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Laal Ishq FF – MATSH,SNS,YHM,Swararagini,Saraswatichandra Part 4

Laal Ishq…Red Love…Part 4

Dedicated to kkrnightriders as she would like to see Manoj Shagun dance at Shravan Vidya’s wedding function.Dedicated this part to Nisa,Veronica,Shakaib,Isha,Rianaa who missed Ishra in the last part.Dedicated to Aanahat who is waiting for this part eagerly.

Saras thought:I know how to cheer up Kumud.
He made kites and brought them near Kumud.
S:Kumud..let’s play with these kites.
K:But you said it’s city,so I should not fly kites like I used to do in my village.
S:But I know that you still miss your village and these kites can give you happiness to some extent.
A small smile appeared on her lips.
S:Ready to play kites?
She smiled nodding her head.She took kites from him and started flying them.
Saras thought:Kumud…I am happy that atleast for some moments you can be happy because of these kites.I know how much you love flying kites.
Saras observed her flying kites.
Saras thought:I hope I can keep you happy always like this.
Saras took another kite and started flying.Kumud smiled at him:You are also flying kites?
S:Why not?I felt like doing so now.
They smiled at each other.

Months passed…

Sarika brought Romi to Manoj’s hospital.Manoj was shocked to see Romi unconscious.
Manoj:What happened?
Sarika cried:Romi fainted doctor.Please save him.
Manoj:Don’t be upset.Let me check.
Manoj tested him.
Manoj:Oh my God!
Sarika:What is the matter doctor?
Manoj:Romi had a small heart attack.
Sarika was shocked:What?
Manoj:Don’t worry.Now he is alright.We have given him medicines.
Sarika was relieved.
Manoj informed Shagun about it.Shagun who was shocked came to the hospital.
Sha:How is Romi?
Mano:He is ok now.
Sha:What happened Sarika?
S:As Raman bhai warned Ashok cheated Romi.He is facing huge financial crisis now.But more than that he is depressed about not listening to Raman bhai.He is very guilty.
They heard Romi murmuring in sleep:Raman bhai…please forgive me.
They felt upset.
Shagun:I know what to do.
Manoj:What are you going to do Shagun?
Shagun:I am going to inform Raman and Ishita..only they can save Romi from this trauma.
She rang up Ishita and told her about Romi.Ishita was shocked.She ran towards Raman.
Ishi:Raman..we need to leave for India now.
Raman:What?
Ishita told him everything.Raman was shattered.
Ishi:Don’t worry.Romi is fine now.But he needs us now to get out of depression.
Raman:I will not leave that Ashok.
Ishi:Forget about Ashok.Now we should focus on Romi.Ashok will be punished by God.
Sarika informed Bhallas and they came crying to see Romi.
Toshi:My Romi…
Romi was still murmuring:I am sorry bhai..
Toshi wept:Wish Raman and Ishita were here.
After some time Raman Ishita came.Bhallas became emotional:Raman…Ishita..our Romi.
Ishita:Mummiji…don’t worry.Now we are here.Right?
Sarika smiled emotionally:Raman bhai..Ishita bhabhi..thankyou so much for coming forgetting all which Romi did to you both.Now I am sure that my Romi will be alright soon.

Ishita:Yes Sarika.Romi will recover completely.
Sarika smiled.

Slowly Romi opened his eyes.Sarika held his hands.
Romi:Sarika…
Sarika:Are you fine Romi?
Romi :Yes.
Sarika:Thank God you are fine Romi.I lost my life when you fainted.Now you are alright.This is more than enough for me.
Sarika embraced him.

Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
Karam re, karam re
Tera mujhpe karam hua re

-SANAM RE
Romi’s tears fell down.
Sarika:I know why you are upset.But there is a solution.
Romi:No solution Sarika.I hurt bhai a lot.I don’t deserve pardon.
Suddenly Raman Ishita came inside.
Raman:I will decide whether you deserve pardon or not.You don’t take decision.
Romi could’nt believe his eyes:Bhai..bhabhi…
Raman sat near Romi.Romi held his hand crying.
Romi:I am sorry bhai.I sinned.I hurt you a lot.Because of me you left the country.Still you came back for me.
Raman:I am your brother.So so no sorry thank you formality.Give a hug and solve the problem.
Romi smiled.
Romi hugged Raman.They both smiled emotional.All became emotional.
Mr.Bhalla:Now our family has united.
Toshi:Our family should be always together.So please stay back In India Raman Ishita.
Ishita:No mummiji.We have to return.
They all became upset.
Ishita smiled:We will go to Australia and bring back Adi,Ruhi and Pihu.
Raman,Mr and Mrs.Bhalla,Romi ,Sarika,Shagun and Manoj smiled happily.

