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Home»Fan Fiction»My Last Love….few shots….Raglak….(shot 2…)
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My Last Love….few shots….Raglak….(shot 2…)

MI_MAHIBy MI_MAHIJanuary 10, 2017Updated:January 10, 201739 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hii…guys…this is mahi back with another chappy of the story….thanku all who commented in last chappy….and also thanks to my silent readers…. guys please do comment and tell me how is it….if u r not liking it…do tell me i will stop writing…guys i have already posted it without names but as there are many tejasswi/ragini fans including me so thought it to post as Raglak…lets get started with nxt chappy…

My Last L?ve….
Chapter 2..

Laksh’s POV:-

And finally the marriage was done….
Things went as usual…just what happens after an arranged marriage….

Pari bhabhi accompanied to my room as if for the first time i m going there….

We stopped at My room’s door….and bhabhi kept her hand infront of me as if asking for something….

I didn’t said anything and just gave her “what do you want now???”look….

“My Neg…”she said..pointing towards her palm….then i remember that same thing happened in Adarsh bhai’s marriage also….some girl’s were asking for money for letting him go in his own room….so much argument happen that time….

I took out my purse from my pocket….and kept it in her hand to avoid argument…..she smiled….and I started to enter my room… but to my surprise…bhabhi held my hand….i looked at her…she kept my purse back in my pocket….and said,”if you want to give me neg just keep her happy and forget every thing that happened in past…”and went from there….

I entered my room….and locked the door….

The room was fully decorated….and there she was sitting in the middle of the bed….with the veil….

Then i looked at her and remembered bhabhi’s word….and thought…shall i dance, or sing a song or become a joker to make her happy….and what about me??? How easily she said to forget everything…i wish that it was that much easy as easily she said….

I went straight towards the cupboard took my clothes went to bathroom to change….when i came back she was still sitting there in same position….

I went on my side of bed laid down there to sleep and asked her to change her clothes and sleep…..

I thought….about the concept of arranged marriage…..that how two unknown people meant to have s*x together and share bed…..
What an hilarious concept isn’t it????

Even more hilarious was our life…

We shared the rarest of the rare word….sometimes i often forget her name…

It was after 2 or 3 months that she did come up with some efforts….

One day she asked me like..”can a boy love a girl this much???”

I kept silent…

Ragini:-“you are awesome…I mean…i can’t love someone this much…”

I felt some pain on that…,still kept silent…

Ragini:-“you know, i never loved someone….I guess its for good…or else…i would also forget language like you…”

I just lost my control then…

I took out the mobile from my pocket…and threw it away….
“Please…leave me alone…”i said or should say yelled at her….

She cried…and ran from there….

I didn’t even cared that….

TO BE CONTINUED….

A/N:- so how was the chappy……i hope u like it…..do tell me how was it….guys it’s the boy’s story so whole story will be his POV….. i hope it was not boring…..sorry for mistakes…. thanku..for giving ur precious time and reading it..and don’t forget to comment…be happy….stay blessed…. tc…bye…?

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    39 Comments

    1. lovely on January 10, 2017 5:18 pm

      Tq so much for raglak

      • MI_MAHI on January 11, 2017 3:32 am

        Thanks to u dear for reading….. keep reading…. be happy….stay blessed… tc….?

    2. Mintu on January 10, 2017 5:33 pm

      Superb dear….Give little bit long update… Raglak pairs..??write more raglak Ts nd os mahi .. Waiting for ur next update

      • MI_MAHI on January 11, 2017 3:36 am

        Thank you….mintu dear….it means a lot…..i will try to give long update surely…. nxt update is on the way…..u will get it in the morning itself ….thnx for reading…. keep reading… be happy ….stay blessed.. tc…?

    3. saranya on January 10, 2017 6:27 pm

      superb

      • MI_MAHI on January 11, 2017 3:38 am

        Thanku very much saranya….it means alot…. keep reading… be happy…stay blessed… tc..?

    4. Jessica on January 10, 2017 6:52 pm

      soo nyc

      • MI_MAHI on January 11, 2017 3:41 am

        Thank you….. very much Jessica……it means alot….keep reading….be happy… stay blessed…. tc…?

    5. nikky on January 10, 2017 7:23 pm

      now it’s awesome loved it next part eagerly waiting plzzzz give raglak tasan Wala ishq

      • MI_MAHI on January 11, 2017 3:48 am

        Thank you…..very much nikky dear….it means alot….and nxt part is on the way….i already submitted it….i hope u will like it too…..and about ur request….i will take it as an order and planning to write an OS….hope u will like it too….keep reading….be happy …stay blessed… tc..?

