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Lose of one key and raining of sky turned into love-riansh os by attractiveuser

AttractiveuserBy AttractiveuserJune 25, 2021Updated:June 26, 202175 Comments6 Mins Read
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A random one..udte udte idea aayaπŸ˜œπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚.

Let’s start:

A girl in her mid twenties is seen shopping for some products in a shopping mall. She was wearing light blue jeans and a pink crop top. She had left her hair open which were coming in her eyes. Her red lipstick adorned lips turned into a smile seeing Cadbury Dairy milk chocolate. She grabbed five of them and kept in her trolley. As she walks her white shoes cover with dust. Her face is visible and she is none other than Riddhima. She bought some more products and go for billing. After purchasing she goes out and starts walking to her home. Suddenly weather starts changing. Clouds cover up the sky. Sun disappears behind the clouds. It could rain anytime. Riddhima starts to run and she was running aimlessly and bumps into a hard,tall figure. She looks up to see and see a handsome man wearing a black tuxedo suit. He was looking at her.

Riddhima: sorry!

Man:it’s ok! Can you offer me a help!

Riddhima: but who are you??

Man: I am vansh rai Singhania!

Riddhima: oh I see! Tell me what do you need.

Vansh: it can rain anytime. I have came from Mumbai and don’t have a home here. I have not took my car with me and I can’t reach hotel in this weather. So can you please take me to your home.

Riddhima was bit hesitant but agreed. They both walk and reach Riddhima’s house.

Riddhima: let me find the keys.

She checks her purse but the keys weren’t there. She checked her all bags but the keys weren’t there.

Vansh: keys..

Riddhima: oh god!! Have I lost them.

Something strikes her.

Riddhima (shock): oh no!! I gave keys to my bestfriend Sejal because she came here.

She calls Sejal and Sejal tells that she couldn’t come now because she is out of the city for an urgent work.

Riddhima: we can’t go inside. I am sorry I couldn’t help you.

Vansh: it’s ok! Let’s sit in your garden.

Riddhima nods. He helps her to keep the stuff she bought under the roof. They both sit under the garden roof. After few minutes it starts to rain.

Vansh: it’s raining heavily. I don’t think it will stop soon.

Riddhima: right but we have to spend the day here only in garden.

Vansh: no problem.

They both smile. Riddhima was watching every drop of rain and adoring it while someone was adoring. Yes he was vansh. Some voices started coming from their stomachs and they both start laughing.

Riddhima: wait I have purchased something.

She takes out chocolates from her bag and gives half to him.

Riddhima: I don’t like sharing my chocolates with anyone. You are the first one.

Vansh: I am very lucky then(smile)

They both start eating. Riddhima gets up and starts to dance in rain. Vansh was just adoring her.

Oh re piya main to tere layi
Sau raatan jagun
Jithe jaave tu
Othe jaave dil
Dass ki main karun

Jo tu russ jaani ae
Dil yeh tutt janiye
Tere sang sang raah
Saari kat jaani ae

Main taan tere naal rehna
Maan enna mera kehna
Meri akhiyon se hona kadi door na
Tere bin, tere bin

Tere bin nai lagda dil mera dholna
Tere bin nai lagda dil mera dholna
Sab chadd jayein tu na mainu chhodna
Tere bin nai lagda dil mera dholna

Nai lagda, nai lgda, nai lagda
Ho nai lagda, nai lgda, nai lagda

Tere sang sang reh ke
Main rang jaaun tere rang
Teri neend se khwaab main apna jod loon
Tu sath na ho to chaar kadam na chal paaun
Teri raah pe raah main apni mod loon

Ho jag bhull jaaye mujhe
Tum nahi bhoolna
Tere sang jeena mera
Tere sang dhalna
Sacchi chahaton ka hota koyi mol na
Tere bin, tere bin

Suddenly Riddhima starts sneezing and gets under the roof. She was sneezing continuasly so vansh removed his blazer and made Riddhima wear it. She smiled at him.

Riddhima: thankyou.

Vansh: you are mad..who told you to dance in heavy rain. See you caught cold.

Riddhima: I love to dance in rain and then I catch cold.

He just moves his head from left to right. She sees that he was feeling cold as he was rubbing his hands on his arms. She made him sit and put the blazer on both of them. He looked at her and they both shared an eyelock.

Riddhima: let’s know more about each other.

Vansh: seems like you are interested in me.

Riddhima: it’s better to talk instead of sitting like this.

Vansh: ok start!

Riddhima: are you single or committed.

Vansh: single! Ready to mingle with someone (winking at her)

Riddhima (diverting the topic): favourite colour.

Vansh: white.

They both talk to each other and forget the flow of time. The sky was darker and darker. They both have created a good bond. Riddhima called Sejal again and she said that she would be reaching in half an hour. Both of them were hungry now. Riddhima opened her bag to find some eatables. She found a packet of Maggie.

Vansh: there is no fire here.

Riddhima: idiot don’t you eat raw Maggie. I love to eat it.

Vansh: will try for you.

She blushes. They both eat half half Maggie and feed each other too. Sejal returns back.

