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Love In Arguments ~ Shatakshi and Ria (Episode 1)

ShatakshiRiaBy ShatakshiRiaSeptember 17, 2016Updated:September 17, 201645 Comments9 Mins Read
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Love In Arguments?
(Episode 1)

If anyone missed out on the prologue, here is the link below:

Prologue

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“NO MAA….I’m not gonna come and that’s final”, yelled a frustrated Twinkle throwing her clothes here and there in anger. 

“Twinkle puttar please understand…. See I never force u but this time it’s important….ur father’s foreign delegates are coming in this party and they personally requested him to come with COMPLETE family”, explains Leela.

Twinkle : U both are no one to me.
(She says still messing her room) 

Leela : (shocked) What?? 

Twinkle : Chillax maa…bus ek din ke liye aap meri maa nahi aur mai aapke beti nahi…so simple. (Chillax maa.. Only for one day we don’t share a mother-daughter bond. So simple.)

Leela : TWINKLE!
(Leela says throwing a typical mother style dagger?)

Twinkle : (a bit afraid) Ok fine!! 

Leela : Will u stop throwing things now?? 

Twinkle : (she saw her face for a second) Nope.? 

Leela : Ok as u wish…come I will help u…aaree Twinkle sirf kapde he kyu fek rahi h… Yeh perfume kab kaam aayega….isse bhi phod de….atleast tera gussa to kum ho jaiga na.? 
(Okay as you wish. Come, I’ll help you. Arey Twinkle, why are you throwing only clothes? When will you use this perfume? Break this also. Atleast you’ll calm down.)

(Twinkle gave a What-The-Hell type look while
Leela lifted the perfume to throw.)

Twinkle : Maa sochna bhi mat (Maa, don’t even think about it)…its Clive Cristian (brand)…No…no maa pleaseee. 
(Twinkle says dramatically)

Leela : First promise me that u r coming. 
(Perfume bottle still hanging in her hand)

Twinkle : Pro…urgh!!….PROMISE….I will come 
(A frustrated Twinkle groaned. Leela smiled n kept the bottle aside.)

Leela : Awww meri soni kudi…. 
(Twinkle rolled her eyes)

Leela : Aur haa….clean ur room first. 

Twinkle : MAA… 
(Yelled twinkle seeing the condition of her beautifully messed up room.?? Leela standing outside the room yelled.)
 
Leela : Aur haa….Sarna family is also going to come….to tu aab bore nahi hogi party me…. Kunj rahega tere saath laadne ke liye… (So, you won’t get bored also. Kunj would be there to fight with you.)
(On hearing this Twinkle was shocked.) 

Twinkle thinks , “What??…aab yeh cartoon bhi rahega party me….kyu babaji kyu…maine aapka kya bigada tha….aap chahe to mai Himalaya jaa ke sanyas le leti hu…par please iss Kunj to door he rakhna.” (What? Now, this cartoon will also be there. Why, Babaji why? What have I done to you? If you want I’ll go to Himalayas and meditate but, please keep this Kunj away from me.)
(After cursing her fate…she proceeded to change.)

Twinkle : Yeh wala pehnu ya yeh….no no yeh nahi….this one is very expensive…. Aur vaise bhi thode he na waha Prince Charles aane wala h ki mai aache se jaau….ghoom phir ke uss cartoon ke he shakal dekhne hogi ….haa yeh wala theek h. (What should I wear? This one or this one? No, this is too expensive. Anyways, Prince Charles is not going to come there that I shall dress up nicely. I’ve to meet that cartoon only. This one would be fine.) 

Saying this she took a chocolate brown coloured gown with a bit of shiny beads around the neck….her hairs were left open…n eyes had a smoky shade which made her look hot.

(Tanejas left for the venue.)

Whole time twinkle was sitting ideal….busy in her phone…. Leela tried calling her but she didn’t pay heed as her sole concentration was on her phone. Suddenly someone gave a pat on her her shoulder n sat next to her. 

Kunj : Hey Duckling!
 
(Twinkle saw him from the corner of her eyes n ignores)
 
Kunj : (pouts) That’s not fair….tu ek candy crush ke chakkar me mujhe ignore kar rahi jab ki tera crush samne baitha hai. (That’s not fair. Only for candy crush you’re ignoring me whereas your crush is just in front of you.)

