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Ek Duje Ke Vaste Fan Fiction

Why did you leave me (Edkv) epi 1

NeetiBy NeetiAugust 24, 201627 Comments4 Mins Read
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hey guys, Leeti (late+Neeti) or ur pakao chutku behen is here with epi 1…I wrote my first epi fr Maro di bcs today is hr Bday taliya??????…dis maybe today’s epi will be short cs I have to write it 2 to 3 times (galti meri hi thi?)…Maro di plss read dis epi it’s especially fr u…and I posted a release date and correction that is nt uploaded yet…bt I will be uploaded anyways…
so let’s start…

Suman’s Pov: kehte he ki agar dosti me biswas aur respect ye do chiz nai he toh wo khokla hota he (it is said if friendship don’t have trust and respect then it is a lie) bohot log ise sunkr unsuna kar dete he (many people just hear it and forget it) I hve also met somebody like dis who dont value friendship.. who just think about himself.. who think friendship as a game…who just…..why I’m even thinking about him…I hate him, I will never forgive you Mr…
pov end by a jerk…

Suman, Suman, kaha kho gayi tu (where are u lost)
Sumo: Nothing, Maria (di apke Bday pr ye chota sa gift)..me bas kuch soch rai thi…( I was just thinking about something
Maria: abhi chal taxi mil gayi…( nw let’s go, we got a taxi)

Sumo: ok lets go (they were at Delhi airport)…
Suman’s Pov : me ghoom phir ke usi jagha a gayi jaha me kabhi nai ana chahti thi (After roaming I again came to d place where I didn’t wanted to come), yo jagha jisne mujhe har wakt dard diya, wo jagha jaha mera smman chin liya gaya, wo jagha zaha mera bharosa toota (d place which always gave me pain, d place where my self respect was snatched, d place where my trust was broken…
she takes out a diary frm her bag and took a pic frm the diary, pov: y did u broke my trust why..
again a jerk breaks the pov…
Maria : Suman chal jaldi…

Sumo quickly puts the photo and d diary on hr bag and says, lets go…
de came to a beautiful house….a duplex house
de enter d house, d furnitures were covered with white cloths…d went upstairs and enters a room, full pink colour walls, d floor was covered with light sky ble tiles..d wall covered with a small girls photo…
Sumo gets lost….

after few minutes Maria asked Sumo: is it ur room Sumo…( ap toh samajh gaye honge ye Sumo ka gahr he aur phts bhi Sumo kahi ne)
Sumo was still lost, Maria moves her hands infront of Sumo’s eyes…Suman Suman..
Sumo gets to her senses,
Maria: maine pucha kya ye tera kamra he (I asked, is it ur room
Sumo: nai mere bandar ka kamra he, of course ye mera kamra he (no it’s my monkey’s room, of course it’s my room)
Maria: pr tujhe to Pink and Sky Blue colour se sakt nafrat he (bt u just hate Pink and Sky Blue colour)
Sumo :I was a child that time so couldn’t understand the difference btwn good and bad…
Maria: ok then lets start cleaning the home.

de clean the house and made it chakachak…de ordered food frm outside cs de don’t have kitchen stuffs…de ate dinner and slept

Ab me bhi sone jati hu kiuki aha abhi… oh no pure 1:50 am bj gaye, I have schl tmrw…
mere liye bht bara ho gaya, ap logo ka ap decide karo ye epi short tha ya long…till den good night ya good by,..are sry precap dena bhool gayi

Precap: Introducing….. abhi nai surprise rakti hu…

kaun kar sakta he sahi guess wat do u think who is d person, whom I’m going to introduce
Maria Api sry, pure epi me maine apke nam ke bad api, apu ya di likhnai sakti, isliya and happy Bday????????????????☕☕?????????….✈and is plane ko pakad kar chali yao ap idhar…?…
plss guys do cmnt, good or bad just cmnt plsss
sry if any typing mistake, I’m very sleepy, so again by by- Neeti

