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Life partner… Ss… Part 16

Hi guys… ????miss me?? Ok will talk later… 1st let’s start..

Precap : sanskar convinced for swara’s operation… Swara and Ragini taken to operation theater… As Ragini got Labour pain… Ragini gives birth to a girl… And swara’s operation was not a successful one…
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Doctor : i am sorry mr maheshwary but… Operation is not successful… Your wife is no more…
Sanskar takes a step back… Looking at doctor… He was stepping back with teary eyes… His leg strike with chair and he stumbles… Then fall down… Tears fall from his eyes…
Sanskar : aise… Aise… Kaise… Aise kaise unsuccessful ho sakta h… Kkkaaise… (how… How can be it possible… How come it became unsuccessful)… She promised me… She prom.. Mmiss… Ssed…
Sanskar gets up and runs in to cabin… Pushing doctors… Shekhar is still in call… He is tooo shocked to react… Here laksh also listens what doctors told…

Just then nurse comes with the baby girl… Laksh looks at her with teary eyes and whisper slowly : dolll…
Here sanskar runs to swara… Swara is lying there lifelessly… A big bandage on her head… Sanskar runs to her and cups her face…
Sanskar : shona… Shona… Princess Princess (kisses her whole face)… Look… Look what they are telling… You left me… No… I am not saying… They are telling… Chalo… Chalo get up… Get up… Tell them… You can’t leave your prince… Tell them…
No response….
Sanskar (smiles in tears) : oh… You want choco?? One… One min…
He search his pockets and takes out 2 big chocos…
Sanskar : take… Now… Now get up…
No response…
Sanskar : you want more?? Sorry na princess… Itna hi h tumhari Prince k pasd (that’s all your prince have) but promise i will buy more… Chalo… Now get up… (cries vigorously shaking her face) get up na shona… Please… Please…
No response…

Sanskar (stops crying and wipes his tears) : no… No… I am not crying .. Look… You don’t like na if i cry… I am not crying… Han… Not Crying… Ok… Ok promise i will never scold you… I will let you eat whatever you want… Please… Please come back to me please… Please… You promised me… You will come… You promised…
He cries vigorously…. Then starts to slap himself madly…
Sanskar : my fault….my fault… I became greedy… (then cups swara’s face and tightly kiss her lips) your prince became greedy… But now i don’t want anything shona… I only want you… Please… Please don’t leave me… Please..
He cries… Hugging her tightly…. Shekhar and doctors came…
Shekhar goes to sanskar… : sanskar get up please… Leave her… She is no more please…
Sanskar nodes no… Hugging her more tightly… Shekhar somehow departs them… And was taking sanskar out… Sanskar was walking back crying vigorously looking at lifeless swara….
Screen frozed…
Leap :4 Years later…
Maheshwary mansion…
Sanskar is sleeping…. Suddenly he hears…
‘prince… Prince… Take me… I am feeling cold… Where are you’
Sanskar who was at the edge of the bed… Facing back to other side of the bed,… Smiles and with closed eyes imagine a pouty lip… And a extending hand towards him… He again heard that melodious voice…
‘prince…’(this its like she will cry)…

Sanskar turns and extend his hand to other side of the bed.. : come shona…
He feels none is coming…
Sanskar still closing eyes moves to other side a little : come na shona…
But nothing…
Sanskar : arey come na….
He opens his eyes with a smile with hope of seeing his shona… But alas… Where is she… The bed is empty… Sanskar smiles fades away and deep pain seen… He slowly sits… A lone tear falls from his eyes… Then looks forward… There is a big photo of swara and sanskar… Swara is holding guitar and sanskar is back hugging her… His both hand is placed on hers… Holding the guitar…
Sanskar goes to the photo…
Sanskar : shona… Look… 4 years passed… You are not here with me… I never thought i can live without you… But i am living… And you know why?? For you… For us… For our love…
He cries… He takes swara’s photo…
Sanskar : i am missing you so much… Please you..
He stops and quickly wipes his tears listening a cute voice…
‘prince… You are again crying’
Sanskar turns and glares : anshi… Don’t call me that… How many times i should tell you… It’s chachu… (picks her up) you can call me prince chachu… But not that… Cause(looks at swara’s pic) only she has the rite to call me prince…
Anshi kiss his cheek and wrap her small arms around his neck : then you also call me swara… ?
Sanskar pinch her nose : but she is swara… You are toh my swaranshi…

