Kuch iss tarah 2
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Recap : family moments.Swara’s accident. Last part
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3 years later…
@mandir complex
Bhramins in their traditional clothes were sitting in a line, while a boy of nearly 9(who is undoubtedly Sparsh) was serving them.
“Look ma, how responsible my little boy has became.” Sanskar said to Annapurna with tears of proudness in his eyes.
“Hmm, that incident has changed him completely. I still remember his horrified face.” Annapurna said while recalling the moment when they had reached hospital after Swara’s accident.
“Papa, do I need to do anything more?” Sparsh asked after serving the bhramins.
Sanskar nodded no.
“Will it be enough for mumma? I mean after that she can live in peace na?” Sparsh asked.
Sanskar nodded.
Soon the bhramin bhoj was over and Sanskar, Annapurna and Sparsh headed back to the Maheshwari Mansion. Suddenly Sparsh asked Sanskar to stop the car.
“What happened?” Sanskar asked.
“Sanskar, you still don’t understand why he asked you to stop?” Annapurna asked him, while gesturing him something. Sanskar got her clue and gave 100 bucks to Sparsh. Sprash left the car taking the money and in no time he came back with a packet.
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When the trio was entering into Maheshwari Mansion they heard some noises of utensils, jar and many things.
“World war 3 going on.” Annapurna chuckled.
Sanskar opened the door and saw that Mansion was a complete mess. Cushions were lying on floor, flowers were hanging on table, many chocolates, toffees and other sweets were in one corner. A girl of 3 was crying sitting in a high chair, whose Plank was locked so that the girl can’t escape.
“Oh god!” Sanskar murmured and moved towards the girl to take her in his arms. He was about to take the girl out when he heard an angry voice.
“Don’t you dare, Sanskar!”
Sanskar, without paying heed to the words took the girl in his arms and consoled her.
“Who made my little girl cry? ” He asked while wiping her tears.
“Mumma!” The little girl cried.
Sanskar moved his face back, where Swara was standing with a messy bun, wearing a plain straight kurti and was staring angrily at him.
“Swara, why you made her cry.” He asked.
“Look at the house! This girl made me run in while Mansion! She has hided her chocolates in various places. Just look at them! ( Swara pointed towards the pile of chocolates) she keeps on eating sweets whole day!! ” She shouted.
“Papa, Mumma took my all choltate ” his girl said in unclear voice.
“Don’t worry! Bhaiya has bought you more chocolates, Don’t cry.” Sanskar said while wiping her tears. He put her down, and she went towards Sparsh.
“Baiii, choltate!” She smiled.
Sparsh, without wasting any moment gave her chocolate which he bought for her. She took took the chocolates happily and opened that. She was about to eat that, but before that she forwarded that towards Sparsh so that he can have it’s first bite.
“Sanskar, she is eating too much sweets it’s not good.” Swara said.
“It’s all your fault.” Sanskar spoke, crossing his arms against his chest.
“My!!” She asked in shock.
“Yes! Your. You ate took much sweets during pregnancy and now because of that, Saanjh eats sweets.” He said.
“Huhhh!!” She made faces.
Sanskar gave her a winning smile.
“Achha, chuck this and tell me that bhoj was completed flawlessly na? I mean whatever pandit jee has asked us to do for Kavita?” She enquired.
“Yes, everything was perfect. I kept on waiting for you and Saanjh. ” He pouted.
“Sorry! I wanted to come but Saanjh is very difficult to Handel. She is full of energy and I have to match her energy level, which is difficult for me.” She sighed.
“Don’t blame her! You always blame her for everything.” He said.
“Sanskar, I swear! If I could I will kill you!!” She said angrily, making him chuckle.
“Where are my children?” DurgaPrasad asked while coming in.
Swara moved towards him and took his bag.
“Daddduuu!!!!” Saanjh and Sparsh came running to him.
“Hwz my bachhas?” He asked.
