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Home»Fan Fiction»Our Little Fight Had Changed Our Life – Avneil Os
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Our Little Fight Had Changed Our Life – Avneil Os

nikitansxBy nikitansxSeptember 16, 201722 Comments7 Mins Read
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Our little fight had changed our life -Avneil Os

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The scene starts with a girl walking to her class.

She was heading to class but on her way, she bumped into him.

“Watch where you’re going dude” she said.

He didn’t say anything, but ignored her and left.

“I’ll see him, when I get home” she said angrily.
—–
She saw him at class and kbkbkbkbkbj they his eyes and sat on her desk.

He kept looking at her.

She noticed this and turned around and showed him the middle finger.

“What’s your problem, stop staring at me like that” she yelled at him.

“Settle down, if you want to fight with him, then do it at your house, no fighting here, only studying” the teacher commanded her.

“I am sorry about that” she said.

He started to laugh at her because she had gotten in trouble by the teacher. He showed her a thumbs down, and gave her a”poor you” look.

She got angry and turned around to do her work.

While she was working, a paper that was rolled into a ball, fell on her desk. She opened to read the note

Note ? : You look hot in a crop top, but you look more spicy when you get in trouble

She got more angry and continued with her work.

———

At home:

“Your mother and my mother are not here, so let’s…” he smirked.

“Are you out of your mind?” She asked him in anger.

“Girl, I was just joking, I was just playing around” he said. “Can’t you get a joke? ”

“First you wrote that I look hot in a crop top, what does that mean?”

“Yeah that’s the truth you do look hot” he said.

She started to blush hard.

“Even you like me, why are you blushing then?”

“You are stupid, you looked at me in a wrong dirty way, like the other Indian mens, you rapist” she said.

“I didn’t, I just said that you look hot, I don’t think dirty about you, why would you think that, how can I even do that, I love… ” he said, realizing what he was about to say.

He left the room and went to his room.

She also went to her room.

———–

His Pov:
She didnt have to get angry, it’s just a joke, she can’t even understand a joke. I can’t believe that she thinks that I’m a cheap man. I love her so much, why would I think to do something like that. She hates me forever now, my thinking is not like a rapist. I love it when she gets angry for small things, but not like this, she so much angry, she think I’m a rapist. That hurts.

Her Pov:
I can’t believe he did this to me, boys these days. Now I have to choose a random partner for college dance tomorrow, I wanted to be with him.

——

School Dance

Everyone is standing in a large circle, she looks at him and makes face. He gets sad looking at her.

Host Anita: This year we will be doing something very different, instead of choosing your own partner, we have wrote everyone’s name, this jar is for girls and the other jar has boys name on it. We will pick a chit from both jars at the same time, then they will be partners. It will take a few minutes because there are 50 of you here.

Host Michael announces names. He announced them as partners

They got shocked hearing that.

They went up to each other and looked at each other angrily.

They held each others hand and started to dance, they were showing anger, but inside there was love each other.

He looked straight into her eyes. She looked at his sparkly eyes too. ✨

He: I am so sorry, I should be mature, I should say jokes like that, I am sorry for hurting your feelings.

She: No, it’s my fault. I shouldn’t have over reacted. I can’t even take a joke now. You know that I can’t trust boys, after knowing why my father married to my mother. He married her, just to play with her, he never even loved her, all he wanted was se*. I knew that you were not that type of guy, that’s why I trusted you, but I know you didn’t mean it that way, but still I got sad. I still trust you, it’s just that, idk but I still can’t stop thinking about what happened with my mother.

He: Please don’t say sorry, yes you were right, I’m such a bad comedian, I cannot even make anyone laugh, I make people cry. I wasn’t really hurt about what you said to me, I mean I was hurt, but I was mostly hurt because you were hurt. You didn’t tell me that your leg was bleeding. You were so angry with me that you did not even tell me.

Flashback:
(Avni is heading to the library and she is crossing the road, a drunk person who was riding a bike bumps into her, hurting her. The sharp part of the tyre goes a little bit through her skin.)

She: How do you know? Did you put the bandage?

He tells her how he knew that she got hurt

Flashback:
He was angry but he told himself to stay calm, he went to Avni’s room to talk to her, but instead he found her sleeping peacefully. He noticed that she wasn’t covered with a blanket, he came closer and when he was covering her with a blanket, he saw a her leg bleeding. He put some cream on it to make it less pain for her and covered it with a bandage. Then he covered her with a blanket. He left the room.

She blushed hearing this.

He: Can I say something?

She: Ahh…sure.