Swaranshi shoves his hand : then why you all kept her name as my name… Change her name… ?
Sanskar laughs… Anshi smiles and kiss his cheek… : prince chachu… Please don’t cry ever…
Sanskar smiles and hugs her tightly…
Anshi : but if swara masi come na i will fight with her and i will show… She is not like me… I am more cute huh ?… But where is she when she will come… Please swara masi come na… Look here everyone is crying for you… Me also?… You once come i will tie you ?
Sanskar gets teary eyes…
Anshi : chachuuu… Where is she…
Sanskar with choked voice : beta wo… She is…
Anshi reminds some thing and gasp…
Anshi : chachu… Put me down… I have a work…
Sanskar nodes and puts her down… Anshi runs out of the room…
Sanskar : look shona she is just like you… She gets your eyes and somewhat your face cut also… And her favorite things are also same like you… She always makes me remind you…
He cares her photo with tears…
Here in raglak room….
Laksh is searching some thing when a photo frame about to fall but laksh hold it at right time…
Laksh looks at the photo… It’s swara’s and his…

Flashbacks…
Sanskar was in office .. He has another meeting…
Laksh comes… Seeing him swara who was sitting with Ragini… Runs to door… But gets sad not finding sanskar…
Laksh : Doll… He will be late… He has work…
Swara : ok ?
Laksh : arey doll why are you sad… Chalo i will play with you…
Swara smiles and nodes… After sometime…
Laksh swara and Ragini is in garden… Ragini is sitting on bench… She is 6 months pregnant… Smiling at her hubby and sissy…
Laksh : doll… You just follow me how i am making this doll…
Swara nodes with green… Both are sitting on ground and playing with mud… Laksh is trying to make a doll… Swara is copying him…
After 45 mins…

Laksh makes a cartoon type doll… So as swara but her doll’s structure is not good so she is making another… Then again after 45 min… Swara makes another doll…
She grins as it’s quite better than the before…
Laksh : wow doll… My doll is such a creative .. ?
Swara : (showing the good structure doll) it’s my prince .. (bad structure doll) it’s you jiju…☺
Laksh : hawww doolll…. You are so bad… I am this doll na… Abho dikhati hu…
Laksh apply mud on her cheek… Swara also apply… Both are laughing… And almost rolling on mud… Ragini takes their picture…. Both are halfly covered with mud and laughing…
Flashback end…

Laksh having tears looking at the photo… Ragini comes their… Laksh looks at her teary eyes…. He nodes in no and hugs her…
Suddenly they heard a scream… They both runs out… They see kavita who is jumping here and there roaming her hand all over her back… And anshi is laughing looking at her…
Ragini goes to her and whisper : now what you have done..???.
Anshi :nothing much just…?
Ragini : just??
Anshi : just put catti and cocki in her dress from back… ?
Ragini cross her hand near chest : and who are yoyr catti and cocki… ?
Anshi : cocki is my cockroach and catti is my caterpillar.. ??
Ragini : what ??he bhagwan what will i do with this girl…
Anshi has a very different or can say defective hobby… She has made pets like cockroach caterpillar spider etc… She have no fear of them…
Sanskar comes down and with irritating face looks at kavita… Anshi runs to sanskar and sanskar picks her up… Anshi tells him what she did… Both giggles and give hi fi… Sujata runs to kavita but can’t do anything…
Ragini : anshi go take out them ?
Anshi from sanskar’s lap: no… I will not… She was saying she is my chachi… And shona masi will never come… ???
All looks at kavita… Sanskar clutch his fist though his eyes are teary…
Ragini : anshi go… ?
Anshi nodes in no and hide her face in sanskar’s neck…
Sanskar : anshi baby… Go…
Anshi looks at him then nodes… Anshi stops kavita and put something… Cockroach comes out and anshi entet her hand and takes out the caterpillar also… Then keep them in jar… Sanskar lifts her and takes to basin then wash her hand…
Sanskar : mom how many times I have to say you that keep this girl with you only… Tell her to stop her day dreams… Listen kavita i am only my shona’s… Where ever she is… How far she is from me but the fact is i am only my shona’s… None can take her place… She was my wife… Is my wife…. And will be my wife… Get that???
He shouted pointing fingers to kavita… Kavita is fuming in anger…
Sujata : sanskar how long you will remain like this… She is…
Sanskar : stop there mom… And today you decide whom you wNt this kavita or your son… Next time i find her here i will leave this house…
Saying this he goes to dining area… Laksh also… Ragini goes to room as she forgot her phone there…
Here in dining table ap dp rp sujata laksh sanskar and anshi is sitting…. Sanskar is feeding anshi though she is craving and troubling sanskar but Sanskar is expert… He had shona who was also same like anshi…
Suddenly ragini comes through stairs yelling… : sanskaaaaarrrr…. Laaaaaakkkksssshhhh…. Sanskaaaaarrrr…
Both turns… And find her running through stairs…
Laksh : Sambhal ke rago…
Ragini comes in front of sanskar… Sanskar looks at her confused…
Ragini : devar ji… (she is gasping for breath)… Devar ji… Shona… (sanskar looks at her curiously… His face is serious like hell)… Devar ji… Shona… She… Is coming… Your… Princess is coming… My baby is coming..

