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Home»Fan Fiction»Kriyyam FF ‘Love Story’ (Part 10)
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Kriyyam FF ‘Love Story’ (Part 10)

muniyaBy muniyaNovember 23, 201716 Comments8 Mins Read
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Hey Guys? …Muniya again…I can’t believe I m on 10th part of ‘Love Story’…I m so happy…this is a huge thing to me…and all thanks to u guys…ur lovely comments encouraged me a lot to continue writing this ff…Thank u so much.??☺☺
And If anyone missed ? ?…here is the link of part 9…

Part 9

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Problems were increasing between Baby and Yuvaan. Their little and lite arguments were now turned into almost everyday fights. Baby’s always need for money was the only reason. Her acting was also not working on Yuvaan.

They hv a fight in the morning. Yuvaan, being enraged, left for office, without giving needed money to Baby.

Baby: Oh god…what will I do now?…I thought…I’ll live a luxurious life after marrying Yuvaan…but now he is not even ready to give me few money for my everyday needs…upar s ye roz roz ke tamashe…I m just fade up of all this.

She was frustrated and gets thinking for a way to smooth the ways of her life.

In Lunch Time

Suhani goes to Kriyyam’s room with their lunch. Kriyyam smile to see her.

Krishna: Maa…we were coming…why did u bring food here?…at least u could ask me.

Suhani places the food on the table.

Suhani: So what…hum kya apne bachcho ke liye itna bhi nahi kar sakte?

Krishna: No Maa…not that..

Suhani: Ok…enough now…both of u…open ur mouth…today I’ll feed u both.

Sayyam: Really Maa…

He gets too happy. Krishna smiles. Suhani feeds them and then they also feed her. They enjoy the moment to the fullest.

They finish the food and Suhani leaves after sometime.

Kriyyam were again indulged in their work and finishes the presentation by the evening. Krishna gets so happy. She smiles and excitedly hugs Sayyam.

Krishna: Tumne dekha Sayyam…maine kaha tha na… we’ll do this.

Sayyam too was happy. He hugs her back and then only Krishna understands what she did in excitement and was embarrassed.

Sayyam understands that as Krishna’s laughter was stopped at once. He smiles to himself. Krishna slowly moves apart from him while looking away. But Sayyam was looking at her from the sideways of his eyes.

Krishna gets up and was going to leave the room being embarrassed when Sayyam holds her wrist. Krishna looks at him. Sayyam smiles at her.

Sayyam: Thanks…for helping me.

Krishna smiles and leaves. Sayyam smiles.

Krishna goes out. Looking at her face, anybody can say that she was very happy. Baby saw her smiling to herself and her envy for Krishna was once again awaken.

Baby: Yahan meri life toh jaise hell ban gayi…aur isse dekho…kaise smile kar rahi hai.

She goes from there.

At night

All hv dinner together and disperse to rooms. Kriyyam too goes to their room and sleep.

12 am

Sayyam wakes up to drink water. He switches on the light and Krishna too wakes up.

Sayyam: Sorry Krishna…wo…mujhe paani peena tha.

He goes to take water but there was no water in the jug. Krishna sees that.

Krishna: I forgot to bring water…I’ll bring now.

Sayyam: No…its ok…I’ll go.

He goes to leave and Krishna too gets up.

Krishna: I’ll also come with u…I can’t stay alone.

Sayyam gets that she is afraid to stay alone. He thinks to tease her.

Sayyam: Krishna…I’ll just go and come…itne me koi bhoot nahi aa jayega.

He again starts to leave, chuckling at her. Krishna’s eyes got wide open in fear. She tightly clutches Sayyam’s arm and closed her eyes.

Krishna: Sayyam…

Sayyam gets shocked to see her in that state and felt bad for joking with her.

Sayyam: Krishna…what happened?…I was joking.

Krishna: Nahi Sayyam…mujhe bohut dar lagta hai.

Sayyam: Ok…Ok…Krishna…look at me…I m sorry…I was just kidding.

Krishna looks at him.

Sayyam: Sorry…ok…ab chalo.

Krishna holds his hand and they go to the kitchen.

Sayyam drinks water and also fills the jug. Krishna was standing beside him. Suddenly she chuckled remembering the night before their marriage, when they meet here and Krishna thought Sayyam to be a thief. She tried to hit him and how Sayyam hold her.

Sayyam turned to her.

Sayyam: What happened?…

Krishna told him what she was thinking and Sayyam too smiled. There was one more reason for Sayyam’s smile. He smiled to see Krishna smiling now, as she got afraid few times back.

They go back to their room. They were walking through the corridor when suddenly Krishna stopped in her track and again clutched Sayyam’s arm. Sayyam looks at her, being shocked.

Sayyam: Kya hua Krishna?

Krishna looks at him, with fear in her eyes and indicates something. Sayyam follows her indication and was shocked to see a moving shadow of a person. He looks at her. Krishna was too much afraid.

Sayyam keeps the water jug on a table and takes Krishna with him to hide behind a pillar.

Krishna: Sayyam…

Krishna was trying to say something but Sayyam gestures her to keep quiet. He steps forward carefully and stands at a distance from the shadow. Krishna follows him, quietly.

They see the shadow moving towards their room only. They get shocked. Krishna whispers to Sayam

Krishna: Sayyam…ye hamare kamre mein kyun jaa raha hai?

Sayyam: Don’t know…Krishna…u go and call papa…I’ll see him.

Krishna: No Sayyam…agar usne tumhe kuch jar diya toh?

Sayyam: Krishna…don’t worry…kuch nhi hoga…u go…tum jaa paogi na?