“dadu choltate!” Saanjh beamed.
“Sorry princess, dadu didn’t find chocolate but I bought ice cream instead.” DurgaPrasad said, while passing both of them ice cream.
“Baiii, kol do ” she asked Sparsh to open the ice cream. And he did that.
While eating she mistakenly dropped her icecream and started crying.
“Saanjh, don’t cry! Take my ice cream.” Sparsh passed his ice cream to her.
“Shachhi?” She confirmed. He nodded and she took ice cream from his hand while he smiled. She have it’s one bite and offered one to him,to which he denied.
Swara saw this and cried silently. She rushed to her room so that no one can see her crying.
“Swara” Sanskar spoke.
Swara threw herself in his arms and cried.
“Look na Sanskar, Wahi hua jiska Darr tha mujhe. Mera beta. Sprash, has lost his naughty behaviour. He is just 9 he should be naughty! He should fight with Saanjh! He should behave like kid!” She cried.
“Swara, Your accident had affected him badly. He has grown up alot after that. I still remember what I felt, seeing you on road crying badly. You have no idea how many bad thoughts had gone through my mind in fraction of seconds. When it could affect me this much. Just think how it would have affected a kid of 5 ?” He said, recalling the dreadful incident.
~flashback~
Sanskar was numb seeing his Swara in between pool of blood while crying in pain…
Sanskar was still, without any reaction.
When he realised what had happened and what could be it’s after effects a cold ran down his spine. He immediately took her to a hospital.
@hospital
All the family members were present in hospital corridor, Sparsh was praying to his god while crying badly. Sanskar was moving to and fro anxiously. He was becoming more restless seeing time moving fastly.
~an hour later~
Finally doctor came out and spoke.
“Well, delivery was quite complicated. Still, we managed to save both.”
“Sach?” Sanskar asked.
“Yes! Sanskar, Swara is fine and congratulations, beti Hui hai.” Doctor smiled.
Sanskar sat on the chair kept nearby and rubbed his face with his palms in relaxation.
“Sakshi, Swara is fine na?” Adiraj asked.
“Haan, she is fine. Though she needs to be under observation for a week. Moreover, don’t let her stress herself otherwise her stitches may reopen.” Doctor said.
Adiraj nodded.
“A-and baby?” Ragini asked.
“Baby is with nurse. She has taken her for cleaning, then she will give baby to you.” Doctor said and left.
“Sanskar, Swara and baby, both are fine.” DurgaPrasad said putting a hand on his shoulder.
Sanskar bursted out crying, hugging him.
“S-she, she is fine dad. She is fine! She is fine!!!” he cried in happiness.
“Haa my son, she and your daughter, both are absolutely fine. Now, wipe these tears and be presentable. Swara won’t like to see you this way.” DurgaPrasad said wiping his tears.
“Haan, dad you are right! And Sparsh? Where is he? Swara must want to see him.” He asked in excitement.
“Beta, Annu has taken him out. He was also tensed just like you.” DurgaPrasad smiled.
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Sanskar entered her ward and waited for her to open her eyes. Ironically now Each second was passing slowly, making his wait longer.
Finally she opened her eyes and saw Sanskar infront of her eyes.
“S-sans-kaar”she spoke painfully.
“Swara, you have no idea how much sacred I was! I’m thankful that you are alright.” Sanskar sighed.
“Sanskar, Sparsh? Where is he? Sanskar call him I wanna see him! He must get hurt badly! Please let me see my son!” She panicked.
“Swara, calm down. Sparsh is fine, don’t worry.” He tried to soothe her.
“No! No! No! I just want to see him. Sparsh!! Sparshh!! Sparshh!!! ” She shouted.
“Swara, Sparsh is with maa. She is coming with him don’t panic please!” He said.
She get up with a jerk, resulting in hurting her stitches.
“Ahh!! Sparshh!!” She cried.
“Swara!!! Please. Don’t–” a sweet yet crying voice cut Sanskar in middle.
