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Home»Fan Fiction»My Last Love….few shots….Raglak….(shot 4…)
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My Last Love….few shots….Raglak….(shot 4…)

MI_MAHIBy MI_MAHIJanuary 14, 2017Updated:January 15, 201717 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hii…guys…this is Mahi back with another chappy of The Last Love…thanks for commenting in last chappy…and for ur support… and also thanks to my silent readers…. and sorry for mistakes in advance…let’s get started…

My Last L?ve…
Chapter-4

what welcomed me there was her NRI husband…. it really pissed me off….

At the movement she saw me….she ran to her husband….
and said something in his ears….

I actually don’t remember what happened after that….

When i woke up….i was in hospital… with my one hand broken..
My wife was there…

And I wonder…why she was in tears…

Soon I got to know…why….she had to sell her bangles to pay hospital bills…

that hospital session really tired my pocket…

She was treating as if i m a kid….moreover as her own kid….

Make me take my medicine on time…feed me with her own hands…

She was even helping me to get up from bed…i jerked her and she fall on bed…

Laksh:-“i didn’t became handicapped…. it’s only a fracture and too on hand….i don’t need ur pity….i can handle it my self….so please… stay away from me…” said without looking at her…i can hear sobs…but i really don’t care…
She is becoming more annoying day by day…

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Next day i got discharged….

I can not expect more money from my family….so i had to go to work with my broken hand….
My wife begged me not to…really don’t know why…i felt as though
She is just here to annoy me….

I was in a lot pain that night…I was supposed to take a weeks rest….

That went along…my hand got cured….

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On 1st of next month… i called her…and handed some money…

Laksh:-“my first salary…after rejoining the company….”her face roseup….she smiled… listening this…
Until i said,”the money u paid in hospital…including enough interest…”

Tears flowed down her cheeks…
She kept it in my hand…and went back to bed to sleep….

I don’t know what she wants….that day she was crying for her bangles and now also she was crying when i returning her money..and i don’t know why…???
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Precap:- monsoon…..kiss….slap….. divorce???….

To be continued..

A/N:-how was the chappy..?? Hope u liked it….sorry if it is boring….
Guys now only chappys are left….

I have 3 more ideas in my mind….hope u will like it too…after completing this i will start one of them…if u want any other couple do tell me…

Vote for the story which u want…

1.- The Coffee Love..(2 shots)

2.- Love After Death…(maybe 4-5shots)

3.-One And Only Love..

Thanks for giving ur precious time…and reading it…keep reading…be happy… stay blessed… tc…bye..?

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    17 Comments

    1. Akankshanna on January 14, 2017 11:33 pm

      Wait fr nxt. …i’ll choose 2…seems intersesting

      • MI_MAHI on January 15, 2017 1:36 am

        Thank you very much….it means alot..keep reading… be happy….stay blessed…tc…?

    2. Ragz_teju on January 15, 2017 12:01 am

      awesome

      • MI_MAHI on January 15, 2017 1:12 am

        Thank you Ragz…glad to know u liked it….keep reading… be happy.. stay blessed… tc…?

    3. nikky on January 15, 2017 12:02 am

      any thing u want its raglak but its showing swasan

      • MI_MAHI on January 15, 2017 1:10 am

        I know….already told to tu team to change it..।hope they change it to Raglak….thanks for reading… be happy.. stay blessed.. tc?

    4. Riya on January 15, 2017 12:06 am

      I really really hate this Laksh.He treats Ragini like shit.Why can’t Ragini know her worth&stand up to him?She should slap him&leave.Plz don’t make Ragini a zuln sehne wali aurat here.That is why his ex left him coz he is a jerk!

      • MI_MAHI on January 15, 2017 1:34 am

        No…no…i will not make her julm sehne wali aurat…..i too don’t like thatso called ablaa nari concept…. i to think aaj ki nari sab par bhari….u will get every thing in next chappy…. Thank you very much for reading…. be happy….stay blessed….tc..

    5. Rasha on January 15, 2017 12:13 am

      Please complete this am out of eagerness…no need of duo update in the name of raglak & swasan.. just lost love is enough now for those fans. we just need a regular and long update please… just understand eager means it’s that much amazing off course whoever reading they think how rude he was but the fact is we r not God to understand for opposite person heart when we r not interested in them..

      • MI_MAHI on January 15, 2017 1:27 am

        Sorry Rasha….i can understand ur POV….actually i m typing it in my tab…..and due to childhood injury…my thumb starts hurting alot…that is why i m not able to write long updates….but surely try to give both chappys together and end it….Thank you very much for reading… it means alot…keep reading… be happy…stay blessed…tc..?

    6. lovely on January 15, 2017 1:39 am

      I hate laksh behavior, 3stories seems interesting my choice is raglak
      Story is your choice

    7. MI_MAHI on January 15, 2017 4:13 am

      Guys i know….that u all r now fedup with laksh’s behavior towards ragini….and many of u wanted to slap him for this and also me for writing this type of thing….But everything at its on importance in this story….ur all doubt will be cleared in last chappy…. just 2 chappy are left….And as compensation for writing this much short chappy….i will update one today itself….plss bear laksh’rudeness for one more time…..its important thats why i have to write it…

      And about wrong name it’s not my mistake….i don’t know why they are changing name Everytime….Raglak to Swasan…. but i have asked tu team to change it to Raglak…. hopefully they will do it….

      I Hope u will understand….

    8. tani on January 15, 2017 2:53 pm

      Mind blowing…. ..loved it…3 story seems good,but if u say one I will say 3rd one….

    9. Ammu on January 15, 2017 3:38 pm

      Interesting episode and I loved all 3. Want Raglak plzzzzzzzzz

    10. jazzy on January 15, 2017 4:57 pm

      amazing and i like 2 option

    11. asra on January 15, 2017 7:02 pm

      awesome dear….i also hate laksh behaviour….waiting for nxt one….i like 3 one dear…tkcr dear…

    12. hemalattha on January 16, 2017 5:32 pm

      Nice.

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