He kneeled down in his knees holding her hand.

He: Avni will you be princess? I finally have the guts to say this, the day I met you, my heart started to beat for you. Then I realized that this was love. Your beauty, your smile, your actions, your innocence has made me crazy for you. Avni I love you ♥

He kissed her hand saying this.

Avni: Get up, I want to say something.

He gets up as she commanded him.

Avni: To be honest, I have the same feelings for you. I really love you Neil, but I am scared that I might loose you. I don’t want to be heartbroken.

Neil: Avni, don’t you trust me?

Avni: I trust you more than anyone in the world but I’m still scared.

“Sshh” Neil said, putting his finger on her lips.

Neil: Avni trust me, I will never let you cry, I will always keep a smile on your face, I really love you.

Avni smiles and hugs him, Neil hugs her back.

———-

2 years later….

Neil and Avni were blessed with a son called “Steven.” They now had a perfect life. The baby is sleeping between Avni and Neil.

“We finally became Avneil and we are blessed with a child” Avni said.

“True, thanks to OUR LITTLE FIGHT, that made us tell our feelings to each other” Neil said.

“Yeah, OUR LITTLE FIGHT HAS CHANGED OUR LIFE” she said.

Happy Ending.

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My real name is Nikita

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    22 Comments

    1. Khyathi on September 16, 2017 7:59 am

      Nice yaar.im missing all fan fictions.thanks for os

      • nikitansx on September 17, 2017 1:57 am

        Thankyou! Do not worry I will be posting fanfic soon, but I won’t stop with writing Os

    2. Alia on September 16, 2017 10:54 am

      Amazing

      • nikitansx on September 17, 2017 1:57 am

        Thanks

    3. Barun on September 16, 2017 1:36 pm

      Truly speaking, It’s heart touching update. You are delivering your words like a beautiful way which is visible to my eyes. The fight, careness, confession & love between Avneil is really fascinating. No doubt interesting that your episode gives me satisfaction.

      • nikitansx on September 17, 2017 2:00 am

        OMG ? Thanks for your kind words, it really tells me that I can become a good writer in the future, thankyou so much. Ahh..I can’t thankyou enough, I’m so happy by reading your comment. You just made my day <3. TYSM

    4. fenil on September 16, 2017 4:41 pm

      Awesome.
      Loved it.
      You should send me a link Niksss

      • nikitansx on September 17, 2017 2:02 am

        Thanks. I can send you the link, but to what?

        Fenil bhai, you should try writing an avneil os! I can guarantee that your Avneil Os would be the best Avneil Os ever because your such a good descriptive writer!

    5. naira on September 16, 2017 6:02 pm

      Thanks for the wonderful Os….??here all r busy in their lives i guss?no one is updating ff’s I’m missing all the ff’$?plzzz upload it na…?

      • nikitansx on September 17, 2017 2:03 am

        Thankyou! I will be posting one Avneil Os every week, plus I’m working on a Avneil fanfic!

      • Sweetgirl7 on September 17, 2017 3:03 pm

        all the best nikita. may ur fanfic be great one. and each os u have written till now is great

      • Sweetgirl7 on September 17, 2017 3:02 pm

        hey naira. i have written 3 fanfictions and u are saying no one is writing

    6. Sweetgirl7 on September 17, 2017 3:08 pm

      nikita, can i call u nikki? i mean that u are such a goood friend of mine. so can i call u that way. good bye to ur sami. good bye to u

      • nikitansx on September 18, 2017 4:14 am

        Yes you can call me Nikki

      • Sweetgirl7 on September 18, 2017 12:40 pm

        and u call me sami

      • nikitansx on September 18, 2017 4:15 am

        Thankyou for the kind words, I really appreciate it

      • Sweetgirl7 on September 18, 2017 12:40 pm

        hey u are like my sister.u don’t need to say thx to me. u deserve it meri behen

      • nikitansx on September 18, 2017 2:19 pm

        Yes, we are sisters! Di, please do read my new os – Relationship dies, but love doesn’t!

        Plus..how old are you?

      • Sweetgirl7 on September 18, 2017 2:24 pm

        hey i am avlovesneil aka sami from wattpad. u know my age plus i have already read it before

      • Sweetgirl7 on September 18, 2017 2:24 pm

        so no di vi

    7. UniqueMe on September 18, 2017 3:04 pm

      It was a super os dear. Keep writing

      • nikitansx on September 19, 2017 10:19 am

        Yes, I have written another one called – Relationship dies, but love doesn’t on Avneil

        Thanks for the kind words

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