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Home»Fan Fiction»Life partner… Ss… Part 11
Fan Fiction Swaragini

Life partner… Ss… Part 11

pikachuBy pikachuJanuary 17, 2017Updated:January 17, 201747 Comments14 Mins Read
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Ragini bring swara at home… All gets to know that she wins… All blessed her…

Laksh (pulls her cheek) : what a performance doll… Now tell me what you want??? Your jiju will fulfill that…
But everyone noticed her eyes fixed on something… All follows the gaze… It’s sanskar… Who is talking in phone near a pillar…
Her fear full eyes…
Sanskar looks at swara after hanging up the phone…
Swara Hide behind Ragini and peeps from her shoulder… Sanskar smiles and goes to her…
Sanskar : shona…
Swara hides more… Sanskar’s eyes fills with tears… He thought swara will accept him but… He close his eyes tightly… He feels a hand on shoulder… He looks… It’s laksh… Sanskar gives a tight smile… Which is obviously fake one… He once more look at swara…
Sanskar leaves the hall…

At night….
Sanskar is sitting in the same park…
Sanskar’s pov…
Whenever i think my punishment will end… I become wrong everytime… How much… How much i have to bear this… Today is so special day for her… Bhabi hugs her… I am jealous from her… Swara loves her more than anyone…
‘no she loved you more than anything anyone… Or may be she still loves you… She just scared of you… ‘
Sanskar looks up and again that imaginary sanskar…
Imaginary Sanskar (smiles) : she sings song when you sing… When you told… Think sanskar… Uff you are becoming dumb day by day… Har baat main batau??
Sanskar registered the thing in mind … His lips curled In a smile…

Imaginary sanskar : she is kid… If you give her love continously one day she will surely get rid of the fear which she have for you…
Sanskar goes towards home… It’s late… Sanskar straight goes to his room… And sees swara is sleeping peacefully… He sighs and change in to night dress and lie down beside her… Carefully takes her in embrace… He kissed her forehead and pecks her lips slightly…

Sanskar : i am so happy swara… Today my shona wins… Thank you so much princess…
He kissed her nose tip and hugs her tightly… He sleeps…
It’s almost 4 am in the morning.. Swara slightly open her big eyes… She slightly struggled and looks up… As her face was buried in sanskar’s chest… Her hands are clutching his shirt slightly… She looks at sanskar’s face and blinks twice… She close her eyes… And again looks at her…
‘i am devil… I am the monster of your fairytale life ‘

‘ an witch came and turn the prince in to beast… But again he realized he can’t live without his princess… He loves her so much ‘
Swara close her eyes tightly and buried her face in his chest again… For movement sanskar’s sleep gets disturbed… He thinks swara’s sleep is getting disturb… He kiss her top of her head and starts to stroke her hair while closing his sleepy eyes again… Just then swara up her head again and looks at him… Sanskar slightly opens his eyes and shocked to see her awake… He opens his widely… And gets up…
Sanskar (tensed and Worried) : sho… Shona… You awake…

Swara doesn’t look at him and looks at the bed… ???… She is still lying…
Sanskar don’t know what to do… If she again shows her hatred… Will he control himself… He gets scared… Fear of listening those bitter words again… Fear to see his love going away from him not letting him touch… Fear to see tears on his love’s eye cause of him… His throat got dried…

Sanskar : shona… I… I willl… I will call… Ragini… You… Don’t worry… I will… I will not take you…
He says with chocked voice… And about to step down from the bed but stops listening sweet voice…
‘pani… Chahiye… (want water) ‘ swara says still looking at the bed… Sanskar looks at her deeply…
Swara was drawing patterns on bed… She again asked with slow voice : pani (water)…
Sanskar comes in sense… And pour water in glass…
Sanskar takes the glass… And slowly helps her to get up… He takes her in embrace wrapping one arm around her shoulder and by other hand makes her drink water…

He keeps the empty glass on table and wipes her lips by his palm… Swara frowned and makes a irritated face… Sanskar smiles…
Swara looks at him and blinks her eyes… Then close her eyes with palm… Sanskar looks confused…
Sanskar (worried and cups her face) : shona… (very lovingly)
Swara (still closing eyes?? and most innocently ??) : are you devil or my prince??