Sejal: who are you!

Riddhima: he is vansh.

Sejal: haww riddhu you made a boyfriend and didn’t tell me.

Riddhima: he is not my boyfriend.

Sejal: don’t lie to me. I know you love him. It’s clearly visible on your face.

Riddhima: yes I love him(without realising).

She realises what she just said and look at vansh. They both were blushing.

Vansh: I love you too.

And that’s how the lose of one key and raining of sky turned into their love story.

What the hell I wrote!!πŸ™ƒπŸ˜‚. Just a random one I hope you a will like it. Do share your views ❀️!!

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    Myself gauri πŸ˜‰.A huge fan of immj2 ❀️

    75 Comments

    1. 1234Aayu on June 25, 2021 10:04 pm

      Oh God!! This was sooo cute 🀧
      Wonderful!
      Amazing!
      Loved it!❀️✨

      • Attractiveuser on June 26, 2021 2:39 pm

        Thankyou so much ❀️❀️❀️

    2. Akshara on June 25, 2021 10:04 pm

      Awesome

      • Attractiveuser on June 26, 2021 2:43 pm

        Thankyou!!

    3. Prabhleen 😊 on June 25, 2021 10:08 pm

      Wonderful✨😍. Loved it 😘. Udte udte idea aaya πŸ€”πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚. Wow 4th postπŸ₯³πŸ₯³.

      • Attractiveuser on June 26, 2021 2:43 pm

        Thankyou ❀️❀️. πŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚. Yes ✨πŸ₯³πŸ˜‚

    4. Priyanshi_13 on June 25, 2021 10:25 pm

      Awesome

      • Attractiveuser on June 26, 2021 2:44 pm

        Thankyou ❀️!!

    5. Stuti Abigail Tyagi on June 25, 2021 10:33 pm

      Wonderful ❀️ loved it 😍😍
      Please can we have a part two of it where they get inside the house and get intimate πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆ

      • Attractiveuser on June 26, 2021 2:44 pm

        Thankyou ❀️.
        I haven’t learnt to write intimate scenes yetπŸ™ƒ

    6. Mennahussein55 on June 25, 2021 10:39 pm

      Awesome

      • Attractiveuser on June 26, 2021 2:44 pm

        Thankyou ❀️❀️.

    7. prapti0809 on June 25, 2021 10:42 pm

      awesome

      • Attractiveuser on June 26, 2021 2:45 pm

        Thankyou ❀️!!

    8. Aishwarya Wanjari on June 25, 2021 10:44 pm

      Wow yar cute and amazing . Shayad aap terrace pe baithe the isiliye udte udte idea aa gaya . Just kidding

      • Attractiveuser on June 26, 2021 2:45 pm

        Thankyou ❀️❀️.
        Hahaha noπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    9. Aisha08 on June 25, 2021 10:46 pm

      Udte udte ek khayal aya..
      Kaafi kamal aya..😝😝
      Shayr log ese hi compliment krte h..
      Amazing yr..

      • Shreya on June 26, 2021 12:23 pm

        Aur apko udte udte shayari aayi hamare dil bahar aayi shyar ke fans aise hi compliment karte hain

      • Attractiveuser on June 26, 2021 2:46 pm

        @aisha 08 wah wahπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚.
        Thankyou ❀️❀️.
        @shrey wow!!

    10. Anannya07 on June 25, 2021 10:49 pm

      Amazing os Gauri

      • Attractiveuser on June 26, 2021 2:47 pm

        Thankyou ❀️.

    11. Palak on June 25, 2021 10:55 pm

      Brilliant πŸ¦‹
      Can you please make it’s 2nd part pls post soon 🀍

      • Attractiveuser on June 26, 2021 2:47 pm

        Thankyou ❀️❀️.
        Will try my best❀️!!

    12. Anindita on June 25, 2021 11:00 pm

      Awesome

      • Attractiveuser on June 26, 2021 2:47 pm

        Thankyou ❀️❀️.

    13. Jayashree on June 25, 2021 11:08 pm

      Wow amazing 😍😍❀️😍❀️
      Thanks for cute updates 😊😍❀️. keep rocking dear you and your updates 😊😍❀️. Iam waiting for your next updates 😊😍❀️.

      • Attractiveuser on June 26, 2021 2:48 pm

        Thankyou ❀️❀️.

    14. Priyadharshini on June 25, 2021 11:08 pm

      Super πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“

      • Attractiveuser on June 26, 2021 2:48 pm

        Thankyou ❀️.

    15. JJ on June 25, 2021 11:09 pm

      Wonderful 😊😍❀️😍❀️😍

      • Attractiveuser on June 26, 2021 2:48 pm

        Thankyou ❀️❀️.

    16. Vkjhp on June 25, 2021 11:09 pm

      Wow fabulous πŸ€©πŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’ž

      • Attractiveuser on June 26, 2021 2:49 pm

        Thankyou ❀️❀️.

    17. Sree on June 25, 2021 11:09 pm

      Fantastic πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘πŸ˜β€οΈπŸ˜β€οΈ

      • Attractiveuser on June 26, 2021 2:49 pm

        Thankyou ❀️❀️.