    6. nikky on January 10, 2017 7:23 pm

      awesome amazing superb excellent mind blowing speechless outstanding and yaa enjoying and plzz be regular don’t be late plzz try to give raglak ff it’s request to all raglak ff writer plzzz yaar I always see that season ff is so much and raglak are getting lesser day and some stop writing in middle and many Swasan ff reach till 100 but no raglak ff reach it and many swaragini ff only Swasan got favor so plzzz give as much as possible raglak ff ts ss and hope any raglak ff reach 100 plzzz next may be part tomorrow or day after tomorrow

    7. neina on January 10, 2017 7:48 pm

      it was so cute,naugty,funny update..best part till nw..i was laughing like a mad yar.ragsan are so adorable together..plz nxt part soon

      • MI_MAHI on January 11, 2017 3:52 am

        Thank you…..glad to know that u too laughed at it…..nxt part is on the way dear….hope u will like it tooo…..keep reading….be happy….stay blessed… tc….?

    8. lisa on January 10, 2017 8:09 pm

      thnakx for raglak love ur work

      • MI_MAHI on January 11, 2017 3:53 am

        Thank you very much…lisa dear…..it means alot……keep reading….be happy… stay blessed…. tc…?

    9. a on January 10, 2017 8:13 pm

      nice

      • MI_MAHI on January 11, 2017 3:56 am

        Thank you….very much dear…..it means alot……keep reading….be happy… stay blessed…. tc…?

    10. Malu on January 10, 2017 8:47 pm

      Amazing part

      • MI_MAHI on January 11, 2017 3:58 am

        Thank you…..very much…..malu dear…..it means alot……keep reading….be happy… stay blessed…. tc…?

    11. jazzy on January 10, 2017 9:05 pm

      superb

      • MI_MAHI on January 11, 2017 3:59 am

        Thank you…..very much….jazzy dear…..it means alot……keep reading….be happy… stay blessed…. tc…?

    12. j on January 10, 2017 9:07 pm

      awesome

      • MI_MAHI on January 11, 2017 3:56 am

        Thank you…..very much dear…..it means alot……keep reading….be happy… stay blessed…. tc…?

    13. A.xx on January 10, 2017 9:17 pm

      nice but feel bad for herxx

      • MI_MAHI on January 11, 2017 4:02 am

        Thank you…. very much dear….glad to know u like it…me too feeling bad for her…..but i can assure u atlast she will get his love….keep reading… be happy… stay blessed…. tc?

    14. asra on January 10, 2017 9:40 pm

      Thank you for making raglak….tkcr dear….

      • MI_MAHI on January 11, 2017 4:07 am

        Thanks alot Asra dear for reading it…..it really means alot….keep reading…. be happy… stay blessed……tc…?

    15. Ragz_teju on January 10, 2017 10:05 pm

      feeling bad for ragini…. superb chappy… loved it

      • MI_MAHI on January 11, 2017 4:11 am

        Me too feeling bad for her dear….but I can assure u that atlast she will get his love….and glad to know that u liked it…..thanks for reading… keep reading… be happy…. stay blessed… tc..?

    16. tani on January 11, 2017 1:06 am

      Brilliant dear

      • MI_MAHI on January 11, 2017 4:12 am

        Thank you…..very much tani…..it means alot……keep reading….be happy… stay blessed…. tc…?

    17. Sahana on January 11, 2017 7:54 am

      Thank you so much for making it raglak

      • MI_MAHI on January 13, 2017 12:08 am

        Thank you…very much sahana dear…..hope u liked it…..keep reading… be happy…stay blessed.. tc….?

    18. Raglakholic on January 11, 2017 9:08 am

      Thank you thank you so much for making this as raglak one

      • MI_MAHI on January 13, 2017 12:07 am

        Thank you.. very much dear for reading it….hope u r liking it….keep reading…. be happy…. stay blessed….tc..?

    19. Ammu on January 11, 2017 5:36 pm

      Awesome dear and thanks a lot for Raglak

      • MI_MAHI on January 13, 2017 12:00 am

        Thank you..।very much Ammu dear….it means alot…..keep reading…. Be happy… stay blessed dear….tc…?

    20. hemalattha on January 13, 2017 12:35 pm

      Awesome dear.

      • MI_MAHI on January 13, 2017 2:29 pm

        Thank you…. very much Hemalattha…..glad to know that u liked it…..it means alot dear….keep reading…. be happy… stay blessed…tc…?

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