what………..??.??
shock ro see dis….?
huh…………
i m soooo soo much angry on u all………..so sos ososoososos much dat i also donno…..
n SAYEEDA ………..i m double triple angry on u…………!!
alll of u r cheater….huh….
i just donno how much angry m on u…..
why….?.
u donno d reason also………sachchi now i will killl u…….
or will beat u with sweeper.(jhaadu)
u alll dint telll me n SAYEEDA…….! u…huh
u alll dint tell me dat its sayeeda bday on 13…
i came to know now….huh……
half day of ur bday had past n i came to know now…..now wat can i do….u all dont think me as ur frnd…….
its ok….
pehchaan gayi sabko me……..!
so now….
HAPPPPPPY BIRTHDAY SAYU::::::::HAPPY BDAY TO U
MAY ALLLAH GIV U ALL D HAPPINESS U DESERVE:::
N U REACH UR GOAL:::WID DOUBLE EXTRA OPPORTUNITIES:::
MAY U GET BEST OF EVERYTHING WHOLE YEAR N WHOLE LIFEE:::::
MANY MANY HAPPY RETURNS OF D DAY::::MY CUTE ELDER SISTER:::OR HAA SORRY FOR MAKING U ELDER BUT U R::!
U’R VERY SPECIAL FOR ME:::HOW MUCH I ALSO DONNO::
ITS ALLAH’S BLESSING TO ME TO HAVE A SIS LIKE U:::
HAPPY BDAY AGAIN:::
BDAY BUMS I CANT GIV U:::SO TELL TO SOME1 TO GIV U BDAY BUMS HEHE:::OR HAA BDAY PARTY TO CHAHIYE:::
ANYWAYS AGAIN HAAPPPPY BDAY N SORRY FOR LATE:::
IDK DAT ITS UR BDAY COZ U DINT TELL ME:::
ITS GOOD DAT I OPEN TU N GOT TO KNOW:::ITS 12 IN AFTERNOON NOW :::IDK WEN IT WILL B POSTED::
here is something for u.
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So all of u lets go to os………..
wait…….
U ALLL MEANS ALL D TEI FAMILY MEMBERS HAVE TO TELL ME WEN IS UR BDAY:::OR I WILL REALLY KILL U:::
IDK IN DIS ALL DAYS HOW MANY PPLS BDAY HAD GONE::IF I WILL KNOW DEN I WILL GIVE U UR BDAY BUM:::OOPS OS
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:::LIFE ISNT A WORK::::::::
a beautiful n big haveli is seen……its just awesome…hmmm its not decorated..but its clean n neat..der is a small river bank outside d haveli …lets go in…………oh here is name plate..”WORKERS PARADISE”
in d big haveli every1 is working…no one is seeen sitting…elders…childrens…youngsters….evry1 is working…n having some work……..
a girl came out of d kitchen….she s beautiful…but her hair were carelessely done…some inquistive string of her hair are cming on her face…she had wore a torn cloths…she had not taken care of her beauty..n just doing some wprk…she is revealed to b twinkle….twinkle taneja…yaa she is d daughter of leela n rt taneja d owner of d workers paradise….der thinking is dat …no one should reamain widout work…evry1 should hav a work…so elder…childrens n youngers all work together…here lives d taneja family..n d ppl who think work as first priority…….
tw takes a pitcher n cms out of d house to d river..to fill d water…its her daily routinue…
next scene:
A guy is seen sleeping….on d single bed..which is made up of rod outside d house…some1 comes n splash d water on him…n he wakes up by a thud..
guy:who d hell is dis…?
women:teri maa….(your mom)..kunj tu kab tak yeh karega…kuch kaam nahi karega to paise kya jhaad parse aayenge….(kunj…till wen u will do dis…if u will not do anything den rupees will come from tree…??)
kunj:are mom usikaa to sapna dekh raha..tha…!(mom i was dreaming about dat only)
mom:i dont want to listen anything….n yaa i came to tell u to go to workers paradise…for 5 days as i m going to my frnds weddding…der u will cm to know about d importance of time too…n u will not feel alone
kunj:ok
(he dont know d rule of workers paradise….)
next day kunj come to workers paradise…he goes n sleep..wen some1 tap his shoulder…
kunj:whose dis…
he says while yawning…
it was………………leela(who thought dat its tw…)
leela:son..! u dont hav anywork in hand….should i give u..so sorry to u..its bcause of my carelessness….
kunj was confused n surprised…
kunj:no aunty…i dont have anywork…n dont giv me any work pls…i hate it…
leela:o my god…! u r joking right..its not good beta…evry1 should work…evry minute precious…time is running…hav some work..
she leaves by saying dis…
kunj think to do some work…….
n he come out of d house n sit down near river with his painting brush n colours…
he take out pink colour n starts to colour d water….(hehee ….budhu…haha)
he was doing dis wen tw comes to fill water…n she was filled with pity to see him having no work…..