“Mumma!”
Swara saw Sparsh standing at door with Annapurna, she opened her arms and signalled him to come. Sparsh immediately ran and hugged her tightly and cried.
“Where did you get hurt? Show me?” She asked with tears seeing his bruised hands.
“Sorry Mumma.” He apologized.
“Never ever try to do that again. You have no idea how much you scared me!” She scolded him lovingly.
Sparsh nodded no and hugged her, Swara was so much worried about him that she forgot about the new member. While hugging this thing striked her mind and she asked…
“Sanskar? Vo…”
“Beti Hui hai.” He smiled.
Swara smiled and kept on hugging her son.
“Mumma, dadi is saying that you got me a sister? Did I pass the test?” Sparsh asked innocently.
“Yes! Not only pass you have topped the test for being best son.” Swara smiled.
“Sach Mumma? But you got hurt because of me” he said sadly.
“No, I didn’t get hurt cz of you. So stop crying and think what you wanna call your sister. Don’t you think she should have a name? (He nodded) so, now decide a name for her, you are a big brother now.” She said.
Sparsh beamed with joy. By that time Sanskar was standing near them holding a small girl in his hands, wrapped in white hospital cloth.
Sparsh was super excited to see her he kept on starting her, he was in another world, the happiness had no limits.
“Sprash, let’s go and think name for your sister.” Avni said.
“Yesss massi!!!” Sparsh smiled.
Soon Avni took Sparsh out and everyone left after blessing the new Mumma Maheshwari and Papa Maheshwari and specially the daughter Maheshwari.
Sanskar now finally handed the baby to Swara and sat beside her…
“Thank-you!” He said.
“I love you too.” She smiled.
•••a week later•••
Swara and Saanjh came to home and Swara started to notice change in Sparsh’s behaviour. He was more calm than before.
“No Swara, it’s not possible. We know Sparsh is habitual of throwing hands in sleep and he might hurt Saanjh.” Sanskar said
“I don’t know anything! Sparsh will stay with us in our room only! That’s it.” She retorted.
“Swara, please try to understand.” He said.
“Okay! Then let’s do one thing. You and Saanjh stay here, I and Sparsh will stay in other room. Problem solved!” She said putting Saanjh down on bed.
“Swara Saanjh needs you! She is small!!” He said in irritation.
“Sparsh is also small! He also needs me! Why the hell you try to seperate me and Sparsh!” She said angrily.
Before Sanskar could say anything, Sparsh came in and picked up his toys.
“Mumma, Papa, please don’t fight. I will stay in bua’s room. I don’t want to trouble you both.” Sparsh said sadly and left taking his toys.
Sanskar was amazed to see this as he was unknown to what happened with him. For Swara, it was now confirmed that something wrong has happened with him making him a lot more mature than his age.
“Kyu Mumma ke chamche? Aaj ladna nahi hai Mumma ke saath sone ke liye?” Sanskar said teasingly.
“No Papa, now I’m a big boy. Big brother. I will be a good boy now.” Sparsh said seriously.
“You are just a kid Sparsh! You are a small boy that’s it!” Swara said angrily.
Sanskar was shocked to see her this reaction. When Sparsh left Sanskar talked with Swara and She told him everything. Sanskar sensed the seriousness of the matter and tried all possible ways. Nothing really worked.
~flashback ends~
Few days later
Sparsh’s hand got fractured and Swara took him back to Maheshwari Mansion from hospital.
“Swara, how this happened?” DurgaPrasad asked.
“Dad, some boys were bullying him and in this whole process Sparsh fell from stairs and broke his bone. I have complained to principal about those boys.” Swara said.
Little Saanjh was also listening this and what she understood was that someone has troubled her brother. She went in and put all her balls in her toy bag, took her small plastic bat and came out with an angry look.
“Saanjh? Where are you going?” Annapurna asked, while serving to Sparsh.
