Laal Ishq 4 RiKara, SamAina, BeHir, RoshAn, DriKshit FF Part 17

Dedicated to Kavitha who named Raghbir-Bela as Bebir.

The credit for the edits goes to the real editors.

Paras Arora-Aashika Bhatia pair credit goes to my dearest friend Ashini Patel.



A boy came with his family to meet Meera.

Ishita and Natasha brought Meera to the room.

Meera and the boy looked at each other.He smiled at her.

Both were sent to another room to talk.

Both were silent for some time.

He broke the silence.

He:Hi..I am Krish.

Meera:I am Meera.

Krish:I know.In fact my family teased me saying that like Meera loved Lord Krishna,you will love me because of our names.

Suddenly he realized what he said.

Krish:Sorry,it’s our first meeting.But I am talking too much.My tongue has no control.

She smiled.

Krish:Coming to the point,I had a crush.It was an online friendship which turned into love.Later I realized that she was not a girl,but a boy who was fooling me.


They both laughed.

Krish:When mom showed me your photograph itself I liked you.Seeing you directly I realized that love at first sight can also happen.

She looked at him unbelievably:Love at first sight for me?

Krish blushed:Yes.

She could not believe it.

Krish:There is no pressure on you.If you liked me you can tell me.Otherwise you are free to tell me that you did’nt like me.

She smiled.

Meera:I liked you and it’s yes from my side.

Krish was extremely happy.

Meera:I also had a crush.But he never loved me.After that only I realized that it was only infatuation.

Krish:His loss is my gain.

Meera smiled.

Meera:I liked the way you talked.You made me comfortable.But to be frank love at first sight did not happen with me.I need more time.

Krish:It’s ok.I am willing to wait.

She smiled.



Omkara met Ajitabh.

Omkara:Komolika is threatening us always.

Ajitabh:Don’t worry.We will arrest her.You even submitted the video recording,This is enough for us to arrest him.

Omkara:Thank you Sir.

Omkara,Gauri went to Komolika’s house with Ajitabh and gang.But it was closed.So they went to Kokila’s house.She came.

Ajitabh:Where is Komolika?There is arrest warrant for her.She is threatening Omkara Singh Oberoi a lot.

Kokila:But Komolika is not here.

Ajitabh:Then where is she?

Kokila:After she got released she did not come here.I don’t know where my daughter is.

Omkara:Stop your drama.If she had come to meet me,she would have come to meet you also.

Suddenly Komolika came out of her room.

“Who is that mom?”

Omkara:Here is Komolika.

Ajitabh:How dare you lie to us?

Komolika:What are you saying?What’s happening here mom?

Ajitabh:You are under arrest Komolika.

She was shocked.

She:But I am not Komolika.I am Komolika’s twin sister Gopi.

Omkara:What rubbish!Komolika did not have twin sister.

Kokila:She has a twin.When my husband and I got divorced he took Gopi with him and Komolika stayed with me.Since I am alone,Gopi has come to stay with me.Since last few years Gopi has been staying with me.

Omkara and Ajitabh were shocked.

Ajitabh:We can’t believe you like that.

Kokila:Look at Gopi wearing salwar suit.Have you ever seen Komolika in traditional look?

Omkara was confused.

Ajitabh:Dressing is not a proof.

Kokila:Ok.I will show you proof.

Kokila showed them an album where Kokila and her husband were with twin daughters.

Omkara became dull.

Omkara:Then where is Komolika?Where did she disappear?

Ajitabh:I think …when she realized that she cannot escape she just left the place.Don’t worry.We will catch her.

Omkara was silent.





Sumitra and Andy planned a surprise picnic to cheer up the mood.

Raghbir,Bela,Sumitra and Andy went to the beach and enjoyed.

Seeing Bela and Raghbir enjoying

Sumitra smiled:I am reminded of Raghbir and Pragati.

Andy:But this is not Pragati.

Sumitra:I know.But now I feel that though Bela is different from Pragati both are equally good.

Andy:You are right.

