. Please keep reading.

    11. KrissAnn on March 17, 2017 12:49 pm

      aswmmm ??? i an sure that he is sanskar
      i loved the way he said i ? u and raglak scene was chooo sweet
      we share same age. am going to be on sept

      • KrissAnn on March 17, 2017 1:06 pm

        am*

      • Dorina on March 17, 2017 2:13 pm

        Thanks! Hope to see you in the next part as well!

    12. mica on March 17, 2017 12:54 pm

      waa…… what a confession…. awesome Dorina…

      • Dorina on March 17, 2017 2:14 pm

        Thanks Mica! So happy, you liked the confession

    13. Kriya.n on March 17, 2017 2:21 pm

      Awesome dear….
      The confession was mind blowing ……
      Tinka chika- Tinka chika…..was just ??
      I liked ragini childish behaviour ……
      Keep going
      Take care ..

      • Dorina on March 17, 2017 2:46 pm

        thanks, happy that u found it funny.

    14. Sus on March 17, 2017 2:28 pm

      Aww laksh destroyed ragini’s castle. He should get punishment
      Sweet confession of him.
      Loved both pairs

      • Dorina on March 17, 2017 2:45 pm

        thanks for liking and commenting

    15. a on March 17, 2017 3:46 pm

      nice..

      • Dorina on March 17, 2017 4:50 pm

        Thanks

    16. asra on March 17, 2017 6:40 pm

      awesome dear….raglak r sooo cute….waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear…

      • Violet on March 18, 2017 9:16 am

        Thank you

    17. Ammu on March 17, 2017 8:43 pm

      Loved Raglak scenes

      • Violet on March 18, 2017 9:16 am

        Thanks.

    18. abi on March 17, 2017 9:31 pm

      Awesome

      • Violet on March 18, 2017 9:16 am

        Hi thanku

    19. tëìtō kUn on March 18, 2017 4:22 am

      Awesome…
      Tinka Chika – Tinka Chika was just Awesome & Funny…
      Raglak were really Cute…

      • Violet on March 18, 2017 9:15 am

        Thanks

    20. IQRA222 on March 18, 2017 11:44 am

      awesome episode
      raglak moments were cute

    21. ritu on March 18, 2017 4:38 pm

      nice…waiting for swasan scenes

    22. Shifa96 on March 18, 2017 7:15 pm

      Nice

    23. Seebu_s on March 18, 2017 10:18 pm

      Nice…n obviously…he is our swara’s sanskar?waiting for swasan’s love story

    24. A.xx on March 19, 2017 3:32 am

      Amazing xx

    25. Rehna on March 19, 2017 11:15 am

      Ragu is so cute, liked it

    26. kat on March 20, 2017 11:38 am

      he is sanskar…nice dear…

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