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Home»Fan Fiction»Long Drive – A ShivIka OS by Jerry
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Long Drive – A ShivIka OS by Jerry

Jerry_36By Jerry_36March 22, 201743 Comments5 Mins Read
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Heya cuties !! I am again here up with an OS 4 u. If there r any silent readers 2 this OS den do comment as it encourages me 2 write more. So now let’s proceed.

Happy reading

As sun rays made way 2 their room, shivaay rubbed his eyes n glanced at his watch on his wrist which had jzz struck 5. He made his way 2 d bathroom, dressed up n left 4 his office nt before leaving a note 4 his beloved wife.

At nearly 9 anika woke up 2 see his favourite face which is a habit of her before doing any work. A frown made her way 2 her face as she missed him. Suddenly his eyes found a letter resembling her name. She instantly picked it up n read d letter said:
Dear anika
Hope u have woke up by 9. Okay don’t bash me 4 going before meeting u. I thought today I can finish d work early n go wid u on a long drive. So be ready at 8. U don’t need 2 worry about d dress as u look beautiful in whatever clothes u wear still I have ordered a dress.
Shivaay

A smile crept 2 her face thinking about d long drive n his antics.
The dress arrived at 7 n she was amazed 2 see a beautiful white gown with silver embroidery. She wored it with sm makeup n waited 4 his husband 2 arrive.

Anika’s POV
Omg. I m so excited. It’s jzz like a dream come true. It’s been a while since I wanted 2 myself share this idea wid him bt seeing his work load I restrained myself. Bt now I m finally going. Yayyy. How will we go yaa with car obviously. I smacked my head lightly 4 being foolish. I could not jzz think other Dan our long drive.

End of anika’s POV

Hours passed as anika was getting restless. She waited till 11 n den changed her dress. She was very sad. Every1 had slept bt she was waiting 4 him. She did not even had her food. At d stroke of midnight shivaay came. He came n saw anika sitting in d dining table. He sat on 1 of d chairs, loosened his tie n looked very tired.
Anika: shivaay u look very tired. How come this much late bt it’s OK. I will serve u.
Shivaay: no anika it’s okay. I have eaten in d office it has been a hectic day. I really wanted 2 go bt at d last moment a project came n…..
Anika: it’s okay shivaay.

Wid dat she went 2 her room n pulled duvet over herself. Shivaay saw dat how much excited she was bt seeing her so much sad affected him. He rushed 2 their bedroom.
Shivaay: anika u r sleeping. R u nt going wid me 2 our long drive?
Anika: what at this hour? No shivaay u must be tired
Shivaay: no I m not , now let’s go.

With dat he dragged her 2 d garrage 2 show her dat today he also bought a Lamborghini. She was shocked n surprised as she has never seen such a beautiful car.
Shivaay: ab chale??
Anika: yeah!

Shivaay’s POV
We both drove at midnight. The road was almost silent bt also filled with our giggles. We chatted n chatted. We shared all our talks n events of all d dat. Thou I was feeling sleepy bt seeing her smiling n laughing face I remembered I have 2 do 4 her as she meant d world 2 me. After sm time she stood up in d car n waved her hands singing n enjoying. It felt so good. After sm time she said dat she was feeling hungry.
Shivaay: don’t tell me anika, dat u have nt done ur dinner. Anika how many time I have told u…
Anika: now don’t start scolding. I was waiting 4 u. Wait see there’s a dhaba. Let’s go
Shivaay: anika no it’s not hygienic.
Anika: this time no restaurant will be open. Lets go. It will be fun

She dragged me n ordered parathas n sabji. I was nt going 2 eat it bt she insisted. They did nt even gave us spoons. Bt she made me eat wid her own hands. It felt magical 4 both d reasons as d food was really gud n also she made me eat wid her hands.

End of shivaay’s POV

They came home.
Anika: shivaay change ur clothes I ll go n freshen up as it’s late.
Shivaay;hmmm

Anika’s POV
When I came in our room he was already asleep. He looked cute. Then a thought struck me he hadn’t slept at all because he woke up early today. I thought how lucky I was jzz 4 me he gave away his sleep. I removed his coat, overcoat, loosened his tie n switched off his phone. I also went 2 sleep.

Next morning

I woke up at 10 n saw dat he was hugging me as his personal teddy bear. I caressed his hair n pecked his forehead. I got up n changed.

Later I went 2 set clothes in cupboard. He slowly woke up n was started 2 see d time.
Shivaay: anika it’s 12 u didn’t woke me up. I was having a important meeting today..
Anika: u slept late yesterday n looked cute too in sleep so I restrained myself from waking u up. N haa I asked khaana 2 delay ur meeting at 6 in d evening.
Shivaay: anika u care 4 me a lot, thanku…..
Anika: no u r d 1 who cares. Thanku yesterday 4 making me feel special. I love u.

