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Home»Fan Fiction»It was all a lie…. Twinj (episode 1)
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It was all a lie…. Twinj (episode 1)

ChikuBy ChikuAugust 25, 201650 Comments4 Mins Read
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IT WAS ALL A LIE…………….

I remember her
I remember every moments spent with her
I remember her laugh , her giggle
She was the shining star of my life.
I was mad at her.
I was mad…………
Nd i truly became mad for her.
She was my beloved
I loved her and will always do ,

Its said that love starts with an impression but ends with depression………….. But if it lands a person in a mental asylum……….
It happened with a guy. Tha was not a mad but was made a mad by the world.
The man was a very fun loving , cute, caring person. Who loved everyone but did everyone loved him back.

A room is shown with a man in 20s sleeping on a hard bad. His facial expressions showed that his mind and heart were not calmed. He had lines in his forehead. His lips had a curve but the curve was not for happiness it was for all the dismay he had. His deep brown eyes showed pain and grief. Now his full face is shown. The man is non then than kunj sarna.

There were some noises coming from other rooms. There were noises of people shouting , grumbling , crying, laughing and what not. These noises will make u feel like u r standing in a mental asylum ………. Ya it was a mental asylum
Kunj was one of the patients of mental asylum.
He was living in this mental asylum from past one year.
He was also a mental like other people living there.
Suddenly some one splashed water on kunj.
Kunj got up and saw a man standing in front of him with a half filled water jug.
The amn shouted on kunj to come for dinner. Kunj like an obidient student listened to him and went to the dinning area of the mental asylum. This mental asylum was of a very rich bussiness man who so there were provision made for dining area.

Kunj went to the table took a steel plate for himslef and went and stood their in a quae.
His facial expression showed that he was not interested in eating but he had to eat forcefully because the ward boys wont give him food afterwards. So he was simply standing and waiting for his turn but the person behind him started laughing loudly, and was pushing kunj. This made kunj angry and he started beating that person blue and black. Kunj was just murmuring one line while beating him. He was continuously saying that she is mine , stay away from her , u cant take her away from me.
All the ward boys came running to him and caught hold of him from back and they took kunj to a dark room and tied him to a chair and started giving him electric shocks.
People ofter think that electric shocks are give to cure a person but it not so, electric shocks are give just to calm dwn the person suffering from mental illness.
All this while kunj was shouting badly and asking for mercy but they were least interested in his words. Doctors have give strict oders to the ward boys that if any one behaves the way kunj did , give them electric shocks straight away without asking or counulting doctors

Electric shocks made kunj unconscious. They took him to his room and kept him on his bed and locked his room from outside. This was the daily routine for kunj. He was used to it completely.

He was not mad but was made by world. His innocence , showed his whole heartidness but one incident changed him completely.

Precap- enrty

Guys its my first ff. Plz tell was it good or bad. Did u all liked it. How was the poem in the beginning??????? Was i able to show kunjs dismay and grief?? Plz do comment and let me know about it. If ull tell to continue then only I’ll continue it .?
Luv u all ?????

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    50 Comments

    1. SidMin on August 25, 2016 12:09 am

      Chiku finally your ff Loved it the start Kunj in mental asylum 🙁 but want to know the reason for it waiting for the next episode 🙂

      • Chiku on August 25, 2016 7:28 pm

        Thanks ????

    2. rashiverma2199 on August 25, 2016 12:16 am

      Awesome…episode ….lovely it…

      • Chiku on August 25, 2016 7:38 pm

        Thanks rashi

    3. Joonakanksha on August 25, 2016 12:29 am

      Wow…awesome chiku

      • Chiku on August 25, 2016 7:41 pm

        Thanks joon

    4. SidVee on August 25, 2016 1:34 am

      It’s awesome start.. but feeling bad for kunj?? poor him.. and that too in a mental asylum?.. can’t wait to know what happened.. do cont soon ?

      • Chiku on August 25, 2016 7:42 pm

        Thanks sidvee?

    5. Purnima.agrawal30 on August 25, 2016 3:08 am

      awesome amazing emotional epi

      • Chiku on August 25, 2016 7:50 pm

        Thanks purnima??

    6. Romaisha on August 25, 2016 4:45 am

      Chiku??? Huh!!!! I started reading and I’m like “this is a very nice concept and a different yet mind blown story..” And when i saw your name i was soooo happy!!! ?????????? yayyy !!!
      I cant wait to keep reading!! Pleash postt ur next episode soon !! 🙂
      Love u di ?

      • Chiku on August 25, 2016 7:50 pm

        I am happy that u liked it ???????????????????????
        Ill post it soon

    7. Angita on August 25, 2016 5:53 am

      Chehakkkkkkkk!
      To good start yaar
      What a concept❤❤

      • Chiku on August 25, 2016 7:28 pm

        Thanks angita

    8. sanjanaagrawal on August 25, 2016 7:32 am

      What a concept …. loved it and plz continue….