(Twinkle narrowed her gaze.)
 
Twinkle : Aur issi crush ko mai aisa crush karungi ki aage se bakwas karna he bhool jaiga.
(And, I’ll crush this crush so much that from the next he’ll not talk nonsense.)

Kunj : Useless kahi ki…aabhi bhi baccho ke jaise candy crush khelti h. (Useless! You still play Candy Crush like children.)

Twinkle : Oye bina internet pack ke iPhone… Tune mujhe baccha bola??…teri toh. (Hey, iPhone without data plan! You called me a kid! You!!)

Saying this she started getting up to punch him but Leela interrupted her. She stopped both of them from arguing more and said, “Twinkle and Kunj, you both are the only ones left out here. Go to the dance floor and have fun.” “No way”, said Twinkle and Kunj together. After requesting for a long time, Twinkle and Kunj agreed to go to the dance floor and dance together. Both of them angrily glared at each other and walked towards the dance floor.

(On the way to the dance floor)

Kunj: Tum toh bohot khush hui hogi na? After all, tumhe itna handsome partner jo Mila hai. (You must be very happy right? After all, you got such a handsome partner to dance with.)

Twinkle: (letting out a faint laugh) Kaun handsome? (Who’s handsome?)

Kunj: Ofcourse it’s me.
(Says Kunj and lifts up hi collar.)

Twinkle: Tum aur handsome! Apne aap ko kya Robert Pattinson samajhte ho? (You and handsome! Do you think you’re Robert Pattinson?)

Kunj: Oye sun, tu koi Emma Watson nahi hai jo tere liye Hollywood ke actors aayenge. Tere liye main bhi bohot zyada hoon. (Listen, you aren’t Emma Watson that Hollywood actors will come for you. I’m also like an award for you.)

Twinkle: Woh toh maa ne force kiya varna tum jaise cartoon ke saath kaun aaye! (Maa forced or else, who’ll come with a cartoon like you!)

Kunj: Woh teri tarah ducks hi aayenge.
(Ducks like you only will come.)

Twinkle and Kunj looked at each other angrily and pointing fingers at each other said, “You!” They clenched their fists and said, “Whatever! It’s waste talking to you.”

They walked on to the dance floor while the DJ played the song “Itni Si Baat Hai” (From Azhar). Kunj held Twinkle by her waist while Twinkle wrapped her arms around his neck.

Kunj: Dekh tere liye hi gaana baj raha hai. (See, this song is for you.)

Twinkle: Flirt mat karo mere saath. Mere paas jootha hai. (Don’t flirt with me. I’ve my heels with me.)

Kunj: (letting out a faint laugh) Flirt aur woh bhi tere saath! Sapne mein bhi nahi. Main toh bas ye bol raha tha ki tu itna bhi nahi samajhti ki tu duck ki tarah dikhti hai. (Flirt! And that too with you! Not even in my dreams. I was just saying that you don’t even understand that you look like a duck.)

Twinkle: Dekho tum na.. (You!)
(She says and stamps upon his foot.)

Kunj: Ouch!
(Exclaims Kunj and lifts his leg up while Twinkle walks away.)

Twinkle was sitting and having ice-cream when Mahi came and sat behind her. “What happened? Aise ice-cream kyun thus rahi hain? (Why are you sitting and gulping ice-cream like this?)”, asked Mahi. “Tera kuch bigada maine? Nahi na toh chup baith (Did I spoil anything for you? No right! Sit quietly then”, replied Twinkle. “Arey?”, said Mahi and ate a spoonful of ice-cream from her. “Mahi!!”, screamed Twinkle. “Ab kya? (Now, what)”, asked Mahi. “Have this and eat the entire thing”, said Twinkle and walked away. “Ab isse kya hua? (Now, what happened to her?)”, asked Mahi gulping in another spoonful of ice-cream.

Twinkle was walking towards Leela when suddenly she bumped into Kunj. She was about to fall down but, Kunj held her. They had a short eyelock but, soon Twinkle broke it and stood up.

Twinkle: Can’t you see and walk?

Kunj: Acha hai! Dekh ke tu nahi chalti aur mujhe bol rahi hai. And, vaise bhi tujhe toh gira dena chahiye tha mujhe. Woh toh meri bhalai hai ki maine tujhe sambhal liya. (Wow! You can’t see and walk and you’re shouting on me. I should’ve let you fall down. But, it was my goodness that I balanced you.)

