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Home»Fan Fiction»LOVE AJ KAL (OS) – SHOT 2
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LOVE AJ KAL (OS) – SHOT 2

AthiraBy AthiraFebruary 12, 201742 Comments8 Mins Read
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hi guys… sorry for late I’m not athira… its new because of some problems she stopped writing… I ask forgive behalf of her… I forgot to introduce myself… my name is LOSHINI….

scene 1
the shot starts with next day, Laksh got out of his car and comes to Gayathri house with a very big bags full of things that listed out by ragini…
he rings the calling bell and Gayathri comes…
Gayathri : who are you?
Laksh : Laksh…
Gayathri : oh laksh…
she takes the bags and all from Laksh and walks inside..
Laksh : aunty?
Gayathri : wait..
Gayathri comes out of the house to laksh with a little paper.. she gives it to him…
laksh : thank you…

Gayathri : hmm, these generations boys are..
Gayathri shook her head and goes in… Laksh walks away with a smile…

scene 2,
it’s night, ragini, kaavya and the girl, who took ragini here named sakshi is in corridor… kaavya is using her phone and also sakshi and ragini…
Laksh is seen in his house wondering in bed.. he gets a call from his dad dp, who’s friendly with…
laksh : hello, dad…
DP : hi, Laksh… did the girl message?
Laksh : no, dad… I’m also waiting for her…
DP : what’s this? you don’t know how to make a girl fall..
Laksh : hmm.
Dp : hmm, tomorrow you’re leave?
Laksh : yes.
Dp : then, come to house I’ll say…
suddenly Laksh gets a message from ragini.. Laksh takes a look and gets glad…
laksh : okay, dad.. bye, I’ll hang… she messaged.
laksh hung the phone down and messaged her back… ragini messaged back… Laksh gets happy and danced on his bed…
ragini switched off the phone… kaavya and sakshi looked at her..
kaavya : he’s pity…

Ragini : what’s there to feel pity? I’m doing it for checl his capabilities…
sakshi : hey, kaavya.. she’s right… you know she has a group for these…
kaavya : what are you saying?
sakshi : yes… listen to her..

they both looked at ragini… ragini looked at them…
ragini : yes… if we chat with them daily then they’ll take advantage… so we must have a limit…. and we’re going to live with a man minimum 60 years… so we should check on him…then only there will be no problem.. and I’m already decided… I’ve been checking on five persons from facebook… rajeev, atharv, laksh, ajay, akhil… in that all are innocent so I left it with god… I planned whom I first met is the person… so I met laksh..
ragini talks bluntly and fast.. kaavya smiles…

kaavya : okay, then add me in your group…
ragini : why? you have a man already right?
kaavya : shit.. he’s waste… he ask me like eat edy or sleep edy… I’m irritated…
ragini : oye..
ragini and sakshi, kaavya laughed together…
kaavya : so what’s he going to do next in your instincts..?
ragini : my instincts says, tomorrow he’ll be waiting for me at college..
ragini layed on sofa smiling…

scene 3,
it’s next day, Laksh is in his car wearing a white shirt and a cool glass…he’s looking restless and waiting outside of the college… ragini comes out with some of her assignment stuffs and wearing a red Punjab suit… she laughs but controlled it..
Laksh saw her and looked down… ragini crossed the road… Laksh takes his phone and acts like talking to someone… ragini comes to him and takes his video in her mobile…
Laksh saw it and got shocked… ragini ran away after taking video of him… laksh got out of his car…
Laksh : hey… ragini…

but it’s too late… ragini gets int car and drives away…
its in home, Gayathri, kaavya and ragini is kitchen.. Gayathri is cooking… ragini shows her the video.. Gayathri smiles…
Gayathri : I think it’s enough…
ragini : leave it, Gayathri… I’ll take care of it…

it’s after one week in night, ragini is staying in her college with her friend for a assignment… while doing it…
ragini : I’m hungry…
friend : where would we go for dinner in this time?
ragini : hmmmm, I’m hungry… I’m hungry…
friend : Ragini…
ragini thinks awhile and get a idea…
ragini : you know what, our hungry will be over in a few minutes…
friend : what?
ragini : wait and watch..
laksh is shown is waiting outside of college with a little bag of some foods…
ragini : are you reached college… come to E section…
laksh : okay…
Laksh hung The phone and switched off the car engine..
Laksh (thinking): how did she know I’m here?
Laksh reached the working place of ragini… he gets in… friend ses him…
friend : he’s here…