      • Chiku on August 25, 2016 7:27 pm

        Thanks dear

    9. thanmy on August 25, 2016 9:29 am

      Chikuuu awesome yaar
      Kunj grief was like in front of my eyes
      Its sooo good
      Doesn’t seem I like ur writing for the first time
      Loved it pls cont soon

      • Chiku on August 25, 2016 7:27 pm

        Thanks thammy ???
        Ill post it very soon

    10. Sayeeda on August 25, 2016 9:30 am

      Amazing start Chiku.
      I’m so excited for ur next episode….
      Ur concept is fab……
      Plz post next one soon
      Love u ????

      • Chiku on August 25, 2016 7:25 pm

        Thanks di ? ?
        I am glad that an amazing writer like u liked my ff

    11. Priya_ on August 25, 2016 9:58 am

      Wonderful start..
      A different one..
      Waiting for the next

      • Chiku on August 25, 2016 7:24 pm

        Thanks priya??

    12. sujina on August 25, 2016 11:51 am

      poor kunj…electric shock…feeling bad…
      w8in 4 kunjs condn reason…post asap..

      • Chiku on August 25, 2016 7:23 pm

        Thanks sujina?

    13. Sidhanshi on August 25, 2016 12:50 pm

      Amazing epi.. Waiting for the next part..

      • Chiku on August 25, 2016 7:23 pm

        Thanks sidhanshi?

    14. Saby on August 25, 2016 12:58 pm

      Chiku…. ALl the best…
      Amazing start darling….
      And I loved it… Different concept
      Wanna have more… And more…
      Post asap…. Love uh ?

      • Chiku on August 25, 2016 7:22 pm

        Thanks jaan??

    15. Sameera on August 25, 2016 1:28 pm

      Awesome start chiku
      Plz post next one soon
      Eagerly waiting for it

      • Chiku on August 25, 2016 7:19 pm

        Thanks sam??????

    16. shikha on August 25, 2016 2:15 pm

      fantastic concept
      feeling like crying on Kunj’s positions
      but there are thousands of questions in my mind for it so I wanna read this story fastly to have those answers

      • Chiku on August 25, 2016 7:19 pm

        Thanks shikha

    17. shreya098 on August 25, 2016 2:23 pm

      Amazing start chiku…
      Waiting for it..

      • Chiku on August 25, 2016 7:18 pm

        Thanks shreya

    18. Monica on August 25, 2016 4:08 pm

      Amazing start! I loved it so much. This is just so interesting. Waiting for the next episode. Love you ?

      • Chiku on August 25, 2016 7:18 pm

        Thanks monica??
        Luv u too ?

    19. Ayu(shreya) on August 25, 2016 4:45 pm

      Amazing chiku!! Loved it..continue it soon ?

      • Chiku on August 25, 2016 7:18 pm

        Thanks dear. ?

    20. Shatakshi on August 25, 2016 6:20 pm

      Oouyyeee hoeeeee chiku
      It was Amazing
      Mujhe bataya kyu nai that u r writing…thank God I just checked the ff nahi to ittna aacha ff miss ho jata
      Love u dear❤❤

      • Chiku on August 25, 2016 7:14 pm

        Awww?????
        I luv u nd i am glad that u liked it

    21. TwinjSidMin on August 25, 2016 7:28 pm

      Amazing awesome start chiku…kunj in mental asylum electric shocks feeling bad for him…unique concept…do continue and post next soon…can’t wait more…thank you chiku for keeping up my words and starting a ff…

      Love you chiku???

      • Chiku on August 25, 2016 8:21 pm

        Thanks di?????????
        Nd will post soon

    22. Aksa(SidMin's and the ff writers die hard fan...) on August 25, 2016 9:23 pm

      Amazing start…u showed kunj’s grief very well..yaar wait nahi ho raha he abto apko jaldi post karna hi hoga…luved it.. 🙂

      • Chiku on August 25, 2016 10:50 pm

        Thanks dear?? i already posted it.

    23. SIDMIN-daamini on August 26, 2016 12:46 am

      Dear chiku
      Amazing
      Loved it
      Plzz post next one soon
      ?????????

      • Chiku on August 26, 2016 12:11 pm

        Thanks dear????

    24. Sana(sanu) on August 26, 2016 8:08 pm

      Nice

      • Chiku on August 26, 2016 11:22 pm

        Thanks ?

    25. baby on August 27, 2016 1:34 pm

      omg chiku seems so intresting
      sry dear late hone ke liye bt osm
      i no ino u posted as well osm yr luv u
      vry cute n intresting bt d shocks given 2 kunj shit oh babaji y

      • Chiku on August 27, 2016 1:59 pm

        Thanks baby??

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