Twinkle: Haan, toh koi aisaan nahi kiya hai. Anyways, main tum se baat kar ke kyun time waste kar rahi hoon? Hato yahan se. (You haven’t done any favour on me. Anyways, why am I talking to you and wasting my time? Move away.)

Kunj: Main kyun hatoo? Tujhe jaana hai toh tu khud chal ke jaa yahan se. (Why should I move? If you want to go then, walk and go.)

Twinkle: Disgusting!
(Says Twinkle and walked over to Leela.)

Kunj: (murmurs) Isse tang karne ka maza hi alag hai. Ouch! My leg! (It’s fun to tease her. Ouch! My leg!)

Tanejas and Sarnas stayed in the part for a while and later, went back to their homes.

**********

Hey all! So, as promised Shatakshi, the author of “So A Lion Fell In Love With A Lamb (Season 2)” and Ria, the author of “Is everything really so perfect as it seems to be?” are back with the first episode of this fan fiction.

Thank you for your immense support and also, for all your comments on our prologue. We tried replying to each one’s comments. Sorry if we missed out on any one of you.

Anyways, did you all like the first episode? Do drop down your comments below. We’d be eagerly waiting to read them out. Criticism is always welcome but, no ill language.

We’ll be uploading the second episode the next Saturday, 24 September. Do stay tuned.

Love you all loads! Take Care. Bye!?

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    45 Comments

    1. Fan on September 17, 2016 4:29 am

      Super epi guys!!!!…i loved it..i cant wait to read the next part..

      • ShatakshiRia on September 18, 2016 5:21 pm

        Thank you so much! We’ll be back with the next episode the next Saturday, the 24th. Do stay tuned.

        Loads of love.?
        ~ Ria

    2. RiaA MendeZz on September 17, 2016 6:54 am

      Thank god you guys updated..it felt like forever… I’m so excited abt where this fanfiction is heading.
      Twinkle and kunj?super cute together.
      Update soon because I’m seriously anxious
      N shatakshi, I haven’t commented on your ff for a long time since I lost track and missed reading a few episodes so it kinda confused me alittle. But but but, I’m still a fan of urz no matter what n thtll never change.
      Ria? Love you loads and loadsssssss….

      • ShatakshiRia on September 18, 2016 5:24 pm

        Hey RiaA,
        Thank you so much! It really means a lot to us when you say that you were waiting for it.? Frankly speaking, even we don’t know where it’s heading?. Anyways, thank you so much for the comment. We’re glad you liked it.

        Love you loads too.?
        ~ Ria

    3. Ayu on September 17, 2016 7:58 am

      Hehe! The dialogues were???
      I loved the tashan between them!!! Amazing epi!!! Pls cont sooooooon??

      • ShatakshiRia on September 18, 2016 5:25 pm

        Hey Ayu,
        Thank you so much dear! We’re glad you liked it. We’ll be back with the next episode the coming Saturday. Do stay tuned.

        Loads of love.?
        ~ Ria

    4. Monica on September 17, 2016 8:40 am

      Hey you two ?,
      I loved it throughly. The fights between kunj and twinkle were just amazing! I was laughing the whole time. Anyway, will surely be waiting for the next episode. Love you guys ?

      • ShatakshiRia on September 18, 2016 5:28 pm

        Hey Monica,
        Thank you so much dear! We both are glad that you liked it. We’ll come back soon. Saty tuned.

        Loads of love.?
        ~ Ria

    5. Meeta on September 17, 2016 9:05 am

      Whoa.
      Awesomeness ki height.
      I pakka wala decided I would just read par phir you both would be angry, no?
      Actually I have Science examination n I don’t like Science TOO much.
      But still, M aadat SE majboor.
      Only 2 Chappies I have done n Monday is exam.
      Only God can help me now.