Toshi:I will go home and prepare food for Romi.
Ishita:Mummiji..you rest.I have come now.I will prepare lunch and come.
T:Ishita..
Ishi:I will come back with home made food.
T:Ok Ishita.
Raman:I will also come with you Ishita.
Ishi:Ok.
Raman-Ishita became emotional while entering the Balla House.
Ishi:We missed this house so much.
Raman:Yes..but still the same fragrance.
Ishi:You are right Raman.Because this is our home and home has got a special fragrance.
Raman:I can’t believe that after years we have come back home Ishita.
Ishi:Yes Raman…it’s like reaching heaven.
He held her closer.They both were happy and emotional.
Raman:Now onwards this will be our residence.
Ishi:Yes Raman.I can’t wait to bring back our children.
Raman:Me too.Can’t wait for the days to pass to bring them back and settle down here.
They smiled in each other’s arms.
They returned to the hospital with the food Ishita cooked.
Ishita:Romi..this is specially for you.I hope you will like it.
Romi:Is there any need to doubt about that?It’s made by you.The taste will be very nice for sure.And I missed Ishita bhabhi’s south Indian food.
Sarika:Romi is right.
Ishita smiled.
Sarika:I will feed you Romi.Don’t strain.
Sarika started feeding Romi with her hand.

Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re

Romi stared at her lovingly.Sarika blushed.

Karam re, karam re
Tera mujhpe karam hua re

-SANAM RE

Romi:Thankyou so much for this bhabhi.The food was very tasty.
Everybody smiled.

Vidya’s degree exams are over.So marriage preparations started.
Vidya’s mehendi was done.Her face shone seeing Shravan’s name in her mehendi design.

Meera took Vidya to Shravan.
Meera:Without shying show him.
Vidya was shy.Meera showed Vidya’s palm to Shravan.
M:Your name is written on her palm.
Shravan looked at it and seeing his name he smiled at Vidya.
They shared a romantic eye lock.
Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

-– AASHIQUI 2
Meera walked away slowly with a naughty smile.

Sangeet of Shravan Vidya….

Kumari came dressed in red suit.Danny was lost in her.He cupped her face in his hands.
D:You look gorgeous Kumari.I can’t take my eyes off you.
Kumari blushed.

They shared a romantic eye lock.
D:You look so beautiful today like a Princess.I need to take a selfie with the princess.
She smiled.They took a selfie together.

Sangeet function..

Ahem Gopi danced ….

Ho.. sun saathiya maahiya
Barsa de ishqa ki syahiyaan
Rang jaaun, rang rang jaaun ri, haari main
– ABCD 2
Jigar Rashi Samar Sahir and their fiancées Sona and Monica came on stage.
Sahir Samar:Here goes our family performance.
They all danced together…

Bole chudiyan, bole kangna
Haai main ho gayi teri saajna
Tere bin jiyo naiyo lag da main te margaiya

(Le jaa le jaa, dil le jaa le jaa
Le jaa le jaa, soniye le jaa le jaa) – 2

Aah aah aah aah, aah aah aah
(Bole chudiyan, bole kangna
Haai main ho gayi teri saajna) – 2
Tere bin jiyo naiyo lag da main te margaiya
Le jaa le jaa, soniye le jaa le jaa
Dil le jaa le jaa, ho-Kabhi Khushi Kabhie Gham
Shravan:What a nice family you have Vidya.
Vidya:Yes Shravan.People should learn from our family how to love.
He smiled.
Sahir Samar pulled Meera to the stage:Meera di..now it’s your turn.
Meera:It’s Sangeet.So there has to be couple dance and you all know that I am single.Then how can I dance?If you give me a partner I will dance.
Sahir:Partner for Meera di?
Sahir:Who can be Meera di’s partner?
Meera walked towards Dharam staring at his face:Dharam Sir…will you dance with me?
All were stunned.
Ahem:Meera…what are you saying?Don’t forget that Dharamji is your college professor and your sister’s father in law.
Gopi:Have come manners Meera.
Kokila:Dharam Kumar…I apologize on behalf of my grand daughter.
Dharam:No Kakiji…don’t do that.
Gaura:Koku…why are you making it a big issue?After many years 2 years back only we united again.But our friendship is still the same.Right?Then how can you apologize to my son?Meera just asked him to dance with her.What is the big deal?Let them dance.
All were surprised with Gaura’s attitude.
Koki:But Gaura…
Gopi:Gaura Maasi…how can you be so cool?
Gaura:Gopi..why are you making it a big issue?Let them dance.Dharam…dance with Meera.
Dharam:Maa…are you in senses?
Gaura whispered:I know everything.I am your mother.So I am giving you permission to dance.Go dance without creating an issue.
Dharam walked towards Meera slowly.The victorious Meera took him to the dance floor and danced romantically.
Aye… hey ji re!
Ude ude mann ude
Par lage tere sang jude
Mann ude pag bade
Teri ore bade
Jug chhod bade

Purposefully she got intimate with him while dancing. Dharam who was stunned could not resist as he was lost in her touch.

