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My Life Is For You-Kasam Tere Pyaar Ki (Epi-1)

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Hi friends this is my 9th ff please read and comment.

Rishi is sitting and thinking

Rishi:Tanu died because of me.I should die but she died just for me.If I would know that she will die if she marries me then I would never married her but I was mad I forced her to marry.

A voice comes and says

Voice:Bhai what are you thinking?If I am right then you are thinking about Tanu Bhabi only.

Rishi:Yes chose because of me she died.She died 20 years ago but the pain still kills my heart.I want to die but I promised her that if something happens to her then also I would not kill myself.

Manpreet:Bhai please don’t feel guilty.It’s not your mistake.

Rishi:No chote if I would not force her to marry then se would stay alive.

Manpreet:But bhai she loved you and she wanted that you live for hundred years.

Rishi:Chote it looks easy to forget the incident but ask me how much difficult it is.I am living like a human without the soul.My Tanu was my soul but she is no more.

Manpreet:Bhai if Tanu is your soul then you are her heart.I am sure she has taken second birth.She only for you.Don’t you remember what that lady told.

Flashback

Lady:What happen son?

Rishi:My life my Tanu died for me and I din’t did anything for her.

Lady:Don’t worry she will return on puran masi’s night.She can come after many years also but she will come for the Promise she gave you that she will always love you.

Flashback ends

Rishi:But chote it can be a lie that lady told.

Manpreet:But bhai I don’t think so she will lie.I know she is telling truth.

Rishi:Hope Tanu comes back in my life. (Tears rolls down his cheeks)

Manpreet keeps his hand on shoulder

Manpreet:Bhai your love is true and she will return only for you.

Rishi:I hope so.

Rishi looks at moon and says

Rishi:You know chote when me and Tanu were small Tanu use to says that moon can look everyone and it shows us our love ones face.I can see her face.

Manpreet:Bhai your love is really true.

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  3. SHAPARAK on

    HI SIDDHI, THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH FOR YOUR BEAUTIFUL AND VERY USEFUL JOB, AS NONE INDIAN PEOPLE, LIKE ME, WHO IS LIVING THOUSANDS MILES AWAY FROM INDIA WOULDN’T BE ABLE TO WATCH, UNDERSTAND AND FOLLOW THE INDIAN SOAPS

    I AM STUNNED THAT, AS YOU SWEET INDIAN NATION HAS GIVEN 2.4 RATE TO KASAM , AN 1.7 TO THAOKI , BUT YET THE COMMENTS FOR KASAM IS VERY VERY VERY FEW TO COMPARE WITH THAPKI. THE RATE NUMBERS I HAVE PRESENTED HERE, WAS WRITTEN BY ONE OF INDIAN DYING FAN OTHERWISE I HAVE NOT ANY INFORMATION LIKE THIS MYSELF, FOR LIVING SO FAR FROM YOUR BEAUTIFUL COUNTRY.

    I AM GUESSING , LEAKING SUCH AN IMPORTANT FUTURE PART OF SOAP WHICH IS : DEATH OF TANNU HAS STOLEN AND KILLED , THE EXCITEMENT, RESTLESSLY WAITING FOR THE NEXT EPISODE AND IT’S STORY LINE , AND HAVING TENS OF IMAGINARY WAY OF STORY BEING CONTINUED , AND MOST IMPORTANTLY , MADE MOST OF AUDIENCE SAD, AND,DISAPPOINTED.