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    27 Comments

    1. Neeti on August 24, 2016 9:16 am

      nind me pata nahi kya likh diya maine har jagga galti ki he maine

    2. Sriya on August 24, 2016 10:10 am

      neeti meri behena yeh toh kamaal dhamaal jhakas fabulous episode thi…!! love u meri behena mujhe nahi pata ki meri chot si behen itni acha likhi thi hai???….!! post asap post asap plzzzzzzzz behhena jaldi post kar aur mujhe laga tha hai ke shravan ko introduce karni wali ho….!! just a guess sorry if i guess wrong…!! tumhara age kya hai??? meri behena jaldi bata mujhe jana hai aur ha mein teri jese hi edkv or shraman ko love karti hu or especially shravan ko…!! love you behena your cute sweet sissy…!! aur ha bahot mistakes hui lekin koi bata nahi teri didi mujhe maaf kar rahi akhir tum meri cute beautiful sissy……!! jo ho….!! chalo bye take care next part posted that is 10th episode 11th episode also i had wrote now i writing 12th one….!! i will post them also soon…!! take care…!!

      • Sriya on August 24, 2016 10:42 am

        i wrote 12th episode also…!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but 13th episode tomorrow when 10th will be posted i will post 11th when it will be posted i will post 12th one too…..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

      • Neeti on August 24, 2016 5:46 pm

        yeah,apne itne sare pst kar diya, thank u
        hai hai itna tarrif mujhe mar ne ka irada he kya…
        a

      • Neeti on August 24, 2016 5:51 pm

        aur sry kiu bol rahi he ap bt guess karte raho me ab nahi bataungi wo bad me pata chalega….?sry…
        me 13 saal ki choti bacchi hu…?
        bas 10 saal ke bacche ki class me parti hu?
        yeah apne mujhe maf kar diya thank u
        say Shraman rocks
        luv u tooo much- Neeti

    3. Ariana on August 24, 2016 10:58 am

      What a starting! Maria will have a heart attack. Nd as for the epi….OSHADHARON! I’m super duper excited for the next part. I really wanna knw wht actually happened. Ufff the mystery is killing me from inside. Post next epi really soon. This time don’t be late. If u r, I’ll ensure when I visit Bangladesh for a trip, I punch u. Huuummph! My warning… *evil smile* MUHAHAHA…so better make this Mocambo happy. But then again, I love u na…? so for this Aru, post soon. :p
      Trucks bhorti bhalobasha
      -Ariana

      • Neeti on August 24, 2016 6:01 pm

        nai nai Maria Apur heart attack asle ai gift er ki hobe…
        are apnar ta amar chaiteo lakh gun oshdharon…
        ar fb will come soon so I will be revealed soon
        where are u nw di…?????u said that wen u will visit…???? mane apne akhane thaken na….
        no no…, no ghisi latthi thappor plsss I’ll always keep u happy sotti
        I will pst soon Aru apu
        hai hai truck driver amake dekhe bhoye truck soho ulte porlo…tai ap nake oi truck e amar bhalobasha diye pathai dilam?
        luv u more than that- Neeti

    4. Sharmansangel on August 24, 2016 10:58 am

      Nice neeto

      • Neeti on August 24, 2016 6:03 pm

        thank u di bt apne itna chota cmnt kiya yani apko do kauri bhi pasand nai kia hai na…?

      • Sharmansangel on August 24, 2016 6:44 pm

        Aisa bola na thapad marungi chota iss liye tha kyun ki Mujhe tumhare ff ki taareef ke liye words nai mil rahe the aur Mujhe vo os padjna hai kab post karogi please jaldi karo Varna meri jaan nikal jayegi intezaar ke maare

      • Neeti on August 25, 2016 1:09 pm

        ? di ap mujhe thappar marenge?
        me to bas majak kar rahi thi?
        phir se os bola apne ts boliye plsss?

    5. sona on August 24, 2016 11:43 am

      It was so nice..nay b the second lead charector is gng to b introduced in next episode??

      • Neeti on August 24, 2016 6:13 pm

        thank u di…
        jo bhi hoga accha hi hoga…
        luv u – Neeti

    6. Nikita on August 24, 2016 3:13 pm

      Meri pyaari neeti ..
      Amazing episode babu !!
      Marie di ke liye bohot epic surprise hai !!
      Amazingly awesome…
      I really wanna know kya hua tha?
      Entry.. Umm.. Maybe Shravan or Pushkar.. Jo bhi hoga, meri pyaari shi neeti accha hi likhegi.. Haina??
      Post sooon !!
      Loads of Love,
      Nikki di..