Sanskar steps back hold the chair for support… Tears are rolling… He close his eyes…
All having happy smiles…. Ragini is crying while smiling…
Ragini : laksh… My shona… My baby…
Laksh nodes with smile and hugs her…
Anshi jumps: yaaaayyyyy…. Swara masi is coming… Yaaayyy…
She claps… And hugs sanskar standing on chair… Sanskar hugs her tightly… And cries….
Ragini : papa told… We have to go to rajasthan… There is our ancient mansion… So they will come there… From there we can take our shona here…
Sanskar composed : when they are coming…
Ragini : today itself…
Sanskar : i am booking tickets… Alll… Aalll… Please pack their bags… I am going to packing (he says this all doing hyrry… He was about to leave…) arey i forgot… I have to book the tickets na??
He takes out his phone with shaky hand… Doing hurry…
Laksh shake him… He comes in sense…
Laksh (palms his cheek) : relax sanky… She is coming… To you… She will be there only… She will not go…
Sanskar cries hugging laksh : i can’t wait more bhai… I can’t… I want to hug her tightly to make sure she is here near me…
All having happy tears…

After 6 hours…
Sanskar comes with anshi… In hall… Both hit their forehead as there is no one…
Sanskar : bhai…bhabi…
Anshi : dadddu…. Dadi…. Chhote daddu… Chudhail dadi….
Sujata comes there angrily : stop calling me that…
Anshi shows her tongue…
Ragini yells : anshi… Say sorry…
Anshi show her tongue to ragini also and hugs sanskar…
Sanskar laughs… Ragini smiles… After 4 years she is seeing sanskar laughing whole heartedly… His happiness is sparkling in his eyes… His face is glowing like before…
Ragini : devar ji…
Sanskar : han bhabi…
Ragini : papa called me 20 mins ago… They have reached there…
Sanskar smiles brightly…

At flight…
Anshi is sleeping in sanskar’s embrace…
Sanskar close his eyes and remember what happened 4 years before…
Flashbacks…
Shekhar is dragging back sanskar… Sanskar is crying looking at swara… He jerks swara and runs to swara…
Sanskar : shona… You have to wake up… You can’t leave me like this please… You have to…
He remembers how response to his song when she returned from asylum…
Sanskar : Tujhse aisa uljha dil
Dhaga dhaga khincha

(My heart has got tangled with yours,
that every thread in it was pulled back)
Sanskar remember how his shona forgive him…
Tujhse aisa uljha dil
Dhaga dhaga khincha
Dargah pe jaise ho
Chaadron sa bichha

