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Home»Fan Fiction»Kyun Choda Mujhe! A Avniel Fan fiction
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Kyun Choda Mujhe! A Avniel Fan fiction

elanBy elanMarch 24, 20184 Comments3 Mins Read
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Its a pleasant morning, Avni goes to the temple to pray. She asks lord to keep Neil and his family safe and away from all dangers. She is about to leave but the duppata flew with the wind and falls on Niels face. Avni runs behind the mandir and prays that he should not see her. Neil takes the duppata and says there is something special about the scent of this duppata, why do i have a feeeling its very special. He takes it and asks the guru over there whose it is they say it is Nilanjana’s, she was here a few minutes ago. Neil thinks why does this girl always hide herself i want to see her face to face. This Nilanjana is indeed mysterious than Ananya. He laughs and remembers the moment when they saw for the first time and those cute little fights between them. Avni see him and cries, she says sorry Neil but i had to do this,

they held our family at gunpoint, and told me to marry Vidyut , but other than you there will be no other man in my life Niel that is why I had to do all this drama and cheat you i know what you might be going upon all these years please forgive me Niel please forgive me. Avni sits crying and a old lady come near hear and says child why are are you crying did the mighty goddess put you in some trouble, dont worry she is our mother if she gives us problems she also gives us solutions. Avni smiles and remembers Neela ma. She sees that the old lady was wearing worn out clothes. She gives her enough money to buy a saree and prasad. The lady thanks her and walks back to her home. Avni smiles. The lady stops near the road to cross but no one helps her ,Niel comes that way and sees the lady and helps her cross the street.

The lady give him prasad saying god bless you child. Neil says its fine. The lady insists him to take the prasad and says this is holy, you look look like a gentleman wont you accept this small gift from a poor, old woman like me. Niel takes and eats it. He remembers the ganpathi puja day he celebrated with avni. He walks away thanking her. The lady says I see pain in both of your eyes children and I know that you will meet that person whom you are missing my blessing will be with them. Avni reaches sukoon house and she looks at the flowers outside and thinks if sell some of those that would be an extra income. Sunehri comes to her saying what happened why are you staying here she says excitedly. Why are you so excited? asks Avni. Nothing! she tells come in. Avni gets in and she the children playing. She looks up and gets shocked

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    4 Comments

    1. Vibhu on March 24, 2018 7:41 pm

      Nice one !!
      Loved it

      • elan on March 25, 2018 12:18 pm

        thank you so much! it was my first try. I’m so happy

    2. DBRSR1822 on March 24, 2018 9:49 pm

      Excellent…..
      Plzz update soon..
      ALL THE BEST for your next update…..
      Good night….

    3. elan on March 25, 2018 12:20 pm

      Thank you so much! I will update soon hope you like it and good night

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