Guys thanks a ton for all your comments…many of you don’t want swara to forgive sanky easily but my story is kinda diff….so sorry if it does not reach you expectations..
Swara was really hungry and she had no money left.. .she went and asked food from many people…no one gave her.. She went and sat on the steps of the temple and started begging…tears were continuously rolling from her eyes….she thought of the time she was treated like a princess…many people came and threw 1dhs on her….she took it and kept it in her bag….she then collected all the money and went to buy food …..
Like this many months pass…some times swara would have to starve for days…otherwise she would get money fast….but then she became weak and weak….all her power was deteriorated…..she was all tired…
On her ninth month….
These nine months were like hell to swara…she used to go on starving for days…some times she thinks that its a miracle that nothing happened yo her baby…every moments she thanks god for keeping her baby alright even in these tough conditions…
One day as swara was begging for money on the stairs she felt pain in stomach….she could not bear the pain….she somehow reached back to her room….she sat there crying in pain.. The pain started increasing….she did not know what’s happening…she cried loudly…this pain could not be accepted by her as she is just sixteen years old…
She cried in pain for two hours unless a woman came there hearing her cry….the woman was a gyno doctor….the woman helped her in giving birth….the woman told her to push but swara did not understand what it meant….
Swara-how should I push…aahhhh…
Doctor-you don’t know how to push…what..
The doctor helped her in pushing….at last she gave birth to a baby girl…after giving birth to the child swara looked at her for seeing the baby…once she saw the baby she bursted out crying….thinking about all the pain she suffered cause of the baby…she hugged the baby so tightly as if some one was gonna snatch it from her…she kissed the baby’s face all over..
Doctor-but I can’t understand why you don’t know the meaning of push you are big enough to know the meaning…
Swara-i am sixteen…
Doctor looked at her in disbelief….
Doctor-how…but then her phone starts ringing and she goes..
Swara feeds the baby milk…she was thinking a name for her baby at last she kept her name as
Sanskriti….she know seed sanskriti….swara calls the baby as kriti..
Days passed Swara got very less money…a lot of people stopped giving money as it was kind of banned by government…
It has been almost 1 week she has gone without food…even her milk had also got over two days back .. She did not have the power to stand up and console her starving daughter. .
Sanskaar and kavitha were passing that temple. They were on the signal…kavitha looked at the beggers sitting there with disgust..they were swara with baby….swara had turned the other side so kavitha did not see her face
Kavitha-look at them sanskaar..I hate these useless beggers…sanskaar looks at them…that time swara turns back…
He found a swara who was weak,pale,tired….her eyes were clearly showing her pain…
Sanskaar got shocked to see her in this condition….he found that her legs were not still and she was gonna fall..
Sanskaar rushes towards her and catches her…swara looks up and finds sanskaar…she completely lost her balance and fell on his arms.
Swara showed him the baby indicating him to catch her otherwise she might drop her..
Sanskaar quickly catches the baby….he could not understand what was happening…
Swara-i am sorry sanskaar ji …I could not become a good mother to our child..I had promised you that I will take care of the baby…but I could not…I have made her starve since two days….please ji if you can please buy some milk for her…..I can’t live without her..
And faints….sanskaar rushes both to the hospital….
Precap-last episode…
39 Comments
Nice one..
Swara suffered a lot
Ahh is she going to die
Sooooo emotional
poor swara
so much suffering
and that b*t*h kavita is useless
and sanskaar how can he live peacefully after this much he should be punished yaar
omg so sad swara suffered so much feeling extremely sad for her
Awsome Can’t wait plz post next part asap
Awww i got tears im my eyes ???its awesome dear
Plz don’t do anything to swara and baby
awsm dear…
OMG OMG OMG.. I’M CRYING,,,HIKS… I HATE YOU..HUHUHUHU as my cute face nomore when crying huh!
???? poor swaraaa awesome dear ?
Superb…. I was crying… I hope everything gonna b gdd
awesome and emotional part.i love it.
Awesome……. Waiting for next
Amazing
I am crying……!!!!!!!!
Awesome dr…
Nxt one soon..
Dun knw wat to comment coz v all want sanskar to suffer bt u alrdy told its dffrnt dat means u gonna unite dem easily or gonna kill swara… m not happy wid both..
Feeling so bad for swara poor soul…
Poor swara ? soo emotional??
Awesome dear ?
i am crying. plzz dont kill swara and episode was toooo emotional
Awesome dear
Its awesome….. Had tears in my eyes…. But seriously Sanskar doesnt deserve swara…. If u let swara die then there is no justice at all….. Lets see what u have in ur mind…. Post next soon
Awsm….fabulous… Can’t wait for the bxt part….pls pls..update asap….n u made me cry….its outstanding… BT toooo short….
I can’t hold my tears after reading this. Poor swara & her daughter. Kavita.. go to hell woman.. ?
Superb…..i must say sanskar doesnot reliase his sin because he is with kavita.he doesnot even try to find out about swara and he living happily with kavi and thenhow could he good father to his daughter if swara dies.if swara dies he accept his daughter and marry kavita.is it good?.swara saffer somuch to give birth to her child .is it good to separate child to her mother?if so there is no god in earth.
Poor swara..update next part soon.
I got tears while reading it it’s so emotional yaar
Wow loved it
Its very sad yar sanskar dont deseve har very emotionl
nice..swara suffered a lot..tc..
Omg poor swara 🙁 she suffered a lot waiting for the next part 🙁
i feel like crying……..
Awesome dear…but poor swara she beared a lot because of that Sanskar..he deserve punishment dear…post next one soon…can’t wait to read
Awesome…?
nyc
Oh god…i m crying now. Aww swara….how much she is suffering! Plz don’t kill her….upload soon
My poor swara although she suffered a lot i thought u should punish sanskar but u r came with different idea nd plz don’t make my shona die and if possible post next part today itself dear plzzzzzzzzz
Ahhh just CNT express my feelings towards swara..c really suffered a lot..n DDA part ws amazing…i rlly loved it so mch…waitng fr nxt…post soon
I completely understand u HV a different story in mind but plzz understand r emotions don’t kill Swara and don’t make her forgive sanky easily coz dat would be pure injustice with dat selfless soul..plzzzzz!?!!?!