Sanskar instantly hugs her tightly and cries… : i am really sorry Shona… I will never do that… That was not me… That was a beast… And your prince has kill that devil… I am your prince…
Swara departs and looks at him then wipes his tears : don’t cry ??
Sanskar kiss her forehead tightly : you are not afraid of me na… ??
Swara looks down and nodes in yes then no…
Sanskar : trust me shona… For last time…

Swara looks at him : you will not take me na?? Wo log… (sobs) they beat me so much… ???
Sanskar hugs her tightly : never…
Swara : they are also devils… You punish them ???
Sanskar (with angry voice) : ???i already gave… How dare they beat you… (then soft voice) you forgave me??

Swara looks at him then smiles??: yes…
Sanskar smiles widely tears of joy comes out from his eyes… He steps out from the bed and carry swara in bridal style… And twirls her… Swara laughs and squalls in joy… Sanskar also laughs… And kiss her nose tip… Swara place her head near his neck and sanskar rubs his cheek on her head… Then close his eyes and looks up thanks god…
Sanskar looks towards window… The east sky is red… Cold water is coming… He takes a deep breath… And his eyes shows new spark… He looks at swara who is still in his arm… She is doing something with his t-shirt buttons…

Sanskar : shona…
Swara : hmmm…
Sanskar : look sun will rise in some minutes… A new morning… And it will come with new joy and happiness… A start of our life… Swara looks at him confusingly… Then makes a pout…
Swara : prince you are saying soooo big big hard hard words… ???
Sanskar chuckles and feels sooo happy after listening prince from her mouth… Slightly heat their foreheads…

Sanskar :chalo we will welcome our new life new morning together…
Sanskar Place her on bead and takes the blanket… And hand over it to her… Sanskar takes her to the balcony… And makes her stand… Sits on the big cradler and makes her sit beside him then wraps both with the blanket… Both are sitting close in indian style but swara is half lying on sanskar… Sanskar is wrapping her near his chest tightly… Sanskar kiss her cheeks and both look at sky… Sun rises… Sanskar prays closing eyes… He opens his eyes sees swara is yawning… Sanskar smiles and kiss her forehead…
Sanskar : sleep princess…

He wraps her totally in blanket and swara sleeps placing head on his chest… Sanskar takes a deep breath of new morning’s air of his new life…
Sanskar looks at his love who is in fast sleep… He rubs his nose with her…

After sometime sanskar carries her to the bed and he also sleeps with her…
At about 7 sanskar again wakes up… And sees his angel is still sleeping in his embrace… Clutching his t-shirt… He slowly frees himself and goes to freshen up… Mean while swara also gets up and rubs her eyes… Just then sanskar comes out from washroom…
Sanskar (smiles) : uth gyi meri shona…
He goes to her and hugs her…

Sanskar : ok chalo… Brush your teeth…
Swara just smiles ☺☺
Sanskar takes her in arms and goes to washroom… Before that he opens the lock of the room door…
Sanskar takes brush and paste…

Sanskar : princess open your mouth…
Swara giggles and nodes in no… Sanskar narrows his eyes with smile…
Sanskar : shonaaaa… Open… Chalo… Aaaaaa…

Swara nodes in no… And close her mouth with palm ???
Sanskar : shona… No masti… Chalo open your mouth… (strict tone)
Swara pouts… And open her mouth… Sanskar enter the brush… And swara brush her teeth… While sanskar stands there…

After brushing… Sanskar wipes her face with towel…
Sanskar : go seat for sometime… I will call bhabi… She will give you bath…
Swara looks at sanskar who is arranging towels… She giggles and open the tab and starts to play with water… Sanskar turns and quickly off the tab…

Sanskar : shona… Don’t play with water… You will catch cold…
Swara pouts… ??

Sanskar : go… Seat in room…
Swara looks at him… And extend her hand: prince godi… (godi=lap)
Sanskar shook his head and takes her in arms… And goes to room just then ragini enter… She shocked to see swara in sanskar’s arm… And irritating him by pulling his cheeks and nose… And giggling…
Sanskar : uff shona… You became so naughty…

He makes her sit on bed and starts to tickle… The whole room fill with their laugh… Ragini is seeing all this with open mouth… Just then laksh came there for some reason He also shocked…
Laksh : ye kab hua… When did it happen and how…

Sanskar stops and looks at them… Swara is still giggling…
Sanskar : bhai… Bhabi… Look she forgave me…
Ragini nodes in tears… Laksh grins widely… Swara is sooo normal… Just like she was…
Ragini : thank you sanskar…
Sanskar : no bhabi… Why thanks… She is mine…
Ragini again nodes… And smiles…