    18. Anushka Singh 064 on June 25, 2021 11:26 pm

      Awesome 😘😘❀️

      • Attractiveuser on June 26, 2021 2:50 pm

        Thankyou ❀️❀️.

    19. Varshini on June 25, 2021 11:40 pm

      Amazing 😍. Chill pill .

      • Attractiveuser on June 26, 2021 2:50 pm

        Thankyou ❀️❀️.

    20. @Mj on June 25, 2021 11:50 pm

      AmazingπŸ’žπŸ’ž
      Udte udte itne ache ideas aur aane chaiyeπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

      • Attractiveuser on June 26, 2021 2:50 pm

        Thankyou ❀️❀️.
        Aaenge aaenge aate hi rahenge πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜œ.

    21. Aishuzz369 on June 25, 2021 11:59 pm

      It was awesome and cute , and yah , I too love cadbury dairy milk

      • Attractiveuser on June 26, 2021 2:51 pm

        Thankyou ❀️❀️. Same!!

    22. Parita on June 26, 2021 12:13 am

      Amazing one!! Yaar udte udte idea aagya! Wow
      Nice one and i really loved it!❀

      • Attractiveuser on June 26, 2021 2:51 pm

        Thankyou ❀️❀️. πŸ˜œπŸ˜‚.
        Thankyou again ❀️.

    23. RiansHLoveR on June 26, 2021 12:51 am

      Wow!! Kya os hai. Amazing. It is awesome one. πŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žβ€β€β€πŸŒšπŸŒ

      • Attractiveuser on June 26, 2021 2:52 pm

        Thankyou ❀️❀️❀️. Last wale emojisπŸ™‚βœ¨βœ¨πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚.

    24. Priya Singh on June 26, 2021 5:54 am

      ❀️

      • Attractiveuser on June 26, 2021 2:53 pm

        πŸ₯°.

    25. AarushiSoni on June 26, 2021 6:35 am

      Awww.. maggie! So cute one!!! Lovely post more

      • Attractiveuser on June 26, 2021 2:53 pm

        Thankyou ❀️❀️❀️. Will post more ❀️.

    26. N Ayesha on June 26, 2021 6:51 am

      I pray for u that u also got somebody and some unique love story ❀ of yours also .

      • Attractiveuser on June 26, 2021 2:54 pm

        Haha shyd mil jaaye koi mujhe bhiπŸ™ƒβ€οΈπŸ˜‚.

    27. Cutuuu on June 26, 2021 7:59 am

      Awesome β€πŸ’œ

      • Attractiveuser on June 26, 2021 2:55 pm

        Thankyou ❀️❀️.

    28. Jasmine kaur on June 26, 2021 8:21 am

      Amazing πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

      • Attractiveuser on June 26, 2021 2:56 pm

        Thankyou!!

    29. prapti0809 on June 26, 2021 8:31 am

      awesome gauri loved it

      • Attractiveuser on June 26, 2021 2:56 pm

        Thankyou ❀️.

    30. Lilz on June 26, 2021 9:15 am

      Fabulous!!!!
      Aise aapko udte udte idea aate rahe ji
      Aapne mera mood bana diya…

      • Attractiveuser on June 26, 2021 2:57 pm

        Thankyou ❀️❀️❀️.
        Omg thankyou so much!! I an glad my writing made your mood ❀️❀️❀️❀️!!

    31. jaskiranarora0605 on June 26, 2021 9:20 am

      Such a cute and lovely story 😍πŸ₯°β€βœ¨

      • Attractiveuser on June 26, 2021 2:58 pm

        Thankyou ❀️❀️

    32. Tanvi_5117 on June 26, 2021 10:38 am

      Aaawww πŸ’š really cute

      • Attractiveuser on June 26, 2021 2:58 pm

        Thankyou ❀️❀️.

    33. Tanya K on June 26, 2021 12:05 pm

      Kamal karti, chalk de fatte nabb de gilli kya tussi likhdi🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣❀ ( other’s be like: koi sense thi iss baat ki🀣)

      • Attractiveuser on June 26, 2021 2:59 pm

        Thankyou β€οΈβ€οΈπŸ˜œπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚.

      • Tanvi_5117 on June 26, 2021 6:22 pm

        Arre smjh aa gya!
        Sense hai is baat kiπŸ˜‚

      • Attractiveuser on June 26, 2021 6:33 pm

        @tanvi πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    34. Akansha on June 26, 2021 12:06 pm

      Awesome dear loved it it was cute

      • Attractiveuser on June 26, 2021 2:59 pm

        Thankyou ❀️❀️.

    35. SUMISHA on June 26, 2021 12:33 pm

      Amazing dear 😘😘

      • Attractiveuser on June 26, 2021 3:00 pm

        Thankyou ❀️❀️.

    36. Sajal Ali on June 26, 2021 10:26 pm

      Amazing os, so cute 😘❀❀

      • Attractiveuser on June 27, 2021 10:23 am

        Thankyou ❀️

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