(My heart has got tangled with yours,
that every thread in it was pulled back
Like in a saint’s tomb, shawl has been draped)
He remembers their marriage… Their trip… How he overcome the fear of bathing her… How she fill his life…
Yoon hi roz yeh udhda buna
Kissa ishq ka kayi bar
Humne phir se likha

(Everyday it wove as it flew
Writing a ballad of love, have I again)
He cries cares her face… Which is pale… Shake her…
Sahiba, sahiba
Chal wahan jahan mirza x (2)

(Sahiba (Juliet), Go where Mirza (Romeo) goes )
He hugs her tightly… Burying his face on his chest….
Sanskar : please come back please…..
Suddenly…. Beeeeeeeeeepppppp….
The machine which was connected to swara makes sound… Sanskar snapped it head to it…. Then… Swara arc her back breathing deeply…. All shhock….
Jorge : sister…. Put oxygen mask quickly…

SISTER does… Swara’s condition is bad… She is till breathing heavily… Monitor showing blood pressure and all are abnormal…
Bg music….
O sahiba, o sahiba
Hijra ki chot hai laagi re o sahiba
Jigar hua hai baagi re
Zid behad huyi rat’ti hai zuban
O tere bin

(Oh Sahiba, the wound of separation enthralls
As the lover elopes only for ego to conquer my words)
Sanskar is standing there looking at her… She is not calming at all… She is still gasping…
Jorge : mr maheshwary… Please go… Please…
Sanskar comes in sense and looks at him… Then nodes…
He was going out when he heard…
SISTER: dr her condition is bad… Her pulse ratw is getting low…
Sanskar turns… He again saw… Swara who is still in that condition… Can say worse than before…

Ho tere bin saans bhi kaanch si
Kaanch si kaate kaate re
Ho tere bin jindri rakh si
Rakh si laage re x (2)

(Without you, breath is like glass
Pieces of glass that can cut away
Without you, Life is just ash- the remnant of a burning pyre)
Sanskar runs to her and takes her in embrace…
Sanskar : shona… Bachcha… Calm down… Look i am here only… Your prince is here… Calm down… Please Please please please…
And for doctors surprise… Swara calm down… Everything became normal gradually… And she becomes stable… And sleep in his embrace….
Slowly sanskar places her on bed… Doctors are numb… He kisses her forehead…
Jorge : it’s just unbelievable… I am speechless mr maheshwary…
Sanskar smiles looking at swara : only i can handle her… She is mine…
He comes out Shekhar hugs him…
Shekhar : congratulations sanskar…
Sanskar smiles : you too…
Shekhar : sanskar now i have an important thing to tell…
Sanskar : what…
Shekhar : leave swara…
Sanskar : what are you saying…
He is shocked…
Shekhar : no… Nothing like that… Just for few years… Leave her here with me… I will appoint teachers and all to make her Perfect…
Sanskar : but i… I can also teach her… I will teach her everything…
Shekhar : you can’t teach her everything sanskar… It will be awkward…
Sanskar : for that Ragini bhabi is there…
Shekhar : Ragini will take care of her daughter… She gave birth to a daughter… So how can she take care…
Sanskar : han… But i can manage uncle..

Shekhar cries : you can beta… But once think about me… I never gave her my love… She never knows that she has a father… Please beta for few years… Please leave her here with me… I promise after teaching her everything i will return her… Please… Please let me live with my daughter… Please…
Sanskar can’t understands what he will do now… : she can’t live with out me…
Shekhar : i will make her understand… Please…
Sanskar : you can live in our house uncle…
Shekhar : but then also she will live with you only… I can’t get my daughter fully…
Sanskar : but uncle… How can i live without her… She is my life…
Shekhar holds his hand : please beta… Please… Mujhpar ye ahsan kar do…
Sanskar looks down… : ok uncle… I will leave… When shona gets her conscious then i will leave after meeting her…
Shekhar : no beta… If she wakes up.. She will never let you go… You go from here before that… I know i am doing wrong but… For once sanskar please….
Sanskar nodes…
Sanskar stays in swara’s cabin looking at her…. Next morning…
Sanskar didn’t sleep at all… Suddenly he sees her hands are moving… Jorge comes there….
Jorge : she is getting conscious….
Sanskar looks at her then kiss her forehead… Remove the mas and pecks her lips….
Sanskar with tears: i am sorry shona… Bye… Take care… Come back to me soon…
He left…. Leaving his guitar there… : it will give yoi the sign of my presence shona
Flashbacks end…

