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Kuch rang pyar ke aise bhi (YOU STOLE MY HEART)- Episode 22 (last fine day)

Thanku my dear friends for supporting me daily with ur comments..i want to make u smile everytime..love u so much for u love and wait daily..here is epi 23..read it soon dears..

Continued in palace ..

In night..
It is almost time for suhraat..
Sona is getting ready..
Her dress..
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She thinks ‘y i am very nervous ..i am going to my dev..but i feel different today’
nikki and ria comes to her…
Nik – bhabi u look very glamarous..already bro is flattend ur beauty wil make him more and more mad..
(Sona smiles)
ria – s bhabi..and whether bro bought tis saree for u..
(sona again smiles)
ria – ur smile says tat it is true..so u both have planned everything for nyt..
Both laughed..
(Son shies)
nik – hei..enough ria bhabi is shying..
Son – u both are so cute..i like u very much and neha too..
Ria – o thanku bhabi..here after we are friends..lets always be like tis..
(both hugs her)

Dev is getting ready in his room..
His dress..
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He tels himself,’my dear sona when wil u come to me..i am very much excited to give u the gift..’

niki and ria brought sona to suhraat room..the room is well decorated..
Dev comes to the room..and knocks the door..
Nik and ria opend the door but standing on the way didnt let dev in..
Nik – wat u want bro..
Dev – its my suhraat..i want to see my wife dears..what r u doing here
Ria – o but we wont allow u bro..
Dev – nw u cant disturb us dears..i got the license to romance my sona..
Nik – we are also not disturbing u..u give us gift then we wil let u in..
Dev – wat gift..i dnt have anything nw dears..
Nik – thena u give ur credit card and go..
(dev gives it..)
ria – gud bro.. enjoy ur first nyt bye..
(they went smiling)

Dev comes inside..
Sona sitting in bed nervously ..
Here dev is seeing sona without taking his eyes..
He comes near her and touched her shoulder..she stands..
Dev – sona
sona – dev
dev – sona u look very beautiful and hot in tis saree..
Sona – (smiles)u only bought tis for me dev..
Dev – so wat r u going to do nw?
Son – wat u expect me to do..
Dev – sona..when i said ur anklets are beutiful for u removed it..and nw i am saying tis saree is beautiful for u..so nw..
(Sona shies and smiles..)
sona – u naughty dev..
(Dev takes her hand and kisses it..he feels her nervousness…)

dev – sona..r u nervous..
Son – ha..s dev..dnt know y..since tis is the first time for me..
Dev – sona..then r u telling i am experiencd
son – no ..no dev..first time i am going to sleep with u..
Dev – (smiles and touched her cheeks)i said simply dear..i know about u..tis is the feeling of everyone..
But today u have to remove al ur shyness..
(sona smiles)
sona I want to give u one thing..wil u come with me..
Son – where dev..
Dev – come lets go..
(he holds her hand and takes her out..he takes her out of palace..iswari comes there)
isw – dev where r going?
Dev – we wil come mom
isw – but today is ur suharaat
dev – (smiles) i am going for suharaat only..bye mom
(isw thinks what he is telling)

(dev takes sona in the car and starts the car)
sona – dev where we r going?
Dev – to ur favourite place..
Sona – my favourite place..dev r we going to river..
Dev smiles..
Son – dev but y nw..
Dev – u wil see it dear..
(sona looks at him confused)

Dev stopped the car some distance before the river..they came out of car..dev comes to sona…
Dev – sona close ur eyes..
Son – y dev
dev – please..
(Sona closd her eyes..dev takes her in his arms..)
Son – dev..wat are u doing..
dev – sona.i told u to close ur eyes..and dnt open it til iam telling u
sona – ok dev..