ragini : okay… act like working…
friend : but we’ve already working…
ragini : okay…
ragini and her friend start to work and busily… Laksh comes to her..
Laksh : ragini..
ragini looked at him…

ragini : hmm.
she takes the food from him… Laksh looked on and sat in a chair a little far from ragini… he’s looking at her… ragini doing her job…
ragini : did he seeing me?
friend : yes…
ragini nodded… Laksh waited and sends a message to her… ragini take her phone and reads the message and smile… ragini sends a reply… Laksh reads it and smiles…
Laksh : how beautiful she…
ragini looked at him….Laksh nods his head and smiles… he gets a call from angad..
Laksh : hello…
angad sounds very restless..
angad : deyh, yaar… come fast to me… I’m going to die… I can’t live, I’m suffocating… please come…
Laksh :(irritated) hey, what?

angad : I have a full.. come, let’s drink…
Laksh : shut up and put down your phone ..
Laksh hung the phone and stared at ragini… ragini looked at him…
ragini : come..
ragini waved at him.. Laksh gets to his feet and goes to her…
ragini : help me to paste it…
laksh : okay…
Laksh takes a chair and goes to sit between and and her friend but ragini stopped him…
ragini : not here, there…
ragini shows a place opposite to them… Laksh sat down and looked at them… ragini and her friend exchange a little glare and smile…

Laksh is in his home with his dad and angad.. Dp is cooking vadai… (a Indian snacks)…
Dp : its crow’s fault…
Angad : no, dad… it’s the granny’s fault… who told her to put shop outside…
Dp : deyh, all will put shops out…
angad : oh yeah, but it’s granny’s fault…
Dp : if you say anything then…
angad : what’s this? it’s granny’s fault… it’s her responsibility to safe her vadai… a crow is flying around her… without any guarantees how can she?
angad breathd heavily… dp came to him…
Dp : stop it… or I’ll smach you with oil…
angad : oh… you have no idea so that’s why threaten me.. its granny..
Dp : its crow…
they argues over… Laksh in depression comes to them…
laksh : stop it..
Laksh took the plate of vadai and closed his door… angad and Dp looked at him..
Angad : I think where is the wolf and he’s the on…
Dp : shut up.. give me vadai ,Laksh…

DP and angad goes to the door and knocked…
angad : leave it,dad…we’ll make few…
Dp : we ran out of flour. .
angad : what? dey, Laksh… please hand over the vadai…
angad knocked and pleased… Laksh answers his plea and opened the door…
Laksh : how dare she? I’ll nit call her anymore…
suddenly, Laksh got a calk from ragini and gets glad…
Dp : answer her call.
Laksh : yes…
laksh again closed the door… angad looked on…
angad : why, dad? atleast you take the vadai from him…
angad looked sad and layed his head over the door… DP laughs at him…

Laksh takes the call and with a happy…
Laksh : hello…
ragini is in her corridor wearing a yellow skirt and a sleeveless dress..
ragini : pack some dress…
Laksh : where are we going?
ragini : I’m going to kolkata to meet my dad… so, I just thought to get you there with me. .
Laksh : oh, okay… I’ll be ready before…
ragini : hey, no… just get ready before 6.30 am…
Laksh : okay..
ragini : hmmm…
ragini hang the phone down and smiles…. Laksh is so much happy and danced in bed…

PRECAP : THEY REACHED KOLKATA…

Shot 1 link….
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bye, guys..

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    42 Comments

    1. Sindhura on February 12, 2017 6:31 am

      Is ger testing him wont go wrong when he comes to knew truth

      • Athira on February 12, 2017 7:23 pm

        don’t worry, dear… it’s not that type of story when knowing the thruth, he’ll leave her… it’s all known by Laksh… and it’s not using but checking…

