Looking at you makes me feel you (Part-11)

I am back with another episode. Please read and give me your valuable comments……. If not please be kind enough to leave a “like”. I am sorry if there are any grammar mistakes or typing errors.
Om looking at Gauri who is sleeping peacefully tells himself. If we are truly meant to be together… our destiny will find a way to make it happen. Gauri you a very good devotee of Shankarji.. please tell me you can ask Shankerji to stop Dadi naa….. crying…… please don’t give them a chance to make you away from me Gauri…. You are mine and only be mine….. I am pretty sure that I didn’t meet you just for nothing…. We can make a new world of our own….. you will be my queen….. crying……. He takes a sheet and pillow and arranges to sleep on the floor. He falls asleep….
The screen shifts to a dream world…..
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Gauri comes with a cute little baby…
Gauri: Omkara ji… see your cutie is troubling me a lot (just like her papa – with a slow voice)
Om: What….. ??? Aray…. My darling come … you come to me…..
A cute little baby girl comes to Om’s hand with a wide smile on her face….
Om: See mom…. How happy our little cutie to be with his papa…..
Gauri makes her face…
Gauri: I don’t mind…. You keep her and the next one too…. I am a free bird…….
Om: What…… ????? next one….. So soon……..
Gauri: Haaammm Omkaraji I wanted to tell you from yesterday… I have the same sickness now again……
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Om wakes up from her dream… He looks at Gauri with a shy smile on his face….. What am I dreaming…. If Gauri knows this she will hit on my head… She is sleeping so peacefully. I am here with naughty dreams….. Oh… God… you are not allowing me to sleep na…. By the way the dream is not that bad if Gauri likes….. He himself pats his head and tells… Om… just try to mend you relationship first…… after that you can go the next levels… don’t try to start with naughty things….. Gauri will not leave you….
He lies down to sleep again with a smile on his face….
It is raining heavily outside with thundering. Gauri wakes up with fear of thundering sound… she sees Om sleeps on the floor. It is much cold and Om is sleeping without blanket… she takes a blanket and covers him…
It is not good a wife to sleep on the bed and husband sleep on the floor. She too lies down near him to sleep.
What did I tell just now… “Husband” “Wife”
She too sleeps near him…
It is morning and Om wakes and surprise to see Gauri next to him…He closes his mouth from hand remembering yesterday night dream.
Om: (thinking) OMG… What if something happened between us yesterday? No no …. That can’t be…..
Looking at Gauri, he tells himself… one day you will accept me… I am waiting for that day…. I will be the father of your kids…. I feel when I look at you that you will be the mother of my kids one day….
Om makes her hair and get up to go. He goes to kitchen to make tea. Once he go there Annika sees him and acts with Shivaay.
Annika : Shivaay …. What do you think about Dadi’s idea…..
Shivaay: I agree with her Annika….
Om fumes in anger. Even my brothers are not supporting me. Why can’t they understand that I need her.
Om: Good morning guys…
Shivaay: aa…h Om Good morning…. Is Gauri ok?
Om: hmm ya.. She is quite fine….
Shivaay: haamm… ok…
Annika: Om…. Dadi wants to talk to Gauri……Is she up?
Om thinks…. Surely Dadi is going to ask about that man… I will not let them to talk… He quickly makes tea and sandwiches and runs up…
Annika and Shivvay can’t control their laugh and do high-five. As per the plan Dadi starts to go near Om’s room by the time he reaches there.
Om screams….. aaa Dadi…. Dadi stops. He goes near Dadi and stands blocking the room door.
Om: Dadi where are you going?
Dadi: I need to talk to Gauri about a very important matter. You better be away from your room… as we need privacy
Om: haaa Dadi… Dadi you can’t go in…..
Dadi: Why? (with a surprise look)
Om: Dadi…..you know what…..you can’t because…. Mmmm
He is trying to make lie….. but he is not that smart to make it faster…..
Dadi couldn’t control her laugh looking at his antics……
Dadi: Tell me them why?
Om: You know Dadi…Gauri is down with a bad fever…. Your health condition is also not good much naaa…. if you also caught the same fever what will happen…. So it is not good to go in…
Dadi: is that so….
Om: haaa
Dadi: Then let me know when she fine…..
Om: haa Dadi
Om quickly goes inside the room and closes the door fast. Rudy comes out from the hiding place and join with Dadi with laugh….

9 Comments
  1. Dili

    This is no: 13……

  2. Spell bound

  3. super cute and lovely update. all the members of OM conspiracy against Om.That was too cute.And om’s dream and action was more cute.
    ppz di update next part soon.

  4. Niriha

    Awesome ??loved it waiting for next part update soon

  5. keziaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

    super

  6. Alekhika20

    Superb update

  7. AWESOME CUTE FANTASTIC INTERESTING SUPERB ??????
    Dear Dili
    Om Cry?Om Dream?? OmRi Sleep With each other??ShivIka Dadi Rudy And Om? It’s Awesome Part??????
    Take Care And Stay Safe?

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