While they are talking… Swara goes to the box of her toys and push it on floor… All toys falls… Trio looks at her hearing sounds… Swara sits on floor with a wide smile and starts to spread toys in whole room… Sanskar hits his forehead…
Sanskar : shona… Don’t seat in floor… It’s cold princess…
He says while going to her… Swara is busy in collecting toys… Sitting in indian style… Sanskar makes her stand…
Sanskar : look your di came… Go take bath…
Swara goes to ragini while jumping… And pokes her nose… Ragini looks at her with fake anger… Swara giggles and again poke…

Ragini : irritating me?? Badmash… Chal… I will give you bath…
Ragini takes swara to washroom… Sanskar shook his head and starts to collect dolls which is scattered… He place it on bed and couch beautifully… Laksh goes to him…
Laksh : leave it sanky… She will scattered again…
‘and i will clear again… (he sees laksh with smile and tears) you know bhai i used to do this ar early also… I missed this things so much bhai… (they heard giggling sounds of Swaragini from bathroom)… I missed everything… I just wanna do this things for her life long…

Laksh smiles and hugs him… Sanskar hugs back…
Swaragini comes out of the washroom…
Ragini : shona… Look what you have done… You make me wet… Yes her suit is wet…
Swara was still giggling…

Laksh (worriedly) : ragu… Go na change your dress… You will catch cold…
Ragini : hmm… Let me comb her hair…
Sanskar : bhabi you go… I will comb her hair…
Ragini smiles and nodes… Raglak left…
Sanskar was combing her hair with full concentration that he didn’t notice what swara is doing…
Here swara is drawing on her hands by lipstick… Sanskar finish combing her hair… And smiles…
Sanskar : hmm done…

But widen his eyes and slap his forehead looking at swara’s doing… He snatch the lipstick…
Sanskar : shona now only you took shower… Look you make yourself dirty again…
Swara pouts looking at sanskar… Then giggles and rubs her palm on his cheek which was fill with lipstick…
Sanskar looks him self on mirror… His cheek is red…

Sanskar : shonaa ??????
Swara is giggling … Sanskar smiles… Then clean her hands and his face with water…
Sanskar : shona will you go down and do breakfast??
Swara was playing with dolls… Sanskar was checking files… He asks her while reading his file only… When she didn’t give any response… Sanskar looks at her…
Sanskar (in mind) : you should mingle with people easily… Let’s Start with family…
Sanskar goes to her…

Sanskar : shona… Let’s go It’s breakfast time…
Swara smiles… Sanskar takes her out of the room… Ragini sees this…
Ragini : sanskar… Where are you taking her…

Sanskar : why bhabi for breakfast…
Ragini : you go i will feed her in room…
Sanskar : no bhabi… She is going to be a singer… It’s necessary to remove the fear of meeting new people from her mind… So she will eat with all of us…

Ragini: but if she creates any mess… Then…
Sanskar : nothing will happen bhabi… I am there na…
Swara Looking at them… Sanskar takes her to dining table… All looks at swara… Swara gets afraid… And hide behind sanskar clutching his shirt…
Sanskar Brings her forward…
Sanskar : what happened?? Sit here…
Sanskar makes her sit and he also sit beside her…

Sanskar looks at all… Seems to be all are seeing some alien…
Sanskar : good morning… From today she will eat here with us…
Ap smiles… And serves them… Swara looks at all with scared eyes…
Sanskar notice this…
Sanskar : don’t be afraid shona… They all are your family… They will never harm you…
Swara looks at him and nodes with pale face… Sanskar feed her and eat himself also…
Here sujata comes while talking in phone…

Sujata :ji ji… Swara is my daughter in law… Ji… I know she sings so well… Arey can’t you see whose dil is she…
All looks at her with shocked face… Sujata cuts the call… And smiles Brightly… Then looks at swara… She comes to her and hugs her…
Sujata : mari swara… So sweet of you…
Swara makes a cry face and starts struggling… Sanskar sees this wide his eyes…
Sanskar : mom… Mom Please leave her… She is scared… She will cry…

Sujata leaves her… Swara hugs sanskar tightly and starts sobbing…
Sanskar : sssshhhh… Shona… She is good… Don’t be afraid of her…
Sujata : swara… Mara bachcha… Eat and sing well…

All shook their head…
7 days passed… Swara is slowly slowly mingling with other members… Dp and ap tried to talk to her many times… But she always clutch sanskar when they came to talk to her…
One day…
Sanskar Ragini and laksh trio in office… Sanskar can’t come for lunch… Dolly is feeding swara… But swara is not in mood to eat… She runs out side the room.

