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Home»Fan Fiction»Kriyam : An Unnamed Relationship (Episode 1)
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Kriyam : An Unnamed Relationship (Episode 1)

Khushi1707By Khushi1707March 24, 2017Updated:March 24, 201726 Comments3 Mins Read
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A beautiful morning in Allahbad..
A man in his late 50s was sitting on the sofa reading newspaper..
Ranvir: Krishna..my tea..
A girl of 20 comes hurriedly with a cup of tea wearing a salwar suit..
Krishna : Aai chachaji..(coming uncle..)
She gives him tea. He smiles at her
Ranvir: Your tea makes my day..
Krishna:Thank you Chachaji..
A woman comes there..
Radha: Krishna..tumne breakfast bana liya..(have you made the breakfast)
Krishna: Bas ab karne hi..(I was going to do that..)
Radha interrupts her
Radha: Krishna..kitni baar kaha hai jaldi khana bana liya karo..abhi Siddhi Riddhi utengi toh unhe khana koun dega ..(How many times I have told you ..now when Siddhi Riddhi will wake up who will give them their breakfast..)
Krishna: I’m sorry Chachi..
Ranvir:Radha, why are u telling her, why cant Siddhi Riddhi make breakfast..
Radha: Jab sasural me jaegi ye to khana kaise banaegi..(when she will go to her in law’s place how will she cook there..)
Ranvir: Ye baat tumhe apni betiyon ko sikhani chahiye..Saara kaam Krishna akele kyun kare..(this thing u should tell ur daughters..why should Krishna do all the work..)
Krishna: Aisa kuch nahi hain Chachaji..mujhe acha lagta hai Chachi ki madad karna..main abhi breakfast lati hun..(Nothing is like that uncle..I like to help aunty..I will bring some breakfast right now..)
She goes to the kitchen..

At Birla House
A woman puts all the food on the table
Suhani: Sab log aa jayiye khana taiyaar hai..(every1 come food I ready..)
A girl of 25 comes there with his twin bro..
Yuvaan: Khusboo toh badi achi hai..(smell is too good)
Yuvani: Yeah..
Soon ever1 gathers there for breakfast..
Suhani looks at the stairs looking for someone.Yuvani notices her.
Yuvani: Mumma I will go and call Sayyam..
Suhani smiles and nods..
Yuvani goes to her younger bro’s room. A simple room, with no pictures, nothing..just a bed, wardrobe, furniture, sofa and drawers full of files..
Yuvani: Sayyam..
A young man of 23 comes out of the washroom . Yuvani looks at him and smiles.
Yuvani: Come on, hurry up for breakfast..
Sayyam nods.He goes down with her
Suhani smiles seeing Sayyam .

Sayyam: (sitting) Good morning everyone
Dadi: Good morning Sayyam..aaj bhi se ghar late aoge..(today also you will come home late..)
Yuvani: Aaj bhi..Dadi, aap toh aise keh rahe ho jaise Sayyam kabhi kabhi late ata hai..(today also..dadi u talk as if Sayyam comes home late some times only..)
Yuvaan: Sayyam late kahan aata hain..vo toh uski regular aur normal timing hoti hain… agar hamare liye time pe aaya toh vo uske liye jaldi aana hua..(When does Sayyam come late..that is his regular and normal timing..if he comes at normal time for us then its very early for him..)
Yuvaan and Yuvani laugh and give a high –fi to each other..
Sayyam smiles eating his food..
Yuvani: Acha waise Sayyam aaj kisi ladki ko rulane wala hai..(By the way Sayyam is gonna make a girl cry today..)
Everybody look at her surprised..
Yuvani: Kya hua..aaj Sayyam apni assistant ke liye kisika interview lene wala hai..(what happened..today Sayyam is going to take an interview of a girl for becoming his assistant..)
Yuvaan: Manager se keh kar extra tissue papers rakhvane padenge…(we will have to tell manager to keep extra tissue papers..)
Everybody laugh.

Hi guys..hope you liked the first part..sorry there weren’t any Kriyam scenes, but of course I’m not CVS..(dont take it too seriously)..I wanted to make the plot clear..do comment

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    26 Comments

    1. shivani on March 24, 2017 11:37 pm

      Fantastic start.
      Its a new concept and would love to read more of this. Please write amd update soon .
      I am enjoying the fun sibling banter here. Its a relief from all that baby high voltage drama. You are an enlightened person who knows just the right things to make people feel better.

      • Khushi1707 on March 25, 2017 10:57 am

        Thank you so much for the love, shivi (hope you dont mind)..I will try to update soon and join TU soon pls..

      • shivani on March 25, 2017 5:02 pm

        I really dont mind dear. Its perfectly alright. Even my friends call me shivu. So no problem.
        I will surely join khushi. I am planning to write an ff on kriyam soon.
        Please pray for me as my exams are going on. I am commenting now as I have got a fairly long break between exams. Wish me luck.

    2. Pinku on March 24, 2017 11:42 pm

      I loved it. Krishna’s background is similar to that of Cinderella. I love that. Good work. Keep it up.

      • Khushi1707 on March 25, 2017 10:58 am

        Ya it is little same…thanks

    3. Ridita on March 24, 2017 11:57 pm

      Really nice….seems interesting…update soon…

      • Khushi1707 on March 25, 2017 10:59 am

        Thank you

    4. aaravjaikar on March 25, 2017 12:06 am

      New ff .. love ittt.. plzz keep posting
      .

      • Khushi1707 on March 25, 2017 11:00 am

        I guess you havent read the intro..here is the link
        http://www.tellyupdates.com/kriyam-unnamed-relationship-intro/

    5. sanjana on March 25, 2017 1:17 am

      nice start….update soon

      • Khushi1707 on March 25, 2017 11:00 am

        Thank you

    6. Hafsa16 on March 25, 2017 2:34 am

      New post …???

      • Khushi1707 on March 25, 2017 11:01 am

        Thanks

    7. Kudrat on March 25, 2017 5:10 am

      Mindblowing starting..
      eagrly wating for upcoming episodess…
      so, plz try to post soon..
      plzplzplzplzzzz

      • Khushi1707 on March 25, 2017 11:01 am

        Thank u dear..

    8. Shaani on March 25, 2017 6:52 am

      Very nice.. Starting is perfect… Keep updating.. Waiting for the next part..

      • Khushi1707 on March 25, 2017 11:02 am

        Thank u ..

    9. Aarti32 on March 25, 2017 8:31 am

      Superb starting..Plzz update soon..

      • Khushi1707 on March 25, 2017 11:02 am

        Thanks…

    10. fenil on March 25, 2017 10:19 am

      Amazing work
      keep going on
      can’t wait for next

      • Khushi1707 on March 25, 2017 11:03 am

        Thank u..

    11. asia on March 25, 2017 11:43 am

      Great start update asap

      • Khushi1707 on March 25, 2017 3:19 pm

        Thanks..

    12. Zani Saleem on March 25, 2017 11:47 am

      Nice??

      • Khushi1707 on March 25, 2017 3:19 pm

        Thank u

    13. Isha on March 25, 2017 8:06 pm

      Loved it..superb starting… 🙂 update ASAP

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