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Home»Fan Fiction»Looking at you makes me feel you (Part-6)
Fan Fiction Ishqbaaz

Looking at you makes me feel you (Part-6)

DiliBy DiliSeptember 1, 201719 Comments4 Mins Read
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I am back with another episode. Please read and give me your valuable comments……. I am sorry if there are any mistakes or typing errors.
It is next day morning. Om gets up and much happy to see Gauri is sitting next to him and sleeping. He feels sorry about her as he knows that she believes that he is not well. I have played this prank much longer and I should stop this now and also I can’t tell this to her. If I tell this she will break-up with me again will run away from here a place where I can’t find her.

He slowly takes his hand out and cares her hair which is disturbing her sleep continuously. He is mesmerized by her beauty and keeps looking at her. Gauri open her eyes slowly and sees her husband is staring at her. She tried to get up and she finds hard to do as she is having a pack pain due to the sitting position throughout the night. Om understands that she has a problem with her back and he offers to help her. She rejects same by moving her head. But he forcefully helped her to get up and she is also compelled to accept the help.
Gauri : Omkara Ji… are you ok now?

Om: hmm …. I am ok now Gauri…. Thanks for looking after me whole night.
Gauri: I will make something for you to eat. You didn’t have anything yesterday night too.
Om: Why you had????? I know you also didn’t have anything from yesterday noon.
Gauri is surprised. How come he knows that? Is he monitoring what I am doing… whether I am eating or drinking…… Is he starts to give soft corner for me in his heart?
Om: Gauri… Gauri…. Where you are lost? I know you are having a back pain right. So you don’t need to bother. I will get one of servants to cook something for us.

Gauri: No Omkara Ji…. You are just recovering and need to have good food. I know what to give when you are not well….
Om: thinks in his mind….. I don’t need any medicine if you are by my side and I will never get unwell
Gauri: What are you thinking… just be here… I will be back soon………..
Om: Gauri before that you better apply some medicine to your back pain. Come I will help you.
Gauri: You no way….. I don’t need any. This will be ok with time……
Om holds her hand and pulled to his side. He took a balm and signs her to be quiet…. Gauri is wearing her Red color back open dress. Om closes his eyes first and then starts applying balm slowly. Gauri notices this from a front mirror and with teary eyes. She thinks…. He is having such good manners. He is closing his eyes because I refused him. He is showing his right on me being my husband whenever I am adamant to do something. Om finishes and sees Gauri seeing him through mirror. He sees she smiles through tears. She feels shy and stands to go.
Om: Gauri I asked you to rest…. Don’t bother about food
Gauri thinks if he is showing his rights on me why should I not. She left the room and gone to the kitchen to prepare foods.

She went to him with a soup.
Om: I am not hungry or have a mood to have anything now Gauri. Please keep it there. I will have it later.
Gauri makes him sit on the bed and feeds him. He is staring at her secretly.
Om: Thank you… It is tasty…. Did you make this?
Gauri: Hmmm… my mom told me how to make this…
Om: Can you make this again for me?
Gauri: now?
Om: no … later….
Gauri leaves the room with a smile…….

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    19 Comments

    1. Dhar on September 1, 2017 5:52 pm

      Soo cuteeeeeeeeee… Plzz do post the next update ASAP.. Loved it to the coreeeee

      • Dili on September 8, 2017 2:26 pm

        thank you dear….. keep reading….

    2. Aashi9 on September 1, 2017 7:48 pm

      glad the way Om is showing his care
      awesome
      update soon

      • Dili on September 8, 2017 2:25 pm

        thank you dear….. keep reading….

    3. Niriha on September 1, 2017 7:48 pm

      Awesome ????loved it update next part soon

      • Dili on September 8, 2017 2:25 pm

        thank you dear….. keep reading…. next one is done and you can have it today

    4. alekhika20 on September 1, 2017 8:02 pm

      Awesome

      • Dili on September 8, 2017 2:24 pm

        thank you dear….. keep reading….

    5. Logesh.M on September 1, 2017 8:27 pm

      Loved it to the core????Omkara is very decent?????????Pleassss update next part ASAP dili….Great episode…But this is short…???want more romantic moments of rikara plsssss…Its just my suggestion….???plsssssss update soonnnnn dili

      • Dili on September 8, 2017 2:23 pm

        thank you dear….. keep reading…. sorry for the late update… I have done the next one and you can read it today…….

    6. Bubblu on September 1, 2017 11:26 pm

      awww..such a cute moment..rikara rockzzzzz

      • Dili on September 8, 2017 2:22 pm

        thank you dear….. keep reading….

    7. pooja26 on September 2, 2017 8:36 am

      fantastic part…….

      • Dili on September 8, 2017 2:22 pm

        thank you dear….. keep reading….

    8. nikita_jai29 on September 2, 2017 12:24 pm

      It is lovely dear

      • Dili on September 8, 2017 2:22 pm

        thank you dear….. keep reading….

    9. UF on September 2, 2017 4:44 pm

      AWESOME EXCELLENT FANTASTIC INTERSTING MIND BLOWING SUPERB??????
      Dear Dili
      OmRi Care For Each Other?Om Apply Balm On Gauri Back Gauri Look Om Mirror
      Way ??Om Ask Make Again The Soup?All The OmRi Scene Is Awesome?Love OmRi In This FF??The Part Is Soo Awww??????

      Take Care And Stay Safe?

      • Dili on September 8, 2017 2:21 pm

        thank you soo much… keep reading….

    10. Dinu on September 8, 2017 4:50 pm

      Hi dr.sry 4 being late.actually I couldn’t find dis epi before on TU. I didn’t even know dat u updated dis.I only got 2 know when I saw 7th epi on TU 2dy.btw I loved dis epi 2 d coreeeee.our rikara is so cute n adorable while caring 4 each other. I will read 7th epi after dis n comment on dat also. Tc

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