tw:hey u..! r u new to workers paradise…
kunj:hey beautiful…hmm m new..
tw:oh dats y u dont have any work…do some work…n save d time..its very precious…
kunj:ok i will do can u give me ur pitcher…
tw thought dat he will fill water so she gave it n start to leave wen she see him..drawing picture on pitcher…
tw:oh dear…i gave u to fill water not to colour it…
kunj:but i donno to work….
tw:oh so is der any purpose or anymeaning to colour it….
kunj:no its just time paas..i love to do time pass wat about u..
tw:i love to save time…n how can u do d work which have no meaning n no purpose at all…
kunj:for making myself happy…my first rule to live d life is…do wat makes u happy..so it makes me happy..
tw was surprisd
tw:oh bdw…wats ur name..myself twinkle. twinkle taneja
kunj:my self kunj..kunj sarna
both left…
at night wen tw was about to sleep she takes d pitcher in hand n start to see it..from different size..n she was till now not understanding..dat something other dan work is also der…from childhood she saw n done work only…had not spare a minute….n feeling very different after listening d sentence by kunj “do wat dat makes u happy”she smiles unknowingly n sleep…
next day she woke up n again start to work
again she met kunj at d river bank..der he gives her a coloured ribbon having flowers design on it…n tie her hair with it….tw felt happinesss….now daily both met n he changed her dressing style first she was a only worker…n not taking care of her face n cloths …now she is like a princess….
d ppl n d parents of tw was tense by dis…dey were thinking dat dis id happening first tym in der life…she calls kunj mom urgently so dat tw would b away from him..she came on d 5 day…kunj goes to her..n started to leave…but felt something sad in his heart..he start to find tw…but dint find her…so he directly run to d river n saw tw sitting widout any work….
kunj:twinkle…
tw:hmmm..
she was sobbing silently…
kunj:y r u crying…
tw:kunj i…i…m not crying
kunj:dont lie…i know u r crying…tell me or i will also cry….
tw:donno y…but i m feeling very bad n sad beause u r leaving
kunj:same here…
tw:i donno u did or not…but i love u..! u tell me dat work is not evrything..life is a short period…enjoy it fully…v should work too but enjoy also n hav to do wat makes us happy…….i fall for u ….i love u kunj…i cant live widout u….!
n she falls down on knees crying..
kunj bend down n sit near her..he cups her face
kunj:twinkle….
she see him…both have a eyelock…….
kunj:i donno how…but wen i saw u at dis place for d first time…i fall for u…i love u from d beginning only my working doll
tw gets happy she hugs him…
n both hav a sweet moment…….
leela comes n oppose to marry tw with d careless n workless man
kunj:aunty…urf my future sasu mom..pls maanjao na…n u r opposing just for dat..i m not having anywork..cmmon yaar..which type of ppl r u….
dis widened evry1s eye…including twinkle..
kunj:i mean..which typ of person r u..who had not enjoy…golgappe..
leela:wat is dis golgappe…
kunj:seee…u all r dis much dumb..u had not think anything else work..matlab hav u 1 tym came out of dis workers paradise..urf bhootiya haveli…ok leave all dat.lets enjoy golgappe..lets go
dey sit in bus…
n goes to streest golgappe..
dey eat n enjoyed den he took dem for some amusing place..dey all gets happy
rt:i was wrong beta…u r d right jamai of us…u explain us d meaning of life…v thought life as a work…
leela:yaa beta..v were wrong n u were right…u r d right prson for my twinkle
dey all gets happy n celebrate…
soon twinj marry..n d workers paradise name plate was changed to happpy family
d person who did nothing in ife did 1 right thing to love n marry twinkle
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so here it ends…hope u enjoy…
i m sorry for late..
its already 4..i donno when it will post
posted:4 on 13 october
thank u for readiing d moral is ENJOY D LIFE FULLY:::DONT ONLY WORK:::::
sayu special….
sorry if any1 dint like it…..
happy bday again
n yaa pls evry1 giv ur birth date pls……..
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Wooooow ammu…superbbb os…nd yeah my b’day is on 22 january
Her b’day is on the 17th pagli.
Yaa I came to know now…actually sm1 had posted is for her bday so I got confused….
plz plz plz maaf kardo… tum meri wajah se sab se gussa ho rahiho … un sab ki koi galthi nahi hai…galthi meri hi hai…I have done wrong…sayeeda ka b.d 17 October ku hai aur maine bymistake 13 ko post kardiya… I m really really sorry yaar…koi bhi punishment chalega…sab mere wajha se confuse ho gaye ho..plz ammu..plz forgive . .. im really guilty..ek no ki buddu.. tum jo bhi punishment dogi woh chalega…but plz maaf kardo…
ur os was really good… it was so cute…again sorry…bye..
love u..maaf kardo..
Aamu…gurl…u bought a big smile on my face..,..lovely os
My bday on 11 june
Sorry dear Sayeeda for forgetting your special day sorry sorry sweetie and many many happy returns of the day happy B-Day to ?????????????????????