      • Sindhura on February 12, 2017 8:18 pm

        Ok happy now

    2. Fairy on February 12, 2017 7:07 am

      Fantastic update dr….soooooperrrrrbbbbb?keeep rockng n stay blesssed

      • Athira on February 12, 2017 7:27 pm

        thank you, sis

    3. IQRA222 on February 12, 2017 7:53 am

      Awesome is ragini using laksh

      • Athira on February 12, 2017 7:28 pm

        no…. just checking

    4. lovely on February 12, 2017 8:02 am

      Aww amazing
      Missing athira sis
      Convey my message dear

      • Athira on February 12, 2017 7:29 pm

        okay, dear

    5. Ashnoor on February 12, 2017 8:07 am

      Amazing

      • Athira on February 12, 2017 8:02 pm

        thank you, dear

    6. a on February 12, 2017 8:57 am

      Awesome

      • Athira on February 12, 2017 10:43 pm

        thank you, dear

    7. Mintu on February 12, 2017 9:11 am

      Interesting… Poor laksh

      • Athira on February 12, 2017 10:43 pm

        don’t worry, dear…

    8. saranya on February 12, 2017 10:12 am

      Awesome
      but is ragini s using laksh

      • Athira on February 12, 2017 10:44 pm

        no, just checking

    9. nikky on February 12, 2017 11:07 am

      plzz give raglak moment plzzz next part soon don’t be late plzz be regular

    10. nikky on February 12, 2017 11:08 am

      what to do crazy fan Temish and hurt with partiality of CVS who didn’t give full rights of tejesswi who played character grey shade so awesome that now many famous actresses playing passionate lover role see Jennifer so For me real reason of swaragini popularity is different story of raglak not swasan which is common in all show but raglak no show have such story like the way rag turned shy girl to passionate lover and than dokha the main difference of swaragini popularity is tejesswi acting and then when ragini get his love than CVS did injustice with jabardasti Ka swasan track in raglak track like raglak unite so sudden and faltu swara memory loss lost the charm of swaragini
      raglak didnt get fan support what happened to raglak writer and their love bcoz now swasan ff is increaseing and raglak ff is one or two in no plzzzzzzz try to give more ff plzzzzz now its so less in number plzz try to write more bcoz now days raglak ff is decreasing as compare to swasan bcoz raglak ff os ss ts plzz give more and don’t stop in bcoz many writer are stop in middle and some end sudden plzzz guys prove that raglak fandom is not less plzz guys give some new one try to regular plzz give some new raglak ff and yaa plzz write more at least 100 episode bcoz many swasan ff reached 100 but none raglak ff reach plzz write more guys for raglak its a request by raglak fan

      • Athira on February 12, 2017 7:20 pm

        yeah, you’re right… after the showing swasan track only the show decreases its charm

    11. jazzy on February 12, 2017 11:10 am

      awesome

      • Athira on February 12, 2017 11:05 pm

        thank you, dear

    12. neina on February 12, 2017 1:19 pm

      amazing..but feeling bad 4 laksh

      • Athira on February 12, 2017 11:06 pm

        thank you, dear

    13. tëìtō kUn on February 12, 2017 3:15 pm

      Amazing….

      • Athira on February 12, 2017 11:07 pm

        thank you, dear

    14. asra on February 12, 2017 4:18 pm

      awesome dear…..loved it….tkcr dear….

      • Athira on February 12, 2017 11:09 pm

        thank you, dear

    15. Lisa on February 12, 2017 5:49 pm

      Don’t understand why shekhar and gayatri were calling ragu “ma” and ragu has list of 5 boys and she’s using all is she a bad person and y she’s making laksh work for her

      • Athira on February 12, 2017 7:18 pm

        if you want to know before I write then you must watch malaysian idian movie named geethaiyin raathai… don’t think she’s using him not loving… wait and watch dear…

    16. Arjuna on February 12, 2017 6:57 pm

      AWESOME

    17. Athira on February 12, 2017 7:49 pm

      thank you, sis

    18. Ammu on February 12, 2017 9:24 pm

      Interesting episode and waiting for next

    19. Athira on February 12, 2017 11:08 pm

      thank you, dear

    20. MEGHA on February 13, 2017 9:58 am

      interesting

      • Athira on February 13, 2017 11:14 pm

        thank you, dear

    21. Sherin on February 13, 2017 11:12 am

      superb

      • Athira on February 13, 2017 11:27 pm

        thank you, dear

    22. Pooja on February 13, 2017 4:37 pm

      Suprbbbb

      • Athira on February 13, 2017 11:29 pm

        thank you, dear

    23. A.xx on February 13, 2017 11:12 pm

      Aww cute and poor lucky xx

      • Athira on February 13, 2017 11:30 pm

        don’t worry, dear

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