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Home»Fan Fiction»Love from black hole raglak part 1
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Love from black hole raglak part 1

PrincesskrishaBy PrincesskrishaJune 5, 2017Updated:June 5, 201725 Comments3 Mins Read
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The unicorn spread its magnificent wings,flying through colourful soft puffy clouds.Flue spread her hands feeling the wind across her beautiful face.She touched a part of cloud n made it as circle,n whisphered something to it.She said go now n give this message .The cloud moved up n down a little as if nodding n flew away.Unicorn landed itself in a beautiful stadium.Flue jumped of her horse,waving her hands to the crowd cheering her name.she came into the splendid stadium that could fit nearly 50,000 crowd with flying seats. It was a magic sword game ,the player has to find sword suitable to them n battle with some opponents n at last must take the sapphire tiara from ice crystal by using ones impressive wit n talent.

Back to spaceship.
Laksh ,was hugging his knees n put his head over them .He was feeling hungry,but he couldn’t ask them.His stomach made some sounds,he felt many mice’s running inside his stomach searching for cheese.He gained courage n managed to ask them food by signs,they gave them some packets.Laksh’s face glowed like a 1000 watts bulb.Finally ,his stomach is going to get some food for mice running in.

Back to stadium

Flue, took her opulent sword,she won many .now ,it was time for her to take tiara.one more girl was also competing for it.all gaze were fixed on two.one time flue was fast ,other time she.she put her leg in between flues path n made her stumble.

Here laksh was horrified to see food inside.it was white maggots (maggots are white worms),n many unknown types of worms.he immediately threw it,making a yuck face.he said to his stomach,my dear stomach n my dearest mice’s living in my stomach I kindly request you to sleep n not ask food. Once,he returns to earth,he’ll give him extra food,he said so jaaoo so jaooo.As quick as his speech was finished,his stomach agreed.He remembered ,how his mother used to feed him his fav food.He remembered his fav hot paratha with cheese n butter melting on it with kadai paneer,he licked his lips like a baby.he came to sense by a jerk as the flight landed on a blue pinkish violet sauced planet.he was brought down by aliens.laksh was awestruck to see dazzling city.He then realized ,he was not in earth,he started to cease for air.He then realized ,he was able to breathe. He hit himself slightly on his head.

Flue finally won ,her heart was racing so fast,millions of stars falling like glitters from dark sky on her n miliions of dazzling drops falling on her face ,with flowers at her feet.she felt someone close to her heart has come.

Here ,a soldier gestured laksh to stand n went .laksh was standing alone, he saw a beautiful statue of a girl made in ice,he neared it.

Precap:flue to see laksh,laksh imprisoned.one new entry.

Guys Im so happy with ur response,I really feel hundred star showering their silvers on me. Ur response made me very happy.pls keep supporting.for now I have decided to write one more raglak story.so ,raglakians pls bear my torture. I’ll post prologue of my new story today itself guys.if u like pls comment guys.I’m really happy thanks.pls check previous part as I have replied to ur comments .OK bye all.I dedicate this part to raglak fans as many are feeling less raglak ffs na.

Raginis name in alien world is flueferfoe.I’ll give rest of characters in upcoming parts.love u all.

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    25 Comments

    1. Anju on June 5, 2017 4:19 pm

      Awesome episode

    2. Malu on June 5, 2017 4:23 pm

      Amazing part nd can’t wait for next

    3. Arjuna on June 5, 2017 4:28 pm

      AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

    4. Elizebathlovely on June 5, 2017 4:42 pm

      Awesome

    5. nymisha281 on June 5, 2017 5:58 pm

      Awesome dear princess ??

    6. Soumya on June 5, 2017 6:02 pm

      Awesome di

    7. Ammu on June 5, 2017 6:28 pm

      Interesting episode dear and loved it. Eagerly waiting for next episode and please post next part ASAP ?????

    8. Soumya on June 5, 2017 6:45 pm

      Awesome di…post soon

    9. Monisha on June 5, 2017 7:11 pm

      Awesome

    10. Sherin on June 5, 2017 7:26 pm

      Awesome

    11. Aamy on June 5, 2017 7:28 pm

      Nice

    12. Ashly on June 5, 2017 8:04 pm

      Awesome Superb

    13. Vennila on June 5, 2017 8:26 pm

      Awesome

    14. Megha on June 5, 2017 8:59 pm

      Amazing

    15. Monu on June 5, 2017 9:12 pm

      Awesome

    16. Vini on June 5, 2017 9:20 pm

      Nice

    17. mark@lotha on June 5, 2017 9:48 pm

      awsme dear..itz a humble rqust all d raglak fans plz post more raglak ff coz tis dys raglak ff story r gtin leser dy by day..

    18. DivzS on June 5, 2017 11:53 pm

      Took us to an entirely new world. Superb imagination. Interesting and attractive. Post again soon. Will be waiting eagerly.

    19. avika on June 6, 2017 8:59 am

      superrr

    20. Rehna on June 6, 2017 10:15 am

      Awesome dear

    21. Makku on June 6, 2017 1:34 pm

      Superb dear. Laksh speaking to his stomach was superb, poor Laksh didn’t get food. Wow ! what a combination of colours dear? blue pinkish violet sauced planet. Post next part soon dear.

      Bye dear. Take care.

    22. Pearly on June 6, 2017 7:25 pm

      Awesome

    23. IQRA222 on June 6, 2017 11:18 pm

      interesting

    24. IQRA222 on June 6, 2017 11:21 pm

      interesting loved it
      it was funny too!!

    25. hemalattha on June 7, 2017 7:39 pm

      Nice

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