After the picnic they reached home tired.

Bela went to the bathroom to fresh up.She was not about to open the shower.

She rang up Raghbir:Raghbir,please come to my room.


Raghbir went ti her room.

Raghbir:What is the matter Bela?

Bela:The pipe in the bathroom is not opening.

Raghbir:Let me check.

He went to the bathroom and opened it.He got drenched.

Bela laughed.Suddenly Raghbir pulled her closer and made her wet.

Raghbir:You also get drenched.

They both laughed.

Raghbir:By the way why did you close the pipe so tight?That’s why you were not able to open it.

Bela:I did’nt do it purposefully.When I closed it,it became like that.

Raghbir:Ok.Now you take bath.Let me go.

While moving away he slipped because of the wet floor and fell over Bela.

They both fell in the bathtub.

They got lost in each others eyes.

Raghbir was reminded of his bathroom romance with Pragati.

They both came back to senses.

Raghbir:Sorry.I am going.

Bela:Please walk carefully as the floor is wet.

Raghbir:Yes,I will.

Raghbir got up and walked off.

After dressing up Bela noticed that Raghbir’s watch was lying on the bathroom floor.She took it and went to Raghbir’s room.There he had just come out of the bathroom after a shower.He was shirtless.

Both Raghbir and Bela became embarrassed.Bela tuned off her face.

Bela:Wear a shirt.

Raghbir wore the shirt.

Raghbir:I have worn the shirt.Now you can look at me.

She looked at him.

Bela:Your watch was lying on the bathroom floor.I came here to give it to you.

Raghbir took it from her and embraced her in happiness.

Raghbir:Thanks Bela.I was searching for this.

Bela smiled and tried to go way.Suddenly she tripped and was caught by Raghbir.

She smiled and walked out.




Bhallas planned a trip.They invited Krish also to spend time with Meera.Meera was surprised to see him.

Krish:Hi are you?

Meera:I am fine.How are you?

Krish:I am super fine as I can be with you during the trip.

Meera smiled.

Raman-Ishita,Pihu,Shardul-Natasha,Krish-Meera enjoyed the trip a lot.

I love you.

Chhutiyon ke yeh din hain suhane,
Saathi tera yuh saath rahe,
Bachchon ke sang bachche phir ban jayen,
Mauj mein jhoome zara, masti karen,
Ban ke badal, ban ke panchhi, udte rahen.
Kya baat hai jijaji.
I love you.

Raman-Ishita fed food to each other lovingly.

Apne gaon ki galiyon mein chale hum,
Bachpan ki yaadon mein khoya hai man,

Bahen thaame teen bhaiyon ki,
Thumkegi phir se unki behen,
Sawan ke jhoolon se,
babul ke aangan se, hoga milan.
Jiji – how emotional.
I love you.

Unknowingly Meera blushed when Krish sang I love you looking at her.

Raman-Ishita and Shardul-Natasha danced romantically.

Thandi thandi yeh hawaen humko,
Chupke chupke kya kehti suno,

Manzil hai kareeb ab hamare,
Bolen ghatayen, khushiyan chuno,
Nazaren chura ke,

Krish imagined dancing passionately with Meera.

dil mein chhupa ke, sapne buno.
Vinod – how romantic.
I love you…(HSSH).


Kokila gave a ticket to her daughter.

Kokila:It’s not safe for you to stay here.Any time they may identify you.They will find out that you are indeed Komolika and not Gopi.So take this ticket and leave for abroad.

Komolika:We succeeded in fooling them.The real Gopi is happily married and staying somewhere else while I am still still longing for love. I am irritated that I could not get what I wanted.Now Omkara and Gauri will live happily with Jugnu.I can’t let that happen.

Kokila:Komolika,you just leave.Your safety is more important.

Komolika:Yes mom.I will go.I am also fed up of dressing up like behenji Gopi.But I will return after a break to ruin Omkara and Gauri’s life.I will kill them and snatch Jugnu from them.

Komolika smirked.

Kokila:You don’t love Jugnu.Then why do you want her?