“Baiii, tell me apo(aapko) kishne mala. Mai uoko(unko) pitundi.” Saanjh said angrily.
Everyone busted out laughing listening to this. Sparsh chuckled at her innocence.
“Saanjh, how will you beat them?” Swara asked controlling her laughter.
“Isshee” Saanjh said showing her toy bag full of balls and her plastic bat.
“Kise peetne ja Rahi hai meri princess?.” Sankar asked coming in and lifting Saanjh.
“Jinoe, baiii mala.” Saanjh said angryly in her unclear tone.
“Saanjh, don’t beat them or else they will get hurt.” Sparsh said smilingly.
“Naiiii vo apo male, mai uno malungi.” She said angrily. Sparsh gut up from his chair and kissed her cheek.
“I love you” he said.
“I boo o” Saanjh said unclearly, whereas Sparsh understood that she was saying’i love you too”
“Achha! Now Baad me this maarna peetna, let bhai rest.” Swara said taking Sparsh in their room.
She made him lie in bed and caressed his hair affectionately till he fell asleep.
When she came out she saw Saanjh standing at door.
“Why are you standing here?” She asked.
“Baiii pass Jana.” She said.
“You wanna sleep with bhai?” She asked.
Saanjh nodded. Swara tucked her in bed besides Sparsh and in no time she fell asleep. Swara put pillows on their sides.
Saanjh cuddled Sparsh. Swara smiled seeing both of them.
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7 years later (the truth revelation)
“No Swara! We don’t need to tell Saanjh anything.” Sanskar protested
“Sanskar, if she come to know this from someone else then it will be disastrous.”Swara said.
“Sorry to interrupt Papa, but I think Mumma is right.” Sparsh said while coming in.
“Ha, you will support her only. Mumma ka chamcha.” Sanskar said angrily.
“Sanskar!! Enough!!” Swara said sternly.
“No papa, but I think Mumma is right. If Saanjh come to know this from someone else she will be devastated. If Mumma wouldn’t have explained me about her and Kavita Mumma. Now I might be hating her. Please tell her truth I don’t want to loose my sister.” Sparsh said.
Sanskar gave up at last and they told the truth to 10 year old Saanjh.
“It means ke, Mumma Papa ki se-second wife hai! Aur bhai mere sage bhai nahi hai!” She murmured in shock.
“I know it’s difficult to know, but it is the truth beta.” Swara said putting a hand on her shoulder.
Saanjh shoved her hand and ran from there crying.
“Look what you did!!”Sanskar said angrily. Swara gave him apologetic look and both went behind her.
They saw Saanjh crying hardly in Sparsh’s room while hugging Sparsh.
“Saanjh, stop crying and tell me what happened?” Sparsh asked while rubbing her back.
“Bhai, Mumma and Papa said that y-you are not my real brother. She said she is Papa’s second wife. I(sobs) I don’t know anything, I don’t want to know anything, I just know that you are my bhai, only my. And I love you” Saanjh cried harder.
“Saanjh, whatever mumma told you was correct. We are not biological siblings.” With his this statement, Saanjh parted the hug and look at him with tears.
Meanwhile Sanskar wanted to go into the room but Swara stopped him.
“Yes, we a not biological siblings. But does it matters? Will it reduce your love for me? Or my love for you? Nahi na? Then why are you crying?” Saying this he wiped her tears.
“Cz I don’t want to loose you.” She said with hickkups
” You are not going to loose me. Everything will remain as it is. It’s just that you need to know truth.you will always be my little sissy.” Sparsh said and kissed her forehead.
“Hamesha na? Nothing will change na?” She confirmed with chocked voice.
“Hamesha. Nothing is going to change.” Sparsh said holding her hand firmly.
“I love you bhai.” Saanjh hugged him tight.
” I love you infinity.” He said.