    6. sujina on September 17, 2016 11:35 am

      n dialouges were too good…
      post ur previous ff too…love u

    7. sujina on September 17, 2016 11:37 am

      Cried a lot….
      .
      .
      .
      .
      .
      shock laga….bt yes by laughing all while my eyes are full of tears…
      n u knw i was given a tag pshyco coz i was laughing like mad…
      omeeee…..shattu n riu…u r comedy queens..
      bina intrnt ke i4ne,duckling,cartoon,ommmg i was laughing really koi itba toh comedy film dekh kar bhi nahi hasti…
      u made my day…love u both
      their tashan remind me of old tei bt dis 1 is more updated 1 love u both 2 d infinity n beyond

    8. Lovely on September 17, 2016 11:57 am

      Diiiiiiiss…you both have done as awesome job yaar…I am loving the arguments..
      Ek request heh..plz Love ane par bhi arguments band mat Karna…
      ?????
      ?????

      Your ff is a proper exam stress reliever for me

    9. shreya098 on September 17, 2016 12:48 pm

      Superb ….
      U guys are awesome..
      Enjoyed every bit of it….
      Continue soon

    10. TwinjSidMin on September 17, 2016 1:10 pm

      Shatz and Ria what an amazing ??????and hilarious ?????episode…I was laughing like mad…superb nicknames cartoon and duckling ???? love this ff also to the core like your other ffs…can’t wait till Saturday…Shatz and Ria try to post your other ffs soon…plzzzzzz…

      Love you both??

    11. Ayeshakhanum11 on September 17, 2016 1:46 pm

      amazing awsome fabulous mind blowing episode wll be waiting pls continue soon

    12. modeste on September 17, 2016 2:00 pm

      just superb

    13. Laddoo on September 17, 2016 2:02 pm

      ?????
      Post soon. I wanna laugh like this only.
      U two nailed it.
      Love u both?

    14. S.Z.F.Z on September 17, 2016 2:36 pm

      Lol! It was so funny! Twinkle and Kunj were fighting like kids…Loving this FF from the start only 🙂 Good going 🙂 Keep it up 🙂

      Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂
      Love u both!

      -Zuha

    15. SidVee on September 17, 2016 2:36 pm

      Hilarious ??? n superb epi.. loved their Nok jhoks??.. was laughing soo much.. duckling n cartoon.. nice names??.. do cont soon ?

    16. loveleen on September 17, 2016 3:27 pm

      tht ws superb….best strt a ff can hv….both of u r awesm…this combo is fantastic….awesm dialogues hilarious names..

    17. Sana(sanu) on September 17, 2016 4:39 pm

      Awesome:*:*:*

    18. SIDMIN-daamini on September 17, 2016 6:02 pm

      Omg guys ….u really nailed it …….. it was so Tashan wala episode ………mazaa hi aagaya………n kunj was so adorable yaar …………Tumne toh confuse hi kr diya hai Mujhe……….meri confusion jaanni hai toh next episode jaldi post karo …..kyunki meri confusion hai ki next episode kaisa hoga n as usual jaise mere exams chal rahe hain toh I don’t want to wait so plzzzz clear my confusion ???n post next one soon …….love u yaar ……my shatz n ria darlos ?????

    19. dreamer..arundhati on September 17, 2016 8:10 pm

      Sattu si and riu e na chol be….omg mai has has ke….ha.ha
      Superb 1

    20. Romaisha on September 17, 2016 8:35 pm

      ???? Hilarious!!! Funnyyyy?????
      Tooooo good like seriously !! ❤❤❤❤❤
      And yes I’m 100% sure it was shatakshi di’s idea if Emma Watson part ????❤❤❤

      Like u two are damn awesome!! Can’t wait on Saturday!
      Love you both ❤

      • ShatakshiRia on September 18, 2016 5:29 pm

        Hey Romaisha,
        Thank you so much! We’re glad you liked it and found it funny.
        Well, to be frank the Emma Watson idea was mine.? Never mind though.

        Loads of love.?
        ~ Ria

      • Romaisha on September 18, 2016 5:43 pm

        Serious?? Omg! I’m extremely sorry yaar! ? God im embarrassed now *pouts* sorry ria di ??

      • ShatakshiRia on September 18, 2016 5:59 pm

        Romaisha, sorry bola na toh!!!? It’s okay yaar.

      • ShatakshiRia on September 18, 2016 6:53 pm

        Hey Romu
        Shatakshi her
        Ahaaa wrong guess??
        And now I give u a challenge ??
        Ok ok I will give ek easy wala
        U just have to guess which past is written by ne n which part by Ria….ok??
        N today’s first past was by me….I mean the start of the party….???
        Better luck next time??