Dev walked with her and reached near the river..he drops sona down.
Dev – nw u open ur eyes sona..
(sona opened her eyes and widens it in suprise and keeps both her hands in her cheeks as she saw a beautiful boat house standing in the banks of the river..)
it is..

http://www.snhouseboats.com/images/houseboat/1bedroom_dlx_1.jpg

http://www.houseboatskerala.net/lib/images/photos/5.jpg

dev – tis is my small gift for my dear wife.
Son – (sona smiles holds dev’s hand)dev its..it’s amazing..
Dev – come we can go inside..
(dev takes sona and drops her inside the boat..then he also gets in)
there was silent everywhere..it was an half moon day..the river is not more dark and not more bright..only the cool breeze was filled everywhere..
Sona was standing near the edge of the boat..she didnt come out of the surprise til now..dev comes near her and holds her hand..
Dev – sona do u like it..
Son – (smiles)dev..i have no words to tel my happiness..i didnt expect tis..thanku dev..i can giv u wat dev other than me..
Dev – (smiled and cups her face) sona u r my precious gift..tis and nothing in front of u..i can do anything for ur smile sona..tis place is not only ur favourite but very close to my heart..here only i get u sona..i promise u today in front of tis nature sona i wil always keep u happy like this being ur lovable husband..
Son – (happy tears)i also promise you dev..i wil always serve u with love as ur wife til my life..
Dev – love u my dear sona..
(he kisses her forehead)
son – love u dev..
(dev kisses her cheeks..nose and lips)
(she hugs him..he too hugs her..they are hugging more and more tight with ful of love..the cool breeze also didnt allowd them to seperate)
dev moves his hand towards her hip and holds tightly and kissd her neck..sona left the hug and moves backwards..dev pulls her again towards him..
Dev – u cant escape dear..
(both looks at each other romanticaly into their eyes..)
son – (smiles)i also dnt want to escape dev..
Dev – i cant wait anymore sona..
(he took her in his arms and moves inside the boat house..)
there is only a single room in the boat..and it is..

http://teaone.net/uploads/fotos/beautiful-bedrooms-sets_1249_571_364.png
Dev comes inside with sona and locks the door..
Son – dev tis is beautiful
dev – s sona because u are here..
Dev keeps sona in the bed..he removed her saree ..sona closes her face in shyness..
Dev then removed his kurtha and throws it..he sits near her legs..takes her feet in his arms and kissd it..
Then he moves upwards slowly and lies lightly above her and brings his face near her’s and removed her hands from her face..both are looking into each others eyes hot ..
He removed the hair in her face behind her ears..he removed the jimki in her ear and kissd the ear..sona closes her eyes..
Dev nw gently draws his finger over her face and to lips..sona bites his finger gently..
Dev soon kissed her lips and sucks it hardly..sona too kisses back deeply..
Dev rolls over and sona is lying above him stil kissing by cuping their faces..the kiss lasts for more time..
Dev now removes the thread in the back of her blouse..and he removes everything..
Sona shies..dev smiles..
Dev – u are so beautiful my dr wife..
Son – u too dev..
Both kissd again and went inside bedsheet..
They united together with lots of love..
Suharaat is over fine..

Next morning..
Both are lying closing their eyes..
Sona is keeping her head dev’s chest..
She opend her eyes..and tries to get up but dev didnt leave her..holds her in his arms.
Son – u naughty u r acting like sleeping.. Leave me
dev opend his eyes..
Dev – (smiles naughtily)ok u go dear..
Sona tries to stand..then thinks where is my dress..
Son – dev..where is my dress.
Dev – i throw it in the river..
Son – s it was covering u and i dnt like that..
Son – no dev..what wil i wear nw..u naughty..
(she beats him..and he puls her again to him smiling..sona too smiles)
dev – do u realy want to go my dr..
Son – no dev..love you
dev – love you sona
(both hugs again and …..)

After some time they returnd palace..
Every day went like tis ful of joy and happiness..
Due to their love Sona gives birth to twins little dev and little sona..
Devakshi lived happily years after together..and let us wish them happy life always friends..

The end..

Thanku for reading my dear friends..hope u al like tis..sorry friends if u felt i went over or disappointd u..u have supported me til now every day..thanku my dear friends for ur love and support..tis is my first ff and u gave me lots of encouragement for tis..i have got many friends and sisters here..love u loads..i hope i have satisfied many of ur wishes in my ff..so ending it happily..please send ur comments dears..silent friends also do comment plz since its last epi ..love u all friends and miss u..if again i got a good story i wil be back..til then bye..take care..

Sakthi

Girl..who likes to watch love serials and films..

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