We hugged n in between he muttered a me 2. I kissed both his eyes n then we were drowned in each others embrace 1ce again.

*The End*

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    43 Comments

    1. Lilly on March 22, 2017 9:03 pm

      Superb…awesome os jerry…. loved it…

      • Jerry_36 on March 23, 2017 12:19 pm

        Tysm Lilly di?

    2. Sumitha on March 22, 2017 9:05 pm

      Love it

      • Jerry_36 on March 23, 2017 12:20 pm

        Sumitha di,thanku☺

    3. Arya on March 22, 2017 9:08 pm

      Super cute.. ??

      • Jerry_36 on March 23, 2017 8:00 pm

        Thanku Arya di☺

    4. Nita D on March 22, 2017 9:09 pm

      Wow….once again a lovely, sweet n cute os….

      • Jerry_36 on March 23, 2017 8:00 pm

        Tysm Nita ?

    5. pooja26 on March 22, 2017 9:15 pm

      lovely/……….

      • Jerry_36 on March 23, 2017 8:01 pm

        Pooja di,thanku☺

    6. Bhavana on March 22, 2017 9:15 pm

      Superbbbbbbb yaar!! loved it..

      • Jerry_36 on March 23, 2017 8:02 pm

        Bhavana di, thanku☺

    7. shivika on March 22, 2017 9:25 pm

      Sooooooo cuteeee……loved it

      • Jerry_36 on March 23, 2017 8:03 pm

        Thanku shivika di. ☺☺

    8. nikitajai on March 22, 2017 9:28 pm

      It is awesome dear..

      • Jerry_36 on March 23, 2017 8:04 pm

        Di, thankuuu?

    9. alekhika20 on March 22, 2017 9:31 pm

      Beautiful os

      • Jerry_36 on March 23, 2017 8:04 pm

        Alekhika di, thankuuu☺

    10. Ahaana on March 22, 2017 9:33 pm

      How.. i just want ti know how can u always write so fab.. i m damn jealous with u ??.. enough of drama .. very well wrote. . fantastic

      • Jerry_36 on March 23, 2017 8:05 pm

        Ahaana di ,thanku so much. Glad u liked it☺

    11. Charitha on March 22, 2017 9:39 pm

      Loved it

      • Jerry_36 on March 23, 2017 8:06 pm

        Thank you charitha di☺

    12. Akshaya on March 22, 2017 9:41 pm

      Must sa

    13. Akshaya on March 22, 2017 9:42 pm

      Must say it . This was awesome os ever!!! Dear

      • Jerry_36 on March 23, 2017 8:07 pm

        Akashaya di, thankuuu?

    14. Shivika1233 on March 22, 2017 9:47 pm

      Wow w sweet is OS superbbbbbb

      • Jerry_36 on March 23, 2017 8:08 pm

        Thanku so so much di☺

    15. Miss. Murty on March 22, 2017 10:01 pm

      I am a silent reader but I love your all os’s jerry…. I love them a lot waiting for more

      • Jerry_36 on March 23, 2017 8:09 pm

        Murthy di, thanku so much 4 commenting. Happy DAT u loved others ?

    16. Shivika on March 22, 2017 10:07 pm

      Vry Cute… 🙂

      • Jerry_36 on March 23, 2017 8:14 pm

        Thanku shivika di☺

    17. angela on March 22, 2017 10:20 pm

      So cute os loved it ?

      • Jerry_36 on March 23, 2017 8:15 pm

        Angela di, thankuuu?

    18. ruksy on March 23, 2017 6:18 am

      So cute and sweet

      • Jerry_36 on March 23, 2017 8:16 pm

        Ruksy dear , thankkkkuuuu☺

    19. shuklarashi on March 23, 2017 8:21 am

      Awesome

      • Jerry_36 on March 23, 2017 8:17 pm

        Thanku di?

    20. Mrunal on March 23, 2017 1:48 pm

      wow dear…
      it was so cute…..
      just loved it like as usual…

      • Jerry_36 on March 23, 2017 8:17 pm

        Mrunal di, thankuuu??

    21. Nila on March 23, 2017 4:53 pm

      omg lovely OS i like it very much thank u jerry

      • Jerry_36 on March 23, 2017 8:18 pm

        Ur so much welcome di n r u mehrya fan?…☺

    22. Awestruck on March 26, 2017 3:10 am

      ? ? You know what I love the most about your writing? It is soo *happy-happy*! Seriously, whenever I’m done reading your work, I get these positive vibes and a very cute feel. I really love that about your work! Well I’m sorry for not having commented earlier I don’t know how I missed this OS. Just laid my eyes on it and enjoyed it! 🙂

      Waiting for your next!

      • Jerry_36 on March 26, 2017 11:06 am

        Oh thank you so much awestruck for your comment. I am glad that it brings a smile to your face.☺

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