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Home»Fan Fiction»Kyun Choda Mujhe! A Avniel Fan fiction Part-2
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Kyun Choda Mujhe! A Avniel Fan fiction Part-2

elanBy elanMarch 25, 20185 Comments4 Mins Read
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Avni sees the children playing blindfolded with Neil. She gets shocked (chal meri jaan….). she keeps queit and thinks why is he here i thought he left Kashid. Neil is about to remove the cloth from his eyes when Sunehri pushes Avni towards Niel. niel catches her in his arms and the mangal sutra gets stuck in her hair. She tries to remove it. Niel asks who is this. Mowgli says its Jaan Didi. Neil says, what? and tries to remove the cloth but Avni pushes him and runs away to her room. Niel says oh! that hurts.

Sunehri murmers sadly you are being hurt for 10 years Neil, i know that she loves you more than herself then why does she want to keep herself away from you. But Avni I will do whatever i can to make both of you meet each other and this is not just a saying its my promise to you after all there is nothing fare in love and war. Neil asks Sunehri did you say anything? Sunehri says No! i was just thinking why does she act so strange in front of you as if you were going to catch her. What did you just say as if i was gonna catch her, after all what mistake did she do to catch her Neil asks eagerly. Sunehri says you will find out soon and goes to Avnis room. Mowgli asks did they hit their heads somewhere because i seriously think so. Neil says now I’m sure these two are hiding something from me and they are never going to tell it I will have to do something.

Avni in her bedroom gets nervous when someone knocks on her door and opens it, she quickly grabs a scarf and covers her face. Sunehri comes in and says its me ,Avni. Avni says thank god i got so scared. Sunehri says stop it Avni ,untill when will you hide your identity from Neil he is determined to see you didn’t you see how quick he was when Mowgli says you were in his arms. Avni says no Sunehri i will not let anyone let Neil know that I am alive. Avni is dead and that is always safer for him and his family. Sunehri says “his family” Avni understand they are also your family and do you know what pain they are going through only because of your one lie do you? 

No! she shouts whatever you say, Avni is dead and I am Nilanjna. Sunehri smiles ya! you were once Ananya Verma and do you remember who had caught you first? Avni says she is Ananya Verma a girl who was fierce and brave to face anything which made her fall into Niel’s trap but now I’m a totally different person my goal is to make a better life for these children so that they can make a name of their own. Niel comes near the door and tries to over hear them Sunehri says ok I don’t want to fight with you on that but i just wanted to tell you this and I would call you Nilanjana as you wish but remember, you will once be caught, she opens the door and Neil hides himself behind the door. Avni closes the door. Neil says i knew it this girl is hiding herself from these children and me her real name is not Nilanjana and only Sunehri knows this. The police officer inside me says this case is very weird and i will find out who she really is, very soon..

recap: Niel asks why did you do so what did i do to you for such a painful punishment! Avni looks on and cries. The strong wind blow off the sindoor from the temple and it reaches Avni’s forehead and the manglasutra in Neil hand falls down.

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    5 Comments

    1. Deeyaana on March 25, 2018 10:34 am

      Very very emotional 🙂

    2. aman on March 25, 2018 1:34 pm

      loved you ff!!!! update the next one soon! cant wait to read it

    3. Veer on March 25, 2018 2:46 pm

      Nice and emotional

    4. Saumya on March 25, 2018 6:13 pm

      It’s very interesting. Please keep going.

    5. shruti on March 26, 2018 9:37 am

      keep it up ! pls keep updating it is nice

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