It’s announced… They have reched rajasthan… It’s near morning…
Anshi is in Ragini’s lap… She needsher mamma after waking up… Just like swara needed Ragini at early stage…
A car and a driver was there to receive them… All gets in…
Here… In a big mansion of rajasthan…
It’s middle of yard… Also the haveli… Some woman are making rangoli…
In a room… A girl comes out from bathroom… Her face is not seen… Suddenly wind comes from windows and her long air flow with the wind… The girl starts to sing while getting read…
Yeh sarsrati hawa
Jaaye chaaron disha
Aise hi mukt mann mera bhi ho gaya

Ye hawa…
She twirls the dupatta and wore it perfectly… Then wears payal in her milky ankle… And stamp her feet lightly to feel it’s sound… Her rosy lips spread in to a smile… Then wears bangles…. In jer delicate hand…
Sar-sar-sariya…
Sar-sar-sariya…
Kyun na lehra ke main bhi
Disha disha nagar nagar jaaun
She moves her hand in wavy pattern and giggles… Then open the door… And making sounds to her payal she comes down in the yard with rhythm…
Khila khila sa jo…
Mera ye mann hai
Khila khila sa jo…
Mera ye tann hai
She picks up a white goat kid… And dance with it in the yard…. She steps upon the rangoli on its middle… All ladies gasp… She giggles…

At the mean time sanskar and all comes…
Sanskar listen the voice and whisper : shona…
Jo rang rang hai… mere sapne
To sab rang hi… laage apne
She dance with some children twirling them….
Suddenly one lady : shonaaaa… Your di came…
The girl turns quickly… Her eyes shines… And became teary… Her face reveal… Yes its swara… Not that immature kid… But a mature bubbly girl…
Swara runs in… She slows her steps looking at all…
Swara : diii…
All looks at her…
Ragini teary eyes : shona… My baby…
Swara runs to Ragini and hugs her tightly… Sanskar was starring her…
Swara : i missed you so much…
Ragini : me too…
Laksh keeps his hand on her head… Swara looks at him and smiles…
Swara : jiju… How are you…
Laksh (palms her cheek) : absolutely fine… I am so happy to see you doll….

Swara hugs him… Then slowly meets with everyone… She was hugging ap when she feels a pull on her dupatta… She looks down… It’s anshi…
Swara : hey…
Anshi : you know who i am?? (putting hand on her waist)
Swara kneels down : who are you…
Anshi : i am swara…
Swara : hey that’s my name… (narrow her eyes) you steal my name…
Anshi : no you steal my name…
‘her name is swaranshi shona’
Swara sees her side… Sanskar standing there… Swara slowly stands up… Sanskar slightly extend his hand… Swara’s smies fades away… She looks at him with blank expression..
Sanskar about to steps forward… Swara avoid eyecontact… And hold swaranshi’s hand…
Swara : baby… Chalo i have many talks with you…
Sanskar’s face became pale… All looks at her confused…
Swara goes up… Sanskar face is like he will cry anytime…
Ragini : shona… What…
She stops when she sees sanskar running after her…
Sanskar : shona… Princess…

He comes in front of her… Swara Looks away…
Sanskar : anshi… Go mamma is calling you go…
Anshi : ok…
Swara was about to go…
Sanskar : shona… Can’t you recognize me… I am prince… Your prince…
He tries to hugs her but she steps back… Tears fall from sanskar’s eyes…
Sanskar tries to cups her face: shona… Princess…
Swara jerks his hand and push him… : don’t touch me sanskar maheshwary… Can’t you understand i am avoiding you that’s means i don’t wanna talk… Then why the hell are you after me… Stay away ok…
Sanskar looks at her shocked… He holds the railing to swallow this huge shock… Swara glares at him then goes away… All looks at them being shocked…
Wanna again kill me surely you can ?

Precap : you will come to know in next epi…

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