        ~Shatakshi

    21. Sidhanshi on September 17, 2016 9:25 pm

      Awesome episode…. Loved it…

      • ShatakshiRia on September 18, 2016 6:00 pm

        Thank you so much Sidhanshi! We’re glad you liked it.

        Loads of love.?
        ~ Ria

    22. rashiverma2199 on September 17, 2016 10:50 pm

      Awesome episode it was….amazing… Glad to read this….iPhone waali line was superb…..amazing work… Good job…

      • ShatakshiRia on September 18, 2016 6:02 pm

        Hey Rashi,
        Thank you so much! We’re glad that you liked the first episode. We’ll be back soon. Do stay tuned.

        Loads of love.?
        ~ Ria

      • ShatakshiRia on September 18, 2016 6:50 pm

        Hey Rashi
        Shatakshi her
        Actually its my real life dialogue??
        Aaj kal iPhone ka zamana h na so I usually call my useless bestie the same??
        Glad to know that you liked it

        ~ Shatakshi

    23. SidMin on September 17, 2016 11:02 pm

      Loved it and the story their fights and talks Twinkle’s Quality time with Leela Loved them all Post soon 🙂
      Your pair is awesome Love both of you 🙂

      • ShatakshiRia on September 18, 2016 6:06 pm

        Hey Sidmin,
        Thank you so much dear! We’re glad you liked it. We’ll be back soon. Do stay tuned.

        Loads of love.?
        ~ Ria

    24. kruti on September 17, 2016 11:47 pm

      “Oye bina internet pack ke iPhone”…..this was epic????????
      Ria tumhe bola tha na mood nahi hai
      I swear ye padhke mera mood na ek dum se theek ho gaya……I read it twice and I am laughing under my blanket like a typical mad person
      Dialouges ka toh kya kehna…..lajawab
      Vo kehte hain na ek se bhale do……so do logon ki wajah se double mazza aaraha hai
      U guys just nailed d epi with d dialogues…..Loved it

      Ek hafta wait karna padhega mujhe????….jaldi post karo guys wait nahi ho raha

      Loads of Love???

      • ShatakshiRia on September 18, 2016 6:57 pm

        Awww kruti
        We are so happy that it was loved by u???
        N that iPhone wala part….I too found it hilarious
        But u know its one of my common duologues which I say to my useless friends??
        Lot more to go….so stay tuned

        Love u

        ~Shatakshi

    25. Suni on September 18, 2016 3:01 am

      Superb epi!!! ????
      Loved it!??
      Dialouges were awesome ?????

      • ShatakshiRia on September 18, 2016 6:03 pm

        Hey Suni,
        Thank you so much dear! We’re glad that you liked the episode. We’ll be back soon. Do stay tuned.

        Loads of love.?
        ~ Ria

    26. tara on September 18, 2016 10:04 am

      sorry for late comment.. 🙁
      but..
      ???? hahahahaha…
      i dont think i have to say much..
      u guys nailed it…
      ria and gullu..
      love u guys…
      muahh
      waiting for the next one..

    27. Maggi on September 18, 2016 12:34 pm

      Awsm…..sry guys cudnt comment on d prologue….u both r dng a fabulous job yaar…..keep it up…luvd d dialogues….der fights very so cute jzz lyk u both???
      Loads of luv??????

    28. thanmy on September 18, 2016 5:44 pm

      U both i mean tum dono ke ff pe hi comment karna mushkil hai i mean words doond ne ke liye aur abb ek saath likhoge toh mei kya karu dekho mujhe comment karne ke liye words nahi haii toh agli baar jab mera comment nahi dekhe toh samaj lene kii jo samaj naa hai anyways RIAKSHI tum dono ka naya naam hope u dont mind and yah its likw beyond all the wonderful words isse zyada kuch nahi kah sakti byeeeeee

    29. baby on September 20, 2016 2:11 pm

      shatakshi n ria i didnt liked d episode
      bt vhi purana wala i luvd it……….
      yr i was laughing lyk a maniac sch me very cute n funny
      yr u both r fabulous i m speechless…………
      luvd it 2 d core nhio nhi eternity or infinity bhi or han han
      moon n back or death n back bhi ab or kya khun
      bas samj jao dono behno kitna pasand aaya muje……..
      post nxt soon…………..

    30. sanjanaagrawal on September 28, 2016 7:58 pm

      Awesome yarr. .

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