Komolika:Because Jugnu is Anurag’s last symbol and since I did’nt get Anurag I want atleast Jugnu with me.

Kokila got worried.

She thought:Oh my God!Komolika is still not normal.

After 6 months…..

Druv-Siya and Ajitabh-Drishti’s wedding venue was decorated.

All were very happy.

They got married.

Ye laal ishq, ye malaal ishq
Ye aib ishq, ye bair ishq
Ye laal ishq, ye malaal ishq
Ye aib ishq, ye bair ishq

Ishq-ishq, ishq-ishq

Tujh sang bair lagaya aisa
Tujh sang bair lagaya aisa
Raha na main phir apne jaisa
Ho raha na main phir apne jaisa

Mera naam ishq
Tera naam ishq
Mera naam ishq
Tera naam ishq

Ajitabh-Drishti had a steamy bath in the bath tub.

Mera naam ishq
Tera naam ishq
Mera naam ishq
Tera naam ishq

Mera naam ishq
Tera naam ishq
Mera naam, tera naam
Mera naam ishq!

Ye laal ishq, ye malaal ishq
Ye aib ishq, ye bair ishq
Ye laal ishq, ye malaal ishq
Ye aib ishq, ye bair ishq

Ishq-ishq, ishq-ishq

They locked their lips passionately.

Apna naam badal dun
Ya tera naam chhupa lun
Ya chhod ke saari aag
Main vairaag utha lun
Bas ek rahe mera kaam ishq
Mera kaam ishq
Mera kaam ishq

They both got out of the bath tub.

They shared a passionate eye lock.

Mera naam ishq
Tera naam ishq
Mera naam, tera naam
Mera naam ishq!

They embraced each other.

Ye laal ishq, ye malaal ishq
Ye aib ishq, ye bair ishq
Ye laal ishq, ye malaal ishq
Ye aib ishq, ye bair ishq

She moved away shyly.He turned back.

Suddenly Drishti held his hand

and pulled him closer.

Ye kaali raat jakad lun
Ye thanda chand pakad lun
Ye kaali raat jakad lun
Ye thanda chand pakad lun

Din-raat ke bairi bhed ka
Rukh mod ke main rakh dun
Tujh sang bair lagaya aisa
Raha na main phir apne jaisa
Raha na main phir apne jaisa

They romanced passionately and became one.

Mera naam ishq
Tera naam ishq
Mera naam ishq
Tera naam ishq

Mera naam, tera naam
Mera naam ishq!

Ye laal ishq ye malaal ishq
Ye aib ishq ye bair ishq

Ye laal ishq ye malaal ishq
Ye aib ishq ye bair ishq
Ye laal ishq ye malaal ishq

Ye aib ishq ye bair ishq(Ram Leela).



The doctor informed a good news that Aman is cancer free.All were very happy.

Sunita:God,you heard my prayer.Now please cure Roshni too.

Sunita kissed Aman’s forehead.

Sunita caressed Roshni’s face:Very soon,you will also be cured.The doctor already told that you have improved a lot.

She smiled.

Roshni looked at Aman:I am so happy for you Aman.

He smiled.

Roshni:Now you are healthy.Don’t you feel like going back to India?

Aman:Why should I go back to India?My mother is with me.And my life are here.Until you get fully cured I won’t leave you and go back to India even if it’s for a few days.

Roshni looked at him emotionally.

Roshni:I am so lucky to have you in my life.

Aman:I am lucky to have you in my life.That’s why I can’t leave my luck here and wander around.

Jab tak tujhe pyar se
Beinteha main bhar na dun
Jab tak main duaaoon sa
Sau dafa tujhe pad na loon

They shared a sweet emotional eye lock.

Aman:I love you Roshni.

Roshni:I love you too Aman.

Haan mere paas tum raho
Jaane ki baat na karo
Mere sath tum raho
Jaane ki baat na karo
Woh oh o.

They embraced each other.

Tum aa gaye baazuon mein mere
Sau sawere liye
Sau sawere liye(MS Dhoni).