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amazing ….amu my bday on 2 dec☺☺☺☺????????
Mindblowing aamu….
My birthday is on 12 april
Thanx sanu
Awesome os… Nd the message u give that’s really true nd amazing… Loved it… Nd my b’day was on 3rd oct….
Oh sidhanshi…so sorry..I donno ur bday so don’t wish u..
Awesome os… Nd the message u give that’s really true nd amazing… Loved it… Nd my b’day was on 3rd oct…. Nd i’m missing u’r ff… Try to post it soon
aamu this was so cute….loved it
nd no worries sayoo got ur wishes in advance
It’s outstanding yaar… I just loved it…i think before one week it self tu friend started to celebrate sayooo’ bday.. She is really blessed to have friend like u love… She is bzy in her work….and haa ammu.. Don’t think who the hell is she to say all this… Right… I’m one writer
I know…dear..n its a big confusion created yesterday..wen sm1 posted her bday is…so..
N I know u…
I readed ur ff too…
But if u r writing now den pls give link….I m busy wide study….
N who to hai hi who..akhir Frnd uski me hu….hehe
I thought u will misunderstand me… So I was thinking about you… When I checked u page… Thank God u didn’t misunderstanding me… Ya ur right… And leave my ff it’s just bakwas… And ur os amazing
Really di we were even very excited for sayuu di’s bday…….well di it was fab…….he he he…..I know I commented for the first time but koi ni…….Janna to padega n……..Nd if u font then ….mmmmmmmm…..hnnn….we both will have a jhadu( sweeper) fight ok….???.???……Chalo leave it……….the episode was really awesome di…….pls keep posting nd keep loving me…..after all I’m soo…….I’m soooooo …..soooooo??? Pata ni ?? haaannn…….yaad Aya……..so bad……that I didn’t comment before…….Chalo enough now…….loved the episode di……nd ek aur baat……….read below…
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I LOVE YOU sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much di…………..???????
So nice is I loved it
And my birthday.is on 16 October
And what about you
Keep on posting more
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Honestly u all r my family ❤❤❤and ammmuuuuu I love soo mmuch u r honestly soooo sweeet u guys r the best gift someone could ever get❤❤❤❤❤muah?
And yeah HAPPY BIRTHDAY ? DAY sayeeeedddddaaaaahhh????????????????
(mere birthday 7th November ? ko hai)
Hey aamu api awesome luvd it and ya its my first comment on ur any part of writing
Nice one aamu it’s so sweet just like u n my bday is in April on 29
Amazing n cute os.. n loved ur msg as well.. my birthday was on 6th Oct.. ❤❤
awesome amazing fabulous….& my b’day was on 30th july
Aww this was a different a nd cute story. And birthday here on Dec 16 ?
nice os
u r awesome and my birthday is on 26 May
A really cute os! Write more 🙂 And my birthday is on 14 feb!
Such a cute one slot it was…. Really loved it? Happiest Belated Birthday Sayu? And yeah d Earth received its gift on 19th February 2002??? well I m sorry aama dear but I don’t know much Abt u coz I had taken a break from TU for smwhat 45-50days. Isliye I missed many things in TU…. So can we be Frnds?
Are anushka yeh to koi puchne ki baat hai …I m ready to b ur Frnd…always…I had also taken a break of 15-16 days…issue zyaada due nahi rehsakti tu se…he he….n thanx for cmntng….
V will b surely Frnd…
M just some months old den u
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Mine bday is 3 November 2001
Is this based on the chapter-7 of english textbook of 10th std…??
No I donno dear..I m in 10 but I don’t have any chqpte like dis
Loved it Cute story 🙂 Keep writing 🙂
Hey aamu awesome os loved it yr
N msg u gave was amazing loved it dear
Aaaammmmmmuuuuuuuuu ek toh tum mujhse pehle se naraz ho r upar mai itna late comment kr rhi hoo ….. jaan gussa mat ho mera bday kal hai …so u r not late In wishing me in fact u made my day so special by wishing me nd making me aware of my bday In advance…
Yes yrr u made me aware…coz for the first time ever I won’t be celebrating my bday coz that day I will be busy at office for the whole day …..but my TU frnds will surely make this day as the best one…..
I don’t have words to express my happiness….my love to u all ….u all guy’s complete me ….. without u ppl I’m nothing…..I must have done some good deeds that Allah blessed me with you all ……
This OS really means a lot to me……. twinj were soooo cute in this OS….Nd at the end the msg u gave is so damm correct….. but now a days I’m going anti to it…I’m not enjoying my life… it’s really messed up but after sometime everything will be back to normal….I will again start to enjoy my life with u all …..
Thank you sooooooooooooooooooo much for soooo lovely gift yrrrr …..u really means a lot to me….like the way u don’t know what I mean to u similarly I also don’t have an idea much I love you…… love you yrrrr for always making me smile…..
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