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Home»Fan Fiction»Laxmila – the love story (Part 4)
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Laxmila – the love story (Part 4)

pragyashreeBy pragyashreeApril 25, 2017Updated:April 26, 201722 Comments5 Mins Read
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Child 2: now Urmila didi you have to bat.

Urmila proudly walk to Laxman who happily give the bat.

Urmila get ready to bat. Laxman bowl her first bowl. Urmila hit it and the bowl goes up in the aaaiaiaiaiaiaiaiaiai air and

Ouch Laxman caught it and shouts how’s that. The child who was umpire of the game stares at both of them.
Laxman:(shout) what happen?
Child umpire: no ball.
Urmila jumps yipeeeeeeee. Not out not out not out.
Laxman: you sagar you ditch me.

Sagar take him aside. I am sorry kumar but didn’t you remember “attithi devo bhava” and look how much she is happy.

Laxman sees Urmila.

“sun mere humsafar kya tujhe itni si bhi khabar ki teri sasen chalti jidhar rahu me bas udhar”

Laxman and sagar also join them and start dancing. Urmila sees to the sun.
Urmila: kumar don’t you want to show me next things.

Laxman and Urmila bids a farewell to the ashram. Laxman show the important places in Ayodhya. They meet the common people, eats food in a local’s home.

Urmila: what a day!! Where are we going now?
Laxman: this is the last place I want you to see. The garden. You know I and Bhaiya spent most time of our childhood day there. And it is Sita bhabhi’s favorite place also.
Urmila:(teasingly) if you want then why not.
Urmila and Laxman roams in the garden met the gardeners who tell her some naughty incidents of ram-Laxman’s childhood.
Urmila: kumar who made this swing?( seeing a swing made of leaves and flowers)
Laxman: mata. Both of them prepare this for ram Bhaiya and me. You want to sit on it?
Urmila: it will not fall?
Laxman: even you were an elephant you will not fall. Trust me.
Urmila: you again want to tease me. Let it go. You may also sit. You are not big as an elephant.

Laxman and Urmila both sat on the swing. Urmila slowly swing it. Laxman stares her lovingly.
Urmila: say something.
Laxman: you say.
Urmila: about what?
Laxman: anything your friends, childhood.

Urmila smiles and start describing her relation with Sita, their days in mithila, her childhood. In between sometime Laxman also narrates some incidents of their childhood. But Urmila talks nonstop. And Laxman, he adored her with his eyes.

“ Jitni haseen ye mulakate hain, unse bhi pyaari teri batein hain
Batoun me teri jo kho jate hai , rahu na hosh mein main kabhi, bahon mein hai meri zindagi hay”

Its evening Ram and Sita come in the garden to look for Laxman and Urmila. They saw them on the swing.

Ram start going toward them but Sita stops him.
Sita: don’t disturb them Swami! It is the first time they are having a normal talk.
Ram: I don’t think they are talking. Look Laxman is just listening.
Sita: don’t you remember when we were here for the first time you too were just staring and listening me.
Ram: how can I forget that day. Well should we now disturb them?
Sita: wait for some time.

There Urmila and Laxman were lost. At once Laxman gain senses and smiles.

Urmila: why are you smiling?
Laxman 🙁 teasingly) by seeing how much you talk.
Urmila: then why are you listening?
Laxman: I am very good listener.
Urmila: Ohoh then I am very good orator.
Laxman: it’s getting late we should leave for the palace.
Sita: (coming from behind) at least you both remember that.

Ram and Sita laugh. Laxman and Urmila smile.

Ram: you know if you both talk normally like this, these oral war can come to an end. And you can be good friend.
Urmila: friends!! I can become friend with humans not with lion.
Laxman: and I am also not interested to become friend with a box full of problems.
Urmila: when I created problem for you?
Sita: are you both hungry? Or your stomachs are full with your words. Come on let’s go.
Urmila: yes yes didi, you know how much I want to tell you about the day.
Sita and Urmila proceed.
Laxman: what a girl she is?
Ram: one and only! Who can make your lips seal?
Laxman: Bhaiya. Ok I have to tell you many things so let’s go.

Ram and Laxman also proceed for the palace.
In the room of Urmila, Sita is arranging bed for them.

Sita: what was the best part of your day?
Urmila: discovering Kumar Laxman. You know did today I saw someone different whom I actually don’t know. He is not that bad.

Then Sita listens the details of Urmila’s day. In Laxman’s room ram was listening the description.

Urmila: didi! I think I should thank him.
Sita: why to get late for a good work.
Urmila goes to Laxman.
Laxman: for what are you here?
Urmila: I would like to thank you for making today the best day of my life. Because of you this day was probably the happiest day of my life. So just thank you!!
Urmila goes and Laxman stay silent standing.