Prem,Simar,Sameer and Sanjana were very happy about Aman.

Sameer:God is with us.That’s why Aman is fine now.

Simar:Matarani heard our prayer.

Prem:Yes Simar.Now Matarani will cure our Roshni too.

Sanjana:It will happen papa.Roshni and Aman jeeju will come back together.

They smiled.

Simar:Whenever Aman and Roshni call us, they ask about your wedding plans.

Sameer:Aman always asks me also the same.

Sanjana:To me too.But only when Roshni and Aman jeeju come back Sameer and I get married.Right Sameer?

Sameer:Yes.Without them how can we get married?Our happiness is incomplete without Aman and Roshni.

Prem-Simar smiled and went inside.

Sameer:By the way have you thought of our wedding in detail?

Sanjana:Of course yet.

Sameer:What is your dream about our wedding?

Sanjana:You should come on a golden horse as Prince to marry me.

Sameer opened his mouth in ‘O’ shape.

Sameer:What?From where will I get golden horse?I think I have to buy some golden paint and paint a white horse to turn it into a golden horse.With the help of a make up artist I can easily become a Prince.After all I am handsome like a Prince.

Sanjana burst into a laughter.

Sanjana:You are so funny Sameer.You will paint the horse?

Sameer: You are also funny Sanjana.Otherwise why will you the impossible dream of a golden horse?

Sanjana and Sameer laughed.


The joint project of Raghbir and Bela became a success.So they threw a party.

All the couples were dancing.

Sumitra joined the hands of Raghbir and Bela and asked them to dance.

Raghbir-Bela started dancing.

They were lost in each other.

Saans me teri saans
Mili toh mujhe saans aayi
Mujhe saans aayi
Mujhe saans aayi
Saans me teri saans
Mili toh mujhe saans aayi
Mujhe saans aayi
Mujhe saans aayi

Raghbir thought:Why do I feel different with Bela now?I had the same feeling when I was attracted towards Pragati.Am I getting attracted towards Bela?Oh no.If Bela comes to know it,what will she think about me?

Rooh ne chhu li jism ki
Khushboo tu jo paas aayi
Tu jo paas aayi tu jo paas aayi
Saans me teri saans
Mili toh mujhe saans aayi
Mujhe saans aayi
Mujhe saans aayi

Bela thought:Daksh;the person I loved has hurt only me.But now why do I feel that the only person who loves me is Raghbir?Am I craving for Raghbir’s love as my life was always loveless?How could I even think like this?If Raghbir comes to know this.he will hate me.

Kab tak hosh sambhale koi
Hosh ude toh ud jaane do
Dil kab seedhi raah chala hai
Raah mude toh mud jaane do

Raghbir:I have to bury my budding feelings.For that Bela should get married.I should find a nice boy for Bela.

Tere khayal me doob
Ke aksar achhi lagi tanhaai
Saans me teri saans
Mili toh mujhe saans aayi
Mujhe saans aayi
Mujhe saans aayi(Jab tak hai jaan).


After 2 weeks….

Raghbir called his parents and Bela.

Raghbir:There is a happy news.

Andy:What is that?

Raghbir:I have found a nice boy for Bela.

All were shocked.

Sumitra:What are you saying Raghbir?

Raghbir:One day Bela has to get married.Right?She deserves a second chance in life.Daksh cannot ruin her entire life.He is willing to accept Bela with her past.

Bela was very upset.

She thought:What a test in life!

Bela:Raghbir,why are you getting me married?Is it necessary?

Raghbir:Bela…do you trust me?

Bela:I trust you more than myself.

Raghbir:Then meet this guy.No need of marrying him in a hurry.Meet him…spend time with him.You will surely fall in love with him.

Bela thought:When Raghbir is around me,how can I love someone else?

Raghbir:If you are not able to love him.I will find someone better for you.But I think that he is the best one for you as you know him very well.

Bela as stunned:I know him very well?

Raghbir:Yes.You already know him.