Sayyam knew that she is afraid to be alone in darkness so he asked her. Krishna was really afraid but then she thinks about the situation they were in. She nodes in positive and leaves. Sayyam keeps an eye on the person.

Krishna goes to YuvAni’s room and lightly knocks on their door. Yuvraaj wakes up.

Yuvraaj: Itni raat ko kaun hai?

He goes to open the door and was shocked to see Krishna. Suhani too gets up.

Yuvraaj: Krishna…tum?…Itni raat ko?

Krishna comes inside the room and tells them everything. YuvAni gets shocked.

Yuvraaj: Kya?…

Krishna: Haan..papa…Sayyam uske peeche gaya hai.

Yuvraaj: Let’s go.

They go and Suhani calls the other members of the family. They all secretly goes.

The person enters Kriyyam’s room and straight goes to the wardrobe. He opens it with his keys and starts to find something.

Sayyam and Yuvraaj too reach behind him. They look at eachother and Sayyam switches on the lights. The person gets shocked and turns to them. He tries to run away from the window but before that Sayyam catches him. The person struggles to get rid of him but can’t. Yuvraaj also holds him.

All others reach there and was shocked to see the scenario. Yuvaan and Sharad also go them. They beat the person and Sayyam opens his mask.

Yuvraaj: Who r u?…Yahan kyun aaye ho?

They all ask the same question but the person doesn’t answer.

Sayyam: Wait…I’ll call the police.

He dials the number and person gets afraid.

Person: No…no..plz don’t call the police…I’ll tell u everything.

They look at him. The person says that the boss of Sayyam’s rival company send him to steal the papers of Sayyam’s final presentation. So that Sayyam loses the deal and he can win it.

They all get shocked. Sayyam was fully raged. He again starts to beat him. Yuvraaj stops him.

Person: I told u everything…plz don’t send me to jail.

But it was not a request that could be kept so easily. Sayyam called the police. They came and arrested him.

Yuvraaj: Ok…now all go to ur rooms…its quiet late…and Sayyam…kuch bhi problem ho toh humein bulana.

Sayyam: Yes papa.

They all go to their rooms. Yuvaan and Baby too goes back. Baby was in shock to know that this was very big deal and any company, who wins the project, will achieve a lifetime profit.

She smiles evilly as her greed for money and wealth gets her to think another way. She thinks

Baby: I did mistake to leave Sayyam…but its not late yet…I can try once again.

She smiles evilly and leaves. But little did she know it’s not that easy to win someone’s heart forever and Sayyam’s heart was already in someone’s sweet capture.

Kriyyam’s room

They lied down but couldn’t sleep.

Krishna: Sayyam…plz try to sleep…u hv to rise early tomorrow.

Sayyam: But I can’t Krishna…until I win this deal I can’t sleep peacefully.

Krishna goes near him and starts to caresses his hair.

Krishna: I know that…but u r still weak…so plz try to sleep.

Sayyam looks at her with a smile. Krishna too smiles and continues caressing his hair. Sayyam closes his eyes.

He slept after sometime and Krishna smiles to herself. She too slept soon.

Precap: Let’s see if Sayyam wins the project or not…???

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So guys…How was this??…Let me know if u like it or not…Will be Awaiting ur lovely comments. ??
Thanks for reading. ???
I’ll be back soon…Till than Bye. ?
Love u All ??????????
Yours Muniya (Moumita) ?

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    16 Comments

    1. Wd sravya on November 23, 2017 1:21 pm

      So nice and awesome and wonderful update I loved ur ff so much please update soon I can’t wait to read

      • muniya on November 23, 2017 2:00 pm

        Thanks Sravya…

    2. Isha on November 23, 2017 1:30 pm

      I love it!! Loved their cute nokjhoks..?

      • muniya on November 23, 2017 2:01 pm

        Thnak u Isha

    3. Ela on November 23, 2017 2:30 pm

      nice epi…..waiting for more kriyam scenes

      • muniya on November 23, 2017 5:09 pm

        Thanks Ela…

    4. Harini on November 23, 2017 3:09 pm

      I don’t know who is that one person continuously disliking the episode ,just go to hell (dislike person )
      Nice episode muniya and how is ur health ,take care.

      • muniya on November 23, 2017 4:19 pm

        Hi Harini…Thank u so much dear..
        Glad to know that u like this too…
        I m quiet well now…Thanks for asking?

    5. sabana on November 23, 2017 3:33 pm

      sooo cute kriyyam nightscene love it thnx & Plzzz update soon can’t wait

      • muniya on November 23, 2017 4:10 pm

        Thank u so much Sabana..
        I’ll update soon..

    6. Palak on November 23, 2017 4:21 pm

      first of all congrats to u…for completing 10 epi…..may u go till 100..200…..or come up with many other os n ff….u r keeping alive kriyam memories……god knows whether we get karshti (kj n sj) again together in new serial or not ….but m missing them vry much yar…..n episode was super se b uper…. come soon

      • muniya on November 23, 2017 5:13 pm

        Thank u so much Palak…
        Glad that u like this ff of mine…
        And same here…i wish Karshti come back again??and fulfill our dreams…Miss them badly.
        I’ll try to update soon

    7. Fanficwriter on November 23, 2017 7:07 pm

      Ooh, I loved this part like anything. Your plot is pretty intriguing, can’t wait to find out what happens next❤??

      • muniya on November 23, 2017 9:00 pm

        Thanks Shreya…
        Its really good to know that u like it…
        I’ll try to update soon

    8. Kriyyam fan on November 23, 2017 8:25 pm

      Awesome
      And congrats dear for completing 10 epis

      • muniya on November 23, 2017 9:02 pm

        Thanks Kriyyam Fan…
        Glad that u like it…

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