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5 years later ( the first heart break)
Sparsh 21
Saanjh 16
As the time passes Sparsh found his interest in cooking, whereas Saanjh has grown up into a cricket freak. Saanjh’s bond with Vaghmi(Adiraj and Avni’s daughter) was the strongest in her friends. Vaghmi, who was a year younger to her was her companion in all pranks. Their friendship was strong just like their parents’.
Sparsh has enrolled himself in hotel management, where he met Tamanna, who later became his first girlfriend and now first ex-girlfriend.
“It’s okay beta. Everyone suffers from heartbreak. It’s natural.” Swara said, caressing Sparsh’s hair, who was lying in her lap.
“I love her ma. I just love her. I don’t think I can love anyone again.” Sparsh said with tears silently flowing from his eyes.
“Sparsh, it’s not the end. You are 21, just 21. You are handsome, well mannered a true gentleman. Any girl will fall for you. Aur Jo tumhare liye Bani hogi vo tumhe har halat me mil ke he rahegi.” Swara said wiping his tears.
“Just like Papa got you.” He spoke.
“Hmm… Just like this. We were ment to be together. So, destiny created its own way. Just like you were the way for me and Sanskar.” Swara said nostalgically.
“Hope so ma.” He said hopelessly.
“Now get up and let’s make something. You will feel better.” Swara said taking Sparsh down in kitchen.
When they stepped down they saw Saanjh standing at door with Vaghmi.
Sanskar, who was sitting in hall got worried seeing rashes all over Saanjh’s body.
“Saanjh, how this happened?” Sanskar asked in concern.
“Nothing Papa, it’s just result of my victory” Saanjh said with a grin while scratching herself.
Swara and Sparsh were worried to see her.
“Saanjh say it clearly what you did this time?” Swara asked sternly.
“Nothing much Mumma. Mne bas Tamanna ki tammanaye puri ki hai.” She said wickedly.
“Tamanna? Saanjh what you did with her?” Sparsh asked in concern.
“Vo aunty, today Tamanna was going on a date with her new boyfriend and Saanjh poured itching powder in her dress and mistakenly some powder fell on her resulting in rashes.” Vaghmi explained.
“Oh god! Saanjh! Why you did that? You should not do that. Look what you did with yourself. And moreover how you got her dress?” Sparsh asked.
“I bribed the person who was delivering her dress.” She murmured.
“What? How? From where you get money for that?” Swara asked angrily.
“I have spent my all savings.” She said in a feeble tone.
“Look Sanskar, what she did? Do you have something to say?” She shouted at Sanskar.
“Why you did that princess?It’s bad na?” Sanskar asked softly
“Because she has hurt my bhai. How dare she to hurt him. I will do this with each and every person who will make my bhai cry. I will never ever spare any of them.”Saanjh said crying and ran into her room.
Sparsh knocked the door but Saanjh denied to open that. After numerous efforts she agreed and opened the door.
Sparsh came in and put a bowl on side table.
“I’m sorry bhai. I know it was wrong but what she did was also wrong. She made you cry.” Saanjh said while sobbing
“Leave that. Whatever happened has happened, but don’t do anything like this again. Okay?” He asked.
She nodded.
“Now, come let me apply this lep on your rashes you will feel better.” Saying this Sparsh was about to lift the bowl when Swara entered saying…
“Saanjh, apply this it will reduce itching.”
Swara was shocked to see Sparsh with the same lep. Swara and Sparsh were exchanging looks when Sanskar entered.
“Princess look Papa brings lep for you.” He said and got shocked to see Swara and Sparsh already there.
Everyone busted out laughing seeing this. Swara signalled Sparsh to apply lep.
“Look what your son did.” Sanskar said to Swara?
“Huh?” Swara gave him confused look.
“Ya, because of your son my daughter got rashes.” Sanskar Said
“Excuse me! It’s your daughter, jo har baar shaitani krti hai. Mere bete Ko kuch mat kaho.” She retorted.
“You will say this na, afterall you will support your chamcha only” He spoke angrily.