Bela:Who is he?

Raghbir:Just wait and watch.Till then keep guessing.

Sumitra,Andy and Bela became dull.



All were sleeping.

Omkara and Gauri were having candle light at the terrace.

Suddenly they saw a shadow there.

Gauri:Omkara,somebody is here.

Omkara:Yes.Who is that?

That person came in front of them.They were shocked.


Komolika:Yes.I am back.

Omkara:We came to know that you were fooling us as Gopi.You had gone away.Right?Then why did you come back?What did you think?You thought that I ran away in fear?Never!Komolika can never do that.I cannot sit peacefully until I get what I want.

Omkara:What the hell do you want?

Komolika:I want Jugnu.

Gauri:I am Jugnu’s mother.We have legally adopted her.You have no right on her.

Komolika:What if Jugnu comes to know that I am the one who carried her in the womb?Then she will leave you and come to me.

Omkara and Gauri became upset.

Komolika smirked.

Komolika:But before that I need to punish you both for spoiling my plan last time.

She took out a knife.

Omkara-Gauri were shocked.

Gauri:Why are you holding this knife?

Komolika smirked:To take your life.

Omkara-Gauri were scared.

Omkara:You are mad.How can you take our life?

Komolika:It’s not God,but Komolika will decide when to take your life.

Omkara-Gauri were frightened seeing her psycho look.

  1. Shesha485

    Loved the episode. Happy that Aman was cured and he is completely fine. Aman decides to stay with Roshni and taking care of her was nice. Samaina putting off their marriage for Roshan was lovely. Sumitra making Bela and Raghbir dance was nice. Slowly, Bela and Raghbir feeling for eachother. Hope their relationship gets accepted by everyone. Meera and Krish pair is really fresh. Loved the way how Krish proposed Meera. Drikshit romance and consummation was lovely. Its really shocking that Komolika comes back in a extremely dangerous avatar. Its surprising that Komolika has a twin called Gopi. Will she appear in future? Kokila fooling everyone was sad. Hope Rikara give an end to Komolika

    1. Jasminerahul

      Thanks a lot.actually Paras Aashika pair was introduced by my closest friend Ashini in her ffs. I had made Paras aashika edits for her ffs.i decided to use that pair and my edits in this ff also.

  2. After long time I was waiting since you uploaded last on I am happy that aman is cured I hope roshni will too. Samaina scene was cute finally ajishti got married . Bhallas picnic was good , krish love at first side for meera and how he make meera comfortable was too good , bebir feel for each other but they dont want to share because of each other sake and don’t know what will komolika do waiting for next episode and I hope this time you won’t take 2 week

    1. Jasminerahul

      Thank you so much for the support.i feel very happy.

  3. Wow amazing 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍. It’s really super 😊❤️💗 especially roshan are cute and raghbir bela is so cute Jodi. Thanks for updates 😊❤️💗. keep rocking dear you and your updates 😊❤️💗. Iam waiting for your next updates 😊❤️💗.

    1. Jasminerahul

      thank you very much.

  4. Priyadharshini

    So nice updates 😊
    Super episode 😍😍😍😍
    Thanks for updates 😊.

  5. It’s really good and awesome 😊😊❣️
    Wonderful episode 😍😍
    Waiting for next one 😊❤️.

  6. Wow fabulous 😍😍😍😍😍
    It’s really fantastic 😊
    Thanks for updates 👍
    Keep rocking🔥🔥🔥.

  7. Kifu

    Very very nice episode ☺️☺️.I liked komolika gopi drama..nice technique to escape…behir scenes were really mesmerizing but sad that mahir have chosen a boy for bela😩😩.Sameer Sanjana scenes were sweet☺️☺️..hope komolika gets caught by our acp😡😡…. awesome episode ☺️☺️☺️. actually I searched and read many of your FFS and I really loved every FFS especially I loved your ajivish ff☺️☺️..all the best

    1. Jasminerahul

      Thanks a lot
      Which ajivish ff?you mean ahista?

    2. Kifu


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