Thank you guys for your lovely comments…. M trying my level best to make each n everyone happy over here… and please do not think that I am partial towards any of the couple in my FF… and if u feel so plz tell….
As a writer… m trying my best to make my FF good…. I knw that I have taken the basic essence and scenes from the original one to support my story, that doesn’t mean that I copy everything…. And also would like to request that please do not compare a writer’s writing to another one… moreover it actually steals the credibility of both of them… its wrong for both the writers… because they have their own style, way of writing…. Recently in my last chapter , my writing was compared… and I was asked to stop writing the ff… the reader found the other writer’s better…. And trust me no doubt, the other FF is mind blowing…. But comparing both the works in something which draws injustice to both the fictions.
And last but not least….. Shivam… though ur writings was praised in front of mine… thank you to take a stand by my request of not comparing both the FFs…. It shows how maturely a writer can support another writer… THANKS A LOT… It do shows that we are not competing against each other… and please remember… I do adore your writings more than mine….
Lets go to the chapter…
Luthra Mansion (KARAN’S ROOM) –
P – Hey….
K- Woah !! Wow I dint knw that u can smile seeing me…. Nice….
P- Karan look… I agree we have differences in our opinions… but as I need help in convincing ur brother… I actually need help of both u n Sameer… coz I knw that nobody knws ur brother as gud as you both… please can you help me with that.. once I talk to u… I will talk to Sameer as well…
K- Hmm… luks like doc needs help.. ok.. will help u out…. Wait will call Sammy as well…. (Rings to Sameer.. to come)
S (coming into the room) – Heya bro??? whats up… (shocked to see preeta over there)… (stammers) Hello Preeta ji…
K (tells the whole convo of Preeta and Rashi) – So… hume inki help karni hai…
S ( stands up) – Fine u do…
K- Abe… kahan ja raha hai… we both need to help her…
S(turns to Preeta)- Preetaji agar aapko.. sher k muh m haath daalna hai to daliye… agar ise(points to Karan) sher k muh m daalna to bhi daal dijiye… but mujhe nhi… m nhi aa rha is khel mein…
P – Please Sammy.. sorry I mean Sameer…u ppl are making me hell scary abt this…. I need ur help… I knw we aren’t frns… so u can do but plz….
S- Preetaji… its ok if u call me Sammy… n its not that ke we aren’t frns n all… but its just that we knw how Rishi bhaiyya reacts for the word called “HIS WEDDING”… we are trying to save u from is wrath…
Uske chakkar me maine sabse zyaada datein aur chotein (catches his right cheek) khai hai…
K ( laughs) – Preeta I told u… its not easy… and Sammy… chal last time.. inki help kr dete hai… fir is topic se hum bahar… yeh jaane aur Rishi jaane… whats say ???
S (scrunches his nose) – Ok… but mai billi k gale m ghanti nhi baandhunga…
K-Ghanti Preeta bandhegi…promise kiya hai bhai isne
P- Fine… m hi baandhti hun.. oh god.. whats dis.. I mean ll talk to Rishabh.. but I need some info…
S- Kaise info…
P – Sammy… like… what kind of girls does he like then how does he behaves with them… then what is his opinion that how a girl shud be…his preferences… his behaviour… u wrk with him all day… u must be knwing… n Karan… u shud be knwing abt the girls.. who are interested in him.. m sure there must be some..he is vey good….
K- Abhi abhi ek mili ha yaar …
P&S – Who…
K- Uska naam na.. Preeta Arora hai… she wants to knw everything abt him…
Sameer starts laughing…
P- U idiot… m trying to help him out n u…. starts chasing him… n Karan runs and jumps in the whole room… having Peeta behind….
After Sometime-
S- Guys Relax – Concentrate yaar…
K- yeah yeah concentrate…
S- Preetaji… u ask him all this… coz agar hum puchenge to he ll give a look which will kill both of us…
K- Exactly Preeta….nd btw… tumne apni behen k baare mein kuch bataya nhi…
S- Behen??? Preetaji aapki behen bhi Mumbai m hai kya… I thought its only u…
P- Karan… she is just ur fan… n Yes Sameer I have a sis… she stys wit me in my mom…no in PG with me… bas aapke jaise ek bhai nhi hai… agar hota… to I wud be d happiest person…
K- iske jaise kyun.. isiko rakhlo…(giggles)
S- I wud not mind having a midblowing sis like u Preetaji.. than having a mindless brother like Karan…(stares wickedly at Karan)
P- Den deal… u r in my side.. hum dono Karan k Chutti kr denge… and stop calling me Preetaji…its just Preeta…
S- No… Preeta Di wud be better…
P- Sure…(smiles and plays with his hair fondly)
K (feeling lonely)– Ho gaya dono ka… Preeta… its Kritu’s engagement on Tuesday… u ask ur questions to him… den we ll plan accordingly… Sameer… dint expect this from u (turns the other side showing fake anger)
S- Arre Bhai.. I was kidding… u knw how much I love you.. phir bhi… u angry fr such small thing (Karan melts listening to it)
K- Ya ya I knw… (feeling bad for showng fake anger)
P- Sammy .. u don’t have any idea how much ur brothers love you.. it is evident in their eyes wen they see u… Lucky U.. N Lucky dem too… dey have got u..
S- Ya I knw m very lucky… sees the time in wall clock…. Di.. its late come ll drop u…
P- No its ok.. ll manage…
K- Sameer … jakar chodkar aaja.. its really late…(turns to Preeta).n u.. bhai banaya hai ise to use apni responsibility lene do…
P – khadoos..
K- Wat..
P- kch nhi.. bye… n thanks help k liye… aur haan smile achchi lagti hai tumpe… ( realizes what she said)…I mean tum teeno mein.. please don’t stop smiling.. Come Sameer. Will u drop me (says the address)
And they leave…
K (thinks abt what she said at last n imitates her ) – Smile achchi lagti hai tumpe (smiles widely)..
That’s it for today… see ya next week… constructive criticisms are always welcome….
PreCap – Kritika… Engagement…. Rishabh ki Girlfriend…And most importantly… Sameer ki Sameera arriving 😛
Loads of Love,
Leher