“ ankhiya kare jee huzoori, mange hain teri manzoori
Kazran sihaye din rang jaye teri kastoori rain jagaye”

Laxman: I am gonna mad.

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    22 Comments

    1. vaidehi on April 26, 2017 10:04 am

      Guys here is a small poll for u all…..pls vote for anyone of the options……

      1. Best actor I portraying the role of lord Vishnu

      a. Ashish Sharma
      b. Saurabh raj jain

      2. Best swayamvar

      a. Sita’s swayamvar
      b. Draupadi’s swayamvar

      3. Best villain

      a. Ravan
      b. Shakuni

      Pls vote guys……from lakshmila aka suchi…….

      • pragyashree on April 26, 2017 10:27 am

        well for me nothing is better than Siya ke ram so my vote goes to……………
        1. Ashish Sharma (best Ram ever)

        2. Sita’s Swayamvar (grand!!)

        3. Raavan (no doubt bcz he has some positive points also)

      • arnasharma26 on April 30, 2017 8:06 pm

        Ashish ji obvio, jaan hai vo
        Sita’s swyamwar…..loved it yaar
        Ravan(even he was smart yaar??)

      • Jayani on April 28, 2017 1:00 pm

        1. Saurab Raj Jain
        2. Can’t choose… But I lyk Draupadi’s swyamvar a bit more dan sita’s
        3. Shakuni

    2. vaidehi on April 26, 2017 10:05 am

      Lovely episode dear pragyashree

      • pragyashree on April 26, 2017 10:23 am

        Thank you so much!! glad to see your comment.

    3. Aman on April 26, 2017 6:57 pm

      Ashish sharma as Ram, Sita swayamvar and Ravan as best villian

    4. Aman on April 26, 2017 6:58 pm

      Nice ff superb

    5. Aman on April 26, 2017 7:00 pm

      Nice ff superb loved it

      • pragyashree on April 26, 2017 8:00 pm

        Thanks bhai. Glad you like it.

    6. Shweta on April 28, 2017 12:03 am

      Loved it.

      • pragyashree on April 29, 2017 8:38 pm

        Thank you!!

    7. varshini on April 28, 2017 9:36 am

      its superb . all the scenes were really very nice . especially when siam see lakshmila talking was nice . the last part where urmila thanks a lakshman was really cute and sweet . . i follow all the episodes of ur ff but i dont find time to comment . all the episodes are awesome di . update next one soon . eagerly waiting for the next one

      • pragyashree on April 29, 2017 8:39 pm

        Thank you!! Glad you like it. will update soon.

    8. Astra on April 28, 2017 10:15 am

      wow.. excellent work dear… i’m fidaa to your ideas.. keep it up dear..

      • pragyashree on April 29, 2017 8:40 pm

        Thank you very much!!

    9. Jayani on April 28, 2017 1:02 pm

      Sry for d late comment di… As usual loved d epi… Full of fun… Lakshmila teasing each other… Nd d cricket fun… Waiting for d next epi di…

      Jai Siya Ram

      • pragyashree on April 29, 2017 9:00 pm

        I am really angry jayani how can you do that? I am shocked. ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….. You yourself forget the rule of No sorry. So I will not give you sorry.

        Thank you very much for your comment and will update soon.

      • Jayani on April 29, 2017 10:58 pm

        M sooooo *** for using dat word… Will not use it again

    10. Jayani on April 29, 2017 11:00 pm

      A frndsip story:

      1st friend: See I bought a new Cell phone
      2nd friend: Wow, come–on you have to give a party and then I will give you a gift

      In the evening they went to a hotel
      (after dinner)
      2nd friend: How did you arrange for money for the party ??

      1st friend: I sold my Cell phone…….
      How can I be happy without you being happy ?…..

      2nd friend: You idiot, I knew you would do something like this…
      That’s why I bought back the phone which you sold. Here is your gift..!

      “It is not friends in Life …
      Life is friendship……
      Which is true friendship:-*
      ? NICE Rules Of
      F. R. I. E. N. D. S. H. I. P

      NEVER ASK
      For A Hug
      Just Take It

      NEVER ASK
      “Do U miss me?”
      Say “I Miss U”

      NEVER ASK
      “Can U Help Me?”
      Say “Do This For Me”

      NEVER SAY
      I Can’t Live Without U
      Say I Live 4 U

      LAST But Not The LEAST

      NEVER SAY
      Thank you, Sorry, Please,
      Instead Say Anytime 4 U

      D E D I C A T E D
      To All My Lovely Friends
      ?????forward to your 15 best friends including me too, if I am. If you get 10 returns then you have true and loving friends in your life ????????

      • Jayani on April 29, 2017 11:02 pm

        Found dis in whatsapp… Felt dat shud share it wid u guys coz dese r sum rules which v shud follow in our daily lives

    11. Kashishkk on May 6, 2017 4:38 pm

      Waiting 4 next update

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