Hii guys….I knw em too late bt can’t do anything I was struggling between my studies n day to day life….I know it has been more than 2 weeks n I have not posted….em really sorry for that….I wanted to post on 25 Feb but my schools got started n I don’t get tym….sorry for that….thnx for commenting on my previous posts….it really means a lot….n silent readers thnx for giving ua likes n dislikes….em really sorry ziya n anu di for not being able to comment on ua articles but I read them n pressed the like button….miya dea u wrote amazing….em eagerly waiting for the next part….welcome aayu dea….u have made me crazy by ua writing…..em eagerly waiting for the nxt part….n sorry for not commenting….now enough of my bak bak…..dimple bacha….ayat is sanchi..I have wrote that to assume sanchi as ayat….let me clear something I wanted to use ayat with kabir but u all wanted sanchis name there so em changing it….hope u will enjoy
A big room is shown….a boy is sleeping peacefully ? ????a woman wearing a sari came there n started to wake up the boy…
M:wake up kabir…it’s 10:30 n u r still sleeping…u knw ua dad if he will got to knw this he will b angry
K: oh God that Hitler…..
M:kabiiir he is ua father bacha…
K:father….huh…..enemy is better than him
M:Ok baba leave it now go n get ready
K:Ok mom…
At Hall…
S:uh gaye mahraja…aaye aap ka intezaar tha….now u r waking up its 11:00 clock…don’t b lazy kabir u r son of sunil raichand….nxt tym don’t b late
M:he was tired….yesterday he came late from office….that is why he slept for so long
S:its just mere an excuse nothing else….apne ladle se kehna ki aaj shaam party rakhi gayi hai aur uss mai riya aur uss k ghar wale b aarahe hai…..khabardaar jo iss ne phir se riya ka dil dukhaya….( tell ua son that today there is a party n riya n family is also coming n don’t he dare to do anything that will hurt her)
M:jii….kabir aisa kch nhii karega
Kabir was going to speak but her mom held his hand so he remained quite…..otherside a small house is shown…..n a young lady is shown shouting….
I: aapi kahan hai aap….abu kab se aap ko bula rahe hai(where are u aapi dad is calling u from so long)….a beautiful lady is shown watering the plants
S:aayi Iram….hamare liye ruk jaaye(em coming Iram wait for me)
I:aapi jaldi aav na(come fast aapi)
Both went inside the house…..an old man is shown talking with a young boy
S:abuji aap ne bulaya…(dad u called me)
A:Haa bacha wo parsuu hamne aapko kch kagazaat diye the na….wo aap aaqib ko de dijiye wo unhe abdul sahab ko dedenge(yes….before some days I have given u some papers….give them to aaqib he will give them to abdul)
S:jii abu….ham abi laate hai(Ok dad I will bring them)
A:bacha ham Masjid tak jaa rahe hai….wahi se maqbool sahab k yahan chale jaaye ge(em going to Masjid from there I will go to maqbool’s house)
S:jii abu….ham aapki saari nikal dete hai(Ok dad…I will bring ua sadri)…..guys sadri is an overcoat without sleeves which muslims wore on kameez shankar although my abu did’t wear this but my nani wears this on his kameez….
A:thk hai bacha…
To be continued……..
I knw it was short n too boring….sorry for that….I will soon come with an os…may b tomorrow if I didn’t went to school….guys from 12 of March I will b not posting anything as my xams are approaching…..pray for men wish me luck….soon I will come with a long update….stay tuned n don’t forget to give ya reviews…..I em writing in undulating as anee forced me….many of u don’t knw urdu so em writing the meaning in English……will cone soon till than bye….take care….luv ew all n niyu come with the nxt part of ua ff n sample u too…..luv ew all????
With luv
Sana?
13 Comments
nice dear..
Its amazing
Nice one Sana..and actually I also won’t be able to read coz my board is starting from 12th..but try to post more often and I’ll read them after my exams are over after 20th march..
wow sana finally you started i was waiting for it….thanks a lot dear…u know wat that muslims based story i have lot of in my mind…but i have not time to post these….even i wrote these stories in my journals….and from a long time i want to post one muslims based story on my fav kaanchi…but when u said that u have story in urdu language…then i couldn’t control myself i thought my wish you are going fulfill…don’t worry about dislikes….u think that u posted just only for me…I love that…..And I Love You…And waiting for next part.
Nice concept
Well written post the next part soon dear
Superb Sana.. All the best for your exams.. Even my board exams are starting this week… So will comment on your ff once my exams are over…
Sana it was really amazing
nice….All the best aag laga dena exam me!!!!………..take a chillpill and give your best……………
Awesome dear ….loved it….All the best for ur exams …My board exams are starting from tomorrow , I am not going to post anything tomorrow but I tried to post my fs very soon maybe between the exams….lots of love to u
superb
best of luck
post soon
Great going Sana ???. But focus on your studies and do your exams well!!???
It was amazing nd how can u call it boring it was not at all boring……nd first focus on ur studies??… sorry for late comment but I was busy with studies nd just reading all now……so just take care….luv u?
You know sana i am Eagerly waiting for this story dear……. finally you post this……iam really so so happy dear…….it’s really so so amazing and superb and interesting and outstanding starting dear…….. please yaar post soon na……..love u dear……tc yaar