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Home»Fan Fiction»My Last Love….few shots….swaragini….(Shot 1…)
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My Last Love….few shots….swaragini….(Shot 1…)

MI_MAHIBy MI_MAHIJanuary 9, 201745 Comments2 Mins Read
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Hii…..guys this is mahi….back with another story….and thanku for reading my last story…..and also those who commented and also thanks to my silent…now let’s get started with the story….

My Last L?ve….
Chapter 1…

Boy’s POV:-

My first love was a flop…
A bigger flop than “Great Grand Masti”….

The same old story….
She loved me until…. she got married to NRI….easily said but it was really harder…

Ofcourse,it destroyed the whole of me….got depressed….. sleep was gone for ever…. etc…etc….etc….

Even though love stories are different….the breakup stories remain same for men….
Uncombed hair….,unshaved beared…, and loop of “why this kolaveri di….???” and “sunn raha hai na tu ro rha hu main….”

It usually lasts for atleast 2 months…upto six….

But the problem with me was….it never got of me….even after this 6 whole months….

I pulled my days doing nothing….but just sleeping and eating….

My family tried their best to save me from this….

Yoga….Gym….the anti-depression pills…
But nothing came working out….

It was then our family doctor came up with the idea of decade…”TO GET ME MARRIED….”

As u can guess I never agreed….

I wonder this people never had love in their life….They just don’t know how I felt….
They just don’t know first love never leaves…

The request turned to ORDERS…and later into emotional black mailing….

As I was emotionally handicapped enough….I had to agree at last to get married….

The biggest tragedy was i could not see my would be wife until the day of marriage….

And also she agreed for this marriage even after knowing my whloe story….

I just understand that India still the place where atleast sometimes, girls have no option on their marriage….

To be continued….

A/N:- so this is the story….it is few shot may be 3 or 4…..whole story will be boy’s POV……so tell me should I continue or stop it…its all yours decision….. do u want any specific pair….or should i write as it is means without giving names… and 3rd option i will give random names u can imagine ur favourite pair…. do tell should i continue or not please….and sorry for mistakes.. and thanku for reading….stay blessed… be happy always… bye…?

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    45 Comments

    1. Simin on January 9, 2017 9:15 am

      Superb plz swasan

      • MI_MAHI on January 9, 2017 8:57 pm

        Thanks alot dear….I will try all my level best to not to disappoint u….thanku for reading…. be happy…. stay blessed….tc…?

    2. Sus on January 9, 2017 9:28 am

      Nyc

      • MI_MAHI on January 9, 2017 9:00 pm

        Thank u very much dear…..it means alot…keep reading… be happy….stay blessed…. tc…?

    3. tëìtō kUn on January 9, 2017 9:32 am

      Nice….
      Plzzz Raglak….

      • MI_MAHI on January 9, 2017 9:05 pm

        Thank you……very much dear….it means alot….i will try my level best not to disappoint u…..thanku for reading…. keep reading…. be happy stay blessed…. tc..?

    4. tëìtō kUn on January 9, 2017 9:36 am

      Do Continue….

    5. tani on January 9, 2017 9:47 am

      Outstanding…

      • MI_MAHI on January 9, 2017 9:06 pm

        Thank u very much dear…..it means alot…keep reading… be happy….stay blessed…. tc…?

    6. nikky on January 9, 2017 10:28 am

      plzzzz make it raglak

      • MI_MAHI on January 9, 2017 9:09 pm

        Thank you……very much dear….it means alot….i will try my level best not to disappoint u…..thanku for reading…. keep reading…. be happy stay blessed…. tc..?

    7. lovely on January 9, 2017 10:48 am

      Raglak or ragsan

      • MI_MAHI on January 9, 2017 9:11 pm

        Thank you……very much dear….it means alot….i will try my level best not to disappoint u…..thanku for reading…. keep reading…. be happy stay blessed…. tc..?

    8. Simi on January 9, 2017 11:00 am

      Swasan

      • MI_MAHI on January 9, 2017 9:15 pm

        Thank you……very much simi dear….it means alot….i will try my level best not to disappoint u…..thanku for reading…. keep reading…. be happy stay blessed…. tc..?