    MOST OF THOSE THAPKI COMMENTS ARE ABOUT GUESSING THE NEXT STEP OF STORY, WHEN FOR KASAM IT HAS BEEN REVILED FROM DAY ONE, THE MOST KILLING MOTIVATION OF AUDIENCE TO COMMENT, BESIDE , WE ARE HUMAN , AND BY A VERY COMMON PART OF HUMAN NATURE, WHICH IS :

    GETTING USED TO SOMETHING THAT CONSTANTLY HAPPENING IN OUR LIFE, THUS; AUDIENCE HAS ACCEPTED THE TANNU IN THEIR HEART , BUT THOSE GREEDY, IGNORANT, AND PSYCHOS , WRITER, PRODUCER, AND DIRECTOR HAS DECIDED , NOT ONLY GIVE AWAY , THE FUTURE CRUEL PART OF THE STORY , BUT, THESE ANTI HUMANS PLUNGED THEIR KNIFE IN A DEEPEST AND STRONGEST ACTION , BY ;

    NOT BRINGING THE PRESENT TANNU WHO HAS SECURED A GOOD PLACE IN HEAR OF AUDIENCES , BACK , WHEN SHE COMES BACK AFTER 20 YEARS AND FULFILL HER PROMISE TO RISHI.

    THEIR STUPID STORY LINE MADE HER AS TANNU CHARACTER , WHO IN REAL LIFE IS AMAZINGLY BEAUTIFUL, (I said a few times before , she looks like Hollywood multiple Oscar winner, Swedish Ingrid Bergman , of course when she was young ) FOOL, WITH NO BRAIN ,DIGNITY,AND CONFIDENT, AS EVEN NEHA COULD SEE THE REAL DISGUSTING PAWAN, BUT SHE AS TANNU CHARACTER STUPIDLY AND ANNOYINGLY CONTINUE TO DEFEND HIM.

    PLEASE SWEET FRIEND , DON’T GET UP SET AS YOU ARE DOING AN ADMIRABLE JOB, BUT SO MUCH NONSENSE DRAGGING , TREATING THE AUDIENCES AS FOOL , BY S…….O MANY CONTRADICTIONS ARE THE REASON OF LACK OF COMMENTS.

    THANKS AGAIN , YOUR WORK IS APPRECIATED , PLEASE DO NOT LEAVE IT.

    Ps: In here this episode will be on screen of TV by tomorrow 8:30pm as on week end there will not be Kasam. so thanks again , because I have deserted watching Kasam since while ago, and I only am reading your writing, so , now I am a big step ahead.

  4. SHAPARAK on

    HI AGAIN, I READ MY COMMENT AND FIND A FEW MISPRINTING AS FOLLOWS;

    IN THE END OF PARAGRAPH ONE, THE FOLLOWING LINE HAS BEEN OUT:
    WITHOUT YOUR WORK.

    IN SECOND PARAGRAPH LINE 2: IT IS THAPKI NOT THAOKI.

    IN PRAGRAPH 6 LINE 1; A GOOD PLACE IN HEART NOT HEAR.

    IN PRAGRAPH 6 , LINE 2 ; PLEASE SKIP WORD OF BACK AND KINDLY GO TO THE NEXT WORD . THANKS A MILLION.

  6. SHAPARAK on

    YES, BUT I MADE ANOTHER MISTAKE AS THIS EPISODE IS WA…….Y AHEAD OF THE PART OF STORY RIGHT NOW IS SHOWING ON SCREEN OF TV. IN OUR PART RISHI YET FOLLOWING TANNU , WHEN HE IS ENGAGED TO THAT WORTHLESS NEHA AND TANNE TO THAT NASTY DEVIL LIAR AND CHEATER PAWAN, AND THOSE THREE GREEDY PSYCHOS ( writer, producer and director ) ARE HUGELY TORTURING AUDIENCES BY RUBBISH LINE AND NONSENSE AND EVEN SOMETIMES IRRELEVANT DRAGGING STORY. YOUR COUNTRY MATES ARE LUCKY TO HAVE YOU AND YOUR WRITING AND PLEASE DO NOT STOP. YOU MUST BE IN INDIA , SO AT THIS TIME , NATURALLY , YOU ARE IN A VERY DEEP SLEEPING, ON THAT NOT HAVE A SWEET DREAMS AND SEE YOU SOON.