Lahu munh lag gaya
Lahu munh lag gaya
Soya tha nas nas mein
Ab ye jag gaya

Aye lahu munh lag gaya
Labon ke chhoone se
Khwabon ke kone se
Labon ke chhoone se
Khwabon ke kone se
Bachke sab se lab se lab
Ye rag se rag gaya

Aye.. lahu munh lag gaya
Aye.. lahu munh lag gaya
Aye.. lahu munh lag gaya
….(Ram Leela)
Dharam was immersed in the romantic dance with Meera.

But at the end of it he felt guilty.

Manoj Shagun danced ..

Itni mohabbat karo na
Main doob na jaun kahi
Wapas kinaare pe aana
Main bhool na jaau kahi

Dekha jabse hai chehra tera
Main toh hafto se soya nahi
Bol do na zara
Dil mein jo hai chippa
Main kissi se kahunga nahi
– Azhar

Danny Kumari danced ..

Dhoop se nikal ke
Chhaanv se phisal ke
Hum mile jahaan par
Lamha tham gaya

Aasmaan pighal ke
Sheeshe mein dhal ke
Jam gaya to tera
Chehra ban gaya
Duniya bhula ke tumse mila hoon
Nikli hai dil se ye duaa
Rang de tu mohe Gerua
Ranjhe ki dil se hai duaa
Rang de tu mohe gerua
(Dilwale)

Danny:Saras bhaiyya…Kumud bhabhi..not dancing?
Saras:No.Kumud’s leg sprained yesterday.She shoul take rest.
Kumud:Come on Saras.My leg is fine now.
Saras:What?Are you really fine?
Kum:Yes Saras.It was only a small sprain.
Saras:I don’t believe it.
Manoj:Saras…I had checked Kumud’s leg properly.Now she is absolutely fine.
Shagun:Saras is so concerned about Kumud.Kumud’s leg got sprained,but it hurt Saras,not Kumud.
Kumari:That is Saras jeeju and Kumud didi’s sweet love.
Danny:Exactly.

Saras Kumud smiled.
Saras:Whatever you say Kumud,I will not allow you to take strain.You need rest.
Kumu:Saras…I told you..I am fine.I want to dance.
Saras:Who said I will not let you dance?You will dance with me…but in my arms.
He carried her in his arms surprising everyone including her.
Saras Kumud slowly swayed to the song

Chhuteya na chhoote mosey
Rang tera dolna
Ik tere baajo duja
Mera koi molna
Bolna mahi bol na
Bolna mahi bol na

(Kapoor and sons).
Danny and Kumari were touched by their performance.
Kumari:Nobody can beat their love.They are a unique couple.
Danny:Yes.God has written Saras bhaiyya and Kumud bhabhi’s love story with a special pen.

Kumari:But even our love story is magical.What do you say?
Danny looked at her.They shared a cute eye lock.

Samar Sahir:Now we invite the couple of the evening:Shravan and Vidya.
Vidya Shravan smiled at each other.
Shravan:Vidya…are you comfortable dancing with me?
V:I did’nt even start dancing with you.Still nervous?
He smiled.
They both started dancing romantically.

Aaj agar milan ki raat hoti
Jaane kya baat hoti
To kya baat hoti

Sunte hain jab pyaar ho toh
Diye jal uthte hain
Tan mein, mann mein, aur nayan mein
Diye jal uthte hain
Aaja piya aaja
Aaja piya aaja ho..
Naa ja piya aaja

Teri hi tere hi liye, jalte diye
Bitani tere saaye mein, saaye mein
Zindagani bitani tere saaye mein, saaye mein
– Prem Ratan Dhan Payo

After the dance unexpectedly Shravan sat on his knees surprising everyone.
He extended his hand towards Vidya:Vidya…will you marry me?
Vidya’s happiness had no boundaries.
Vidya:Yes Shravan.
She held his hand happily and they shared a romantic eye lock.They all became very happy.

Haldi…
During Shravan’s haldi ceremony…
Gaura:The way you proposed Vidya was lovely.I am very happy for both of you.Made for each other couple.
Shravan:Whether we are made for each other or not will be revealed only when Vidya knows the truth.
Gaura became dull.
Gaura:Don’t think too much about the future beta.Be happiy in the present.
Shravan was very upset.

Everybody put Haldi on Vidya.

Gopi:Vidya…your face will glow due to this haldi.You will be the most beautiful bride
Gopi kissed her forehead.Vidya smiled.
Vidya sat in her room with haldi on her face thinking about Shravan proposing her.Suddenly she felt breath on her neck.She was surprised to see Shravan standing close to her with haldi on his face.
V:Shravan..you?Why did you come here during haldi?
Shra:You were thinking of me.Right?That’s why I came.
She blushed.
Suddenly he pinned her against the wall and looked at her passionately.She was blushing.
Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

-– AASHIQUI 2

Suddenly Shravan disappeared.
Vidya was embarrassed:I was dreaming of him.

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