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Home»Fan Fiction»Lovable Love…Short Story…. Raglak….(shot 1)
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Lovable Love…Short Story…. Raglak….(shot 1)

MI_MAHIBy MI_MAHIJanuary 12, 201740 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hii…guys this is Mahi…back with another story hope u will like this one too…this is specially for nikky who kept asking for more Raglak stories….. so let’s start….

Shot 1….

L?veble L?ve…??

ragini:-I can’t believe it! I mean I have called u about 20 times but u didn’t pick it up…i mean this is crazy…you don’t care about me….actually you don’t love me…I should hate u….?

For the hundredth or may be more….we were fighting….he is lucky by the way….

Lucky:-“just try to listen…I have my reasons….”

Rags:-“shut up….u always have ur reasons…u and ur perfect little world….I can’t believe u can’t spend 2 hours for me… it’s SHAHID’S movieeeee…..! Do you get that….??

Lucky:-“i know… i know…but let me tell u….”

She cutted him….in between…

Rags:-“I m not talking to u…u don’t love me…GOOD BYE…”

I cut my phone…have thrown on it on the bed…

I made my way refrigerator….i took out the bottle…and started drinking….stop….stop….stop…..don’t think anything else its water…….pure water…..nothing else…।।i m tired yrr after this much long argument….i need water….huh!!! Wese what u thought….?

There are only 3 men in my life….

No.1 and the best….my dad….I love him so much he is my hero…my dad is the BEST….?

No.2 My love…My life…My crush…everything….SHAHID….don’t tell me…u don’t know…. him THE SHAHID KAPOOR…. i love him so much…i love him very much…but not more than my dad….hmmm

And No.3 Laksh Maheshwari…. i don’t know even why i love him…but I love him…..but why..why..?? Don’t know…let it be…not any more….

Let’s continue now….. where i was….mmmm….ha yes i was drinking…………WATER….then…………

I drank half-a-bottle……I was shouting alot that day…..

I looked up from the bottle….to see my sister staring at me…. (oh forget to tell u about her…my sister “swara gadodia”, my friend…my soulmate….,knows everything about me….younger to me…)

Swara:-“fighting again…”she enquired….

Rags:-“this time….its final…I mean FINAL…” i quoted with my hands at the last word…

Swara:-“let me guess…!!! This would last for an hour…or….may be a minute more…”

Rags:-“not this time……,I m going to bed…”
I was going away when she said…

Swara:-“just remember that u r going to marry this guy in a month…and also that he has been doing everything….he can to make u happy for about…..what is you age???? Twenty one years….”

Butterflies filled my stomach…at the mention of marriage……
Other than that she was true…

He has been a very good friend since my birth…I mean from the time we had known each other….

But I wasn’t going to give in..this time…

I have grown tired of fighting with him….I was angry again….

Rags:-“that also means he had been irritating me to death for twenty years…

My sister didn’t react to that…so probably thought of talking to me in the morning….
I was packed up for the day…
So I sealed my thoughts….and made my way to bed….

…………………………………………………………………………………………………………..
To be continued…

A/N:-so guys how was the chappy????….do tell me…..hope u will like and support this one too…as u support “The Last Love” …sorry for mistakes… thanks for giving ur precious time and reading…. and tell shall i continue this or not….nxt update will be day after tomorrow….that is on 14th…tomorrow i will post “The Last Love”

I have already posted the last love chappy 3 but it is showing Swasan shot 4…but it is shot 3 of the last love…Raglak….those want to read here is the link:-

http://www.tellyupdates.com/last-love-shots-swasan-shot-4/

Thanks for giving ur precious time and reading it…keep reading…. be happy…stay blessed…bye…?

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    40 Comments

    1. Berdilla on January 12, 2017 10:57 am

      Awesome friend

      • MI_MAHI on January 12, 2017 10:27 pm

        Thank you…very much Berdilla…..glad to know that u liked it…it means alot…..keep reading… be happy…stay blessed.. tc….?

    2. tani on January 12, 2017 11:14 am

      Outstanding. …Super super awesome

      • MI_MAHI on January 12, 2017 10:31 pm

        Thank you…. Thank you…..Thank you…. tani…glad to know u liked it……keep reading and supporting dear….it means alot….be happy… stay blessed…. tc…?

    3. neina on January 12, 2017 11:18 am

      soo cute..love raglak

      • MI_MAHI on January 12, 2017 10:29 pm

        Thank you… very much…neina…..glad to know u liked it…..keep reading and supporting…. it means alot dear….be happy… stay blessed… tc….?

    4. Ammy on January 12, 2017 11:49 am

      superb dear

      • MI_MAHI on January 12, 2017 10:33 pm

        Thank you…very much Ammy…..it means alot dear…..keep reading…. be happy….stay blessed….. tc…?

    5. Asw on January 12, 2017 12:04 pm

      Nice keep going

      • MI_MAHI on January 12, 2017 11:19 pm

        Thank you… very much dear….glad to know u liked it…it means alot… keep reading… keep supporting dear……be happy…stay blessed… tc..?