.. Dolly runs behind her…
Dolly : shona wait… Don’t run baby…
But swara runs down through stairs… She was about to fall… But 2 hand catch her… She looks up… It’s ap…
Swara bends down her head in fear…
Ap: shona beta you shouldn’t run like this… (asks Dolly) what happens??
Dolly : mam she is not eating…

Dp comes there…
Dp : ok give me plate… We will feed her…
Dolly hesitates but then gives…
Dp : swara beta eat…
Forwards the spoon…
Swara turns her face…
Ap : if you eat i will give you a new chocolate… I made it…
Swara smiles slightly and slowly eats…

Dp and ap enjoy feeding her… She Smiles brightly…
At evening sanskar and raglak came…
Trio shocked see swara sitting in hall with ap and dp… And eating chocolate… Her hole mouth is covered with chocolate… Swara sees sanskar and grins… Sanskar comes and sits beside her…
Sanskar : shona…
Swara Forwards a piece to him.. Sanskar eats…
Sanskar takes out 2 more Cadbury…
Sanskar : shona.. You got chocolate… Now who will eat this…

Swara smiles tightly… And jumps in happiness… : i…
Sanskar smiles… : btw… Who give you this…
Swara : that taklu uncle and that chamkila (sparkling) saree aunty…
Sanskar wide his eyes… Even everyone wide their eyes… Ragini press her lips firmly to control her laugh… Her face grew red… For controlling it… Laksh looks down and rub his nose with palm to hide his smile… Sanskar turns his face… And press his forehead… Sujata goes to kitchen and rum looks everywhere except dp and ap…

End…

Precap : marriage…

I am so sorry if you feel it boring… Please comment it’s really important to make me write further

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    47 Comments

    1. Simi on January 17, 2017 12:24 pm

      Omg.. Taklu uncle and chamkila saree aunty??????
      Loved it?

    2. Simin on January 17, 2017 12:24 pm

      Its awesome dear
      finally she forgave him wooohoooo
      takla uncle and chamkili aunty tooo good yaar

    3. suhani on January 17, 2017 12:24 pm

      nice episode

    4. Kakali on January 17, 2017 12:26 pm

      Goshhhh !! it was such a beautiful update.. but my whole mind stuck up when u mentioned about those Chocolates.. n then Taklu n Champakali.. love it dear..
      thnk u..;-*

    5. Bhuvi on January 17, 2017 12:37 pm

      Haha….too good…

    6. chris on January 17, 2017 12:44 pm

      taklu uncle hahahaahaha 😀 cute episode 🙂

    7. a on January 17, 2017 12:50 pm

      Awesome..tc..

    8. Naina on January 17, 2017 12:54 pm

      Boring no way tat was awesme after swaragini my friend ff i wait u dis ss oly awesme nd at d end dp nd ap new name given by swara oh god??? plz post nxt soon cnt wait nd whose marriage ?

    9. Febi on January 17, 2017 12:56 pm

      Just fabbb…….. Awesome n excellent

    10. rabia on January 17, 2017 1:14 pm

      Hahahahahhaa omg pikachuu itss awesomeee ????

    11. Rosey on January 17, 2017 1:15 pm

      hhahaha yaar last seen was so funny i cant control my laughing seriously yaar what an aamzing piece of ur funny at
      episode was awesom and emotional and lovely

    12. tani on January 17, 2017 1:16 pm

      U nailed it…. Loved it

    13. Sus on January 17, 2017 1:30 pm

      Haha nyc

    14. Purvi on January 17, 2017 1:37 pm

      Super awesome update……..

    15. Kaur Daljeet on January 17, 2017 1:58 pm

      Loved it

    16. Tamil on January 17, 2017 2:01 pm

      Awesome dear loved it

    17. Ria on January 17, 2017 2:36 pm

      this story is so sweet i cant even tell

    18. Arshaanya on January 17, 2017 2:37 pm

      Wow it was so beautiful update… loved it..
      Swasan moments were cute n sweet…
      N dat taklu n chamkila thing was so funny ????..
      Totally njyd it

    19. Priya on January 17, 2017 2:39 pm

      Boring.??…no ways…..it’s awesome

    20. mumpi on January 17, 2017 2:48 pm

      each nd every line is soooo sweet wen she ask sanky devil or prince from dat to taklu uncle nd chamkila saree aunty.. hats off to u.