      • Neeti on August 24, 2016 6:11 pm

        apko Bengali ati he…I mean babu..bt Hindi me bhi babu hota he..I think
        epic nai tha bt jitna de sakti thi utna de diya maine..hehehehe
        ya entry acche ke liye hi hoga jo bhi he….
        will pst soon
        luv to u too- Neeti

    7. Fatimagulesarfraz on August 24, 2016 4:48 pm

      Hey neeti !!!!
      Just awwwwesome ep ..
      Luv it to the core ..
      Ap to brra acha likhti ho yr .. ??
      Post soon ..
      Take care .. ?

      • Neeti on August 24, 2016 6:06 pm

        hey Fatima Api
        really ye awsome tha kya…
        hahahaha, makhan chori kar ke lekar aye kya mujhe lagane ke liye..hahahaha heheheh?
        will pst soon…
        u also take care
        luv u- Neeti

    8. Prettypreeti on August 24, 2016 5:45 pm

      My nets lovely
      Maro di happy birthday to u
      Nets ty yaar it was cool
      Nice
      Shraman good
      U r thief don’t take to ur heart joking
      Loved it
      Post soon

      • Neeti on August 24, 2016 11:40 pm

        thank u thank u thank u Preeti di
        and u can call me anything thief, chudail, dayan, bhutni bt I will nt mind cs I’m besarram?
        will pst soon
        luv u- Neeti

    9. Marie on August 24, 2016 5:56 pm

      Hey darling…..!!!
      OMG OMG OMG….!!! I m speechless…!! The biggest n greatest surprise fr me…!!!
      Thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u soooo much uncountable….!! Yr u made my day special…!! It was a fantastic ep….!! Thanks u so much mujhe itna pyaar dene ke liay yr…!! U r a sweet heart….!! Neeto neeto mera dil Bhi yahi chah raha hai abhi plane pakado n WAHAN aajao…!! N tumhe tight hug doon…..!! Y r u so sweet…..!! Thank u so much yr…!
      Love u sab se ziada…!! Bht bht bht….!!!
      I m getting a heart attack Ariana ne sai kaha…!!
      N epic surprise fr me…..!! Nikko ne sai kaha….!!
      Mai tumhe jitna thank u karoon kam hai yr……!
      A lot of kisses tight hugs frm me…..!!!
      Love u sab se ziada…..!!
      Take care sweeto…….!!!

      • Neeti on August 24, 2016 11:48 pm

        nai ye sabse bara surprise nai he I’m sure apke frnds ne aur family ne isse bhi bara surprise diya he apko…aur Sriya di toh apke liye surprises ki dukan kholdi he hahahaha
        and y r u thanking me I couldn’t even give a gift to u, I’m so sry
        di u always made me feel so special warna mujhe galiyo ke siwa kisi ne kuch kaha hi nai
        are ajao no prob bas passport and visa le ana warna Bajrangi Bhaijan ki tarha ap bhi phas jao gi?
        nai I luv u sabse zyada
        plss don’t get heart attack warna mera kya hoga?????????
        u also take care di- Neeti

    10. angel_pari on August 24, 2016 8:28 pm

      Loved it neetiiiii
      it was really nyc
      u wrote well!!!!!!

      And sorry han i cant cmnt long bt tht dosent mean i didnt like it….

      I love it…,,

      • Neeti on August 25, 2016 1:01 pm

        tq di, jhooti hi sahi kisi ne tarif toh kiya?
        are maine bura nai mana or Riya di ko maine bas chirhaya?
        I luv u di- Neeti

    11. Ruchi on August 24, 2016 10:03 pm

      Hey Neeti dear..
      Sorry yr late ho gyi..
      kesi ho tum??
      Amazing epi..
      post next epi asap ..
      take care..
      Lots of love..
      Ruchi.. 🙂

      • Neeti on August 25, 2016 1:04 pm

        I’m fine Ruchi di, ap kaisi ho..????
        thank u, is bar me late ho gayi cs I’m Leeti (Late+Neeti)
        will pst soon
        u also take care di
        luv u loads- Leeti

    12. MAYA444 on August 25, 2016 3:50 am

      wow last time u asked me to read ur ff …. its really good
      if any of u guys haven’t read it is ek duje ke vaste ff
      ” i love you” i have made 7 ff

      • Neeti on August 25, 2016 1:07 pm

        thank u di, I will go and read the latest epi nw
        sry I’m late cs I’m Leeti (Late+Neeti)
        lots of luv- Neeti

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