    6. lovely on January 12, 2017 12:12 pm

      Nice

      • MI_MAHI on January 12, 2017 11:23 pm

        Thank you…very much lovely…..glad to know that u liked it…it means alot…..keep reading… be happy…stay blessed.. tc….?

    7. Arjuna on January 12, 2017 2:54 pm

      AWESOME

      • MI_MAHI on January 12, 2017 11:25 pm

        Thank you…very much ARJUNA…..glad to know that u liked it…it means alot…..keep reading… be happy…stay blessed.. tc….?

    8. IQRA222 on January 12, 2017 4:23 pm

      superb

      • MI_MAHI on January 12, 2017 11:26 pm

        Thank you…very much dear…..glad to know that u liked it…it means alot…..keep reading… be happy…stay blessed.. tc….?

    9. nikky on January 12, 2017 4:33 pm

      thanku u are to cute yaar love and I am hungry of swasan ff Mahi thanks and teju is aditiya kapoor fans I think u like shahid kapoor just kidding don’t mind it

      • MI_MAHI on January 12, 2017 11:32 pm

        Oopss…..sorry for the mistake….i didn’t know it….hope u don’t mind….and i like varun dhawan…hehe ?..
        Surely try to give Swasan ff….but after completing my 2 stories….
        Thanks for reading…. be happy… stay blessed…. tc…?

    10. nikky on January 12, 2017 4:33 pm

      yaar its awesome amazing superb mind blowing loved it its to good plzz continue writing don’t stop in middle and plzz be regular don’t be late bcoz now its only way we miss or connected to our raglak or temish and big wala thanks to all those writer but still we are lacking as raglak are decreasing day by day as compare to swasan plzz try to give more ff ts os ss and most important plz be regular its a request of crazy raglak aka temish fan hope its full fill by another raglak or temish fan

    11. saranya on January 12, 2017 4:46 pm

      amazing

      • MI_MAHI on January 12, 2017 11:34 pm

        Thank you…very much saranya…..glad to know that u liked it…it means alot…..keep reading…keep supporting…. be happy…stay blessed.. tc….?

    12. Jessica on January 12, 2017 4:47 pm

      brilliant

      • MI_MAHI on January 12, 2017 11:35 pm

        Thank you…very much Jessica…..glad to know that u liked it…it means alot…..keep reading… keep supporting…be happy…stay blessed.. tc….?

    13. j on January 12, 2017 7:19 pm

      awesome

      • MI_MAHI on January 12, 2017 11:36 pm

        Thank you…very much lovely…..glad to know that u liked it…it means alot…..keep reading… keep supporting….be happy…stay blessed.. tc….?

    14. Mintu on January 12, 2017 7:48 pm

      Superb dear

    15. asra on January 12, 2017 7:50 pm

      awesome dear…..

      • MI_MAHI on January 12, 2017 11:38 pm

        Thank you…very much lovely…..glad to know that u liked it…it means alot…..keep reading… keep supporting….be happy…stay blessed.. tc…?…

      • MI_MAHI on January 12, 2017 11:44 pm

        Thank you….thank you …alot…Asra.keep supporting me like this…..it really means alot….hope ur liking this story as well…keep reading dear……be happy…stay blessed… tc…?

    16. Ragz_teju on January 12, 2017 7:51 pm

      awesome loved it

      • MI_MAHI on January 12, 2017 11:39 pm

        Thank you…very much lovely…..glad to know that u liked it…it means alot…..keep reading…keep supporting… be happy…stay blessed.. tc….?

      • MI_MAHI on January 12, 2017 11:39 pm

        Thank you…very much Ragz…..glad to know that u liked it…it means alot…..keep reading…keep supporting… be happy…stay blessed.. tc….?

    17. Mintu on January 12, 2017 7:55 pm

      Superb dear.. Plss write raglak os dear

      • MI_MAHI on January 12, 2017 11:54 pm

        Thank u….very much Minto….glad to know u liked it…..and about raglak os…..will surely give it…but u have to wait dear..sorry for that..will try to give ASAP….thanks for reading…. be happy… stay blessed… tc….?

    18. Ammu on January 12, 2017 9:43 pm

      Awesome episode

      • MI_MAHI on January 12, 2017 11:56 pm

        Thank you…very much Ammu dear….glad to know that u liked it…it means alot…..keep reading… be happy…stay blessed.. tc….?

    19. A.xx on January 13, 2017 6:05 am

      nice xx

    20. Raglakholic on January 13, 2017 10:16 am

      Totally amazing one
      Loved it so much
      Hehehehe loved d way ragini is acting
      Nd fighting with laksh for shahid
      Nd thanq so much for this raglak work
      Eagerly waiting to read more
      Please do continue soon

    21. jazzy on January 13, 2017 6:19 pm

      amazing

    22. hemalattha on January 14, 2017 11:18 am

      Ragini fought with laksh just for shahid kapoor. Nice.

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