    9. maryum on January 9, 2017 11:05 am

      Awesome

      • MI_MAHI on January 9, 2017 9:06 pm

        Thank u very much dear…..it means alot…keep reading… be happy….stay blessed…. tc…?

    10. Abi on January 9, 2017 11:29 am

      Raglak

      • MI_MAHI on January 9, 2017 9:10 pm

        Thank you……very much dear….it means alot….i will try my level best not to disappoint u…..thanku for reading…. keep reading…. be happy stay blessed…. tc..?

    11. a on January 9, 2017 11:59 am

      Pair swasan or u can write without giving names

      • MI_MAHI on January 9, 2017 9:39 pm

        Thank you…. very much dear….thanks for ur suggestion…..it means alot…keep reading…. be happy…. stay blessed… tc?

    12. Jingle on January 9, 2017 12:59 pm

      Swasan pls..

      • MI_MAHI on January 9, 2017 9:11 pm

        Thank you……very much dear….it means alot….i will try my level best not to disappoint u…..thanku for reading…. keep reading…. be happy stay blessed…. tc..?

    13. neina on January 9, 2017 1:04 pm

      plz raglak

      • MI_MAHI on January 9, 2017 9:12 pm

        Thank you……very much dear….it means alot….i will try my level best not to disappoint u…..thanku for reading…. keep reading…. be happy stay blessed…. tc..?

    14. Florence on January 9, 2017 2:13 pm

      swasan or swalak

      • MI_MAHI on January 9, 2017 9:16 pm

        Thank you……very much Florence dear….it means alot….i will try my level best not to disappoint u…..thanku for reading…. keep reading…. be happy stay blessed…. tc..?

      • Florence on January 9, 2017 9:56 pm

        U r very sweet??

    15. j on January 9, 2017 3:36 pm

      superb. raglak

      • MI_MAHI on January 9, 2017 9:37 pm

        Thank you……very much j dear….it means alot….i will try my level best not to disappoint u…..thanku for reading…. keep reading…. be happy stay blessed…. tc..?

    16. Folly brave on January 9, 2017 4:04 pm

      Raglak plzzzz

      • MI_MAHI on January 9, 2017 9:13 pm

        Thank you……very much dear….it means alot….i will try my level best not to disappoint u…..thanku for reading…. keep reading…. be happy stay blessed…. tc..?

    17. Rizna on January 9, 2017 5:17 pm

      Amazing…

      • MI_MAHI on January 9, 2017 9:07 pm

        Thank u very much dear…..it means alot…keep reading… be happy….stay blessed…. tc…?

    18. anurta on January 9, 2017 5:19 pm

      Plz…make it swasan plz…….post next part soon……

      • MI_MAHI on January 9, 2017 9:12 pm

        Thank you……very much dear….it means alot….i will try my level best not to disappoint u…..thanku for reading…. keep reading…. be happy stay blessed…. tc..?

    19. Aasthu on January 9, 2017 7:04 pm

      Interesting plot Mahi……in my opinion just write boy and girl so swasan fans can think of then as swasan and raglak can think as raglak……..I personally think this is good as the fans won’t complain of partiality………

      • MI_MAHI on January 9, 2017 9:36 pm

        Thank you…..very much Aasthu dear…..thanks for ur suggestion…..it really helped me….it means alot….keep reading… be happy…. stay blessed….. tc…?

    20. vyshu10 on January 9, 2017 7:29 pm

      superb…name them swasan or just dont give names

      • MI_MAHI on January 9, 2017 9:32 pm

        Thank you…very much vyshu dear…it means alot….thanks for ur suggestion…..it really helped me…and thanks for reading…be happy…stay blessed…tc..?

    21. asra on January 9, 2017 7:55 pm

      superbbb dear…

      • MI_MAHI on January 9, 2017 9:08 pm

        Thank u very much dear…..it means alot…keep reading… be happy….stay blessed…. tc…?

    22. Ragz_teju on January 10, 2017 7:44 pm

      interesting..

    23. jazzy on January 10, 2017 8:06 pm

      amazing

    24. hemalattha on January 11, 2017 7:29 pm

      Interesting and nice.

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