Hey folks….
Thanks a lot… ur comments means a lot… i was waiting for taking a heads up on the original version of the serial ( which I usually do only on Saturdays) when hey air the whole weeks episodes ) to write further… and bang on it was unexpected… and this was the last time i am taking inspiration of the original to write my ff… from here on the track will go according to my imagination…. lets continue….
The scene starts when Rishabh comes and helps Preeta to save Shrishti …and Shrishti giving up her dream of becoming successful and getting a job to pay off Sarla’s rent… and Rishabh realising having feelings for Preeta ( š i hate this though )
When Preeta as usual comes to his house for the job… he asks her about yesterday’s incident and makes fun asking her did she enjoy being in lock up… she angrily replies it was for her sister… she gets irked and leaves.. Karan feels bad and thinks to apologise to her….
On other side—
Srishti comes for an interview…. wherein they wanted personal assistant for the MD of a company… she goes inside the cabin… and finds Sameer … Sameer gets shocked and insults her telling they does not want a model…. but an assistant for himself and his brother Rishabh….she tells she is not interested in his blabberings but has come for interview and asks him to take the same… by this time Rishabh comes and recognises her being Preeta ‘s sister…. but Shrishti fails to do so…. and asks Sameer to take interview and give her a chance to prove herself… and taunts him telling anyways he dint give her a chance earlier because he was jealous of her hieght….
R – Sameer… whats all this… did she come earlier??
Sam – Haan bhai… but she was very tall for Karan’s ad isliye maine inko reject kiya tha….
R- But Sameer… was it the only reason..
Sam- Haan bhai… other than hieght she is good as model though…
R to Shrishti – M sorry… mujhe yeh sab nhi pata tha…but aap secretary k job k liye??
Shrishti – Ji… i need a job now… and i did not come for being a model ya kuch aur its just the job…
Sam- M sorry… i thought k tum mujhe pareshhan krne aayi ho…
And after interview… shez finalised for job and was asked to come to Luthra mansion….
Guys.. so thats it for today…. I know Preetan scenes were less… but next time will balance out both the pairs…. will be back next Saturday… same time… same place…
Stay tuned…
n one more character is here –
Riaana – played by Ketki Kadam .. will be paired opposite Sameer… hope you are cool with it…
Please leave your feedback … would love if its a constructive one….
5 Comments
I liked it. It’s nice. Please continue. May I know when will you post the next part…….
Awesome I loved it love u yaar
Wonderful start dear…loved it….waiting for the next part ?
Awesome start. Loved it
Leher, its osm & there’s no problem if ur ff’s introduction was inspired by the plot… u r an amazing writer…eagerly waiting for ur next update asap….