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Title : Kya hum kaabil tere pyaar ke? ( Do I deserve your love? ) by B_isha and goms
Hello my dears I am back with another collaboration done by (goms and B_isha).
OUR STORYLINE BEGINS FROM 14TH APRIL ISHQBAAZ EPISODE WHERE KAMINI AND RANVEER ARE EXPOSED .
Talking about storyline in brief: Till now shivaay was re kidnapped by mahi and now his free from his clutches again
Mahi: mujhe apni zindagi khatam kar deni jahiye without a name a person is only shame…
Recalling what happened in obro mansion
Shivaay holding mahi collar what is your motto why are you here?
Kamini enters obro mansion with ranveer and was hell shocked to see what’s happening in Oberoi mansion
Shivaay : tum mere parivaar ko destroy karna chahate ho !!
Pinky: tumhare parivaar ne tumhe nahi shikhaya? They didn’t taught you good values huh ?
Mahi thinks : chup ho ja… You don’t have any rights to talk bad about my family
Mahi managed to show a shocked expression: what !!!
Pinky: Chori uper se seena jhori
Kamini smiles wickedly thinking do anything Oberios but mahi won’t able that his not shivaay because he knows if he does you all will harm us and for mahi “we are family”.
Mahi: Pinky ji… Nahi nahi.. Mom.
See yourself in mirror before talking bad about me
Mahi trying to convince others: what the wack I am the shivaay singh Oberio
Pinky : don’t call me mommy… Am not your mothers.. Am shivaay mothers.. Shivaay is my only hira beta
Mahi goes to anika and hold her hands into his : please make mom understand that i am real and not this fake one he says panika kam se kam you trust me !!
Anika looks at both with a confused looks
Which shocks shivaay
Shivaay goes to his wife and pulls her close in his embrace n her confusion got cleared oh jaana plays…. As he touched her n had an eye lock and obros hug each other to confirm…
Lafzon ka rishta plays
Rudy: I know my bhaiya.. Love you Shivaay bhaiya… See Om, I said na he is shivaay..
(Om pats Rudy’s in his head)
Om : arrey duffer.!! When did you say.?? You looked and signed me that you don’t know..
Rudy smiles and says “no no Om you are mistaken.. I signed I know him… I said you didn’t hear me.. Bcoz you hair is covering your ear. See na bhaiya this long hair creature isn’t believing me.
Shivaay: Om don’t say like this our Dumbo knew that I am the real Shivaay that is the reason that he came to me an hour before and said MAHI. Isn’t it Rudra.
Rudra remembers mistaking him as Mahi an hour before and scratches his head.
Rudra: Aare wo Bhaiya that was nothing actually I didn’t mistake you I was checking it out.
Om in bit anger: Oh heck I am fed up of saying this again and again I think so I have used this sentence a million times which no one uses….
Rudra grinned: which dialogue O?
Om: hitting rudra head playfully in shivaay embrace …shivaay ab lagta hai bolna padega.
They at once said shut up Rudra and Rudra frowned…..
Mahi thinks obros hug: yeh kya family hai yaar…. yese gale lag rahe hai jese India ne abhi abhi Pakistan se match jee ta ho… then suddenly a thought knocked his head he reminiscences the same friendly hug with omru and a light smile appeared on his face
Rudra : bhaiya I think it’s time to treat the uninvited guest.. (Rudra looks at mahi)
ShivOm looks at mahi with anger
Mahi thinks “deva why did you give me 3rd class life? Dono what’s going to happen now.. See this phelewaan rudy looking at me accompanied with Mr. Baal Ki dukaan and Shivaay. ..
Shivaay eyes and body was burning in anger as he ( Mahi ) used his wife as weapon to destroy oberio family he walked ahead to Mahi and held mahi ‘s collar…
Shivaay holding his neck : How dare you ! You used my anika you spoiled her image in family …I can tolerate anything but not this…
Mahi was unable to breathe shivaay dragged him a bit with force. ….. He punched him hard on abdomen and then again held him tightly from neck..
Pinky: Oh my mata? koi shivaay ko ruko
Mahi was unable to breathe
Om held him from elbow : Shivaay what are you doing this is not right punishment for him…
Rudra: Exactly bhaiyya stop now please or else he will die ise punishment dena law ka kaam hai….
Shivaay yelled : No !! And you Mr. Mahi what’s your motto ? Why are you here?
Anika comes in between and pulls shivaay a bit and mahi finally took a breathe…He coughs
Anika : Shivaay please stop it , I was upset earlier that due to your re kidnap I had to do what he says but now you’re back and you trust me that’s enough for me there is no need to prove others that I am innocent . Apko meri kasam shivaay
Shivaay : anika! !
Shivaay stares angrily @ mahi
@END OF FLASHBACK
Mahi stands at the edge of bridge with a million thoughts striking his mind tears started to escape from his eyes and in a cracking voice he uttered ‘I am sorry shivaay and anika apun ko maaf kar dena …He dragged his body forward towards the river and leaped up to fall when he was grabbed by something which felt like an arm he looked up he saw visage and was pulled back to the earth with efforts..
He saw a stranger (girl) whose face was covered with scraf .
Mahi in an irritated tone : arrey koi chain se marne bhi nahi deta ! Tum kon ho ? Aur kyon ho?
Girl looked at him with anger in her coral black eyes and said are you crazy ? Pagal ho tum !
Mahi held her by her elbows and said haa pagal hu main ! … sabhi ke liye toh tha hi tumhare liye bhi sahi.
The girl was frightened but as she saw into his eyes her fear vanished she could somewhere sense that he was in pain….
But before she could speak a word mahi suddenly tumbled on the ground.
The girl knelt down and patted his cheek she held his wrist and said oh shit he needs medical help now ..she slipped her hand into her pocket and took mobile and called her friend .
Girl: hello Monique I need your help yaar !
Monique: what kind of help dear and why are so worried?
Girl narrated the whole incident …
Monique grabbed the car keys and rushed towards her car
Monique: but where are you now ananya
Ananya: she looked here and there and said I don’t know here there is a bridge and forest….
Monique: ok listen send me your exact location and I will be there in few minutes. ..
Ananya: Hmm wait she tries to send and yells at her phone oh ho network ke bacche tujhe bhi abhi hi jaana tha aa bhi ja nahi toh toh 2 min me ganga saanan karugi….
She somehow sends the location and in 10 Mins a car halted there. …
Monique hopped down and ran towards them …then they both held mahi and made him sit in the car.
Monique sat at the driver seat and ananya at the rear passanger seat with mahi
Monique adjusting the rear mirror said: for once yesa kabhi ho sakta ki tu kabhi kehe hey Monique I have a good news for you Why anu you’re always tensed huh!
Ananya: Because main tension ki dukaan hu ok Khush ab car chala. …
Monique saw stress on her friend face and said hey don’t ado he will be fine as I surmise you forgot we are doctors
After 30 Mins. …
Mahi gained his consciousness and found himself in an unknown place.
How shivaay was saved again ?
How shivaay came back to oberio mansion?
What will happen with fake sso (Mahi)?
On this note this first episode ends here….
Authors Note…..Please do share your views upon it which will encourage us to write more to entrail you readers….
#A VERY HAPPY BIRTHDAY ? TO MONIQUE DI. MAY GOD BLESS YOU WITH LONG LIFE, LOTS OF LOVE AND GREAT SUCCESS. MAY THIS YEAR BRING LOTS OF BRIGHTNESS AND HAPPINESS IN YOUR LIFE & YOU SHINE AS THE BRIGHTEST STAR.
WITH LOTS OF LOVE ❤ AND WELL WISHES
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