    21. Sana on January 17, 2017 3:08 pm

      Omg!!!!! Taklu uncle and chamkila saree aunty seriously??????
      loved the update dear update next part asap

    22. mariyajap on January 17, 2017 3:31 pm

      AWESOME

    23. Nik on January 17, 2017 3:32 pm

      Taklu uncle n chamkila aunty ?????

    24. bresh on January 17, 2017 3:35 pm

      sooooooooooooooo cute…..finally she forgave him…awesome….last bit was funny..lol

    25. AnuAnn on January 17, 2017 3:38 pm

      Ohhhh ! Dear it was too good.. Lovely chapter

    26. Yogholick on January 17, 2017 3:43 pm

      It was hilarious dear n specially that taklu uncle n chankila saree aunty I’m still laughing n my stomach is aching due to laugh ommmmmgggggg …….. Missed to comment on last part but it was also awesome loved it …… N I’m feeling that its swasan marriage ….. If its yes than will love to see oppss I mean love to read it perfect

    27. SNY on January 17, 2017 4:00 pm

      Amazing dr….
      SwaSan scn r so cuteeee…
      Nxt one soon…

    28. Lovely reethi on January 17, 2017 4:08 pm

      Awesome..awesome. wow Swara forgive sanskar Hehe Swara is back to bubbly avatar .aweee ???I loved the way Swara irritating her prince. Hahahaha ? ?????taklu uncle n chamkili aunty Hahaha ????OMG seriously hilarious. I’m laughing like mad reading last scene. Will be waiting for next part.post asap

    29. Stg on January 17, 2017 4:32 pm

      Awesome amazing superb??

    30. SHAN on January 17, 2017 5:03 pm

      Awesome loved it

    31. Swarna01 on January 17, 2017 5:54 pm

      Ha ha ha ha. Awesome. Vry nyc.

    32. mica on January 17, 2017 5:54 pm

      waaaa… i love it.. i love the way Sanskar care toward her, he knows what her need

    33. sneha on January 17, 2017 7:09 pm

      amazing .i enjoyed a lot while reading this episode

    34. maryum on January 17, 2017 7:12 pm

      Hahaha to good awesome ????

    35. Yamuna on January 17, 2017 7:13 pm

      Taklu uncle and chamkila aunty godddddd you are really amazing and eagerly waiting for your next part

    36. Shifa96 on January 17, 2017 7:46 pm

      Awesome

    37. IQRA222 on January 17, 2017 8:21 pm

      Awes

    38. Soujanya on January 17, 2017 9:06 pm

      Awesome…

    39. vyshu10 on January 17, 2017 9:08 pm

      Awesome…..loved it. Aww….swara forgave sanky. The scene is beautiful. Hahaha….taklu n chamkili…ROFL.

    40. NDSG on January 17, 2017 9:13 pm

      Soo lovely finally swasan???????
      And taklu uncle?????

    41. rabia0032 on January 17, 2017 9:19 pm

      Omg omg dear u made swara dammmm cuteeeeee wooow loved it????swara cuteness is Amazing…
      Hahahaha dp Bechera taklu Hi Rehe ga??????

    42. praju on January 17, 2017 9:20 pm

      It was soooooooo awesome

    43. Ishani on January 17, 2017 9:34 pm

      Superve episode and that “Taklu uncle n chakmila Saree aunty” was hillerious haha haha lol

    44. Romaisa on January 17, 2017 10:35 pm

      Wow loved it ❤️❤️

    45. Sasmita on January 17, 2017 10:38 pm

      Very nice and the end was hilarious. Really taklu uncle and chamakila aunty. Very nice. Plz post next one soon. I am waiting . But??

    46. meenareddy on January 17, 2017 10:40 pm

      superb episode. no its not at all boring. loved it?

    47. Jannat on January 18, 2017 9:51 am

      shomi gone through same type of accident like rekha in koi mil gaya. . .. so in krishh 3 rohit ( hritik) sound like… i mean way of speaking walking is like child bt he understood every things.

      as like this you can also show swara… she staet to understand life marrige relationship love care responsibilities .. bt look like child. that innocence childishness how she irritate sanskar ( not intentioally… sanskar also love that ) should remain same….

      i hope u r getting my concept .
      im just suggesting

      love your story.
      im silent reader rarely comment bt you r so confuse for future track so i thnk to help u out.

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