“Just the way you are supporting you chamchi!” She retorted.
“Don’t you dare to say anything to my daughter!” He shouted.
“You too! don’t say anything about my son.” She too shouted.
Sparsh and Saanjh looked at eachother and shouted together “stop it Mumma! Papa!”
SwaSan realised that they were too much stupid and smiled sheepishly. Saanjh and Sparsh chuckled.
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1 year later (First night out)
@night
Sanskar was tossing and turning in his bed.
“Sanskar! Stop it! Let me sleep please.” She said in irritation.
“I am not getting sleep.” He said in concern.
Swara sighed and said…
“She will be fine Sanskar, Sparsh is with her. Moreover, she is at Adiraj’s home, Naman, Nitay( raglak’s son), Vaghmi(Adiraj’s daughter), Aditya( Adiraj’s son), Aniket (uttra’s son), will be there.so, Please sleep and let me sleep.” She pleaded.
“I am still not getting sleep. I am going to watch a cricket match, you sleep here I will see it in hall.” Sanskar said and left.
Two hours later
Swara thought to check him. When she went in hall, the television was on with a cricket match in it but Sanskar was missing. She checked his car, which was not in parking as well. She sighed. Suddenly the door bell rang, she opened the door and found Sparsh and Saanjh there.
“What are you doing here at 3 in the morning!” She asked.
“I was missing Papa, so I came back with bhai.” Saanjh said in a feeble tone.
Swara gave her an unbelievable look. Saanjh went in there room and found Sanskar missing, she panicked.
“Mumma, papa isn’t in room. Where is he?” She asked.
Before she could reply her phone rang.
“Swara, look Saanjh isn’t here. And your son’s car is also not here. Call your son and ask him where is my daughter. I am warning you that something will happen to her I won’t spare your chamcha!” He said angrily in one breath.
“Saans le lo, ab Umar nahi hai tumhari itta stress Lene ki. Well, Saanjh is at home and your daughter has destroyed my son’s sleep. If he get dark circles, I won’t spare your chamchi!” She retorted.
~One hour later~
Sanskar lied back in his bed peacefully after meeting Saanjh. After seeing this incident Swara, suggested him.
“Sanskar, don’t be so attached to her. One day she will marry and leave us.
“No way! She is not going to marry! I will keep her here always. She will stay with us always.” Sanskar said like an innocent, loving father.
Swara didn’t want to destroy his sweet, innocent, love for Saanjh. Thus, she just kissed him and slept after wishing him good night.
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7 years later…
Sanskar was sitting in his car infront of Saanjh’s in-laws house and recalled this incident from past. Having tears in his eyes,
Swara who was sitting beside him in car put her hand over his.
“Sanskar.” She spoke.
“I never knew this would be this much painful.” He said with tears, and changed the direction of his car, avoiding his visit to his now married daughter’s house.
He stopped the car in front of Maheshwari Mansion.
“Sanskar, wipe your tears. I don’t think that Aashi, Anvi and Aarav will like to see their lovely dadu crying.” She Said teasingly.
“Swara, did you ever realised that how difficult it will be for me to see my two granddaughters getting married?” Sanskar said with chocked voice.
Swara chuckled lightly and said “Sanskar, your granddaughters are just 5 and 1 year old. Don’t you think you are thinking too much?”
“No I’m not! But one thing is sure that this time I’m not gonna let my granddaughters to marry. I will keep them with me for sure.” He said innocently.
“Did I tell you that you look irresistibly cute, when you talk emotional.” Swara said giving a peck on his lips.
“I love you Swara.” He said.
“I love you too!” She said hugging him sideways.
Both parted the hug and stepped out of the car when they heard some sweet shouts.
“Daddduuu!!!!”
“Daadiiiii!!!”
The three grandchildren of SwaSan, the three members of the Maheshwari family came running to them.
“Daadii, you got me choltate?” Small Aarav of 3 asked Swara in his sweet voice. Swara recalled Saanjh demanding chocolates, she smiled and lifted him up.
“Daadu, Aarav stole my chips today.” Aashi, who was the eldest in the 4th generation, complained to Sanskar.
“Swara, look your chamcha stole chips of my princess.” Sanskar said lifting Aashi up.
“O hello! Your chamchi took those chips from my Aarav.” She retorted.
SwaSan again engaged themselves in a fight. Listening to their voices Sparsh and Saanvi came out to know the matter. Both chuckled seeing them this way, again.
Saanjh who has came to meet her parents with her life partner Arjun, too smiled seeing them.
All four looked at each other and shouted..
“Maa!! Papa!! Stop it!”
SwaSan realised their embarassing act and smiled sheepishly.
“Saanjh what are you doing here?” Swara asked.
“I was missing Papa. I wanted to see him so, I came here.”Saanjh said and hugged Sanskar.
Swara smiled.
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A month later
@night
Swara was Standing in her balcony, when Sanskar came and hugged her from back resting his chin in her shoulder.
“You won’t change na?” She said.
“Never!It’s been 25 years since when you and me are ‘WE’ and with each passing moment I’m falling more and more in love with you.” He said kissing her cheek.
“Mr Sanskar Maheshwari, look at your age, you have crossed half century and still your shamelessness didn’t decrease.”she said releasing herself.
She turned and locked her hands on his shoulder behind his neck.
“What can I do? when I have such a beautiful lady in front of me, tempting ne more and more to love.” He said pulling her closer.
“I love you Sanskar. Thank-you so much for everything. It’s only because if you why I got these happiness.” She said emotionally.
“Ahhan, thank-you Swara, for coming in my life. For giving me Saanjh. For completing me and my family.” He said kissing her forehead.
Swara melted in his arms. Both were busy in hugging when Sparsh knocked the door.
“Mumma! Papa! Dinner is ready.” Sparsh shouted.
“Huh! Your chamcha never let me romance with you” Sanskar pouted.
Swara chuckled
“Let’s go. I am feeling hungry.” She said
“One second!” Sanskar said and forwarded his hand, she slides her hand in his and entangled her hand.
Swara and Sanskar walked down while holding hands firmly. It’s been 25 years to their marriage and still the spark, the love, the affection between them was same , actually even more.
Swara loved Sanskar with all her soul, Sanskar first rectified his mistake with his all will and lastly he fell in love with her. They both were ment to be together, destiny first sperate them, then it bring them back together and this time Forever.
The delicate yet strong foundation of their relationship was Sparsh, a child’s love is the love in its purest form. That love binds them together… FOREVER.
THE END
The story of last two leaps aren’t completely mine. I have read a small story and I tuRned that into this way,after modifying accordingly.
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For all those who are waiting for the dooriyan 2. I will start that somewhere in June. Not because I don’t have time, but because I am upset of your feedback.
Those who know me, knows this that I never ask for comments and honestly, I don’t want any COMMENT. what I wanted was FEEDBACK. I wanted to know how you feel after reading the part but to my dismay I only get that from few readers.
Kit2 was full of sad turns because mostly people will give me their feedback in such case only. I have changed many thing in kit2 just to end it soon. It was becoming difficult for me to write without proper feedback. Well, now when it has ended it hardly matters.
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The thing which hurt me most was readers accusing me of writing sad endings only. Many people requested me not to give it a sad end like yeh dooriyan. When I ended yeh dooriyan I got lot of comments saying that they won’t read my work again and what not! I know one thing that trust is important between reader and writer. Which lacked in my case. It’s because of me, that I failed to gain trust if readers even after a year.
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I want time to prepare myself for writing another fiction without proper FEEDBACK and for that I need time so I will start YEH DOORIYAN 2 somewhere in June. I know many of you won’t even read this studip note. But it’s tough to write without knowing what your readers want.
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Thank-you for your support.
Love
Meher